Comments received on poems by rrodriguez



Dads Can Do Anything
Michael Edwards said:

Uplifting poem and it reminds me of when my children were young. We have one of our grandsons here for a sleepover and he brings us such joy as they all do - this poem applies equally..

March 19th, 2017 01:47

Dads Can Do Anything
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and so true, the bond between father and offspring is so strong.

March 19th, 2017 01:21

Ugly War!
WriteBeLight said:

So sorry for what you went through. You describe, well, the devastation, pain and destruction. It is a horrible situation, and yes, very ugly. Great job on this thoughtful piece.

March 18th, 2017 07:25

Ugly War!
rrodriguez said:

Indeed! Thank you for reading my poem.

March 17th, 2017 21:13

Ugly War!
MendedFences27 said:

War will end when the would be soldiers and would be victims refuse to follow the greedy, power-hungry, manipulative bastards in power. Today, they play, not with just war casualties, but also with the total destruction of the planet. One more war could be the last action any of us ever make. We have idiots, tyrants, and lunatics with their fingers on the many buttons that could start it all. God save us! - Phil A.

March 17th, 2017 20:52

Ugly War!
Michael Edwards said:

I hung on every word of this sensitive and beautiful poem - it\'s going into my favourites and I can\'t say more than that.

March 17th, 2017 16:19

Together Forever
Augustus said:

Like you say, we announce it publicly to the world with God watching. I feel sorry for those who have not experienced what you poetically describe.

March 12th, 2017 18:30

Together Forever
rrodriguez said:

Thank you dear friend.

March 12th, 2017 16:33

Together Forever
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write. May your love last for ever.

March 12th, 2017 13:14

Together Forever
MendedFences27 said:

Amazing how that one special person can change your life forever. It is as if you were incomplete before joining together. Your poem is a beautiful tribute to your everlasting love and to your wife. Loved it. - Phil A.

March 12th, 2017 11:32

Together Forever
willyweed said:

true love is GODs greatest gift! I know this is so.

March 12th, 2017 10:55

Under The Canopy of a Tree
MendedFences27 said:

When we meditate, most often we seem to ponder peaceful ideas. Is it human nature that solitude among nature brings peace? Man would learn a lot if trees could talk, maybe how to be at peace. Wouldn\'t that be great?Loved your poem, always love poems where nature plays a large role. One more thought: Maybe its the size of trees under which we sit that makes us feel safe and secure. Great write. Loved it. _ Phil A.

March 12th, 2017 09:43

Under The Canopy of a Tree
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I was living with nature in this write.

March 12th, 2017 02:41

Under The Canopy of a Tree
Michael Edwards said:

Superb construction in an absorbing poem.

March 12th, 2017 01:03

Under The Canopy of a Tree
rrodriguez said:

DS, I love to write poems and I find myself looking and observing around for subjects to write about. It\'s funny, I find myself composing phrases as I experience life. I really appreciate your words. They encourage me to write. I want to leave a legacy. I want to impact others with my verses. My heart is sensible and melancholic, that\'s why I write with such feelings. Thank you for your kinds words. I really, really am encouraged when I read your comments. Thank you!

March 11th, 2017 21:59

A Single Tree
WriteBeLight said:

Beautifully told!

March 11th, 2017 07:22

A Single Tree
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and great message.

March 11th, 2017 02:00

A Single Tree
MendedFences27 said:

Innocence was lost in that Garden, and again on the hill called Calvary, but in both instances it was Man who sinned. The tree of life and the wood of the cross, all from the same source. What a great poem. Very inspirational. Thanks. - Phil A.

March 10th, 2017 22:01

A Single Tree
Augustus said:

Reads easily and portrays divine message.

March 10th, 2017 17:15

A Single Tree
willyweed said:

a good message for all, to read.

March 10th, 2017 16:13

Damaged Soul
WriteBeLight said:

Wonderful words rrodriguez. Such a lovely piece of writing you have written for him. Great work!

March 6th, 2017 00:24

Damaged Soul
Augustus said:

Great tribute.

March 5th, 2017 20:21

Damaged Soul
MendedFences27 said:

Sad indeed. Well expressed by you. Perhaps it will aide your friend in coping with his life. I certainly hope he is able to gain some balance and find meaning. You\'ve presented his situation with great care and dignity. - Phil A.


March 5th, 2017 18:47

Damaged Soul
poetboy123 said:

Wow this was incredibly thoughtful of you. I wish you the best, as well as our friend.

March 5th, 2017 18:37

Damaged Soul
willyweed said:

well said I hope it helps our heavy hearted friend, sincerely!

March 5th, 2017 12:50

Damaged Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotion laden write.

March 5th, 2017 11:17

Solmonet
Goldfinch60 said:

The picture painted with words is a delight to read.

March 5th, 2017 01:38

Solmonet
MendedFences27 said:

The beauty of the setting Sun, captured in poetic style, and painted with words of color and emotion. Monet\'s impressions of the world around him were expressed with paint and canvass, your scene is expressed through your voice and to the written page. \"Back to the earth his work unfinished,\" leaves us to realize he will rise again in the morn. Beautiful piece. - Phil A.

March 4th, 2017 20:03

Solmonet
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 4th, 2017 18:14

Solmonet
Augustus said:

The sun as a painter. Great idea and execution. I too have been fascinated with color and love the impressionists.

March 4th, 2017 17:41



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