Sarah Unleashed
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Jerry.

February 26th, 2021 13:03

Depreciating The Young (+2)
L. B. Mek said:

\'of a longing
of a distance
in the memory
/wayward

of a darkness
of a warning
that prophetic
/sojourned\'..
a write worth meditating until fully comprehended, wonderous in its depth of insight,
at surface level a lament for handicapped youth, but within its true flow are tethered branches to cynicism\'s cyclical back-n-forth,
commenting on humanity\'s search for meaning within moral integrity, between thesis, antithesis and synthesis,
in our never ending dialectic for answers: before we\'ve even comprehended, what questions we must ask of ourselves, let alone life...
in my humble opinion, one of your most meaningful and poetically accomplished write\'s within your chosen distinct style - dear poet, a great effort taking into account its scope! really well executed
thank you for choosing to share

February 26th, 2021 04:57

Depreciating The Young (+2)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very well said, Kurt.

February 25th, 2021 10:58

Adapertio
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks Jerry. Another one that woke me from a sound sleep last night.

Kurt

February 24th, 2021 09:59

Adapertio
Jerry Reynolds said:

Really good elusive write, Kurt.

February 24th, 2021 09:34

Stirring The Pot (+2)
L. B. Mek said:

so very true dear poet,
our mistakes aplenty, life\'s liability a certainty and underneath it all certain thread\'s to truth that hover - offering a gateway to meaningful reality,
only its hard for us to see most times, so we\'re left searching blindly..

February 23rd, 2021 04:16

Stirring The Pot (+2)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Great thoughts Kurt. Really like Akicita

February 22nd, 2021 16:23

The Garden Path (+2)
FredPeyer said:

Jekill and Hyde, finding a balance is as you write, a difficult thing.
Agree with you on the third one. I hate it when I call my son and he does not answer, but then I text and he texts back right away....

February 21st, 2021 19:20

Word Massacre (+2)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Much truth is spoken in jest.
Good one Kurt.

February 20th, 2021 11:50

Legacy\'s Birthright (+2)
FredPeyer said:

There are times I wish I could have such an output of high quality poems like you.

February 19th, 2021 20:54

The Final Equation (+1)
FredPeyer said:

Or: Humanity + Divinity = Love
I do like \'Another\'. Great poem!

February 18th, 2021 20:23

Hope In Chains (+1)
L. B. Mek said:

in the theme of Jerry Maguire:
\'you enticed my scholarly instincts
with those brilliant first two lines\'..
as ever, so unwaveringly insightful even when those insight\'s demean that very thing we scribblers love to do, how brave dear poet, what an example you project for those who strive to utilise it:
\'We speak of truth, our souls delight,
but actions prove us wrong

If words alone could make it so
—each day would end in song\'

February 18th, 2021 05:44

Hope In Chains (+1)
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Thanks as always, Fred.

February 17th, 2021 22:04

Time Frozen Deep
L. B. Mek said:

indeed! another wonderful read

February 16th, 2021 05:48

Time Frozen Deep
Jerry Reynolds said:

Insiteful writing, Kurt.

February 15th, 2021 17:47