Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Mendacium
jarcher54 said:
Could you use fewer words? (-:
I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t mess around
August 20th, 2023 11:00
jarcher54 said:
Could you use fewer words? (-:
I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t mess around
August 20th, 2023 11:00
Time Warrior
Bigguy said:
I suspect there is more to this, but on first reading I strongly pictured the sword and sorcery films of the 1980s, and that made me very happy. Nice poem!
August 16th, 2023 22:14
Bigguy said:
I suspect there is more to this, but on first reading I strongly pictured the sword and sorcery films of the 1980s, and that made me very happy. Nice poem!
August 16th, 2023 22:14
The Drawbridge Closes
Parisab said:
‘The years have come’
The tears have stayed’
Neither youth nor old age, will bring full wisdom-(it) rots on twisted vines …I gathered the impermanence of it all, from your well versed poem-great read, as usual…
August 16th, 2023 01:53
Parisab said:
‘The years have come’
The tears have stayed’
Neither youth nor old age, will bring full wisdom-(it) rots on twisted vines …I gathered the impermanence of it all, from your well versed poem-great read, as usual…
August 16th, 2023 01:53
Waxing Arrhythmic (+1)
Bobby O said:
Deigning new veins, great and consistent metaphorical theme that drew for us the picture of REAL as the RED INK in the pen!
Nice write Good Read
August 14th, 2023 13:30
Bobby O said:
Deigning new veins, great and consistent metaphorical theme that drew for us the picture of REAL as the RED INK in the pen!
Nice write Good Read
August 14th, 2023 13:30
No Curtain Call
Bobby O said:
That last stanza is eerily exact. And for sure it does reclaim but I propose that w proper vigor and commitment you can use and wear diem every ounce of your youth all by yourself. The Reaper gets what’s left but when my youth provided me options I danced with all to squeeze out the PRIVLEGE I always like your stuff and your angular view.
August 4th, 2023 22:42
Bobby O said:
That last stanza is eerily exact. And for sure it does reclaim but I propose that w proper vigor and commitment you can use and wear diem every ounce of your youth all by yourself. The Reaper gets what’s left but when my youth provided me options I danced with all to squeeze out the PRIVLEGE I always like your stuff and your angular view.
August 4th, 2023 22:42
Dreams Steal Away
Pop64 said:
A seamless flow to this well penned write, all due to the rhyme scheme, but the imagery brings clarity and understanding of \"her\" losing light and life.
July 27th, 2023 10:56
Pop64 said:
A seamless flow to this well penned write, all due to the rhyme scheme, but the imagery brings clarity and understanding of \"her\" losing light and life.
July 27th, 2023 10:56
Free Of Structure
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 26th, 2023 02:05
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 26th, 2023 02:05
Free Of Structure
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 25th, 2023 20:45
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 25th, 2023 20:45
Repudium Tempus
Matriarch said:
It\'s hard to say a lot with a little, but I think you\'ve done that.
July 21st, 2023 16:24
Matriarch said:
It\'s hard to say a lot with a little, but I think you\'ve done that.
July 21st, 2023 16:24
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