Comments received on poems by avigail



who am i , really?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Well AVI ~ you live in a beautiful body based on the genes you inherited from your Mum and Dad. Do you look like your Mum looked when she was young ?. The quality of your mind (IQ) is also inherited form your parents. However you are created in the "Image of God" you are an ANGEL. Your Spirit enables you to talk and think abstract thoughts and even pray and have an understanding of the Divine. So genetically (Body & Mind) you are like your parents ~ Spiritually you are like GOD ~ You were born unique and born with a Purpose in God's Plan ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN

July 12th, 2016 09:25

How are your mind clouds today?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVIGAIL ~ great poem. Because of the pace of life ~ we all live with our Heads in the Clouds ~ for some part of every day ! It's an escape mechanism ~ so (in my case) it is manageable and it does produce some passable poetry ! What the French call POESIE NUAGE ! Yours BRIAN

July 11th, 2016 13:46

Is This Compatibility
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

July 10th, 2016 08:35

Is this Harmony?
willyweed said:

natural harmony a beautiful thing
Then I saw a crane chewing a fish?
nice one Avigail!

July 8th, 2016 15:40

Is this Harmony?
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 8th, 2016 12:33

Is this Harmony?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

NATURE AVI ~ As I am sure you are sure ~ Is always red in tooth and claw. However no need to take a sedative ~ Nature's harmony's always relative ! Yours relatively ~ BRIAN

July 8th, 2016 10:28

Philosophy in the bathroom
Berthold Lippel said:

..........and continue with writing!


July 7th, 2016 15:57

Philosophy in the bathroom
Tony36 said:

A very wonderful write

July 7th, 2016 12:36

Philosophy in the bathroom
willyweed said:

being created creators we do create our own reality. very interesting and good food for thought! ww

July 7th, 2016 09:46

Philosophy in the bathroom
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELL AVIAGAIL ~ We guys usually just say HI HANDSOME semi-naked in a full length mirror ! I should point out if you don't like yourself (or at least your mirror image !) you have no self esteem and you can't love or help others ! Sight is our most precious sense and I love your thought of the whole world being generated through our eyes ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours as always BRIAN

July 7th, 2016 09:43

who is right?
Tony36 said:

Who is right Who is wrong, Does anybody know for sure. Great Write

July 6th, 2016 13:55

who is right?
willyweed said:

your right, the truth is fickle, when someone believes something then it must be true, but often it is not. very good work.

July 6th, 2016 09:23

who is right?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI your poems are short but they make me think. The difference between what is right and what is wrong is generally in the mind of the beholder ! But YES you are right ! Yours BRIAN

July 6th, 2016 09:11

Asymmetric
willyweed said:

you swim in the river of truth here.
short and sweet and so well done.

July 5th, 2016 12:44

Asymmetric
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 5th, 2016 11:25

Asymmetric
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks AVI ~ neat poem ! As you obviously discovered Men are often the gender of "few words" ! Yes we (compared with the Ladies) we are vocally asymmetric. Yours BRIAN

July 5th, 2016 09:00

YOU BUILD UP WALLS IN YOUR MIND
avigail said:

thank you Brian :)

July 2nd, 2016 16:24

YOU BUILD UP WALLS IN YOUR MIND
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME AVIGAIL ~ Love the message in your first poem ~ YES ~ We all need to de-clutter and to reinvent ourselves as well ! Love another poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 2nd, 2016 16:17

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