Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
The Last Barrel (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not swimming within blinking eyes
of unshed tears, as I type these words...
no really, its just so breezy in-doors during summer
with my windows, tightly closed...
ahem!
(love, that mellow melancholic, feel
you\'ve weaved within insightfully, loud
searchingly: incandescent Poetry!)
beautiful, truly..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'in the tannin
of what remains\'
\'as each days number
declines\'
\'in the sweetness
of time now past\'
\'The vines
to wither\'
\'Rich
Like wine,
Ripe\'
\'—in memory lost\'
May 28th, 2021 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m not swimming within blinking eyes
of unshed tears, as I type these words...
no really, its just so breezy in-doors during summer
with my windows, tightly closed...
ahem!
(love, that mellow melancholic, feel
you\'ve weaved within insightfully, loud
searchingly: incandescent Poetry!)
beautiful, truly..
thanks for sharing dear Poet
\'in the tannin
of what remains\'
\'as each days number
declines\'
\'in the sweetness
of time now past\'
\'The vines
to wither\'
\'Rich
Like wine,
Ripe\'
\'—in memory lost\'
May 28th, 2021 04:09
The Julian Calendar
orchidee said:
I dunno what day it is. I\'m still using the Julian calendar. 12 days ahead - or is 12 before?!
I never knew what day it is anyway, half the time. lol.
May 25th, 2021 12:54
orchidee said:
I dunno what day it is. I\'m still using the Julian calendar. 12 days ahead - or is 12 before?!
I never knew what day it is anyway, half the time. lol.
May 25th, 2021 12:54
Grand Theft Glory
L. B. Mek said:
I just finished typing a reply
to you about \'the sun also rises\' by hemingway..
and every syllable of what you\'ve penned in this poem
could fit seamlessly into that book
even as a stand alone scene..
what a versatile and unique talent you choose to share, dear poet
cant ever thank you enough
May 21st, 2021 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
I just finished typing a reply
to you about \'the sun also rises\' by hemingway..
and every syllable of what you\'ve penned in this poem
could fit seamlessly into that book
even as a stand alone scene..
what a versatile and unique talent you choose to share, dear poet
cant ever thank you enough
May 21st, 2021 03:41
Horns Of The Bull
Kurt Philip Behm said:
In Hemingway\'s \'Death In The Afternoon\' he talks about too much honor being
deadly and the \'crossroad\' a Bullfighter must face.
May 20th, 2021 08:13
Kurt Philip Behm said:
In Hemingway\'s \'Death In The Afternoon\' he talks about too much honor being
deadly and the \'crossroad\' a Bullfighter must face.
May 20th, 2021 08:13
Horns Of The Bull
L. B. Mek said:
that corrosive impunity of entitlement\'s, featherweight honor
amongst the abundance of killer-intent: intrepidity
where perdition\'s zeal: as ever, Reigns sinisterly - Supreme...
May 20th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
that corrosive impunity of entitlement\'s, featherweight honor
amongst the abundance of killer-intent: intrepidity
where perdition\'s zeal: as ever, Reigns sinisterly - Supreme...
May 20th, 2021 05:00
Blood Oath
L. B. Mek said:
\'belonging\'
is the most powerful Drug
We, humanity: manufactured...
May 20th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'belonging\'
is the most powerful Drug
We, humanity: manufactured...
May 20th, 2021 04:54
Blood Oath
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. I was inspired by the loyalty shown to such as Mafia Dons, Gang Leaders and even Politicians. Shakespeare was best at this. As always, thanks so much.
Kurt
May 19th, 2021 10:17
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. I was inspired by the loyalty shown to such as Mafia Dons, Gang Leaders and even Politicians. Shakespeare was best at this. As always, thanks so much.
Kurt
May 19th, 2021 10:17
Blood Oath
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, as ever!
I\'m not sure if its by design
(knowing your track record, I believe it is)
but that line:
\'rules amidst chaos\'
makes one, immediately think of
\'(Ruler\'s) amidst chaos\'
and that completely adds new insight\'s to your wordplay
of Blood Oath, within
\'honor amongst thieves\'..
it really reads, as a such a bleak snapshot
of what we majority assume as the worst
of humanity, while Wilfully ignoring
our very fingerprints
on those shackles we allow to \'adorn\' our depiction
of victimhood worshipping, self-deluding: lives...
(I\'ll stop here, or else this will turn
into another SA length, futile ramble) lol
May 19th, 2021 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
thought provoking, as ever!
I\'m not sure if its by design
(knowing your track record, I believe it is)
but that line:
\'rules amidst chaos\'
makes one, immediately think of
\'(Ruler\'s) amidst chaos\'
and that completely adds new insight\'s to your wordplay
of Blood Oath, within
\'honor amongst thieves\'..
it really reads, as a such a bleak snapshot
of what we majority assume as the worst
of humanity, while Wilfully ignoring
our very fingerprints
on those shackles we allow to \'adorn\' our depiction
of victimhood worshipping, self-deluding: lives...
(I\'ll stop here, or else this will turn
into another SA length, futile ramble) lol
May 19th, 2021 06:20
The Rudest Awakening
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. Extremely kind as usual.
Kurt
May 17th, 2021 08:18
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Thanks LB. Extremely kind as usual.
Kurt
May 17th, 2021 08:18
The Rudest Awakening
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, dear poet
but let me just frankly state: You\'re F\'in: Awesome!
\'Breathless and timeless
betwixt and between
the living go on
all energy gone\'
\'The dead left to wander
—the end of the dream,
Finality’s heartbreak
The Rudest: Awakening\'..
Amen!
(I\'m sorry for rudely rearranging your lines, my friend
as usual I can only beg you to forgive
my indulgent - overzealous nature: \'personally, I blame it
on the quality of your ever-Insightful, Poetry)
May 17th, 2021 06:50
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my rudeness, dear poet
but let me just frankly state: You\'re F\'in: Awesome!
\'Breathless and timeless
betwixt and between
the living go on
all energy gone\'
\'The dead left to wander
—the end of the dream,
Finality’s heartbreak
The Rudest: Awakening\'..
Amen!
(I\'m sorry for rudely rearranging your lines, my friend
as usual I can only beg you to forgive
my indulgent - overzealous nature: \'personally, I blame it
on the quality of your ever-Insightful, Poetry)
May 17th, 2021 06:50
Blind Indirection
L. B. Mek said:
Often, I feel
if it wasn\'t in our nature
to be so stubbornly contrary, as a mark
of futile defiance and innate duality..
we could have found
our most rewarding way of life
by merging the middle ground sanity
of Stoic acceptance and resolve
with that originally unindulgent ideology
of Epicureanism\'s, unassuming humility
to find enough in those simple pleasures
of a well managed, temperate life
attentively tuned to our natural needs and desires..
what more could we want for, truly?
May 14th, 2021 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
Often, I feel
if it wasn\'t in our nature
to be so stubbornly contrary, as a mark
of futile defiance and innate duality..
we could have found
our most rewarding way of life
by merging the middle ground sanity
of Stoic acceptance and resolve
with that originally unindulgent ideology
of Epicureanism\'s, unassuming humility
to find enough in those simple pleasures
of a well managed, temperate life
attentively tuned to our natural needs and desires..
what more could we want for, truly?
May 14th, 2021 05:36
Memory Beckons
L. B. Mek said:
\'Days go forward,
nights in reverse\'
that retrograde certainty
of our cyclical fates
we ignore daily: Defiantly!
May 11th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Days go forward,
nights in reverse\'
that retrograde certainty
of our cyclical fates
we ignore daily: Defiantly!
May 11th, 2021 05:09
Nowhere To Hide (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time but a mask,
delusion concealed
The cover pulled back
—more truth to reveal\'
\'Cutting Both Ways
Trying to defend
All life on the edge\'
unassuming Wisdom, in all its Poetic majesty...
thanks for choosing to share dear Poet
(forgive me for rearranging your lines, yet again
I meant no disrespect by doing so
just wanted to highlight for others, the Message
that helped lessen: my own ignorance)
May 10th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'Time but a mask,
delusion concealed
The cover pulled back
—more truth to reveal\'
\'Cutting Both Ways
Trying to defend
All life on the edge\'
unassuming Wisdom, in all its Poetic majesty...
thanks for choosing to share dear Poet
(forgive me for rearranging your lines, yet again
I meant no disrespect by doing so
just wanted to highlight for others, the Message
that helped lessen: my own ignorance)
May 10th, 2021 05:10
Telltale Signs
L. B. Mek said:
all I can say is - so true...
*needs to be read a few times: to experience the pacing and flow, just right*..
(a wonderful read)
May 7th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
all I can say is - so true...
*needs to be read a few times: to experience the pacing and flow, just right*..
(a wonderful read)
May 7th, 2021 06:02
Bench Made
Kurt Philip Behm said:
As always, eloquent commenting. The prophets must be looking on in
disbelief.
April 26th, 2021 09:35
Kurt Philip Behm said:
As always, eloquent commenting. The prophets must be looking on in
disbelief.
April 26th, 2021 09:35
Bench Made
L. B. Mek said:
\'then fight to steal His throne
Devotion pledged
in false pretense,
to become the greater known\'..
yup, if we could take fallible humanity - out
of all that cleric rhetoric
and distil that message of love and unity, imbued
in most of theology, likely
we could halve - all: divisive animosity..
(why ink our words, if not for whispering: our hopeless dreams
a great read, as ever dear poet)
April 26th, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
\'then fight to steal His throne
Devotion pledged
in false pretense,
to become the greater known\'..
yup, if we could take fallible humanity - out
of all that cleric rhetoric
and distil that message of love and unity, imbued
in most of theology, likely
we could halve - all: divisive animosity..
(why ink our words, if not for whispering: our hopeless dreams
a great read, as ever dear poet)
April 26th, 2021 06:17
Tally Tally Ho
L. B. Mek said:
that subtle touch of brilliance: relatable
without a thoughtful - calculator, in-sight..
a great write!
April 23rd, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
that subtle touch of brilliance: relatable
without a thoughtful - calculator, in-sight..
a great write!
April 23rd, 2021 05:29
Tally Ho
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Quantitative qualification...and the madness goes on.
Thanks my friend.
Kurt
April 22nd, 2021 09:03
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Quantitative qualification...and the madness goes on.
Thanks my friend.
Kurt
April 22nd, 2021 09:03
Tally Ho
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
modernity\'s: nihilism of maths, equated
to its unavoidably catastrophic, conclusion...
such a creative write! (thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply, yet again my friend)
\'we - so few, see value
in that simple math of earned wisdom, where
one times one: equals fortitude
of unflinching truth!
Ensuring any addition
is first fractured through that filter
of divisible integrity, within humility
so that we never succumb
to that feared subtraction of all-things: sans\'
April 22nd, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
modernity\'s: nihilism of maths, equated
to its unavoidably catastrophic, conclusion...
such a creative write! (thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply, yet again my friend)
\'we - so few, see value
in that simple math of earned wisdom, where
one times one: equals fortitude
of unflinching truth!
Ensuring any addition
is first fractured through that filter
of divisible integrity, within humility
so that we never succumb
to that feared subtraction of all-things: sans\'
April 22nd, 2021 05:37
Forever More (+3)
L. B. Mek said:
there is a closeness shared between words and eyes, dear poet
you lend me your words
and I\'ll borrow you my eyes: my friend!
darkness, is merely Nature\'s pooling
of cornered potential
waiting for other\'s - to catch-up
and hopefully: actualise...
April 19th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
there is a closeness shared between words and eyes, dear poet
you lend me your words
and I\'ll borrow you my eyes: my friend!
darkness, is merely Nature\'s pooling
of cornered potential
waiting for other\'s - to catch-up
and hopefully: actualise...
April 19th, 2021 05:09
\"The Missing Shade...\" (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Their philosophy/ religion is integrated and they live within it. Western (Greek) philosophy is more objective where truth lives outside the believer and becomes a standard to live up to or adhere to.
Indians don’t receive their real names (like Crazy Horse) until they either have a vision or accomplish an important deed. They don’t see nature outside themselves, but rather themselves as part of the natural world with no confusion or contradiction. That is why so many of them were able to integrate Christianity with their own native beliefs.
They would not have understood at all Plato’s treatise on forms and in fact would have found that duality absurd.
Contradiction, whether the Trinity or Mind/ Body dualism would have been lost on them. Their God, Wakan Tanka was in all things, unlike the Greek gods.
Thanks as always for the great commenting.
Kurt
April 16th, 2021 06:12
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Their philosophy/ religion is integrated and they live within it. Western (Greek) philosophy is more objective where truth lives outside the believer and becomes a standard to live up to or adhere to.
Indians don’t receive their real names (like Crazy Horse) until they either have a vision or accomplish an important deed. They don’t see nature outside themselves, but rather themselves as part of the natural world with no confusion or contradiction. That is why so many of them were able to integrate Christianity with their own native beliefs.
They would not have understood at all Plato’s treatise on forms and in fact would have found that duality absurd.
Contradiction, whether the Trinity or Mind/ Body dualism would have been lost on them. Their God, Wakan Tanka was in all things, unlike the Greek gods.
Thanks as always for the great commenting.
Kurt
April 16th, 2021 06:12
\"The Missing Shade...\" (+2)
L. B. Mek said:
may I humbly ask what \'their radically different definition\' of rationality is? (scholarly curiosity only, so no problem if you can\'t divulge)
April 16th, 2021 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
may I humbly ask what \'their radically different definition\' of rationality is? (scholarly curiosity only, so no problem if you can\'t divulge)
April 16th, 2021 04:06
« Return to the profile of Kurt Philip Behm
