Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
The Wonders of God\'s Creation
WriteBeLight said:
You have captured the awe of God\'s creations. I particularly love the line about water sparkling like diamonds on a necklace!
April 7th, 2017 15:56
WriteBeLight said:
You have captured the awe of God\'s creations. I particularly love the line about water sparkling like diamonds on a necklace!
April 7th, 2017 15:56
The Wonders of God\'s Creation
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful picture written in words. Nature is wonderful.
April 6th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
A beautiful picture written in words. Nature is wonderful.
April 6th, 2017 01:13
The Wonders of God\'s Creation
MendedFences27 said:
Certainly paints a beautiful picture, you intended result for sure. Why does the ocean and the shore seem to inspire almost all who go there?Is it the vastness of the ocean? As I said, a beautiful pictur of God\'s majesty. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:30
MendedFences27 said:
Certainly paints a beautiful picture, you intended result for sure. Why does the ocean and the shore seem to inspire almost all who go there?Is it the vastness of the ocean? As I said, a beautiful pictur of God\'s majesty. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 5th, 2017 22:30
The Wonders of God\'s Creation
Michael Edwards said:
As I read it I was there - a beautiful read.
April 5th, 2017 22:17
Michael Edwards said:
As I read it I was there - a beautiful read.
April 5th, 2017 22:17
The Better Angels of Our Nature
MendedFences27 said:
I think this is great. It capture the tone of his address, and the bitterness of the warring factions. One of my most moving experiences was a visit to Gettysburg. It found it chilling and inspiring, and your poem brought it all back. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:13
MendedFences27 said:
I think this is great. It capture the tone of his address, and the bitterness of the warring factions. One of my most moving experiences was a visit to Gettysburg. It found it chilling and inspiring, and your poem brought it all back. Loved it. - Phil A.
April 4th, 2017 21:13
The Better Angels of Our Nature
Michael Edwards said:
A great inspiring write and though I\'m English I know the Ashokan Farewell quite well - enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
A great inspiring write and though I\'m English I know the Ashokan Farewell quite well - enjoyed this.
April 4th, 2017 02:01
The Better Angels of Our Nature
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I simply love the closing lines, Roberto.
\"A nation of wisdom and stature
by the better angels of our nature\"
I also love.
\"The mystic chords of memory\"
Just fabulous!
Kurt
April 3rd, 2017 22:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I simply love the closing lines, Roberto.
\"A nation of wisdom and stature
by the better angels of our nature\"
I also love.
\"The mystic chords of memory\"
Just fabulous!
Kurt
April 3rd, 2017 22:12
The Better Angels of Our Nature
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I simply love the closing lines, Roberto.
\"A nation of wisdom and stature
by the better angels of our nature\"
I also love.
\"The mystic chords of memory\"
Just fabulous!
Kurt
April 3rd, 2017 22:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I simply love the closing lines, Roberto.
\"A nation of wisdom and stature
by the better angels of our nature\"
I also love.
\"The mystic chords of memory\"
Just fabulous!
Kurt
April 3rd, 2017 22:12
Surprised by Joy
willyweed said:
a spot on nature poem well done! beautiful visuals
March 29th, 2017 17:19
willyweed said:
a spot on nature poem well done! beautiful visuals
March 29th, 2017 17:19
Surprised by Joy
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I could see the scene as I read it through - great work.
March 29th, 2017 16:15
Michael Edwards said:
Oh I could see the scene as I read it through - great work.
March 29th, 2017 16:15
Surprised by Joy
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem, full of beautiful visions of paradise. Really great one! So good I read it twice.
March 29th, 2017 15:58
Christina8 said:
Awesome poem, full of beautiful visions of paradise. Really great one! So good I read it twice.
March 29th, 2017 15:58
Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I think we all have our ideal way for leaving this world and laying beneath the trees sounds ideal.
March 28th, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. I think we all have our ideal way for leaving this world and laying beneath the trees sounds ideal.
March 28th, 2017 01:34
Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem)
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the format and Phils description is spot on - good read.
March 28th, 2017 00:11
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed the format and Phils description is spot on - good read.
March 28th, 2017 00:11
Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem)
MendedFences27 said:
Some would say that the loss of Jackson is what cost the south the war. Lee was never as efficient without him. Your sad poem of a dying man, a general, and his final words to his troop and his wife, is touching and poetic. It presents a scene that could happen even today. The final moments of one\'s life are never as expected. The import of the final utterance, of crossing over the river brings an air of the mystical to your poem. Great write. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2017 20:28
MendedFences27 said:
Some would say that the loss of Jackson is what cost the south the war. Lee was never as efficient without him. Your sad poem of a dying man, a general, and his final words to his troop and his wife, is touching and poetic. It presents a scene that could happen even today. The final moments of one\'s life are never as expected. The import of the final utterance, of crossing over the river brings an air of the mystical to your poem. Great write. - Phil A.
March 27th, 2017 20:28
My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem
Michael Edwards said:
And I behold it - a joy to read.
March 25th, 2017 00:46
Michael Edwards said:
And I behold it - a joy to read.
March 25th, 2017 00:46
My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem
MendedFences27 said:
I always appreciated the vivid colors of the Caribbean. These gems, are they special stones from the islands or just a remembrance of another time. Loved your descriptions. -Phil A.
March 24th, 2017 20:05
MendedFences27 said:
I always appreciated the vivid colors of the Caribbean. These gems, are they special stones from the islands or just a remembrance of another time. Loved your descriptions. -Phil A.
March 24th, 2017 20:05
Full of Joy Now
MendedFences27 said:
Mother T. also said, \"One filled with joy, preaches, without preaching.\" Your sense of joy becomes shared with all who read your poems. I am sure you have reached many hearts with this one. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:06
MendedFences27 said:
Mother T. also said, \"One filled with joy, preaches, without preaching.\" Your sense of joy becomes shared with all who read your poems. I am sure you have reached many hearts with this one. - Phil A.
March 20th, 2017 13:06
Dads Can Do Anything
Philip said:
So simple words but so true;lifts my heart. Phil.G
March 19th, 2017 03:21
Philip said:
So simple words but so true;lifts my heart. Phil.G
March 19th, 2017 03:21
Dads Can Do Anything
Michael Edwards said:
Uplifting poem and it reminds me of when my children were young. We have one of our grandsons here for a sleepover and he brings us such joy as they all do - this poem applies equally..
March 19th, 2017 01:47
Michael Edwards said:
Uplifting poem and it reminds me of when my children were young. We have one of our grandsons here for a sleepover and he brings us such joy as they all do - this poem applies equally..
March 19th, 2017 01:47
Dads Can Do Anything
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true, the bond between father and offspring is so strong.
March 19th, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and so true, the bond between father and offspring is so strong.
March 19th, 2017 01:21
Ugly War!
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry for what you went through. You describe, well, the devastation, pain and destruction. It is a horrible situation, and yes, very ugly. Great job on this thoughtful piece.
March 18th, 2017 07:25
WriteBeLight said:
So sorry for what you went through. You describe, well, the devastation, pain and destruction. It is a horrible situation, and yes, very ugly. Great job on this thoughtful piece.
March 18th, 2017 07:25
Ugly War!
MendedFences27 said:
War will end when the would be soldiers and would be victims refuse to follow the greedy, power-hungry, manipulative bastards in power. Today, they play, not with just war casualties, but also with the total destruction of the planet. One more war could be the last action any of us ever make. We have idiots, tyrants, and lunatics with their fingers on the many buttons that could start it all. God save us! - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 20:52
MendedFences27 said:
War will end when the would be soldiers and would be victims refuse to follow the greedy, power-hungry, manipulative bastards in power. Today, they play, not with just war casualties, but also with the total destruction of the planet. One more war could be the last action any of us ever make. We have idiots, tyrants, and lunatics with their fingers on the many buttons that could start it all. God save us! - Phil A.
March 17th, 2017 20:52
Ugly War!
Michael Edwards said:
I hung on every word of this sensitive and beautiful poem - it\'s going into my favourites and I can\'t say more than that.
March 17th, 2017 16:19
Michael Edwards said:
I hung on every word of this sensitive and beautiful poem - it\'s going into my favourites and I can\'t say more than that.
March 17th, 2017 16:19
Together Forever
Augustus said:
Like you say, we announce it publicly to the world with God watching. I feel sorry for those who have not experienced what you poetically describe.
March 12th, 2017 18:30
Augustus said:
Like you say, we announce it publicly to the world with God watching. I feel sorry for those who have not experienced what you poetically describe.
March 12th, 2017 18:30
Together Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love last for ever.
March 12th, 2017 13:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write. May your love last for ever.
March 12th, 2017 13:14
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