Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Voice Of Acceptance (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Voice of Acceptanceā
āTime as his captor
in shoes of concreteā
ā¢ āSummer Rain
ā Painting with words
speaking in colors
Palette of voices
ārainbow Divineā
This literary technique of metaphors that you masterfully utilize is most powerful. They facilitate the readerās understanding of the abstract.
Captivating poetryā¦to say the least!
Laura š»
June 20th, 2023 10:07
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
ā¢ āThe Voice of Acceptanceā
āTime as his captor
in shoes of concreteā
ā¢ āSummer Rain
ā Painting with words
speaking in colors
Palette of voices
ārainbow Divineā
This literary technique of metaphors that you masterfully utilize is most powerful. They facilitate the readerās understanding of the abstract.
Captivating poetryā¦to say the least!
Laura š»
June 20th, 2023 10:07
Ashes In Shame (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Wowā¦the first word that popped in my head when I read these two poems .
ā¢ āAshes In Shameā
āAnd the serfs will rise up
in an infamous rage
The despots left burning
ātheir ashes in shameā
Like an archer with his bow and arrow, youāve masterfully hit the bullseye; especially with this one.
ā¢ āNever Askā¦ā
Yes, indeedā¦
You are the consummate poet!
My admiration and appreciation for your work will never cease.
Wherever I go,
Wherever I am,
A part of me
It will ever be.
Laura š»
June 18th, 2023 14:51
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Wowā¦the first word that popped in my head when I read these two poems .
ā¢ āAshes In Shameā
āAnd the serfs will rise up
in an infamous rage
The despots left burning
ātheir ashes in shameā
Like an archer with his bow and arrow, youāve masterfully hit the bullseye; especially with this one.
ā¢ āNever Askā¦ā
Yes, indeedā¦
You are the consummate poet!
My admiration and appreciation for your work will never cease.
Wherever I go,
Wherever I am,
A part of me
It will ever be.
Laura š»
June 18th, 2023 14:51
Abandoning The Watchtower
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Bob let the genie out of the bottle and has spent the last 50 years trying to put it back in. Iām his biggest fan, but you cant say what you mean and not embody what you say.
Thanks for reading.
June 16th, 2023 00:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Bob let the genie out of the bottle and has spent the last 50 years trying to put it back in. Iām his biggest fan, but you cant say what you mean and not embody what you say.
Thanks for reading.
June 16th, 2023 00:12
Abandoning The Watchtower
Bobby O said:
I wonāt question the opinion you relay as Iām guessing my knowledge of Dylan would not match yours. Iāve come around to Dylan just lately after resisting for years. My first thought, counter to yours , suggests that he has been THAT GUY in an authentic way and perhaps now deserves the grace an Emiratis status might have earned , absent if the usual judgement he willingly subjected to for many years. ????
June 15th, 2023 23:01
Bobby O said:
I wonāt question the opinion you relay as Iām guessing my knowledge of Dylan would not match yours. Iāve come around to Dylan just lately after resisting for years. My first thought, counter to yours , suggests that he has been THAT GUY in an authentic way and perhaps now deserves the grace an Emiratis status might have earned , absent if the usual judgement he willingly subjected to for many years. ????
June 15th, 2023 23:01
My Embrace (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much. I don\'t play the piano but have always
wished I did.
What is the Midlife Rap?
Kurt
June 12th, 2023 11:55
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks so much. I don\'t play the piano but have always
wished I did.
What is the Midlife Rap?
Kurt
June 12th, 2023 11:55
My Embrace (+1)
Parisab said:
Music in reliving our memories: enjoyed the musical and piano references, it sounds like you actually play the piano. I just took a big risk this morning and published an older piece of hip hop: please enjoy if you visit the Midlife Rap
June 12th, 2023 11:22
Parisab said:
Music in reliving our memories: enjoyed the musical and piano references, it sounds like you actually play the piano. I just took a big risk this morning and published an older piece of hip hop: please enjoy if you visit the Midlife Rap
June 12th, 2023 11:22
The Time & The Place
LIZ said:
I love this one!! \"East of tomorrow, west of the moon, a moment in time too late and too soon\"!! Time can be so tricky! Thank you for sharing!
June 11th, 2023 10:57
LIZ said:
I love this one!! \"East of tomorrow, west of the moon, a moment in time too late and too soon\"!! Time can be so tricky! Thank you for sharing!
June 11th, 2023 10:57
Traitorous Fortune (+1)
Eugene S. said:
Greed and selfishness always lead to decay & destruction. Beautifully written and conveyed.
June 10th, 2023 09:13
Eugene S. said:
Greed and selfishness always lead to decay & destruction. Beautifully written and conveyed.
June 10th, 2023 09:13
Across The Fence .... (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āWhat might have beenāā¦
If onlyā¦
Iām so happy youāre writing your next novel. Iām looking forward to read more about my favorite charactersā next ventures.
Lauraš»
June 9th, 2023 12:23
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
āWhat might have beenāā¦
If onlyā¦
Iām so happy youāre writing your next novel. Iām looking forward to read more about my favorite charactersā next ventures.
Lauraš»
June 9th, 2023 12:23
A Wounded Dog ...
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you liked it.
Great weekend.
Kurt
June 9th, 2023 08:46
Kurt Philip Behm said:
I\'m glad you liked it.
Great weekend.
Kurt
June 9th, 2023 08:46
A Wounded Dog ...
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. Gwendolyn Brooks once told me the three greatest
American Poets were: Whitman, Melville, and Dickinson.
I agree.
June 8th, 2023 16:02
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks. Gwendolyn Brooks once told me the three greatest
American Poets were: Whitman, Melville, and Dickinson.
I agree.
June 8th, 2023 16:02
A Wounded Dog ...
jarcher54 said:
When you bring us a \"longer\" poem like this, the density of your language and your use of words and phrases as building bocks and strategic pieces on the chessboard remind me more and more of the poetry of Melville, for which he is not well known but should be. This poem of yours brought to mind this: https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-19013
June 8th, 2023 15:53
jarcher54 said:
When you bring us a \"longer\" poem like this, the density of your language and your use of words and phrases as building bocks and strategic pieces on the chessboard remind me more and more of the poetry of Melville, for which he is not well known but should be. This poem of yours brought to mind this: https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-19013
June 8th, 2023 15:53
Birthrights In Limbo (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, she truly was special.
June 8th, 2023 09:24
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks Laura, she truly was special.
June 8th, 2023 09:24
Birthrights In Limbo (+2)
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
What a great loss!
\"The Girl From Ipanema\" was recorded by many, but no one sang it like Astrud Gilberto.
A touching tribute for the one youāre remembering and are holding on to the very special memoriesā¦
ā¦memories by the sixteen year old whose
āeyes can still close
and return to that beachā
where his āheart she first captured
āand never releasedā.
Lauraš»
June 7th, 2023 15:18
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
What a great loss!
\"The Girl From Ipanema\" was recorded by many, but no one sang it like Astrud Gilberto.
A touching tribute for the one youāre remembering and are holding on to the very special memoriesā¦
ā¦memories by the sixteen year old whose
āeyes can still close
and return to that beachā
where his āheart she first captured
āand never releasedā.
Lauraš»
June 7th, 2023 15:18
Birthrights In Limbo (+2)
jarcher54 said:
An out-and-out love poem! So even the great philosopher can be smitten like a little boy!
June 7th, 2023 11:28
jarcher54 said:
An out-and-out love poem! So even the great philosopher can be smitten like a little boy!
June 7th, 2023 11:28
Mea Culpa
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Your written words are ātruer than trueā!
āEach voice a memory which haunts sublime
āthat unforgiven sin ā
I couldnāt have expressed my thoughts/feelings better than you have.
Thank you for sharing ā£ļø
Laura š»
June 4th, 2023 10:18
Lauraš» said:
Dear Kurt,
Your written words are ātruer than trueā!
āEach voice a memory which haunts sublime
āthat unforgiven sin ā
I couldnāt have expressed my thoughts/feelings better than you have.
Thank you for sharing ā£ļø
Laura š»
June 4th, 2023 10:18
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