Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
The Enemy Within
Kurt Philip Behm said:
We\'re up to our asses in alligators and nobody is willing
to drain the swamp. When I was a kid, garbage pails sat
outside kitchens in the ground. Once in a while they would
draw ants. I was out there trying to stamp them out with
my Chuck Taylors when my Grandmother motioned through
the window for me to stop.
Ten minutes later she came through the kitchen door with
a pot full of scalding boiling water which she dumped all
over the top of the submerged pail.
As she walked back into the kitchen she said to me... \"Son,
that\'s the only way to kill piss ants.\"
Societally, were in the same place.
Thanks for reading.
Kurt
October 11th, 2023 20:31
Kurt Philip Behm said:
We\'re up to our asses in alligators and nobody is willing
to drain the swamp. When I was a kid, garbage pails sat
outside kitchens in the ground. Once in a while they would
draw ants. I was out there trying to stamp them out with
my Chuck Taylors when my Grandmother motioned through
the window for me to stop.
Ten minutes later she came through the kitchen door with
a pot full of scalding boiling water which she dumped all
over the top of the submerged pail.
As she walked back into the kitchen she said to me... \"Son,
that\'s the only way to kill piss ants.\"
Societally, were in the same place.
Thanks for reading.
Kurt
October 11th, 2023 20:31
The Enemy Within
Bobby O said:
Do I sense a faint suggestive Luminatti suggestion? Either way, there is serious disproportion of measuring informal and formal influence that determines life changing policy and law. Nice piece. Many props.
October 11th, 2023 12:24
Bobby O said:
Do I sense a faint suggestive Luminatti suggestion? Either way, there is serious disproportion of measuring informal and formal influence that determines life changing policy and law. Nice piece. Many props.
October 11th, 2023 12:24
Unholy Alliance (+1)
jarcher54 said:
So much to ponder in so few words! I enjoyed the contra expectatio at the end.
October 9th, 2023 11:38
jarcher54 said:
So much to ponder in so few words! I enjoyed the contra expectatio at the end.
October 9th, 2023 11:38
Eternally Instant
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Carpe Diem !
October 4th, 2023 11:39
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Carpe Diem !
October 4th, 2023 11:39
Eternally Instant
Pop64 said:
Your writing style is always soft and fluid, with its excellent rhyme. There\'s no time like the present, as yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never be, we must use those windows then to set ourselves free. Beautiful!
October 4th, 2023 11:33
Pop64 said:
Your writing style is always soft and fluid, with its excellent rhyme. There\'s no time like the present, as yesterday is gone and tomorrow may never be, we must use those windows then to set ourselves free. Beautiful!
October 4th, 2023 11:33
But For One ... (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Carly, I\'m honored by your comments.
October 2nd, 2023 12:01
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Carly, I\'m honored by your comments.
October 2nd, 2023 12:01
But For One ... (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Christina. I\'m glad it resonated.
October 2nd, 2023 10:17
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Christina. I\'m glad it resonated.
October 2nd, 2023 10:17
But For One ... (+1)
Christina8 said:
This is excellent, Kurt! So many poignant questions posed!
October 2nd, 2023 10:11
Christina8 said:
This is excellent, Kurt! So many poignant questions posed!
October 2nd, 2023 10:11
But For One ... (+1)
Pop64 said:
This is poignant, reaching into the reader, making them question, contemplate. That is the effect of the author\'s choice of words, cadence and overall delivery of thought. Astounding!
October 2nd, 2023 09:58
Pop64 said:
This is poignant, reaching into the reader, making them question, contemplate. That is the effect of the author\'s choice of words, cadence and overall delivery of thought. Astounding!
October 2nd, 2023 09:58
Pedants
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is truly succinct , delivering an impact so great and so very true. Love this!
September 28th, 2023 09:27
Pop64 said:
Damn, this is truly succinct , delivering an impact so great and so very true. Love this!
September 28th, 2023 09:27
Rebirth
Pop64 said:
Such a smooth flowing read, filled with imagery and wisdom. Loved it!
September 27th, 2023 09:56
Pop64 said:
Such a smooth flowing read, filled with imagery and wisdom. Loved it!
September 27th, 2023 09:56
Orphaning The Moment
Bobby O said:
A mantra and recurring visage. To the point with volumes said in a few pure words.
September 23rd, 2023 19:50
Bobby O said:
A mantra and recurring visage. To the point with volumes said in a few pure words.
September 23rd, 2023 19:50
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