Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
One Step From Perdition (+1)
tallisman said:
Hi Kurt, superb poetry. Forgive my ignorance, what do the references in brackets refer to? Thanks
June 25th, 2022 13:13
tallisman said:
Hi Kurt, superb poetry. Forgive my ignorance, what do the references in brackets refer to? Thanks
June 25th, 2022 13:13
Spiritual Tenancy (+1)
Raven333 said:
hello, I though it was short I know, but had a lot of meaning behind it. good job.
June 22nd, 2022 11:11
Raven333 said:
hello, I though it was short I know, but had a lot of meaning behind it. good job.
June 22nd, 2022 11:11
Last Words (+2)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Poverty lessens
the weight of ambition\'..
(symbolism, as modernity\'s isms
clicks as prayers
ticks and hashtags for belonging\'s
cues
salvaging our mercy from scripted
fallacy\'s, in reality documentaries..
mTV\'s cribs as our dreams
a dollar for noodles and a can, yet
San Fran
averaging two overdoses a day
while
new millionaires are minted
every seven minutes, and
our Youth
leaving their dreams and living as inSta Idol\'s
hallucinating of the ease, in 49ers
goldrush trappings
clueless, rest
of us
try and resuscitate, volition
within
miscounted votes, assertion
waving flags, that
could never tippex, away
their crimson, stains
in-to
a forgotten, past
free
of regret\'s, consequences
penny
for your thoughts
at gun-point, we ask
while
raping you, of your worth
with our eyes;
Parrot\'s in-hand
these last words
of trending, lament
we surrender
as your future, cyclicality
in inheritance as remnant\'s
synchronicity, for choosing
to believe in humanity\'s
credentials
to govern a planet, it\'s already
looted
of mineral and materialistic
worth...
and on
as one
we
swim
regressing
to our tadpoles
of demise
hoping, we too
will be SuperHero, resurrected
like Lazarus, only
we ask
could we get, a few more
days
rest,
first
thanks in advance, and
all the best)
June 21st, 2022 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'Poverty lessens
the weight of ambition\'..
(symbolism, as modernity\'s isms
clicks as prayers
ticks and hashtags for belonging\'s
cues
salvaging our mercy from scripted
fallacy\'s, in reality documentaries..
mTV\'s cribs as our dreams
a dollar for noodles and a can, yet
San Fran
averaging two overdoses a day
while
new millionaires are minted
every seven minutes, and
our Youth
leaving their dreams and living as inSta Idol\'s
hallucinating of the ease, in 49ers
goldrush trappings
clueless, rest
of us
try and resuscitate, volition
within
miscounted votes, assertion
waving flags, that
could never tippex, away
their crimson, stains
in-to
a forgotten, past
free
of regret\'s, consequences
penny
for your thoughts
at gun-point, we ask
while
raping you, of your worth
with our eyes;
Parrot\'s in-hand
these last words
of trending, lament
we surrender
as your future, cyclicality
in inheritance as remnant\'s
synchronicity, for choosing
to believe in humanity\'s
credentials
to govern a planet, it\'s already
looted
of mineral and materialistic
worth...
and on
as one
we
swim
regressing
to our tadpoles
of demise
hoping, we too
will be SuperHero, resurrected
like Lazarus, only
we ask
could we get, a few more
days
rest,
first
thanks in advance, and
all the best)
June 21st, 2022 03:18
1969-1971 (+1)
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories of the sixties - evokes memories I DO remember. -Thank you.
Death poem - a solid truth - thanks again Kurt.
June 21st, 2022 03:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Memories of the sixties - evokes memories I DO remember. -Thank you.
Death poem - a solid truth - thanks again Kurt.
June 21st, 2022 03:04
1969-1971 (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
deep, and so intricately woven
a joy to read
inspiringly illuminating, to contemplate..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 21st, 2022 02:51
L. B. Mek said:
deep, and so intricately woven
a joy to read
inspiringly illuminating, to contemplate..
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
June 21st, 2022 02:51
Tomorrow In The Wind (+1)
JudyStella said:
I am at a loss for words, utterly beautiful is all I can utter✨
June 19th, 2022 13:35
JudyStella said:
I am at a loss for words, utterly beautiful is all I can utter✨
June 19th, 2022 13:35
Tomorrow In The Wind (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much, very kind of you.
June 19th, 2022 12:20
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much, very kind of you.
June 19th, 2022 12:20
Beyond Tomorrow
Jerry Reynolds said:
Will think about this one for longer than a while Kurt.
June 17th, 2022 09:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Will think about this one for longer than a while Kurt.
June 17th, 2022 09:21
Awaiting Your Call (+1)
Bella Shepard said:
I applaud the subject of your poem. Words can break or build, so very relevant in today\'s world. I love the way you have phrased this.
June 15th, 2022 10:50
Bella Shepard said:
I applaud the subject of your poem. Words can break or build, so very relevant in today\'s world. I love the way you have phrased this.
June 15th, 2022 10:50
Last Words (+2)
RL Randall said:
Poverty lessen the weight of ambition: How very true these words are!
June 14th, 2022 13:09
RL Randall said:
Poverty lessen the weight of ambition: How very true these words are!
June 14th, 2022 13:09
Once Was A Time (+2)
Bella Shepard said:
Our sad past and present, hope for the future. The cycles persist. You\'ve captured it all.
June 13th, 2022 08:47
Bella Shepard said:
Our sad past and present, hope for the future. The cycles persist. You\'ve captured it all.
June 13th, 2022 08:47
Broken (+1)
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed them both! Not often do you get two for one.
June 3rd, 2022 14:09
RL Randall said:
I enjoyed them both! Not often do you get two for one.
June 3rd, 2022 14:09
Only Heartache (+1)
a thousand wishes said:
I am sorry. I love your writing keep it up
June 2nd, 2022 16:38
a thousand wishes said:
I am sorry. I love your writing keep it up
June 2nd, 2022 16:38
Wiggle Room (+1)
Bella Shepard said:
Being a seamstress,I can relate metaphorically to struggling with the hem. And I love the way you have framed conscience. I very much enjoyed the read.
June 1st, 2022 11:45
Bella Shepard said:
Being a seamstress,I can relate metaphorically to struggling with the hem. And I love the way you have framed conscience. I very much enjoyed the read.
June 1st, 2022 11:45
The Fury Of Rage (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, great commenting as usual.
May 30th, 2022 10:10
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB, great commenting as usual.
May 30th, 2022 10:10
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