Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
Solmonet
willyweed said:
and the angels gather on the mountainside to behold the glory of the Devine sunset and it\'s Splendor
brings fourth tears of joy! nice picture you paint. Good Sir!
March 4th, 2017 15:10
willyweed said:
and the angels gather on the mountainside to behold the glory of the Devine sunset and it\'s Splendor
brings fourth tears of joy! nice picture you paint. Good Sir!
March 4th, 2017 15:10
Solmonet
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m right there in an impressionist world you\'ve painted with words.
March 4th, 2017 12:59
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m right there in an impressionist world you\'ve painted with words.
March 4th, 2017 12:59
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. My Grandchildren walk with me and life is wonderful.
March 4th, 2017 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. My Grandchildren walk with me and life is wonderful.
March 4th, 2017 02:20
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
Michael Edwards said:
A touching piece put together with such feeling - it makes me want to go and make even more fuss of my grandchildren than I already do which shows what a great write this is.
March 3rd, 2017 22:32
Michael Edwards said:
A touching piece put together with such feeling - it makes me want to go and make even more fuss of my grandchildren than I already do which shows what a great write this is.
March 3rd, 2017 22:32
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
MendedFences27 said:
Precious moments indeed. I believe it is the return of innocent eyes that make us see again the truth of life and nature, that makes the moments with grandchildren so special. Love the words and the way you put this together. Nice write - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 22:02
MendedFences27 said:
Precious moments indeed. I believe it is the return of innocent eyes that make us see again the truth of life and nature, that makes the moments with grandchildren so special. Love the words and the way you put this together. Nice write - Phil A.
March 3rd, 2017 22:02
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
Augustus said:
You write about the real treasure of our lives. Nuestros tesoros.
March 3rd, 2017 16:02
Augustus said:
You write about the real treasure of our lives. Nuestros tesoros.
March 3rd, 2017 16:02
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed Great write
March 3rd, 2017 15:42
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written and expressed Great write
March 3rd, 2017 15:42
An Evening Stroll With Grandpa
willyweed said:
I never meet by grandfather\'(s)
Now I try to be the awesome poppa dude to my grandkids Joyful read RR
March 3rd, 2017 14:33
willyweed said:
I never meet by grandfather\'(s)
Now I try to be the awesome poppa dude to my grandkids Joyful read RR
March 3rd, 2017 14:33
Acquainted with Much Pain
MendedFences27 said:
It seems that pain and the night are always together. One amplifies the other. This is a great adaptation of Frost\'s work. Loved \"When lyrics fling arrows of emotions. \" Maybe I\'ve felt that before. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:40
MendedFences27 said:
It seems that pain and the night are always together. One amplifies the other. This is a great adaptation of Frost\'s work. Loved \"When lyrics fling arrows of emotions. \" Maybe I\'ve felt that before. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:40
I went outside to pick up some leaves
MendedFences27 said:
\"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful analogies. With every fallen leaf there is a chance at a rebirth. Keep on raking. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:11
MendedFences27 said:
\"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful analogies. With every fallen leaf there is a chance at a rebirth. Keep on raking. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:11
At The Master\'s Feet
willyweed said:
I was left humbled at the altar weeping. RR you raised the bar here. ww
February 26th, 2017 18:07
willyweed said:
I was left humbled at the altar weeping. RR you raised the bar here. ww
February 26th, 2017 18:07
At The Master\'s Feet
Augustus said:
I am not a bible expert but remember a woman similar to whom you describe, and ready to put my doubts aside, join that woman at those naked feet; Could I touch His robe, that would be so neat. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 14:59
Augustus said:
I am not a bible expert but remember a woman similar to whom you describe, and ready to put my doubts aside, join that woman at those naked feet; Could I touch His robe, that would be so neat. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 14:59
At The Master\'s Feet
Michael Edwards said:
And this brings life - so well expressed.
February 26th, 2017 14:05
Michael Edwards said:
And this brings life - so well expressed.
February 26th, 2017 14:05
At The Master\'s Feet
rrodriguez said:
Yes, indeed! Thank you for your kind words and for reading my poem.
February 26th, 2017 11:52
rrodriguez said:
Yes, indeed! Thank you for your kind words and for reading my poem.
February 26th, 2017 11:52
At The Master\'s Feet
orchidee said:
A fine write - a place of humility to sit.
February 26th, 2017 11:50
orchidee said:
A fine write - a place of humility to sit.
February 26th, 2017 11:50
Acquainted with Much Pain
WriteBeLight said:
Poignant and so heart felt. Great work at tugging at my heart.
February 25th, 2017 20:34
WriteBeLight said:
Poignant and so heart felt. Great work at tugging at my heart.
February 25th, 2017 20:34
Acquainted with Much Pain
Augustus said:
Almost makes pain a beauteous thing. My favorite line is music flinging arrows. Very nice.
February 25th, 2017 16:36
Augustus said:
Almost makes pain a beauteous thing. My favorite line is music flinging arrows. Very nice.
February 25th, 2017 16:36
Acquainted with Much Pain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write, pain always makes us stronger.
February 25th, 2017 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write, pain always makes us stronger.
February 25th, 2017 15:25
Acquainted with Much Pain
Reivax Camlost said:
The perfect amount of literary device- repetition and rhyme add an emphasis on and intensity to your underlying message, and their use in moderation adds a sincerely to your poem, without any excessive and frilly language. Well done.
February 25th, 2017 13:56
Reivax Camlost said:
The perfect amount of literary device- repetition and rhyme add an emphasis on and intensity to your underlying message, and their use in moderation adds a sincerely to your poem, without any excessive and frilly language. Well done.
February 25th, 2017 13:56
I went outside to pick up some leaves
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
RR... love its content
I\'ve never thought
Of leaves with veins.
You could say \"the
Veins in leaves are
As the history in
An old mans hands\"..
February 25th, 2017 08:29
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
RR... love its content
I\'ve never thought
Of leaves with veins.
You could say \"the
Veins in leaves are
As the history in
An old mans hands\"..
February 25th, 2017 08:29
I went outside to pick up some leaves
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant rrodriguez. I feel the pain and sadness in the poem, as it reflects reality for some couples. Great piece of writing.
February 25th, 2017 07:20
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant rrodriguez. I feel the pain and sadness in the poem, as it reflects reality for some couples. Great piece of writing.
February 25th, 2017 07:20
I went outside to pick up some leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the analogy of the tears with the leaves is very good.
February 25th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the analogy of the tears with the leaves is very good.
February 25th, 2017 02:15
I went outside to pick up some leaves
Augustus said:
Love the tear anlagy. Could not help of thinking of the prominent veins and wrinkled skin on my on hands and those of my wife. It was sad that love faded. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 22:52
Augustus said:
Love the tear anlagy. Could not help of thinking of the prominent veins and wrinkled skin on my on hands and those of my wife. It was sad that love faded. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 22:52
Imago Dei (Pantoum)
P.H.Rose said:
Very good RR
Very good indeed
Flows beautifully
February 20th, 2017 18:42
P.H.Rose said:
Very good RR
Very good indeed
Flows beautifully
February 20th, 2017 18:42
Imago Dei (Pantoum)
Augustus said:
Nicely done. \"God don\'t make no junk\". Nicely done.
February 20th, 2017 17:16
Augustus said:
Nicely done. \"God don\'t make no junk\". Nicely done.
February 20th, 2017 17:16
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