Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Copper Wire (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
What a great title!
ā Does your writing lack power,
is it merely verbose,
as you labor line to lineā.
(This certainly does not
apply to YOUR poetry.)
On the other handā¦
ā¦hence, no postings from ME during this brain freeze period.
Thank you for sharing this āDreamsleepā.
Lauraš»
January 5th, 2022 11:52
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
What a great title!
ā Does your writing lack power,
is it merely verbose,
as you labor line to lineā.
(This certainly does not
apply to YOUR poetry.)
On the other handā¦
ā¦hence, no postings from ME during this brain freeze period.
Thank you for sharing this āDreamsleepā.
Lauraš»
January 5th, 2022 11:52
Silent Thunder (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Great readsā¦especially āAbove The Tree Lineā. Your written words are insightful and engaging. I can sense and feel the love and call of your beloved Westā¦for you. It must be an exhilarating experience each time you travel on the Chief Joseph Highway.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 4th, 2022 23:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Great readsā¦especially āAbove The Tree Lineā. Your written words are insightful and engaging. I can sense and feel the love and call of your beloved Westā¦for you. It must be an exhilarating experience each time you travel on the Chief Joseph Highway.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 4th, 2022 23:43
Silent Thunder (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very profound, Kurt.
I know you are a rider but even if I didn\'t the feel the ride.
January 4th, 2022 17:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very profound, Kurt.
I know you are a rider but even if I didn\'t the feel the ride.
January 4th, 2022 17:57
Blood Stains (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
\'What is the value
of faith, without doubt\'
Amen!
(those too scared to question
exist, peeking at life
rather than witnessing
and experiencing it, outright\')
some great lines, thanks for sharing Kurt
January 4th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'What is the value
of faith, without doubt\'
Amen!
(those too scared to question
exist, peeking at life
rather than witnessing
and experiencing it, outright\')
some great lines, thanks for sharing Kurt
January 4th, 2022 04:03
Aureola
L. B. Mek said:
their is a hollow, yet monumental
tone to this poems cadence
as-if, you words
in stretching, to find meaning
thinned themselves, translucent
and we get to see, a little more
of that despair
than the Poet, originally
meant for us to glean..
(a sobering read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
their is a hollow, yet monumental
tone to this poems cadence
as-if, you words
in stretching, to find meaning
thinned themselves, translucent
and we get to see, a little more
of that despair
than the Poet, originally
meant for us to glean..
(a sobering read
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
Happy New Year!
January 4th, 2022 03:51
Within Us All... (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Beautiful and inspirational poetry. I really like the poems youāve been posting from āThe First Book Of Prayersā.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 3rd, 2022 12:45
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Beautiful and inspirational poetry. I really like the poems youāve been posting from āThe First Book Of Prayersā.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
January 3rd, 2022 12:45
Spiration (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Kurt.
Don\'t remember you waxing this way before.
January 2nd, 2022 14:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read, Kurt.
Don\'t remember you waxing this way before.
January 2nd, 2022 14:33
Spiration (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦and an Amen I
proclaim unto thee.
Lauraš»
January 2nd, 2022 12:03
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¦and an Amen I
proclaim unto thee.
Lauraš»
January 2nd, 2022 12:03
Blood Stains (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWhat is the value
of faith without doubtāā¦indeed!
The deeper the doubts,
the deeper the faith.
Two great reads to fulfill
part of my day.
Thank you for sharing your poems.
Lauraš»
January 1st, 2022 15:57
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
āWhat is the value
of faith without doubtāā¦indeed!
The deeper the doubts,
the deeper the faith.
Two great reads to fulfill
part of my day.
Thank you for sharing your poems.
Lauraš»
January 1st, 2022 15:57
Terminal Reef
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iām feeling your scripted words this very day.
With anticipation
And trepidation
With perturbation
And consternation
Iāve welcomed this day.
Laura š»
December 30th, 2021 11:45
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Iām feeling your scripted words this very day.
With anticipation
And trepidation
With perturbation
And consternation
Iāve welcomed this day.
Laura š»
December 30th, 2021 11:45
Katana Slashings
Draven said:
Very interesting. I could ponder over this for some days!
December 30th, 2021 09:42
Draven said:
Very interesting. I could ponder over this for some days!
December 30th, 2021 09:42
Moses Walked (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āMoses Walkedā
A very inspirational read.
Living our life as a journey of faith. If weāre afraid, we need āto shift that fear to faith, from doubt to peaceā.
I am uncertain, fearful and nervous about what lies aheadā¦but faith will help me through this life journey.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Lauraš»
December 28th, 2021 00:35
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āMoses Walkedā
A very inspirational read.
Living our life as a journey of faith. If weāre afraid, we need āto shift that fear to faith, from doubt to peaceā.
I am uncertain, fearful and nervous about what lies aheadā¦but faith will help me through this life journey.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.
Lauraš»
December 28th, 2021 00:35
Regifting
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I read this unique little gem a few timesā¦and repeatedly I couldnāt help myself but reference it to the intricacies of present politics.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
December 27th, 2021 23:36
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
I read this unique little gem a few timesā¦and repeatedly I couldnāt help myself but reference it to the intricacies of present politics.
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
December 27th, 2021 23:36
Bourne Free (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āā¦To Godās Earsā
ā¦and youād be as brilliant a music composer as you are in composing poetry.
A huge Amen for your beautifully composed poem.
Laura š»
December 25th, 2021 22:00
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āā¦To Godās Earsā
ā¦and youād be as brilliant a music composer as you are in composing poetry.
A huge Amen for your beautifully composed poem.
Laura š»
December 25th, 2021 22:00
Bourne Free (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
An extraordinarily beautifully scripted poem.
Lauraš»
December 25th, 2021 13:27
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
An extraordinarily beautifully scripted poem.
Lauraš»
December 25th, 2021 13:27
Rolling Downhill (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very kind as always. Merry Christmas.
Kurt
December 24th, 2021 15:17
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very kind as always. Merry Christmas.
Kurt
December 24th, 2021 15:17
Rolling Downhill (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very kind as always. Merry Christmas.
Kurt
December 24th, 2021 15:17
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very kind as always. Merry Christmas.
Kurt
December 24th, 2021 15:17
Rolling Downhill (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āRolling Downhillā
At times, now more than ever (at least for myself), we feel weāre rolling downhill beyond the speed limit. Can we put our foot on the break to slow down? I wonder!? At least the āFat Ladyā is still singingā¦ āunrhymedā or otherwise.
ā¢ āTo Kiley, Hunter, Braden & Parkerā
I love this poem as much as I love āSammy and Bumpersā.
That naughty Knothead upsetting everyone. Such a sneaky little Elfā¦
āTwo silver reminders
esconded to beguileā
So glad TC and Melissaās mom and dad went downstairs first to make sure that Knothead was goneā¦āAt Least Until Tonightā.
It was very clever of Sissy and Buddy to ask Sammy and Bumpers for help. They did their jobā¦as we know they would because theyāre awesome! šæšæ
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
December 24th, 2021 15:13
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
ā¢ āRolling Downhillā
At times, now more than ever (at least for myself), we feel weāre rolling downhill beyond the speed limit. Can we put our foot on the break to slow down? I wonder!? At least the āFat Ladyā is still singingā¦ āunrhymedā or otherwise.
ā¢ āTo Kiley, Hunter, Braden & Parkerā
I love this poem as much as I love āSammy and Bumpersā.
That naughty Knothead upsetting everyone. Such a sneaky little Elfā¦
āTwo silver reminders
esconded to beguileā
So glad TC and Melissaās mom and dad went downstairs first to make sure that Knothead was goneā¦āAt Least Until Tonightā.
It was very clever of Sissy and Buddy to ask Sammy and Bumpers for help. They did their jobā¦as we know they would because theyāre awesome! šæšæ
Thank you for sharing my dear Poet.
Lauraš»
December 24th, 2021 15:13
Invisible Ink (+1)
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Itās a blessing and an honor to read your exquisite poems.
ā¢ āInvisible Inkā
The ink may be invisible, but not your brillianceā¦remarkably profound.
Iām so glad you followed the lead.
ā¢ āAutumn Breezeā
ā Lasting treasures so defined,
lace the corners of my mindā
āEvery hope and wish redeemed
āmelting fast this winter freezeā
Impressive and beautiful couplets! I can feel the meaning of your penned words. While reading them, I find myself within those scripted wordsā¦a surreal journeyāmy dear Poet.
Thank you for sharing your uplifting, desirable and much needed art.
Lauraš»
December 23rd, 2021 11:43
Lauraš» said:
Kurt,
Itās a blessing and an honor to read your exquisite poems.
ā¢ āInvisible Inkā
The ink may be invisible, but not your brillianceā¦remarkably profound.
Iām so glad you followed the lead.
ā¢ āAutumn Breezeā
ā Lasting treasures so defined,
lace the corners of my mindā
āEvery hope and wish redeemed
āmelting fast this winter freezeā
Impressive and beautiful couplets! I can feel the meaning of your penned words. While reading them, I find myself within those scripted wordsā¦a surreal journeyāmy dear Poet.
Thank you for sharing your uplifting, desirable and much needed art.
Lauraš»
December 23rd, 2021 11:43
Quietude (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
we all need something or someone
to help us
find our North or South
in life
only then, can we set a direction
with hopes
of finding, some form of salvation..
a thought provoking read,
thanks Kurt
December 23rd, 2021 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
we all need something or someone
to help us
find our North or South
in life
only then, can we set a direction
with hopes
of finding, some form of salvation..
a thought provoking read,
thanks Kurt
December 23rd, 2021 04:02
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