Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



A Hard Rain (+1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this reads like a blues confession...Dylanโ€™s ghost humming in the margins while truth drips slow through the years. Youโ€™ve written music for the scar. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 9th, 2025 20:03

A Hard Rain (+1)
sorenbarrett said:

Good words about some good music both so closely related. Well done Kurt

October 9th, 2025 09:52

Tick Tock Doom (+1)
NinjaGirl said:

Honestly, a lot of time. There were so many options for other options...but the path we\'re on now is just as adventurous. Well done!

October 8th, 2025 20:24

Tick Tock Doom (+1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Very thought-provoking, as always, my friend! Very well written and I love the title of the first! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 8th, 2025 19:52

Tick Tock Doom (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Yes, we are all its potential victims. Thanks

October 8th, 2025 10:59

Tick Tock Doom (+1)
sorenbarrett said:

Time a commodity not on the stock exchange and not for sale. Lost is gone. Nicely written my friend.

October 8th, 2025 10:24

Code Blue
2781 said:

And the winepress was trodden without the city, and blood came out of the winepress, even unto the horse bridles, by the space of a thousand and six hundred furlongs.

October 8th, 2025 01:03

Code Blue
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely worded in a graphic form. Well done Kurt.

October 7th, 2025 20:28

Shakespeare\'s Rose
sorenbarrett said:

Kurt, a lovely sentiment well stated in poetic form. As a species inside, we all seem to share common elements although on the outside, we may appear quite different. Loved it.

October 6th, 2025 09:50

Shakespeare\'s Rose
2781 said:

From the heart the mouth speaks.

October 6th, 2025 08:45

Title Free (+1)
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting concept that is true that we take for granted what we have and only value what we do not. Nicely said

October 5th, 2025 10:35

Darkness Runs
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautiful Kurt! That closing...โ€œa poem born as darkness runsโ€...really struck me. Such a graceful image of creation. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 4th, 2025 07:38

Darkness Runs
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful Kurt. I find that as opposed to the mornings being inspirational it is the night. Maybe that is why my tone is often dark. Loved this one my friend.

October 4th, 2025 04:01

Lost In Babylon
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this is powerful. From blindness in darkness to release in tomorrow, youโ€™ve captured a deep spiritual truth with brevity and strength. Beautifully done, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 3rd, 2025 21:11

Lost In Babylon
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Soren. Time only exists in the mind ...

October 3rd, 2025 12:23

Lost In Babylon
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! another poem that in my brain fog I had to think about for a while to get the message. Yes indeed time passes and todays become yesterdays while tomorrows become todays Nice one Kurt

October 3rd, 2025 11:42

Lost Tears
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Very true! Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

October 2nd, 2025 16:59

Lost Tears
sorenbarrett said:

Tis true Kurt we never notice until we have been bit. Another good short

October 2nd, 2025 12:32

On My Tombstone
David Welch said:

It would make a great epitaph.

October 1st, 2025 21:46

On My Tombstone
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Well written, Kurt. Powerful. ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™

October 1st, 2025 20:04

On My Tombstone
sorenbarrett said:

The facts of life running its course. Well written my friend

October 1st, 2025 11:56

La Verite Triomphe
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Strong work, Kurt...truth rendered as firm, unlabeled, triumphant. โ€œForces Majeuresโ€ says it all: right versus wrong, and truth prevailing. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ› Loved this. A fave.

September 30th, 2025 18:10

\"All Damn Thee Who Enter Here\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ooh! Great question and...excellent flow and rhyme! A fave, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 30th, 2025 17:34

La Verite Triomphe
sorenbarrett said:

Nice one Kurt another truth stated. Some things do seem to be true and other seem false.

September 30th, 2025 10:07

\"All Damn Thee Who Enter Here\"
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed that is the question who\'s hand holds the key. Fine write

September 29th, 2025 13:11

Destiny Forks
Tristan Robert Lange said:

All too trueโ€ฆand we all know where the wrong turns can lead! Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน

September 28th, 2025 16:43

Destiny Forks
sorenbarrett said:

Right of course, the left handed way only leads to dismay. Good write Kurt

September 28th, 2025 11:17

Let The Dogs Out
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is both raw and liberating...A call to stop performing and simply let it happen. Beautifully done. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

September 27th, 2025 21:15

Let The Dogs Out
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely said Kurt a plea for others to join the crowd. Well done my friend

September 27th, 2025 10:51

The Wait
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This is layered and resonant...the girl waiting in cold, the poem resisting edit, both caught โ€œhunter and prey.โ€ The patience, the longing, the uncertainty all fold together. Beautifully written. An excellent metaphorโ€ฆthough of course, only if marriage is seen as the end goal for a girl. For a poem, though, being read IS the end goal. Certainly, being read IS universally the end goal of a poem. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ› Wonderful job, Kurt.

September 27th, 2025 07:43



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