Comments received on poems by avigail
Vitality
willyweed said:
''my signs are vital and my hands are cold" another mind mover get them gears working. very nice as usual avigail. ww
August 4th, 2016 10:20
willyweed said:
''my signs are vital and my hands are cold" another mind mover get them gears working. very nice as usual avigail. ww
August 4th, 2016 10:20
By the end of the day
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AT THE END OF THE DAY I KNEEL AND PRAY ........................ ! As usual AVI there is so so much truth and commonsense in your lovely poem. GOD in his wisdom gives us a lifetime in a physical body and we all crave and enjoy love. Mutual orgasms make us one and the mutual release heightens our physical pleasure. But God also created us (H. Sapiens) as intellectual beings so we crave knowledge and understanding (thanks God for the W.W.W. !). But ~ because we are created in IMAGO DEO ~ we are SPIRITUAL BEINGS ! Consequently we need Spiritual stimulation ~ through fellowship ~ prayer ~ worship etc ! Are you getting enough ? Your Spiritual Soul Mate ~ BRIAN
August 3rd, 2016 08:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AT THE END OF THE DAY I KNEEL AND PRAY ........................ ! As usual AVI there is so so much truth and commonsense in your lovely poem. GOD in his wisdom gives us a lifetime in a physical body and we all crave and enjoy love. Mutual orgasms make us one and the mutual release heightens our physical pleasure. But God also created us (H. Sapiens) as intellectual beings so we crave knowledge and understanding (thanks God for the W.W.W. !). But ~ because we are created in IMAGO DEO ~ we are SPIRITUAL BEINGS ! Consequently we need Spiritual stimulation ~ through fellowship ~ prayer ~ worship etc ! Are you getting enough ? Your Spiritual Soul Mate ~ BRIAN
August 3rd, 2016 08:23
When GOD said...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ For a very profound poem. It is only when we look at the Bible in the original languages HEBREW (OT) and GREEK (NT) that we begin to appreciate its full significance "All Scripture is inspired by GOD" In English one of the most beautiful (and profound) translations is The Authorised Version (1604 - 1611) written in the same beautiful language as Shakespeare. Modern translations are much less majestic and poetic. In our Bible Studies at Church we do have Members fluent in Hebrew ~ Greek and Latin and we do have access to glossaries of Spiritual Hebrew and Greek words. It is a life-long study ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ SHALOM ~ BRIAN
August 2nd, 2016 15:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ For a very profound poem. It is only when we look at the Bible in the original languages HEBREW (OT) and GREEK (NT) that we begin to appreciate its full significance "All Scripture is inspired by GOD" In English one of the most beautiful (and profound) translations is The Authorised Version (1604 - 1611) written in the same beautiful language as Shakespeare. Modern translations are much less majestic and poetic. In our Bible Studies at Church we do have Members fluent in Hebrew ~ Greek and Latin and we do have access to glossaries of Spiritual Hebrew and Greek words. It is a life-long study ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ SHALOM ~ BRIAN
August 2nd, 2016 15:09
And when I die
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Better to start now than never. This is one of the 25 reasons I always comment on your mind stretching poems ! Yours as always BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 11:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Better to start now than never. This is one of the 25 reasons I always comment on your mind stretching poems ! Yours as always BRIAN
August 1st, 2016 11:46
And when I die
Berthold Lippel said:
I like, like this one. No wonder that King David fell for you...
August 1st, 2016 10:30
Berthold Lippel said:
I like, like this one. No wonder that King David fell for you...
August 1st, 2016 10:30
It is up to you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU AVI ~ For another challenging poem about "The Journey of Life". I acknowledge that it is indeed my life ~ but sometimes I am the driver (prime mover) and sometimes I allow myself to be driven. I am single (in the sense of not married) but I am not alone. Sometimes there are just two of us (nice !) and often three or more ~ corporate journey and corporate responsibility. Because I am a "Christian" there is always an ever present Guide ~ God's Holy Spirit so in essence i am never ever completely ALONE. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 31st, 2016 12:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANK YOU AVI ~ For another challenging poem about "The Journey of Life". I acknowledge that it is indeed my life ~ but sometimes I am the driver (prime mover) and sometimes I allow myself to be driven. I am single (in the sense of not married) but I am not alone. Sometimes there are just two of us (nice !) and often three or more ~ corporate journey and corporate responsibility. Because I am a "Christian" there is always an ever present Guide ~ God's Holy Spirit so in essence i am never ever completely ALONE. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 31st, 2016 12:20
when ego clouds their minds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AVI ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ the World is full of people (Like Donald Trump) with inflated egos. They all need cutting down to size ! Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check my fun poem about the ALIGATOR ~ Thanks BRIAN
July 30th, 2016 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
AVI ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ~ the World is full of people (Like Donald Trump) with inflated egos. They all need cutting down to size ! Yours as always BRIAN ! Please check my fun poem about the ALIGATOR ~ Thanks BRIAN
July 30th, 2016 09:59
Points of view
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AVI ~ Great poem and an even greater imagination Exploring a TOMATO was quite an experience red mushy and lots of pips ~ I've met lots of MAJORS like that. The BIRD is easier if you have ever been in a Glider or "free fall" parachuting.! I have been lost in forest towards dusk ~ spooky ~ and memories of it conjured up how an ant must feel crawling up my hairy ................... arm ! Because I'm a Scientist and an Environmentalist I respect insects and don't mind them crawling on me ! Next time I'll see it through their eyes. Thanks for sharing ~ Lovely ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 16:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AVI ~ Great poem and an even greater imagination Exploring a TOMATO was quite an experience red mushy and lots of pips ~ I've met lots of MAJORS like that. The BIRD is easier if you have ever been in a Glider or "free fall" parachuting.! I have been lost in forest towards dusk ~ spooky ~ and memories of it conjured up how an ant must feel crawling up my hairy ................... arm ! Because I'm a Scientist and an Environmentalist I respect insects and don't mind them crawling on me ! Next time I'll see it through their eyes. Thanks for sharing ~ Lovely ~ BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 16:36
Be Ready
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ Great poem and wise advice as usual ! Our motto in the SCOUTS was BE PREPARED and it is a good motto throughout life. I always have a note book and pencil (more reliable than a pen) with me in case the muse moves ~ especially when I'm in bed. I often get ideas for a poem @ 4am ~ If I don't write it down I can never remember it in the morning. However sometimes I can't even read what I've written down !. Thanks for sharing you are lovely ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 13:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ Great poem and wise advice as usual ! Our motto in the SCOUTS was BE PREPARED and it is a good motto throughout life. I always have a note book and pencil (more reliable than a pen) with me in case the muse moves ~ especially when I'm in bed. I often get ideas for a poem @ 4am ~ If I don't write it down I can never remember it in the morning. However sometimes I can't even read what I've written down !. Thanks for sharing you are lovely ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 13:43
Be Ready
Kurt Philip Behm said:
And speak those words directly into the voice recorder of your phone. Wise words Avigail.
Kurt
July 23rd, 2016 13:40
Kurt Philip Behm said:
And speak those words directly into the voice recorder of your phone. Wise words Avigail.
Kurt
July 23rd, 2016 13:40
Be Ready
willyweed said:
I think that's what's wrong with me? very wise advise you serve here Avigale! write on ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:30
willyweed said:
I think that's what's wrong with me? very wise advise you serve here Avigale! write on ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:30
life units
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT MESSAGE AVI ~ as always ! CARPE DIEM and you will find that every unit counts and is precious. And if we maximise today we will get a new batch of units (some the same ~ some different) ~ tomorrow. Thanks AVI ~ I love all your poems ~ they lift me up ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 13:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREAT MESSAGE AVI ~ as always ! CARPE DIEM and you will find that every unit counts and is precious. And if we maximise today we will get a new batch of units (some the same ~ some different) ~ tomorrow. Thanks AVI ~ I love all your poems ~ they lift me up ! Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
July 21st, 2016 13:25
What am I doing here?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another great poem AVI and an important question ! We are all born for a Purpose and our individual quest is finding our niche and purpose and fulfilling it ! When CRICK & WATSON published the Double Helix structure of DNA in Nature in April 1953 ~ they said it may have important biological implications ! You and I are programmed by our DNA and it is the slight differences that makes you ~you and me ~ me. We are both created by the same Creator and His DNA is within us and make us both equal but both unique ! Thanks for sharing # BRIAN
July 20th, 2016 12:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another great poem AVI and an important question ! We are all born for a Purpose and our individual quest is finding our niche and purpose and fulfilling it ! When CRICK & WATSON published the Double Helix structure of DNA in Nature in April 1953 ~ they said it may have important biological implications ! You and I are programmed by our DNA and it is the slight differences that makes you ~you and me ~ me. We are both created by the same Creator and His DNA is within us and make us both equal but both unique ! Thanks for sharing # BRIAN
July 20th, 2016 12:49
What am I doing here?
Tony36 said:
Like The character's in Horton heard a who. I think we live on a flower in someone else's universe. Great write
July 20th, 2016 12:46
Tony36 said:
Like The character's in Horton heard a who. I think we live on a flower in someone else's universe. Great write
July 20th, 2016 12:46
The Fragile Essence of Reality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ What your odes lack in length they make up with enigma ! I'm the same dreamwise ! Now that i'm one-third through my life I dream more and sometimes I find it difficult to separate dreamtime from realtime and sometimes I don't want to ! Thanks for sharing ~ yours BRIAN X
July 17th, 2016 15:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ What your odes lack in length they make up with enigma ! I'm the same dreamwise ! Now that i'm one-third through my life I dream more and sometimes I find it difficult to separate dreamtime from realtime and sometimes I don't want to ! Thanks for sharing ~ yours BRIAN X
July 17th, 2016 15:22
How do you manage them?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ lovely as always ~ short and very sweet. Like lots of lovely ladies I know ~ you ask a lot of questions and provide no answers. Like me you are wonderfully and awesomely made ! The answers to your Q's lies in the biochemistry of HOMEOSTASIS. Your vital organs (heart ~ lings ~ liver ~ kidneys ~ blood circulation ~ reproductive system ~ digestive & excretory system etc work together symbiotically to keep your life processes in equilibrium ! It balances your diet for you to keep you healthy and beautiful and a perfect lady ! When all works in harmony ~ life and love is wonderful (as you know) ~ as we get older and things get out of phase (or if we get ill) we have the Health Service. Certainly for most of our lives (if we have water ~ air ~ food ~ sleep and love) our 37.2 trillions cells work in harmony and mostly we take them for granted. Thank GOD for HOMEOSTASIS ~ Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ lovely as always ~ short and very sweet. Like lots of lovely ladies I know ~ you ask a lot of questions and provide no answers. Like me you are wonderfully and awesomely made ! The answers to your Q's lies in the biochemistry of HOMEOSTASIS. Your vital organs (heart ~ lings ~ liver ~ kidneys ~ blood circulation ~ reproductive system ~ digestive & excretory system etc work together symbiotically to keep your life processes in equilibrium ! It balances your diet for you to keep you healthy and beautiful and a perfect lady ! When all works in harmony ~ life and love is wonderful (as you know) ~ as we get older and things get out of phase (or if we get ill) we have the Health Service. Certainly for most of our lives (if we have water ~ air ~ food ~ sleep and love) our 37.2 trillions cells work in harmony and mostly we take them for granted. Thank GOD for HOMEOSTASIS ~ Yours BRIAN
July 16th, 2016 10:29
love is...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ You are mega ~ the way you say so so much with so few words. In just 30 words you exemplify the true meaning of LOVE ! Space for body ~ mind ~ spirit ~ all equally important ! To grow ~ be joyful ~ be happy together in unison ! That's my experience (from time to time !) and I sincerely hope it's yours ! Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 08:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ You are mega ~ the way you say so so much with so few words. In just 30 words you exemplify the true meaning of LOVE ! Space for body ~ mind ~ spirit ~ all equally important ! To grow ~ be joyful ~ be happy together in unison ! That's my experience (from time to time !) and I sincerely hope it's yours ! Yours BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 08:16
It\'s Not Enough
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ Your poems are short but always very sweet. I agree ~ mind without heart ~ is not enough ! Many people are authentic but COLD their authenticity (truth) needs to be spiced up with consciousness ~ coherence ~ creativity ~ compassion and integrity ! I could not ave said it better myself ! Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2016 16:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ Your poems are short but always very sweet. I agree ~ mind without heart ~ is not enough ! Many people are authentic but COLD their authenticity (truth) needs to be spiced up with consciousness ~ coherence ~ creativity ~ compassion and integrity ! I could not ave said it better myself ! Yours BRIAN
July 13th, 2016 16:18
who am i , really?
willyweed said:
I think we are created creators here to learn the lessons of the reality we create for our self's.
or maybe just dust in the wind?
But I would say when you see the face of God don't be surprised if he looks familiar. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:01
willyweed said:
I think we are created creators here to learn the lessons of the reality we create for our self's.
or maybe just dust in the wind?
But I would say when you see the face of God don't be surprised if he looks familiar. ww
July 12th, 2016 10:01
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