Comments received on poems by rrodriguez
I went outside to pick up some leaves
MendedFences27 said:
\"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful analogies. With every fallen leaf there is a chance at a rebirth. Keep on raking. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:11
MendedFences27 said:
\"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful analogies. With every fallen leaf there is a chance at a rebirth. Keep on raking. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2017 20:11
At The Master\'s Feet
willyweed said:
I was left humbled at the altar weeping. RR you raised the bar here. ww
February 26th, 2017 18:07
willyweed said:
I was left humbled at the altar weeping. RR you raised the bar here. ww
February 26th, 2017 18:07
At The Master\'s Feet
Augustus said:
I am not a bible expert but remember a woman similar to whom you describe, and ready to put my doubts aside, join that woman at those naked feet; Could I touch His robe, that would be so neat. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 14:59
Augustus said:
I am not a bible expert but remember a woman similar to whom you describe, and ready to put my doubts aside, join that woman at those naked feet; Could I touch His robe, that would be so neat. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 14:59
At The Master\'s Feet
Michael Edwards said:
And this brings life - so well expressed.
February 26th, 2017 14:05
Michael Edwards said:
And this brings life - so well expressed.
February 26th, 2017 14:05
At The Master\'s Feet
rrodriguez said:
Yes, indeed! Thank you for your kind words and for reading my poem.
February 26th, 2017 11:52
rrodriguez said:
Yes, indeed! Thank you for your kind words and for reading my poem.
February 26th, 2017 11:52
At The Master\'s Feet
orchidee said:
A fine write - a place of humility to sit.
February 26th, 2017 11:50
orchidee said:
A fine write - a place of humility to sit.
February 26th, 2017 11:50
Acquainted with Much Pain
WriteBeLight said:
Poignant and so heart felt. Great work at tugging at my heart.
February 25th, 2017 20:34
WriteBeLight said:
Poignant and so heart felt. Great work at tugging at my heart.
February 25th, 2017 20:34
Acquainted with Much Pain
Augustus said:
Almost makes pain a beauteous thing. My favorite line is music flinging arrows. Very nice.
February 25th, 2017 16:36
Augustus said:
Almost makes pain a beauteous thing. My favorite line is music flinging arrows. Very nice.
February 25th, 2017 16:36
Acquainted with Much Pain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write, pain always makes us stronger.
February 25th, 2017 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful write, pain always makes us stronger.
February 25th, 2017 15:25
Acquainted with Much Pain
Reivax Camlost said:
The perfect amount of literary device- repetition and rhyme add an emphasis on and intensity to your underlying message, and their use in moderation adds a sincerely to your poem, without any excessive and frilly language. Well done.
February 25th, 2017 13:56
Reivax Camlost said:
The perfect amount of literary device- repetition and rhyme add an emphasis on and intensity to your underlying message, and their use in moderation adds a sincerely to your poem, without any excessive and frilly language. Well done.
February 25th, 2017 13:56
I went outside to pick up some leaves
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
RR... love its content
I\'ve never thought
Of leaves with veins.
You could say \"the
Veins in leaves are
As the history in
An old mans hands\"..
February 25th, 2017 08:29
P.H.Rose said:
This is so very good
RR... love its content
I\'ve never thought
Of leaves with veins.
You could say \"the
Veins in leaves are
As the history in
An old mans hands\"..
February 25th, 2017 08:29
I went outside to pick up some leaves
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant rrodriguez. I feel the pain and sadness in the poem, as it reflects reality for some couples. Great piece of writing.
February 25th, 2017 07:20
WriteBeLight said:
Very poignant rrodriguez. I feel the pain and sadness in the poem, as it reflects reality for some couples. Great piece of writing.
February 25th, 2017 07:20
I went outside to pick up some leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the analogy of the tears with the leaves is very good.
February 25th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the analogy of the tears with the leaves is very good.
February 25th, 2017 02:15
I went outside to pick up some leaves
Augustus said:
Love the tear anlagy. Could not help of thinking of the prominent veins and wrinkled skin on my on hands and those of my wife. It was sad that love faded. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 22:52
Augustus said:
Love the tear anlagy. Could not help of thinking of the prominent veins and wrinkled skin on my on hands and those of my wife. It was sad that love faded. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 22:52
Imago Dei (Pantoum)
P.H.Rose said:
Very good RR
Very good indeed
Flows beautifully
February 20th, 2017 18:42
P.H.Rose said:
Very good RR
Very good indeed
Flows beautifully
February 20th, 2017 18:42
Imago Dei (Pantoum)
Augustus said:
Nicely done. \"God don\'t make no junk\". Nicely done.
February 20th, 2017 17:16
Augustus said:
Nicely done. \"God don\'t make no junk\". Nicely done.
February 20th, 2017 17:16
Tree At My Backyard
WriteBeLight said:
Tell her to keep on gazing at Mother Nature. She heals us all!
February 12th, 2017 18:54
WriteBeLight said:
Tell her to keep on gazing at Mother Nature. She heals us all!
February 12th, 2017 18:54
Tree At My Backyard
Augustus said:
I believe God is in the trees. Interesting how the speaker relates to the tree for all they have in common. Both are firmly rooted. Your niece is in my thoughts and prayers. Nicely done.
February 12th, 2017 12:21
Augustus said:
I believe God is in the trees. Interesting how the speaker relates to the tree for all they have in common. Both are firmly rooted. Your niece is in my thoughts and prayers. Nicely done.
February 12th, 2017 12:21
Tree At My Backyard
Fay Slimm. said:
A positive and faith-filled outlook to end this introspective time of observing a tree - - you niece must find such tender care in these poignant lines as she journeys forward - - a moving read.
February 12th, 2017 12:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A positive and faith-filled outlook to end this introspective time of observing a tree - - you niece must find such tender care in these poignant lines as she journeys forward - - a moving read.
February 12th, 2017 12:21
Angels Weep
Michael Edwards said:
Another good one - I do like the construction of this .
February 7th, 2017 00:09
Michael Edwards said:
Another good one - I do like the construction of this .
February 7th, 2017 00:09
Angels Weep
rrodriguez said:
Thank you, DS
I teach religion and on the textbook the words \"angels weep\" caught by eyes. I immediate started writing and editing and writing until this poem was born. Thank you for your comment and for reading my poem.
February 6th, 2017 23:18
rrodriguez said:
Thank you, DS
I teach religion and on the textbook the words \"angels weep\" caught by eyes. I immediate started writing and editing and writing until this poem was born. Thank you for your comment and for reading my poem.
February 6th, 2017 23:18
The Moon & the Sun
Michael Edwards said:
Right up my street - beautifully written.
February 5th, 2017 14:05
Michael Edwards said:
Right up my street - beautifully written.
February 5th, 2017 14:05
Remember the Poets (Pantoum)
Christina8 said:
I love this poem. I appreciate a lot of the classic poets. This is a very well written poem!
February 5th, 2017 12:41
Christina8 said:
I love this poem. I appreciate a lot of the classic poets. This is a very well written poem!
February 5th, 2017 12:41
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