Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Deep Subtleties
Bella Shepard said:
I think you\'ve captured the essence of experience leading to wisdom. I especially love the last part \"earned not assumed\". Beautifully put.
February 20th, 2022 15:41
Bella Shepard said:
I think you\'ve captured the essence of experience leading to wisdom. I especially love the last part \"earned not assumed\". Beautifully put.
February 20th, 2022 15:41
Middle Way
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely put! This was clever! I love the way you expressed this idea! The \"middle way, golden path\" Yes! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:50
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely put! This was clever! I love the way you expressed this idea! The \"middle way, golden path\" Yes! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:50
Sparks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparks create so many things in our lives John.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparks create so many things in our lives John.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:49
Past2
Goldfinch60 said:
Each unknown tunnel that we approach can lead us into the light showing that all is well.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Each unknown tunnel that we approach can lead us into the light showing that all is well.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:33
Pollution
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, this is where once again we need to go outside the box.
Andy
February 6th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, this is where once again we need to go outside the box.
Andy
February 6th, 2022 01:36
Credits
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pivot knots
of existence\'
\'Torquing,
Writhing\'
\'Contour
the medium.\'
\'Pressure
points.
Spinning.
Millions
altering
directions.
Creating,
altering
events.
Large
small.
Brush
strokes
each.
All the
same.\'
(what scintillatingly worded brevity
you\'ve showcased in this write, dear poet
and I really like those judgemental \'side eyes\', in the artwork
\'one generation
questioning, another
both
sat, just watching-on
commentating
as the theatre, of life
unfolds
before their very eyes\')
February 4th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pivot knots
of existence\'
\'Torquing,
Writhing\'
\'Contour
the medium.\'
\'Pressure
points.
Spinning.
Millions
altering
directions.
Creating,
altering
events.
Large
small.
Brush
strokes
each.
All the
same.\'
(what scintillatingly worded brevity
you\'ve showcased in this write, dear poet
and I really like those judgemental \'side eyes\', in the artwork
\'one generation
questioning, another
both
sat, just watching-on
commentating
as the theatre, of life
unfolds
before their very eyes\')
February 4th, 2022 05:09
Credits
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we all play a role in the universe of which we are part.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we all play a role in the universe of which we are part.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:04
Credits
sophin said:
Those who
were.
Those who
weren’t.
All,
end up
in the
credits.
- good words, j. prophet. reminds us that everyone has a role to play in the universe
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
sophin said:
Those who
were.
Those who
weren’t.
All,
end up
in the
credits.
- good words, j. prophet. reminds us that everyone has a role to play in the universe
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
Illusions
L. B. Mek said:
\'conceptualisation of matter\'
divided, by
\'cognitive capacity, of humanity\'
then
multiply, that figure
with what we get, from
Universe
by
Infinite...
(yeah, the odds aren\'t in our favour)
so why not just
deal with the maths, we can handle
like:
kindness
divided, by
awareness
and
multiply that moral virtue
with what we get, from
\'sincerity of self\'
by
\'loyalty, to those who matter\'...
(yeah, nothing as concrete as a new building
to contribute to the aid of the homeless
but,
we do get something, to gauge
our worth, by
and anchor our self assurance, upon...
sounds like, better maths
to me)
there\'s a great questing
for some semblance of balance
in your write, dear poet
I imagine your write like a thermometer
with one (destructive) extreme, at the outset
being distilled/drilled
into its opposite extreme, at the bottom..
your style really helps unfurl your points
in an accessible manner,
February 1st, 2022 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'conceptualisation of matter\'
divided, by
\'cognitive capacity, of humanity\'
then
multiply, that figure
with what we get, from
Universe
by
Infinite...
(yeah, the odds aren\'t in our favour)
so why not just
deal with the maths, we can handle
like:
kindness
divided, by
awareness
and
multiply that moral virtue
with what we get, from
\'sincerity of self\'
by
\'loyalty, to those who matter\'...
(yeah, nothing as concrete as a new building
to contribute to the aid of the homeless
but,
we do get something, to gauge
our worth, by
and anchor our self assurance, upon...
sounds like, better maths
to me)
there\'s a great questing
for some semblance of balance
in your write, dear poet
I imagine your write like a thermometer
with one (destructive) extreme, at the outset
being distilled/drilled
into its opposite extreme, at the bottom..
your style really helps unfurl your points
in an accessible manner,
February 1st, 2022 05:22
Illusions
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality is within us all and that is what we must cling onto in this world.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality is within us all and that is what we must cling onto in this world.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:19
Powers
John Prophet said:
Wisdom in short evidence these days.
Thanks for reading Andy
January 27th, 2022 20:33
John Prophet said:
Wisdom in short evidence these days.
Thanks for reading Andy
January 27th, 2022 20:33
Powers
Goldfinch60 said:
Compliance and subservience are there for many but those who think outside the box go on differing paths.
Andy
January 27th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Compliance and subservience are there for many but those who think outside the box go on differing paths.
Andy
January 27th, 2022 01:33
Energy Fields
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly need each other to exist in our lives.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
They certainly need each other to exist in our lives.
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:51
Aimless
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new moment in our lives must be enjoyed as they will never come again John.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Each new moment in our lives must be enjoyed as they will never come again John.
Andy
January 19th, 2022 01:59
Shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, we must be at one with our shadow.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, we must be at one with our shadow.
Andy
January 18th, 2022 02:45
Shadow
Zepella said:
This is very inspiring! The only suggestion I would say is to possibly change \"unrecognized\" to \"unrecognizable\". Otherwise, I loved it, thank you!
January 17th, 2022 09:34
Zepella said:
This is very inspiring! The only suggestion I would say is to possibly change \"unrecognized\" to \"unrecognizable\". Otherwise, I loved it, thank you!
January 17th, 2022 09:34
Shadow
L. B. Mek said:
take out everything
and just leave us these words, dear Poet
and you\'ll have penned a classic
to keep Relevant: \'The, Classic\'s\':
\'Know
thyself
less be
defined
by others.
Look
through
the veil.
See past
interference.
Societies
clutter.
Personal
shadow
unrecognized
controllable.
Easily
manipulated.
Easily
lead astray.
Know the
shadow
know
thyself.\'
January 17th, 2022 09:06
L. B. Mek said:
take out everything
and just leave us these words, dear Poet
and you\'ll have penned a classic
to keep Relevant: \'The, Classic\'s\':
\'Know
thyself
less be
defined
by others.
Look
through
the veil.
See past
interference.
Societies
clutter.
Personal
shadow
unrecognized
controllable.
Easily
manipulated.
Easily
lead astray.
Know the
shadow
know
thyself.\'
January 17th, 2022 09:06
Stardust
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all stardust of some description John.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all stardust of some description John.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:39
Fly
L. B. Mek said:
\'you write the Poetry
I\'ll bark, the drums
maybe we can stumble
that revolution, mindset
of Purposed, awareness
into the Reality, horizon\'s
of future Generations...\'
(the sheer
frustration fuelled, passion
you imbued into these words
dear poet
is just jumping-off, our screens
a great write!
drilling deep, to unearth the core
sickness, enveloping while poisoning
our globalised - yet segregated, Society
in modernity\'s: cyclical
\'Age of anxiety\'...)
January 11th, 2022 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'you write the Poetry
I\'ll bark, the drums
maybe we can stumble
that revolution, mindset
of Purposed, awareness
into the Reality, horizon\'s
of future Generations...\'
(the sheer
frustration fuelled, passion
you imbued into these words
dear poet
is just jumping-off, our screens
a great write!
drilling deep, to unearth the core
sickness, enveloping while poisoning
our globalised - yet segregated, Society
in modernity\'s: cyclical
\'Age of anxiety\'...)
January 11th, 2022 05:25
Fly
allen_vs_existence said:
Beautiful Poem Brother! I love the message as well as the balance of depth and simplicity... You have cut out the fluff and left nothing but your truth! Brilliant!
January 10th, 2022 22:11
allen_vs_existence said:
Beautiful Poem Brother! I love the message as well as the balance of depth and simplicity... You have cut out the fluff and left nothing but your truth! Brilliant!
January 10th, 2022 22:11
Fly
Steel of old Valyria said:
Important message in nowadays rhetoric and political situation.
January 10th, 2022 21:49
Steel of old Valyria said:
Important message in nowadays rhetoric and political situation.
January 10th, 2022 21:49
Experience
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John. Experience cannot be taught.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John. Experience cannot be taught.
Andy
January 7th, 2022 01:30
Never Ending
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
JP
January 4th, 2022 07:41
John Prophet said:
Hi Andy,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
JP
January 4th, 2022 07:41
Never Ending
Goldfinch60 said:
But we can escape that imprisonment by looking outside the box in which we appear to be trapped.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
But we can escape that imprisonment by looking outside the box in which we appear to be trapped.
Andy
January 3rd, 2022 01:32
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