Comments received on poems by avigail



I collect moments of excitements
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GREETINGS ABIGAIL ~ Angela & I have missed you so much. Please check our Poems ~ Some by A ~ some by B and some collaborative ~ OK ! EXCITMENT which stimulates ALL the SENSES (Individually and Collectively) is what makes LIFE (& LOVE !) much less MUNDANE. ANGELA is still in New Zealand (16 Months Work Exchange) She is coming Home to UK in October ~ we plan to Marry @ Easter 2020 ~ OK ! Love your Poem ~ Love you too !

Blessings ~ Shalom ~ Joy ~ Love
Yours in the Kaleidescope of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

May 18th, 2019 14:35

Conditions in the sky
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhh AVIGAIL : Clouds are so so evocative especially @ Sunrise & Sunset ! I (ANGELA) am in New Zealand at present and the MAORI NAME is Land of the Long White Cloud due to the Lenticular Clouds that form on the Mountains. Clouds tell us so much about the Weather in the Atmosphere Cirrus for Wind & Nimbus for Rain etc. I love to look for shapes in the Clouds : People & Animals : Castles & Cities and one can easily perceive them as being inhabited by the SPIRITS. Love your Poem and the concept that Spirits inhabit our dimension in the Atmosphere in the Clouds and not on the earth\'s surface : AMEN Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Please check our PANTOUM ~ Thanks

November 19th, 2018 18:37

There are too many elephants in the room
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD AFTERNOON AVIGALE : My experience is the bigger the Problem the number of Pachyderms (within & without the ROOM) increases proportionately. You may have heard of BREXIT ~ that is a case tn point ! They are sweet ~ especially if you feed them with BUNS that are Hot & Cross ~ OK. You can communicate with them in Pachy Whispers but watch the expenses because it is always a TRUNK CALL ! Please check our recent Poems & (CON)FUSIONS Thanks. SHALOM & LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

November 18th, 2018 10:53

Life is the game of awareness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks PROFESSOR AVIGAIL ~ You have highlighted the two most important factors in our potential & development !
1. NATURE The traits and abilities we inherit in our parental DNA. We cannot choose our Parents but normally they rear us and understand us because in many respects we mirror them ! I am pleased I was raised by my BIRTH (GENETIC) PARENTS who are still living and @ 35 still raising me !
2. NURTURE ~ The ENVIRONMENT in which we are are raised ~ Rural or Urban ~ Opportunities for Education - Sport - Art - Music etc. I was fortunate to be born in a City ~ into a Christian Family ~ to have access and the Arts and attend good Schools & Universities etc. I have a LIFE EXPECTANCY of 85 ! What we are is GOD\'s (and our Parents) gift to US ~ What we do with our lives is our gift back to GOD (and our Parents) NATURE & NURTURE ! Thanks for guiding us into TRUTH ! Love & Hugs your Students BRIAN 😎 and ANGELA 🧡 Please check ANGELAS POEM ~ ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ THANKS B & A

September 16th, 2018 11:55

where do you wish to go?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS AVIGAIL : ANGELA HERE. Love your poem : these are questions we must always ask ourselves. I have used the TEN C\'s in my Poem today about emigrating to NEW ZEALAND ! Hope that is OK : Please check our other Poems Love & big hugs ANGELA (NEW ZEALAND) 🧡🧡🧡🧡

September 14th, 2018 03:08

in between
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI for (as usual) a THOUGHT PROVOKING Ode. I adore Rainbows ~especially because they are ephemeral. Here TODAY and inevitably (unless they are on a waterfall) gone TOMORROW ! They are the essence of INBETWEENESS ~ between the SUNSHINE & the SHOWER ! It is a good analogy for anthropological INBETWEENS ! Between JOBS ~ Between Relationships ~ Between Moods ~ Between Clubs ~ Between Diets ~ Between Locations ~ Between A ROCK and A HARD PLACE (double negative) and Between The Devil & The Deep Blue Sea ! There is good ODE in all that somewhere ! Thanks for SHARING ! Love & Big Hugs as always BRIAN & ANGELA XOX Please check our POEMS & Fusion on ICE CREAM ~ Thanks B & A XOX

August 5th, 2018 10:14

Be playful
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREETINGS AVI ~ MISSED YOU LATELY ! Very good advice I love to play & Angela loves to play. In my experiences it diffuses POMPOSITY ~ It removes OBSTACLES ~ it makes the IMPOSSIBLE ~ POSSIBLE ~ It turns difficult relationships into a game of TRUTH or DARE ~ Angela & I love your Philosophy because in essence WE KNOW IT WORKS ! Every Blessing SHALOM ~ Love & Hugs BROTHER BRIAN & SISTER ANGELA XXXX Please check Angela\'s poem on WELLINGTON ~ Capital of New Zealand ~ and our FUSION on ICE CREAM ~ AMEN

August 2nd, 2018 16:24

why
dusk arising said:

Some questions haunt us, popping into mind at random but why? Do others share this? Is my mind aware of something my conscious brain is not.
It\'s all there in this deep, thought provoking watershed of yours.

You certainly had me taking time to contemplate your questions, all to real.

Your first two lines really entertain me and temp me. They\'re inspiring me to write.

July 29th, 2018 13:38

A lesson in stress
sjc513 said:

I love the line “Which stress do you dress?” Great work

June 28th, 2018 11:22

Insane moments
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing AVI ~ I can empathise ! We all have MAD moments and survive ! But MANIACAL moments are rare and destructive ! Like a VOLCANO we have to conserve our LAVA flows and don\'t let them burst out and destroy us ! My BROTHER lived in Puebla MX and I loved to watch POPO especially at night ~ but when it went MANIACAL many died due to POPO\'S suicide ~ and \"successful suicide\" is an Irreversible Action ! My own MIND is fairly stable ~ BUT ~ I never take it for granted ! Thanks for warning ~ Hugs & Kisses ~ BRIAN XOX

June 10th, 2018 11:38

The Meaning of Life
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i am glad to know the reason,and i liked it

June 9th, 2018 22:36

The Meaning of Life
Lalion said:

Meaningful....I LIKE !

thanks for this.

June 8th, 2018 21:06

The Meaning of Life
dusk arising said:

You\'ve made me smile. Really nice to read your well written piece. Buddhism rules! LOL

June 8th, 2018 17:45

The Meaning of Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for caring & sharing AVI ! As you know I never stop exploring and we are ALL seeking for the \"Meaning of Life\" ! Your Poem gives us all something to ponder ~ this weekend on the MOL ! Grasp reality ~ Breath & Shine LOVE ! Activate creativity (I like that) ~ expand horizons (beyond thought ?) ~ connect to wisdom and (this is my favourite !)

BE ENDLESSLY FREE FEARLESS & PLAYFUL

Thanks for teaching ~ missed your advice
Love & Hugs ~ Best student BRIAN XOX

June 8th, 2018 15:00

The Meaning of Life
Stan Rodriguez said:

This is a nice change from the other poems I have reviewed today. beautifully written- thank you +++++

June 8th, 2018 14:27

I took a break
Goldfinch60 said:

That hug is returned, welcome back.

March 27th, 2018 00:24

I took a break
Laura🌻 said:

🤗🤗 on their way!

March 26th, 2018 13:24

I took a break
Resa71 said:

Welcome back :)

March 26th, 2018 12:39

my spiral self
FredPeyer said:

I agree with you that it would be nice if today\'s I would be better than yesterday\'s I, but it is a daily struggle!
Except for you, I guess, since it is impossible to improve on perfection! :-)

January 31st, 2018 12:24

my spiral self
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 31st, 2018 11:19

What are we doing here?
FredPeyer said:

Great question, Avigail! \'What are we doing here?\' You tell me!
Don\'t ants have a \'collective intelligence\'? Think what would happen if we humans could do that too!

January 29th, 2018 02:17

What are we doing here?
yellowrose said:

we are here to live but i think for those of us who struggle and hurt, quite a lot, i think they cannot help but question , why a, i here, am i here to suffer? why was ai born // to hurt? i think asking these type of questions are perfectly normal at times..

January 28th, 2018 04:37

What are we doing here?
yellowrose said:

i don\'t think i will ever understand life . i have hurt a lot in my life and that alone ,the amount of suffering and hurt, that for me , is what makes me question life and my purpose here.. you speak true words

January 28th, 2018 04:36

shine inside out
FredPeyer said:

This is a good one, Avigail! We do have to come to terms with ourselves first and foremost. And how we feel about ourselves influences how we feel about others. Good write!

January 25th, 2018 14:40

shine inside out
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 25th, 2018 14:12

Deep inside I have wings
yellowrose said:

we all need wings to fly ! nice read

January 25th, 2018 11:53

The dilemma of sensitive people
yellowrose said:

good piece of writing .. i think i am a empath so i can pick up on other peoples energies , and i dare to say that i sometimes question my sensitiivity. i think we need our aura to feel a bit stronger to be honest so we do not always take everything in , all the time

January 25th, 2018 11:50

Life is like an onion
yellowrose said:

ha lol .. yes :-) we can choose a new onion , maybe we could choose one which does not make us cry lol.. nice piece of writing , enjoyed, a healer once said to me charlotte healing is like an onion

January 25th, 2018 11:40

If you feel that the universe is not responding
yellowrose said:

i cannot help but agree with this . i liked this :-)

January 25th, 2018 11:38

shine inside out
yellowrose said:

hello avigail.. i really like this , firstly you bring a lot of truth into this poem. i especially love the idea of being like a pipe with its energy .. interesting idea .. enjoyed reading this

January 25th, 2018 11:35

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