Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Minor Plus Est
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are the master at
ā Using the simple
to state the sublime
Syllables shortened
āmagic refinedā
Lauraš»
March 12th, 2023 00:58
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
You are the master at
ā Using the simple
to state the sublime
Syllables shortened
āmagic refinedā
Lauraš»
March 12th, 2023 00:58
L\'Allegro Remembered
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A insightful poem.
Thank you for prompting me to revisit Miltonās āLāAllegroāā¦
and āIl Penserosoā.
Grazie Mille.āŗļø
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2023 13:26
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A insightful poem.
Thank you for prompting me to revisit Miltonās āLāAllegroāā¦
and āIl Penserosoā.
Grazie Mille.āŗļø
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2023 13:26
\'El Maestro\'
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, that Argentinian was special.
March 11th, 2023 13:15
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, that Argentinian was special.
March 11th, 2023 13:15
\'El Maestro\'
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow! š¤© You definitely piqued my interest to know more about Juan Manuel Fangio.
For certain a special and an amazing individual.
Loved the entire poem, especially
ā Chasing defiance
the sweetest
of wineā
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2023 13:09
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Wow! š¤© You definitely piqued my interest to know more about Juan Manuel Fangio.
For certain a special and an amazing individual.
Loved the entire poem, especially
ā Chasing defiance
the sweetest
of wineā
Lauraš»
March 11th, 2023 13:09
Sand Trap
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, I dream of that perfect 1-word poem.
March 9th, 2023 12:21
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, I dream of that perfect 1-word poem.
March 9th, 2023 12:21
Sand Trap
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Succinctly stated and so true.
Your ability to express a huge thought with only twelve words is amazing!
Youāre a remarkable Poet.
Lauraš»
March 9th, 2023 11:35
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Succinctly stated and so true.
Your ability to express a huge thought with only twelve words is amazing!
Youāre a remarkable Poet.
Lauraš»
March 9th, 2023 11:35
Wounded Omnipotence
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Reading your words highlight my everyday thoughts of manās personal relationship with Godās.
āIām so grateful my Father weaves my very failures into His unique design for my life.ā
Laura š»
March 6th, 2023 10:42
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Reading your words highlight my everyday thoughts of manās personal relationship with Godās.
āIām so grateful my Father weaves my very failures into His unique design for my life.ā
Laura š»
March 6th, 2023 10:42
Martyrs & Clowns
L. B. Mek said:
\'of legacy we quest
in water\'s, muddied by circumstance
since before, birth\'..
Poesy as our window to questions
that unveil
what Truth, we\'re afforded in life...
A great write!
March 6th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'of legacy we quest
in water\'s, muddied by circumstance
since before, birth\'..
Poesy as our window to questions
that unveil
what Truth, we\'re afforded in life...
A great write!
March 6th, 2023 05:06
\"Blessed Be The Meek\"
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(\'The meek shall inherit the Earth\'
well then, as like Seamus Heaney
with our snug, QWERTY keys
upon fingertips that dream
let\'s get digging
inking, in search of that most perfect-fit
syllable
to farm our blank pages of poetic
chance
and unearth that good, good
turf, awaiting
cloistered and battered, in our heart\'s...)
March 6th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(\'The meek shall inherit the Earth\'
well then, as like Seamus Heaney
with our snug, QWERTY keys
upon fingertips that dream
let\'s get digging
inking, in search of that most perfect-fit
syllable
to farm our blank pages of poetic
chance
and unearth that good, good
turf, awaiting
cloistered and battered, in our heart\'s...)
March 6th, 2023 05:01
The First Daffodil
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The whirlwind dharma
that so haunts my dreams\'
(Wu Wei quietude, escapist dogma
to juxtapose, mind\'s zeal for chaos)
March 6th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'The whirlwind dharma
that so haunts my dreams\'
(Wu Wei quietude, escapist dogma
to juxtapose, mind\'s zeal for chaos)
March 6th, 2023 04:54
Before The Fall
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āBefore The Fallā
āThe mirror once broken
āeach crack filled with painā
These words reminded me of a recent faux pas I regretfully made.
ā¢ āInvisible in natureāā¦
A powerful force within us that will
ārise to the surface
when conflicts beginsā
This reminds me so much of Cutty.
Lauraš»
February 27th, 2023 13:24
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āBefore The Fallā
āThe mirror once broken
āeach crack filled with painā
These words reminded me of a recent faux pas I regretfully made.
ā¢ āInvisible in natureāā¦
A powerful force within us that will
ārise to the surface
when conflicts beginsā
This reminds me so much of Cutty.
Lauraš»
February 27th, 2023 13:24
Approaching Storm (#2)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
The magnitude of your words in this poem have piqued my interest and curiosity in reading your latest novel. Eagerly awaiting for it to be published.
Lauraš»
February 27th, 2023 00:49
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
The magnitude of your words in this poem have piqued my interest and curiosity in reading your latest novel. Eagerly awaiting for it to be published.
Lauraš»
February 27th, 2023 00:49
Captivus
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
If we perceive ourselves as victims, then weāll remain as such.
āwoe is me, woe is meā
If weāre in a deep funk, we have to do something about it.
Hereās where we need a tiramisĆ¹ā¦and I donāt mean the dessert!
Laura š»
February 26th, 2023 12:57
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
If we perceive ourselves as victims, then weāll remain as such.
āwoe is me, woe is meā
If weāre in a deep funk, we have to do something about it.
Hereās where we need a tiramisĆ¹ā¦and I donāt mean the dessert!
Laura š»
February 26th, 2023 12:57
Forked Tongues
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
An impressive piece of writing.
Letting our guard down is dangerous. Beware of the devilās many devices/tools with which he attempts to influence us.
They are disguised in many forms.
Pay attention to that
ādevil at your heelsā
as my wise Mom would caution.
Laura š»
February 25th, 2023 19:42
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
An impressive piece of writing.
Letting our guard down is dangerous. Beware of the devilās many devices/tools with which he attempts to influence us.
They are disguised in many forms.
Pay attention to that
ādevil at your heelsā
as my wise Mom would caution.
Laura š»
February 25th, 2023 19:42
Black Seed
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A gem of a poem.
āThe past beyond hope
āthe future beguiledā
Your ending to āBlack Seedā reminds me of a conversation I once had with a relative of mine.
I ended the conversation with the following words:
Care and caution can prevent crash and burn.
Lauraš»
February 23rd, 2023 13:50
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
A gem of a poem.
āThe past beyond hope
āthe future beguiledā
Your ending to āBlack Seedā reminds me of a conversation I once had with a relative of mine.
I ended the conversation with the following words:
Care and caution can prevent crash and burn.
Lauraš»
February 23rd, 2023 13:50
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