Comments received on poems by avigail



The man that had no skin
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

September 26th, 2016 11:56

I love growing spirals.
Jeff said:

You are one of my new favorite poets...I love EVERYTHING I've read of yours...another great job

September 25th, 2016 10:09

I love growing spirals.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SPIRAL ARE AWESOME ~ They ocur in nature in plants and also biochemical structures like PROTEINS (single helix) and DNA (double helix). A Friend of mine chose helices for her A~Level Art Project and we went to the Gaudi in Barcelona where there are lots of spiral staircases to get ideas. Diagrams which involve expanding and evolving spirals are called FRACTALS. God loves spirals they are neat ~ visual ~ compact ! Love ~ spiraling out of control ~ BRIAN XOXO

September 25th, 2016 09:35

I love growing spirals.
Augustus said:

Wow! What can I say.
They're in our DNA.

September 25th, 2016 09:10

worlds
Augustus said:

May then we create or help to create our own hereafter?

September 24th, 2016 14:30

worlds
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 24th, 2016 13:37

Appreciation and gratefulness
Augustus said:

Thanksgiving is next month. ----just teasing. Actually, my wife and I started about 5 years ago, realizing how blessed we were. We now make a habit of thanking the universe almost daily.

September 23rd, 2016 19:10

Appreciation and gratefulness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS SWEETHEART ~ Technology is great ~ but like you there are times when I rely solely on my BIIOLOGY and BIOCHEMISTRY. By the way I'm good with gadgets as well ~ you only have to ask ! Lots of Biological Love ~ BRIAN XOX

September 23rd, 2016 15:36

Appreciation and gratefulness
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 23rd, 2016 14:56

Pragmatic analogies
Augustus said:

Analogy: learning something cool every day and Avigail's poetry.

September 22nd, 2016 22:06

Pragmatic analogies
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

PRAGMATISM ~ SWEETHEART is the application of PRACTICALITY or in the face of obscure concepts ~ understandable analogies ~ that is how education works. BLACK HOLES ? A good analogy is the Twin Towers Memorial in NY ~ water is endlessly disappearing down two black holes ~ awesome ! Rebooting a Computer is an example of REINCARNATION (especially when it works !), When I was young we had a chorus "GOD IS STILL ON THE THRONE" we used to sing GOD is still on the PHONE ! That is actually true ~ I spoke to Him this morning. Because GOD is in the Spiritual Dimension ~ there is no (visible) Technology ~ no charge and you never get a busy line ! I love your analogy as well SISTER ! Thanks for sharing ~ I love being PRAGMATIC @ midnight ! Love BRIAN XOX

September 22nd, 2016 17:43

The other day, i saw a bird
Augustus said:

That is a full appreciation of the moment.

September 21st, 2016 18:35

The other day, i saw a bird
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

September 21st, 2016 12:15

The other day, i saw a bird
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL SWEETHEART ~ Sometimes you just feel perfection when you look into the eyes (windows of the Soul) of an Animal another Person or even a Flower (especially roses !). GHIA has shown that all natural things are in harmony and in a continuum. The whole EARTH MOON system beats with one heart (this is why Environmental Conservation is so so important) and the EARTH~MOON beats in harmony with the whole SOLAR SYSTEM and our GALAXY ~ The Milky Way) We are part of this which is why sometimes we feel infinite. I Love You and every word you write ~ You are altogether lovely ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest Poem ~ Thanks B XOX

September 21st, 2016 10:39

Systems and Parts
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 20th, 2016 11:21

Systems and Parts
Augustus said:

Groups of less than 150.

September 20th, 2016 10:44

Systems and Parts
Augustus said:

Years ago some person told me that if you were a systems analyst you would never have to search for work and you would be rewarded handsomely. Of course with my "limited mind" I had little understanding of that field and to this day have no idea the part I play, however insignificant. But Oh, don't take away my illusions. Enjoyed. Thanks.

September 20th, 2016 10:26

Conditioning of the mind
Augustus said:

I see your point. We need be very aware.

September 19th, 2016 17:05

Conditioning of the mind
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 19th, 2016 12:34

Conditioning of the mind
Augustus said:

The first thought I have is brainwashing, filling our minds with whatever our venerated leaders feel is right for us. We are so vulnerable.
Nice read.

September 19th, 2016 11:57

ego
Justme said:

I love it, this very day I read your poem I was talking with some people about the ego, and your poem sums up perfectly our discussion, I especially like the fact you acknowledge the fact while writing this your ego seeps in but your spirit is trying to break through past it. Check out my poems I hope you like them

September 18th, 2016 18:22

ego
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI for bursting our EGO -BUBBLE ~ I like the onion analogy. I make veggie soup every Saturday (for the week !) and I love disecting onoions it is very cathartic. As your are aware Men like to have a big ............ EGO and display it given the opportunity ! But as you say (like a big ????) it is just a MYTH . Love every word you write ~ please check mine ~ Love & HUGS ~ BRIAN

September 18th, 2016 11:42

Spirits are passing in the sky
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 17th, 2016 19:00

Spirits are passing in the sky
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

1495 ~ Between 1490 & 1500 many Jews were expelled from Europe and in 1495 ~ SAVANAROLA (Italy) expelled the MEDICI and the Jews from Florence. Their BANKS were replaced by the MONTE DI PIETA a Public Loan Bank. Numbers and Dates are a very fascinating suject ~ Love BRIAN

September 17th, 2016 16:24

Spirits are passing in the sky
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ You know I believe in a Spiritual Dimension. This is a universal belief which distinguishes Man from other members of the animal world. We are Spiritual Beings and consequentially we have a range of interpretations of the Spiritual Dimension and Angels and Evil Spirits and the Spirits of the departed etc. Personally I find that Judeo-Christianity (OT & NT in the BIBLE) give me an adequate Framework for Belief. However we all have free will and th e freedom to put our own interpretation on Spiritual Phenomena. Thanks for sharing ~ LOVE BRIAN

September 17th, 2016 15:23

Spirits are passing in the sky
Augustus said:

Sometimes it is easier for my spiritual side to believe more in the Great Spirit that connects all than organized religion. Nicely done.

September 17th, 2016 11:32

every one and you
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 16th, 2016 14:22

every one and you
Augustus said:

Was so tempting to give folks a piece of my mine on Facebook. Fortunately I had a dear friend who posted only things pertinent and informative. (Avoiding religion and politics) He was a good example to follow. I must admit however I enjoy whimsy and cute animals.

September 16th, 2016 12:05

every one and you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thank SWEETHEART ~ I can't get to LONDON soon but I have checked MONA GOLBEK on YOU TUBE. OMG she is so so beautiful and sensuous I have fallen in love with her. My DAD is a pianist so I love classical piano music and MONA brings it all alive and vibrant. Thanks I love you too # HUGS ~ BRIAN

September 16th, 2016 11:02

every one and you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI SWEETHEART ~ There is a new angle to Social Media Consultancy ~ Youe have a way with words SWEETHEART and I adore the STANZA " Calm down and manifest your unique PIE PLATE SINGULARITY (could you say thet to me face to face and not smile ?} People will gravitate to your ingenuity (they already do but I know what you mean !) Light up insights (we all need that !) shine (you in your small corner and I in mine ) vibrate (YES YES YES) Love your optimism with all yourr faithful students ~ like me "I see bright future growth and continuity !" There is much thought for food in this excellent poem ~ more please. Love & HUGS ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my latest poem YUO'LL NEVER WALK ALONE ~ Thanks B XOX

September 16th, 2016 10:12



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