Comments received on poems by avigail
Friendship
Augustus said:
Oh yes, attentive and respectful. Trust has been the hardest for me. Nicely done.
November 8th, 2016 11:35
Augustus said:
Oh yes, attentive and respectful. Trust has been the hardest for me. Nicely done.
November 8th, 2016 11:35
insights
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! I love the rhymes! Speaking of insight, you had some wonderful insight writing this poem!
November 7th, 2016 09:57
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! I love the rhymes! Speaking of insight, you had some wonderful insight writing this poem!
November 7th, 2016 09:57
insights
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING AVI ~ In my experience what you say is true but I get far more insights in Bed than in the Lift (Elevator). I think up lots of poems in the sack ~ but gone in the morning ~ also ~ sometimes when I write them down in torpor I can read them ~ but Thank God my Russian Friend can ! Thanks for all your INSIGHTS ~ Please check my poem ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2016 09:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING AVI ~ In my experience what you say is true but I get far more insights in Bed than in the Lift (Elevator). I think up lots of poems in the sack ~ but gone in the morning ~ also ~ sometimes when I write them down in torpor I can read them ~ but Thank God my Russian Friend can ! Thanks for all your INSIGHTS ~ Please check my poem ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2016 09:11
Stop Distractions
Augustus said:
I want a womb with a view, but now that I think about it, that defeats the purpose. Heh,heh. I vaguely remember that there are studies out there that some of us are made sick by all the input and distraction. Great advice.
November 6th, 2016 12:45
Augustus said:
I want a womb with a view, but now that I think about it, that defeats the purpose. Heh,heh. I vaguely remember that there are studies out there that some of us are made sick by all the input and distraction. Great advice.
November 6th, 2016 12:45
Stop Distractions
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhh AVI ~ AQUATHERAPY ~ AWESOME ! I teach the value of AQUATHERAPY to my Beauty Therapy students and its not just the \"buoyancy factor\" for ease of exercise. Total immersion in water is always therapeutic ! Some of my rich friends have home saunas and I love to get in ~ alone or wit friends it is so relaxing and communal ! When I visited the Horseshoe Falls in Canada I had a strong urge to jump in. Waterfall Climbing (just in shorts) was one of my hobbies but we don\'t have many in the UK ! I am a Water Baby ! Love & HUGS BRIAN
November 6th, 2016 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ahhhhhh AVI ~ AQUATHERAPY ~ AWESOME ! I teach the value of AQUATHERAPY to my Beauty Therapy students and its not just the \"buoyancy factor\" for ease of exercise. Total immersion in water is always therapeutic ! Some of my rich friends have home saunas and I love to get in ~ alone or wit friends it is so relaxing and communal ! When I visited the Horseshoe Falls in Canada I had a strong urge to jump in. Waterfall Climbing (just in shorts) was one of my hobbies but we don\'t have many in the UK ! I am a Water Baby ! Love & HUGS BRIAN
November 6th, 2016 10:51
to be on the same page
Augustus said:
That one of my wife\'s favorite expressions. I tease her that some time we are in different books.
November 4th, 2016 14:17
Augustus said:
That one of my wife\'s favorite expressions. I tease her that some time we are in different books.
November 4th, 2016 14:17
observation
Augustus said:
I am sure when that entity clicks on your mind he / she does not yawn. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2016 18:35
Augustus said:
I am sure when that entity clicks on your mind he / she does not yawn. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2016 18:35
observation
My Dark Nature said:
I loved the complexity of your poem. It was an enjoyable read.
October 31st, 2016 18:33
My Dark Nature said:
I loved the complexity of your poem. It was an enjoyable read.
October 31st, 2016 18:33
observation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ In my World view ~ GOD does monitor all our actions. He logs but does not legislate because He knows our actions will have their own (often disastrous) consequences ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Love BRIAN ~ HUGS
October 31st, 2016 16:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ In my World view ~ GOD does monitor all our actions. He logs but does not legislate because He knows our actions will have their own (often disastrous) consequences ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Love BRIAN ~ HUGS
October 31st, 2016 16:02
Wellness on Demand, Demand Wellness
Augustus said:
I always hated driving to Los Angeles when I lived in California, the air was so toxic. Good advice.
October 28th, 2016 10:31
Augustus said:
I always hated driving to Los Angeles when I lived in California, the air was so toxic. Good advice.
October 28th, 2016 10:31
Together or not together, that is the question
Augustus said:
Not no, but hell no. It\'s all about me! Naw, I\'m just messing with you. You are so right.
October 26th, 2016 16:20
Augustus said:
Not no, but hell no. It\'s all about me! Naw, I\'m just messing with you. You are so right.
October 26th, 2016 16:20
Create and connect to your inner home of silence
Augustus said:
Yes, relaxing. Thanks.
October 25th, 2016 17:53
Augustus said:
Yes, relaxing. Thanks.
October 25th, 2016 17:53
Create and connect to your inner home of silence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ It really works. Love the sensuous language ! Slowly ~ deeply ~ smoothly and that is just the BREATHING ! Did you mean to say ~ RIGHT palm over heart ~ LEFT palm on forehead ? Touching our inner self does release from disharmony and stress.~ thanks for caring you are very precious ! Love & Hugs BRIAN XOX
October 25th, 2016 14:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ It really works. Love the sensuous language ! Slowly ~ deeply ~ smoothly and that is just the BREATHING ! Did you mean to say ~ RIGHT palm over heart ~ LEFT palm on forehead ? Touching our inner self does release from disharmony and stress.~ thanks for caring you are very precious ! Love & Hugs BRIAN XOX
October 25th, 2016 14:52
the bag
caroline-o said:
very thoughtful piece, well written as well! i like the way you think :)
October 24th, 2016 19:55
caroline-o said:
very thoughtful piece, well written as well! i like the way you think :)
October 24th, 2016 19:55
the bag
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for \"More words of wisdom\" Currently my BAG is small but my heart is bigger ! Love & HUGS BRIAN XOX
October 24th, 2016 17:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for \"More words of wisdom\" Currently my BAG is small but my heart is bigger ! Love & HUGS BRIAN XOX
October 24th, 2016 17:51
the bag
Augustus said:
As a \"soon to disappear\" with lots of baggage I can relate. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2016 17:18
Augustus said:
As a \"soon to disappear\" with lots of baggage I can relate. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2016 17:18
pain
Augustus said:
I like the holistic approach. Inability to deal with simple pains have led to horrible addictions to prescribed meds. Nicely done.
October 23rd, 2016 11:24
Augustus said:
I like the holistic approach. Inability to deal with simple pains have led to horrible addictions to prescribed meds. Nicely done.
October 23rd, 2016 11:24
SpiritMind over BodyMind
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi. Yay perhaps astrology does have some truth to it and the planets influence us perhaps. I agree we are all interconnected, we are made of the same stuff as stars too, all because we are created by the ones same Creator. This awesome poem gives me muse and I\'m a sucker for scientific poems so I enjoyed the terms u used to convey. Kudos for the fine freeverse style too.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 08:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi. Yay perhaps astrology does have some truth to it and the planets influence us perhaps. I agree we are all interconnected, we are made of the same stuff as stars too, all because we are created by the ones same Creator. This awesome poem gives me muse and I\'m a sucker for scientific poems so I enjoyed the terms u used to convey. Kudos for the fine freeverse style too.
Pls do check out my poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and acknowledged for it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 23rd, 2016 08:27
SpiritMind over BodyMind
Tony36 said:
I see much truth in your words. Great write
October 22nd, 2016 15:57
Tony36 said:
I see much truth in your words. Great write
October 22nd, 2016 15:57
SpiritMind over BodyMind
BSmooth said:
Good one.. And connecte needs corrected. But great work
October 22nd, 2016 12:08
BSmooth said:
Good one.. And connecte needs corrected. But great work
October 22nd, 2016 12:08
SpiritMind over BodyMind
Augustus said:
A local emergency room nurse swears they admit more mentally ill during full moons. For me---I feel swells of emotion in sync with the planets. Thanks.
October 22nd, 2016 11:40
Augustus said:
A local emergency room nurse swears they admit more mentally ill during full moons. For me---I feel swells of emotion in sync with the planets. Thanks.
October 22nd, 2016 11:40
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