Comments received on poems by rrodriguez



Thank God, Papi is Home Again
MendedFences27 said:

A beautiful message Roberto. Only those who have lived through it know the fury of Nature. It will take time to rebuild his life. God bless you all.- Phil A.

October 3rd, 2017 15:00

Thank God, Papi is Home Again
FredPeyer said:

Against nature\'s fury we are helpless and you expressed the pain and loss that comes with that so vividly. My heart goes out to you and your family.

October 3rd, 2017 12:03

Hiking the UrayoƔn Mountains
Goldfinch60 said:

wonderful write, I was with you all the way, I have these feelings when I get out into the countryside away from all others.

October 3rd, 2017 01:22

Regrets
Ravenssongbird said:

The tone is despair, but also of strength. There\'s a battle inside, yet you challenge it and fight. Expressive and sincere. Nice piece šŸ˜Š

October 3rd, 2017 00:31

Hiking the UrayoƔn Mountains
malubotelho said:

Yes, superb writing and so rich of images. You could fulfill my senses with this.

October 2nd, 2017 18:15

Regrets
Shahla Latifi said:

A place of peace exists in you.
God bless!

October 2nd, 2017 17:10

Hiking the UrayoƔn Mountains
Fay Slimm. said:

How your description of peace in those mountains rings through each line - - I was there by those springs and sipping the sweetness along with you Roberto. A beautiful and inspiring read.

October 2nd, 2017 16:35

Hiking the UrayoƔn Mountains
Michael Edwards said:

You\'ve filled me with envy - superb write Roberto

October 2nd, 2017 13:51

Come Sleep, Oh Sleep
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write very well formed.

October 2nd, 2017 01:13

Come Sleep, Oh Sleep
rrodriguez said:

Thank you Santita. You encouragement is highly appreciated.

October 1st, 2017 17:09

Come Sleep, Oh Sleep
Fay Slimm. said:

First rate writing in a tricky form too - reading through the whole piece its quiet flow went right my senses - thanks so much for sharing it with us Roberto

October 1st, 2017 16:33

Come Sleep, Oh Sleep
FredPeyer said:

Wow, Roberto! Michael is right, you made it look easy. Great work. I enjoyed it a lot. Unfortunately I don\'t think I could write with such a strict structure.

October 1st, 2017 15:27

Come Sleep, Oh Sleep
Michael Edwards said:

This is such a great construction and I know from writing to a strict structure it isn\'t easy and yet you\'ve made it look like a stroll in the country - great work indeed. Never written one myself and not sure if I have the courage to attempt it.

October 1st, 2017 12:52

Please tell me
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful lovelorn write Roberto.

October 1st, 2017 01:00

Please tell me
WL Schuett said:

Enjoyed this love poem

September 30th, 2017 21:39

Please tell me
Accidental Poet said:

The search for love always brings out the best in us all. Wonderful write Robert. ; )

September 30th, 2017 19:25

Please tell me
FredPeyer said:

Roberto, if the translation is that good, the original must be excellent! Unfortunately I don\'t understand enough Spanish to enjoy it!

September 30th, 2017 12:38

Aubode
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, the mornings in the UK are not the same but to me that are still special.
I love the line
\"Slowly the starlit sky hides the diamonds\"

September 30th, 2017 01:08

Aubode
WL Schuett said:

Great insight ,an educational read, nice structure and fun to read

September 29th, 2017 18:11

Aubode
FredPeyer said:

What a beautiful way to start the day. You captured the scene perfectly, Roberto.
I think city dwellers are really missing out on a lot. Your day starts with music, laughter and color. Theirs starts with a latte drunk on the go. No comparison!

September 29th, 2017 14:04

Aubode
Tony36 said:

WOW, Awesome write

September 29th, 2017 13:26

Aubode
malubotelho said:

Was like you were describing a morning in Brazil. So Puerto Rico has that hot scene too? Like loud and vibrant with music, flavors, fragancies. Oh! I love it. You made me miss my country. I think I would stay at easy in Porto Rico

September 29th, 2017 13:14

Aubode
Christina8 said:

Wow, what a beautiful and inviting portrait you paint of Puerto Rico! I can smell the smells and hear the sounds. So inviting! Great job!

September 29th, 2017 12:44

Donā€™t Postpone Joy
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonferfully positive and joyful write.

September 29th, 2017 01:25

Hope & Love Reign
Christina8 said:

Hopefully after lifting some of the shipping laws today, they will be able to get some aid to Puerto Rico, though it looks like it is slow. I am glad that they are increasing media coverage. Loved your poem. Prayers for you and the country! We are all american citizens

September 28th, 2017 16:30

Hope & Love Reign
Michael Edwards said:

Thinking of you Robert. May you sparred any further storms this season. Heartfelt write

September 24th, 2017 00:12

Hope & Love Reign
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HOLA RODRIGO ~ I have visited the Eastern West Indies (Barbados etc) and this Year I spent two weeks in CUBA. I am interested in Coastal Erosion and the thing I have noted in the Caribbean (compared to the UK ~ Which is an Island) is that there are few or no barrier against the SEA ! Consequently the sea just sweeps in and destroys everything ! We have Filipinos in our CHURCH tomorrow WE ARE PRAYING for all those affected by Hurricanes & Flooding. Thanks for CARING & SHARING ~ yous BRIAN

September 23rd, 2017 16:32

Hope & Love Reign
malubotelho said:

OMG. I saw that. So terrible. I could not believe my eyes. So sad. We just got hit by Irma and then there comes Maria. Your country got hit twice. I\'m so sorry. I had a hard time cleaning and fixing things after Irma. I pray that your country recover and I\'m always donating some for the people affected by the hurricanes. I hope this was the last but the season is still. I don\'t know if you know but I live in Florida and although beautiful Florida is in the path of hurricanes. Beautiful painful writing Robert.

September 23rd, 2017 15:13

I Remember... (Anaphora Poem)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write RR.

September 20th, 2017 00:57

I Remember... (Anaphora Poem)
Michael Edwards said:

So well crafted - super work.

September 19th, 2017 22:40



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