Comments received on poems by John Prophet



End Game
Shetonya Latryce said:

I love this! I was right with the flow.

September 23rd, 2022 19:54

End Game
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Like the structure of this.

September 23rd, 2022 17:05

End Game
Ryszard said:

A waterfall of words and meaning, hidden rocks in the current create rhythm and meter. Rereading just to feel the rushing current.

September 23rd, 2022 16:27

Fractal Reality
Goldfinch60 said:

They will control us all one day.

Andy

September 23rd, 2022 01:25

Never Land
Goldfinch60 said:

That Universal understanding is taking a long time to come to many people John.

Andy

September 22nd, 2022 01:41

Forms2
Goldfinch60 said:

Those forms inhabit our lives at all times John.

Andy

September 18th, 2022 01:51

Rabbit Hole
Goldfinch60 said:

All my life I have been through different rabbit holes and I am in a wonderful place because of them .

Andy

September 17th, 2022 01:28

Rabbit Hole
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

I agree about the Rabbit Hole. Right on point in this poem.

September 16th, 2022 08:26

Layers
shaa said:

Like how it ends

September 11th, 2022 04:41

Ritual
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have rituals in our lives John, even the way we ablute every morning becomes a ritual.

Andy

September 8th, 2022 00:53

Day By Day
John Prophet said:

Keep writing great verse Andy.
Thank you for reading.
JP

September 6th, 2022 07:37

Day By Day
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John. There are so many chapters in my book and I hope there will be many more to come.

Andy

September 6th, 2022 00:30

Shimmer
Goldfinch60 said:

Each moment is different in our lives and each one shimmers.

Andy

September 3rd, 2022 01:35

Horizon
Goldfinch60 said:

We each learn something new each day but ideas from the past still encroach on those new thoughts.

Andy

September 1st, 2022 01:08

Song Cosmic
Goldfinch60 said:

Music is so powerful in my life John and I know it will be there for me forever.

Andy

August 30th, 2022 01:24

Coded
Goldfinch60 said:

We each have our unique codes within us John.

Andy

August 29th, 2022 01:33

Messages
Goldfinch60 said:

Messages have been there and will be there each moment of our lives John.

Andy

August 27th, 2022 01:12

Inner World
Goldfinch60 said:

That inner world is unique for all of us John.

Andy

August 25th, 2022 01:30

Growl
Goldfinch60 said:

They all protect their families and ensure all is well.

Andy

August 24th, 2022 01:03

Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

rue words John, we will all end up there one day.

Andy

August 20th, 2022 01:25

Essence Spirit Soul
L. B. Mek said:

(I do believe in the interconnectivity of all things,
life is born of life
matter a duplication of self
and while we may never know
who sparked it all
its been all about self-creating, survival
ever since)
deep themes to ponder over
thanks for sharing, dear Poet


August 18th, 2022 01:45

Essence Spirit Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

That essence is always within us and will lead us to times immortal.

Andy

August 18th, 2022 00:49

Sea Of Uncertainty
Goldfinch60 said:

So true John the idea of infinite parallel Universes intrigues me.

Andy

August 17th, 2022 01:17

Bubble Machine
Goldfinch60 said:

True words John, we may not ever know where we are going in life.

Andy

August 16th, 2022 00:40

Dynamic2
L. B. Mek said:

maybe, who knows...
personally, I find in life
until I stub my toe
I usually am ignorant
of that cabinet
while, I\'m sure
my consciousness, remembers
me doing
the very same thing, last week...
lol
(wonderfully unfurled, another
thought provoking read
dear Poet)

August 15th, 2022 03:39

Dynamic2
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have that infinite potential John but we need to use it in a good way that helps all.

Andy

August 15th, 2022 01:47

Indifferent
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words John.

Andy

August 14th, 2022 01:10

Eyes2
Goldfinch60 said:

That journey still has a very long way to go John.

Andy

August 6th, 2022 00:27

Hum
dean langmuir said:

Good write,take care.

August 1st, 2022 14:49

Sailing2
L. B. Mek said:

(and on, catching
one breeze
of momentum at a time
we glide, fate\'s ley lines
with choice as our sails, and
rudder\'s, steering us
ever closer
to our hopes and dreams..)
great read, thanks for sharing, dear poet

July 28th, 2022 02:28



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