Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
A Donde Va
L. B. Mek said:
to that sameplace, it stemmed from
originally
that space of patience, awaiting
our next generation of genius
to shake
our world loose of cobwebbed indifference;
Bukowski wrote
\'I walk on and wonder, where
the living goes
when it stops\'
in that self-searching poem
a mirror to your theme, I think..
a great searching write, dear Poet
so relatable
December 23rd, 2022 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
to that sameplace, it stemmed from
originally
that space of patience, awaiting
our next generation of genius
to shake
our world loose of cobwebbed indifference;
Bukowski wrote
\'I walk on and wonder, where
the living goes
when it stops\'
in that self-searching poem
a mirror to your theme, I think..
a great searching write, dear Poet
so relatable
December 23rd, 2022 06:36
Cat Stevens Was Right
L. B. Mek said:
I\'d never heard of cat stevens before
but your words resonate with me
since, we\'re all striving to ink words
at a time
when all people want to consume as distractions
are cartoonish, memes..
yet
still, we endeavour to word a line
a phrase, a write
that will cut through
the accumulated debris, upon people\'s awareness
and awaken, their capacity
to think
and allow themselves the opportunity
to exist as individuals...
(a great shorty Kurt)
December 23rd, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
I\'d never heard of cat stevens before
but your words resonate with me
since, we\'re all striving to ink words
at a time
when all people want to consume as distractions
are cartoonish, memes..
yet
still, we endeavour to word a line
a phrase, a write
that will cut through
the accumulated debris, upon people\'s awareness
and awaken, their capacity
to think
and allow themselves the opportunity
to exist as individuals...
(a great shorty Kurt)
December 23rd, 2022 06:28
Donde Van Ellas
Kurt Philip Behm said:
In hope of finding the answer, or at least another question...
Thanks LB
December 19th, 2022 09:41
Kurt Philip Behm said:
In hope of finding the answer, or at least another question...
Thanks LB
December 19th, 2022 09:41
Here & There
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, and the warmest holiday greeting to you and yours. Thanks for all the wonderful reads and commenting.
December 19th, 2022 09:37
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, and the warmest holiday greeting to you and yours. Thanks for all the wonderful reads and commenting.
December 19th, 2022 09:37
Here & There
L. B. Mek said:
(stilled indifference
to our awaited, past
lamenting our horizons
blinking back our regrets
we merely awake
to our shadow\'s realisations
and award it the title of daybreak
staring wide, in that stillness
of our life\'s restless nights...)
let me take this opportunity
to thank you for all the beautiful poetry
you\'ve shared this calendar year, dear treasured Poet
and cherished poetic kin
I wish you and your loved ones
an enriching and peaceful
festive season
stay safe, hope you have a great end of year!!!
🍾🥂
December 19th, 2022 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
(stilled indifference
to our awaited, past
lamenting our horizons
blinking back our regrets
we merely awake
to our shadow\'s realisations
and award it the title of daybreak
staring wide, in that stillness
of our life\'s restless nights...)
let me take this opportunity
to thank you for all the beautiful poetry
you\'ve shared this calendar year, dear treasured Poet
and cherished poetic kin
I wish you and your loved ones
an enriching and peaceful
festive season
stay safe, hope you have a great end of year!!!
🍾🥂
December 19th, 2022 05:56
Glass House
L. B. Mek said:
(\'David\'s thrown stone\'
a prerequisite necessity
in everyone\'s story;
that we need it, hear of it
but know
we will never, witness it
is that true tragedy
even Shakespeare, failed
to capture even in his
overwhelming, legacy...)
so insightful
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 19th, 2022 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
(\'David\'s thrown stone\'
a prerequisite necessity
in everyone\'s story;
that we need it, hear of it
but know
we will never, witness it
is that true tragedy
even Shakespeare, failed
to capture even in his
overwhelming, legacy...)
so insightful
thank you! dear cherished Poet
December 19th, 2022 05:50
Full Circle
L. B. Mek said:
(mistake #.5\'s
hoping, hope
will be enough)
Bukowski said it best, dear Poet:
\'“The crowd is the gathering place of the weakest; true creation is a solitary act.”
(and oft
a lonesome, fate)
December 19th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
(mistake #.5\'s
hoping, hope
will be enough)
Bukowski said it best, dear Poet:
\'“The crowd is the gathering place of the weakest; true creation is a solitary act.”
(and oft
a lonesome, fate)
December 19th, 2022 05:45
Within The Silence
L. B. Mek said:
aye, dear Poet kin
how world weary, wise
indeed, may it always be
endings
with clinking Chardonnay\'s
and shared words or silences
between heart\'s, that have long learnt
to beat to a steady rhythm
even devoid of fluttering hope
to pulse, easy
knowing
be it in our years of hurried striving
or stagnated, waiting
life is coming to us steadily, we merely
need to ride the waves of Time
and promise ourselves
we\'ve done enough, in that very act
of accumulating, our very next breath
all else, is chaos entwined
fate
and very much, out of our hands...
very much
December 19th, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
aye, dear Poet kin
how world weary, wise
indeed, may it always be
endings
with clinking Chardonnay\'s
and shared words or silences
between heart\'s, that have long learnt
to beat to a steady rhythm
even devoid of fluttering hope
to pulse, easy
knowing
be it in our years of hurried striving
or stagnated, waiting
life is coming to us steadily, we merely
need to ride the waves of Time
and promise ourselves
we\'ve done enough, in that very act
of accumulating, our very next breath
all else, is chaos entwined
fate
and very much, out of our hands...
very much
December 19th, 2022 05:40
Donde Van Ellas
L. B. Mek said:
back to where they began, hopefully
back in the que
where they may be allowed, to try
one more time
to do it right or at the very least, give it
one bloody good go
empowered by all the wisdom of hurt
they\'ve been forcedly
made, to accumulate
in the name of fate...
(there\'s such a relatable tone
to your questing words, dear Poet)
December 19th, 2022 05:33
L. B. Mek said:
back to where they began, hopefully
back in the que
where they may be allowed, to try
one more time
to do it right or at the very least, give it
one bloody good go
empowered by all the wisdom of hurt
they\'ve been forcedly
made, to accumulate
in the name of fate...
(there\'s such a relatable tone
to your questing words, dear Poet)
December 19th, 2022 05:33
Crossing Over
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I very much appreciate that.
Thanks so much.
December 6th, 2022 22:25
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I very much appreciate that.
Thanks so much.
December 6th, 2022 22:25
Untitled (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, I wrote the untitled one over 50 years ago during my salad days.
November 28th, 2022 09:52
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, I wrote the untitled one over 50 years ago during my salad days.
November 28th, 2022 09:52
Untitled (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
(we make-up, our make belief
fantasies
then lament, how they dissociate
us, from reality
only answering
the how and why, of it all
reactively, in retrospective futility...)
another thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you!
November 28th, 2022 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
(we make-up, our make belief
fantasies
then lament, how they dissociate
us, from reality
only answering
the how and why, of it all
reactively, in retrospective futility...)
another thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you!
November 28th, 2022 05:45
Inception
L. B. Mek said:
\'The weight uprooted
a seedless fruit\'
(that\'s that knockout capacity
of a poetic, left hook)
thank you!
November 28th, 2022 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'The weight uprooted
a seedless fruit\'
(that\'s that knockout capacity
of a poetic, left hook)
thank you!
November 28th, 2022 05:38
Into The Headlights
L. B. Mek said:
you could easily title this
\'statuette modernity\'s, insular status\'
...
great insight as ever, dear Poet
November 21st, 2022 05:05
L. B. Mek said:
you could easily title this
\'statuette modernity\'s, insular status\'
...
great insight as ever, dear Poet
November 21st, 2022 05:05
Ancient Promises
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(as-if our forefathers could code our DNA\'s
way before we could spell, binary...)
November 21st, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(as-if our forefathers could code our DNA\'s
way before we could spell, binary...)
November 21st, 2022 05:00
Into The Headlights
Eugene S. said:
Great write, great rhythm. Detachment seems to be in the air these days, and, as always, poets are the guage.
November 20th, 2022 11:15
Eugene S. said:
Great write, great rhythm. Detachment seems to be in the air these days, and, as always, poets are the guage.
November 20th, 2022 11:15
Siren\'s Mirage
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you, dear Poet
for once again inspiring my little scribble:
(clock\'s move back n forth, GMT
yet we\'re left trailing tomorrow\'s
too invested in yesterday\'s mirages
and existence\'s - mean, defined
in circumstances delivered to us
by causality\'s, deficiencies
and in each misinterpreted, moment
we ask if redemption, begins
with us or happenstance)
November 18th, 2022 06:21
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
thank you, dear Poet
for once again inspiring my little scribble:
(clock\'s move back n forth, GMT
yet we\'re left trailing tomorrow\'s
too invested in yesterday\'s mirages
and existence\'s - mean, defined
in circumstances delivered to us
by causality\'s, deficiencies
and in each misinterpreted, moment
we ask if redemption, begins
with us or happenstance)
November 18th, 2022 06:21
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