Half Past Forever
Paul Bell said:

Certainly nothing out of rhyme here.

November 18th, 2021 10:20

Kingdom Of One (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Laura, we all have a new appreciation for ‘being alone.’

November 17th, 2021 13:35

Cry Of The Flute
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Appreciated, thanks.

November 16th, 2021 18:58

One Hand Clapping
Kurt Philip Behm said:

And thank you, Laura.

November 10th, 2021 10:48

The Unmasking
Paul Bell said:

I suppose when the act actually reflects real life, the end is nigh.
Though the audience would never know this.

November 1st, 2021 10:41

Faith In The Wind (+2)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

A compelling thought...

November 1st, 2021 09:06

A Last Dance (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Again, I thank you.

November 1st, 2021 09:04

Final Draft (+1)
L. B. Mek said:

be it fable, allegory or parable
its only Hubris
that has us convinced, one
is any better than another
in reality, we each know
the mystery in our chosen Art
is not in any
Grecian myth or Theological \'trinity\' lore
rather
its, in the magic of the reader\'s Perspective...
we could imbue love in every syllable, and
still have a Nero or Hitler
warp it, into a cut and paste
defiling of our inking intent..
we\'re all a morbidly, vilified Nietzsche - in the making
it but takes, a betraying sister
and sinister ill-timing of political climate,
to demean
all our endeavours and hopes, into mere futile
graveyard crimson tears
of posterity\'s: poisoned ink...
(sorry Kurt, not seeing your write\'s as often these days,
that\'s why my comments are so delayed,
but its not just yours;
so I guess its just that our timing
is no longer in unison, a shame)
thanks for choosing to share, dear Poet

November 1st, 2021 06:19

A Last Dance (+1)
L. B. Mek said:

\'Her steps become a
garden path
her breath a fragrance
o’er the hills
to dance with future,
present, past
and spin each partner
—time undone\'..
if only, it was that easy
but still
what a beautiful image, to ponder
and wish for, my friend

November 1st, 2021 05:58

Faith In The Wind (+2)
L. B. Mek said:

I imagine if Walt Whitman
was to rewrite
his ode to his beloved America - once
\'of the Brave\',
reflecting
on the embattled Nation\'s, current state
he would write words similar to your poem, Kurt
and maybe title his lifetime\'s book
\'tears of concrete\'...
(oh, but how Grotesque
we\'ve warped, that Nature
he so humbly, adored!)

November 1st, 2021 05:53

Mourning Dove
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful!
\'that Aurora, chance
of a refreshed perspective
to glean a shard of opportunity
amongst,
a seemingly calamitous tidal wave,
of ill-fate..\'
thanks for sharing, dear Poet

November 1st, 2021 05:44

Short Straw (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Again, my pleasure, thanks.

October 31st, 2021 00:45

A Last Dance (+1)
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

Wow…I love this one very, very much!

Thank you for sharing this divine poem.

Laura🌻

October 29th, 2021 12:50

To Rise Again
Laura🌻 said:

Kurt,

• “To Rise Again”
Reading your penned words of this ‘Dreamsleep’ is a mesmerizing experience. The last stanza is inspirational. Thank you for sharing. I’m now ready to face this day.

Laura🌻

October 28th, 2021 08:21

To Rise Again
Sparrow73 said:

I love this! Ironically, No words can convey the unspoken meaning of this beautiful, raw truth. Touche brother very deeply understood, if only words like this could stay and took, consistently remembered and not taken for granted hey!? Sincerely and respectfully, Tess S.

October 28th, 2021 03:46