Comments received on poems by rrodriguez



I Remember... (Anaphora Poem)
malubotelho said:

Nice poem Roberto. Even if it was more a creation than a heart liberation it is very well put together. I could see the girl standing at the door.

September 19th, 2017 21:38

I Remember... (Anaphora Poem)
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Roberto, well done!

September 19th, 2017 20:53

I Remember... (Anaphora Poem)
Accidental Poet said:

This hits home for me. Great write R ; )

September 19th, 2017 20:46

Hurricane Irma
skyebellasario said:

Such a powerful piece!

September 19th, 2017 16:52

Hurricane Irma
rrodriguez said:

Thank you WL for your comment. Keep us in your prayers.

September 19th, 2017 08:48

Hurricane Irma
WL Schuett said:

Very powerful poem hoping the next storm stays out to sea

September 19th, 2017 07:35

Hurricane Irma
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write, I do hope Maria just moves out into the ocean and avoids landfall.

September 19th, 2017 00:49

Hurricane Irma
tanvir H said:

damn that really nice

September 18th, 2017 21:44

Hurricane Irma
Christina8 said:

What a beautiful but sad poem. You are definitely in my thoughts and prayers! Here\'s hoping Maria goes somewhere else!

September 18th, 2017 20:07

Regrets
Goldfinch60 said:

Very expressive and emotive write. We all struggle at times in our lives but it can be overcome as long as we move forward and not dwell on the past.

September 17th, 2017 00:41

Regrets
FredPeyer said:

Roberto, you express beautifully what so many of us go through sometimes in our lives. Some find the strength to save themselves in religion, some in meditation, some in nature, some within themselves.

September 16th, 2017 21:37

Regrets
Christina8 said:

Well written poem showing human struggles that most of us have pondered. Thanks for sharing this great write!

September 16th, 2017 16:31

Leaping Lilies
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, nature is always beautiful to see.

September 15th, 2017 01:16

Leaping Lilies
Michael Edwards said:

Such an accomplished work - love this piece

September 15th, 2017 00:42

Leaping Lilies
FredPeyer said:

What a nice poem! I can really see and smell the lilies, just by reading your wonderful lines.

September 14th, 2017 20:58

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
Samreen Chowdhury said:

Great write!

September 13th, 2017 16:37

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully positive write.

Yes \"there is hope, there is joy\" in this world all we need to do is see it, it IS there.

September 13th, 2017 01:10

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
Michael Edwards said:

Others have said it before me - beautiful simplicity in this work which simply flows off the tongue .

September 12th, 2017 22:58

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Right on; I\'m with you all the way brother! Our cardinal virtues are faith, hope, and love, in and out of the seasons.

September 12th, 2017 22:41

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful writing Roberto! This is what our world needs right now! We do have to remind ourselves that there IS hope and joy. All WE have to do is find it!

September 12th, 2017 18:41

there\'s hope, there\'s joy
WL Schuett said:

Wonderful poetry it flows effortlessly with a message of hope and rebirth, very fine art

September 12th, 2017 16:53

Angels Weep! (edited)
Michael Edwards said:

A well expressed poem outlining the ills of modern society - great work.

August 28th, 2017 23:11

Angels Weep! (edited)
WriteBeLight said:

Your points are well made and I like the pattern of your words.

August 28th, 2017 15:48

Two-faced (enclosed Tercet)
Christina8 said:

I love this poem! Very well composed. A very good read!!

August 27th, 2017 23:32

Beautiful Thinking (An acrostic poem)
Shahla Latifi said:

A good analogy poem.

August 27th, 2017 14:57

Two-faced (enclosed Tercet)
rrodriguez said:

Thank you Michael for your visit and for blessing me with your words.

August 27th, 2017 00:37

Two-faced (enclosed Tercet)
Michael Edwards said:

Lovely form and so well written - great read

August 27th, 2017 00:30

Beautiful Thinking (An acrostic poem)
malubotelho said:

I like the word and the meaning and could be a girls name too. Nice poem and I like the form too. Very interesting.

August 26th, 2017 16:14

Beautiful Thinking (An acrostic poem)
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful write.

August 26th, 2017 00:51

Beautiful Thinking (An acrostic poem)
Michael Edwards said:

Well written and I have to admit I can\'t recall coming across the word before.

August 26th, 2017 00:07



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