Comments received on poems by avigail
Evolution of consciousness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again AVI for a very challenging and intellectual poem on the "Evolution of Consciousness". Adam & Eve were Homo Sapiens Sapiens but were created Adult & Innocent (O that you and I were in that blessed state !) Their brain capacity was very similar to our but they lived in rural society without high-tech. We are temporary but we survive through advanced technology. It is the intellectually fittest who will survive. What we need is a GLOBAL SOCIETY based on love ~ joy ~ peace etc. So we need to evolve Morally as well. Love all your poems ~ You are lovely ~ Love BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 10:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again AVI for a very challenging and intellectual poem on the "Evolution of Consciousness". Adam & Eve were Homo Sapiens Sapiens but were created Adult & Innocent (O that you and I were in that blessed state !) Their brain capacity was very similar to our but they lived in rural society without high-tech. We are temporary but we survive through advanced technology. It is the intellectually fittest who will survive. What we need is a GLOBAL SOCIETY based on love ~ joy ~ peace etc. So we need to evolve Morally as well. Love all your poems ~ You are lovely ~ Love BRIAN
August 19th, 2016 10:14
your body
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AVI ~ That is a big ask. Genetically I am about 75% my Father and 25% my Mother so i look at my Dad and see how I will age ! I like the vessel of clay I am in and I do care for myself physically ~ mentally and spiritually. MENS SANA EN CORPORE SANO ! I have high self-respect because without it I am unable to help others in my Job and in the Community. Awesoem Poem AVI ~ it has made me think and I'm still evaluating ! You are altogether Lovely ! Love BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 10:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW AVI ~ That is a big ask. Genetically I am about 75% my Father and 25% my Mother so i look at my Dad and see how I will age ! I like the vessel of clay I am in and I do care for myself physically ~ mentally and spiritually. MENS SANA EN CORPORE SANO ! I have high self-respect because without it I am unable to help others in my Job and in the Community. Awesoem Poem AVI ~ it has made me think and I'm still evaluating ! You are altogether Lovely ! Love BRIAN
August 18th, 2016 10:38
What is in your mind cloud, now?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Another intriguing brain teaser. I have MIND CLOUDS 24/7 ~ they are ideas ~ hypotheses ~poems and pictures which can blot out reality (the things of time and sense) and spin me into my sub=conscience ! They are in my mind but influenced by my bodily senses and their veracity (and value)i is analysed by my spirit. Some Philosophers call it "day dreaming". Our mind clouds do shape our behavior and right now I'm happy because my mind cloud is in "Barcelona Mode" God's own City ~ Thanks for stimulating ~ Love BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 15:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Another intriguing brain teaser. I have MIND CLOUDS 24/7 ~ they are ideas ~ hypotheses ~poems and pictures which can blot out reality (the things of time and sense) and spin me into my sub=conscience ! They are in my mind but influenced by my bodily senses and their veracity (and value)i is analysed by my spirit. Some Philosophers call it "day dreaming". Our mind clouds do shape our behavior and right now I'm happy because my mind cloud is in "Barcelona Mode" God's own City ~ Thanks for stimulating ~ Love BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 15:14
What is in your mind cloud, now?
calbreezy said:
Oh wow, this speaks so much to me I recently created a poem similar to this in my own way its called deception, you just explained it so so, much better, this is amazing
August 17th, 2016 08:47
calbreezy said:
Oh wow, this speaks so much to me I recently created a poem similar to this in my own way its called deception, you just explained it so so, much better, this is amazing
August 17th, 2016 08:47
Very noisy in the playground
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ For another challenging poem ~ concerning our day by day behaviour in the 21st C ! Unfortunately ~ most of us take it for granted ~ A swarm of MOSQUITOS is an apt metaphor. Thanks for caring ~ Love BRIAN.
August 16th, 2016 08:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ For another challenging poem ~ concerning our day by day behaviour in the 21st C ! Unfortunately ~ most of us take it for granted ~ A swarm of MOSQUITOS is an apt metaphor. Thanks for caring ~ Love BRIAN.
August 16th, 2016 08:30
communication
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ It poses the question "Does anyone ever listen to what we say anymore ?" Love BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 10:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ It poses the question "Does anyone ever listen to what we say anymore ?" Love BRIAN
August 15th, 2016 10:36
How old are you?
willyweed said:
a good question may be how old would you be if you didn't know how old you are? I think one is as old as they feel regardless of time spans? thanks avigail. ww
August 14th, 2016 12:47
willyweed said:
a good question may be how old would you be if you didn't know how old you are? I think one is as old as they feel regardless of time spans? thanks avigail. ww
August 14th, 2016 12:47
How old are you?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ it's problem we face every day ~ premature aging due the strain & stress of the 21st C ! Then there are lots of MEN who never grow up and ENJOY a second childhood which Ladies have to ENDURE. For the record (in case you hadn't noticed ?) I'm 33 (chronologically) going on 17 (actionswise). Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 11:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ it's problem we face every day ~ premature aging due the strain & stress of the 21st C ! Then there are lots of MEN who never grow up and ENJOY a second childhood which Ladies have to ENDURE. For the record (in case you hadn't noticed ?) I'm 33 (chronologically) going on 17 (actionswise). Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 11:48
Eden is here
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ GHIA THEORY teaches us that Plant earth functions best when all is in harmony and equilibrium. There is beauty ~ purpose ~ order ~ design ! Each INDIVIDUAL (You and I) can make a difference. Plant a tree ~ if you chop one down ~ recycle ~ never pollute land sea or air. Teach children to take care of the only living Planet ~ Yours Green as ever ~ BRIAN
August 13th, 2016 11:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ GHIA THEORY teaches us that Plant earth functions best when all is in harmony and equilibrium. There is beauty ~ purpose ~ order ~ design ! Each INDIVIDUAL (You and I) can make a difference. Plant a tree ~ if you chop one down ~ recycle ~ never pollute land sea or air. Teach children to take care of the only living Planet ~ Yours Green as ever ~ BRIAN
August 13th, 2016 11:24
dimensions of perception
ronin_kiaran said:
"With the awareness of te tens of thousnads of things... One may know all the universe without leaving the room."
---tao te ching, lao tsu---
August 12th, 2016 04:39
ronin_kiaran said:
"With the awareness of te tens of thousnads of things... One may know all the universe without leaving the room."
---tao te ching, lao tsu---
August 12th, 2016 04:39
dimensions of perception
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING AVI ~ Very profound ! Because I am a Scientist I work within a framework of Facts ~ Patterns and Principles. There is a Universal Principle (Spirit) of Beauty ~ Purpose ~ Order and design which makes the Laws of the Universe comprehensible and enables Man to walk on the Moon and send probes to the planets in the Solar System and beyond. The Periodic Table (which contains all the 92 natural elements (H to U) and another 116 transuranic elements is a great concept which enables us to comprehend the atomic structure of the elements and accounts for their physical and chemical properties. As far a we know the Universe is composed of the same 92 elements. For me the Judeo-Christian revelation in the Bible affords me a World view in the Spiritual Dimension and some insight into nature of the Universal Spirit which supersedes the sum of all the Worlds religions. It is a massive subject and study. Yours as always ~ BRIAN.
August 11th, 2016 18:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING AVI ~ Very profound ! Because I am a Scientist I work within a framework of Facts ~ Patterns and Principles. There is a Universal Principle (Spirit) of Beauty ~ Purpose ~ Order and design which makes the Laws of the Universe comprehensible and enables Man to walk on the Moon and send probes to the planets in the Solar System and beyond. The Periodic Table (which contains all the 92 natural elements (H to U) and another 116 transuranic elements is a great concept which enables us to comprehend the atomic structure of the elements and accounts for their physical and chemical properties. As far a we know the Universe is composed of the same 92 elements. For me the Judeo-Christian revelation in the Bible affords me a World view in the Spiritual Dimension and some insight into nature of the Universal Spirit which supersedes the sum of all the Worlds religions. It is a massive subject and study. Yours as always ~ BRIAN.
August 11th, 2016 18:33
who wins?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true AVI ~ this tussle between One's Spirit and One's ego. As Christians we should be led by the Spirit and launch out into the deep~ nothing ventured ~ nothing gained ! AMEN ~ Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 09:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true AVI ~ this tussle between One's Spirit and One's ego. As Christians we should be led by the Spirit and launch out into the deep~ nothing ventured ~ nothing gained ! AMEN ~ Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
August 10th, 2016 09:35
who wins?
willyweed said:
I put my money on the spirit!
another thoughtful piece.
you go avigail. ww
August 10th, 2016 08:37
willyweed said:
I put my money on the spirit!
another thoughtful piece.
you go avigail. ww
August 10th, 2016 08:37
My Neighbor
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Words for Thought. It happens all the time ! Seems like it's a natural progression between the cradle and the grave. Some Nursing Homes are like Hell and the inmates would be much better off in GLORY. Others are "Heavenly"and just a waiting room for Glory. It poses the Q are we all living too long ? BAZ my neighbour is no more but Grace his wife soldiers on ~ I cut her grass once a fortnight ! Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 10:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS AVI ~ Words for Thought. It happens all the time ! Seems like it's a natural progression between the cradle and the grave. Some Nursing Homes are like Hell and the inmates would be much better off in GLORY. Others are "Heavenly"and just a waiting room for Glory. It poses the Q are we all living too long ? BAZ my neighbour is no more but Grace his wife soldiers on ~ I cut her grass once a fortnight ! Yours BRIAN
August 9th, 2016 10:21
My Neighbor
willyweed said:
we are merely travelers here to this and many worlds nice poem avilgail.ww
August 9th, 2016 10:19
willyweed said:
we are merely travelers here to this and many worlds nice poem avilgail.ww
August 9th, 2016 10:19
Clouds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ another gem ! The analogy between the sky and our minds is very apt. Cirrus Clouds of fleeting thought ~ Cumulus more concentrated and profound and Nimbo-cumulus the dark clouds of doubt which darken our waking hours ! BUT when the clouds clear we can perceive for miles ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 8th, 2016 13:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI ~ another gem ! The analogy between the sky and our minds is very apt. Cirrus Clouds of fleeting thought ~ Cumulus more concentrated and profound and Nimbo-cumulus the dark clouds of doubt which darken our waking hours ! BUT when the clouds clear we can perceive for miles ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
August 8th, 2016 13:48
Significant / non-significant moments –depends who you ask
willyweed said:
life is but a dream its what you make it. another great piece avilgail! ww
August 7th, 2016 11:19
willyweed said:
life is but a dream its what you make it. another great piece avilgail! ww
August 7th, 2016 11:19
Significant / non-significant moments –depends who you ask
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for another psychological conundrum from our resident Shrink ! I'm an Ecologist (we all have an OLOGY !) and all flora and fauna are not here by chance (including H.Sapiens). So each individual ant is an integral part of complex food chains ~ food webs and ecological processes. If we kill an ANT it causes a blip in the ecological cycle ~ if we kill an AUNT it causes a blip in SOCIETY. God is the sustainer of the Universe
~ a difficult job ~ so I try not to upset Him too much. If He sneezes it upsets the equilibrium of the Universe. I believe (along with Solomon) that to everything there is a purpose and a reason for everything under Heaven. I believe in DESTINY ! Thanks for caring & sharing. PS I have added you STANZA to Favorite Flowers ~ Fusion Poem and I have been careful to post it exactly (every jot and tittle) as you sent it to me so as not to disturb or diminish your intention ~ please check ! LOVE BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 10:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI for another psychological conundrum from our resident Shrink ! I'm an Ecologist (we all have an OLOGY !) and all flora and fauna are not here by chance (including H.Sapiens). So each individual ant is an integral part of complex food chains ~ food webs and ecological processes. If we kill an ANT it causes a blip in the ecological cycle ~ if we kill an AUNT it causes a blip in SOCIETY. God is the sustainer of the Universe
~ a difficult job ~ so I try not to upset Him too much. If He sneezes it upsets the equilibrium of the Universe. I believe (along with Solomon) that to everything there is a purpose and a reason for everything under Heaven. I believe in DESTINY ! Thanks for caring & sharing. PS I have added you STANZA to Favorite Flowers ~ Fusion Poem and I have been careful to post it exactly (every jot and tittle) as you sent it to me so as not to disturb or diminish your intention ~ please check ! LOVE BRIAN
August 7th, 2016 10:31
Significant / non-significant moments –depends who you ask
rrodriguez said:
Philosophical and reflective, life can be mundane, but that's life.
August 7th, 2016 08:37
rrodriguez said:
Philosophical and reflective, life can be mundane, but that's life.
August 7th, 2016 08:37
Calibrating from within
willyweed said:
this is heavy duty for some.
others let the spirit move them
and just hang on for the ride.
much enjoyed. ww
August 6th, 2016 22:02
willyweed said:
this is heavy duty for some.
others let the spirit move them
and just hang on for the ride.
much enjoyed. ww
August 6th, 2016 22:02
Illusion of the known
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI another truism to challenge our perception. As SNOOPY would say "The Psychiatrist is IN !" We store all our perceptions in the sub-conscious and there is evidence that our most positive experiences rise to the top ? This work in my case to make me more tolerant and to see the positive in every person and most situations. I am a supreme optimist. I hope it's not just an illusion of good ! Personally I feel that's how Jesus thought seeing the GOOD in people rather than the BAD and being positive in the face of a life-threatening storm and having the faith to feed 5000 with 5 loaves and 2 fish ~ etc. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ YOURS BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 11:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI another truism to challenge our perception. As SNOOPY would say "The Psychiatrist is IN !" We store all our perceptions in the sub-conscious and there is evidence that our most positive experiences rise to the top ? This work in my case to make me more tolerant and to see the positive in every person and most situations. I am a supreme optimist. I hope it's not just an illusion of good ! Personally I feel that's how Jesus thought seeing the GOOD in people rather than the BAD and being positive in the face of a life-threatening storm and having the faith to feed 5000 with 5 loaves and 2 fish ~ etc. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ YOURS BRIAN
August 5th, 2016 11:22
Illusion of the known
willyweed said:
everything in our mind is filtered by experience hence we see the same things differently, or from our own perspective. but once again you are correct o' wise one! much enjoyed ww
August 5th, 2016 10:33
willyweed said:
everything in our mind is filtered by experience hence we see the same things differently, or from our own perspective. but once again you are correct o' wise one! much enjoyed ww
August 5th, 2016 10:33
Vitality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI another lovely thought provoking poem ! We all have within us ELAN VITALE ~ a Vital Spirit ~ which motivates every aspect of our lives. Without this VITALITY we would just be ZOMBIES with it we are unique individuals ~ therefore we must cherish and nurture it ! Thanks for caring anf sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 13:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks AVI another lovely thought provoking poem ! We all have within us ELAN VITALE ~ a Vital Spirit ~ which motivates every aspect of our lives. Without this VITALITY we would just be ZOMBIES with it we are unique individuals ~ therefore we must cherish and nurture it ! Thanks for caring anf sharing ~ Your Friend BRIAN
August 4th, 2016 13:24
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