Comments received on poems by John Prophet
Arrival2
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, organised religion is a farce.
Andy
March 29th, 2022 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
True words John, organised religion is a farce.
Andy
March 29th, 2022 01:05
Programmable
Goldfinch60 said:
All it needs is people like you and me John who always look outside the box for the wonder that we can explore.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
All it needs is people like you and me John who always look outside the box for the wonder that we can explore.
Andy
March 27th, 2022 00:52
The Gods
Goldfinch60 said:
Gods created by organised religion are a farce John.
Andy
March 26th, 2022 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Gods created by organised religion are a farce John.
Andy
March 26th, 2022 01:57
Whispers
L. B. Mek said:
\'Whispers
of sentience,
coursing
the cosmos.
Universal
sentience.
Accumulating.
Permeating.
Frequencies
to be
heard,
absorbed.
Infinite
vibrations.
Infinite
knowledge
to obtain.
Gleaning
faint whispers.\'
\'It’s all
there.
There
to be
discovered.
Listen!\'
(Amen!
I strive for that, illusive
humility
to empower myself, with
a chance
at opportunity, to listen
and glean
an increment of Nature\'s
wisdom
one, thundering raindrop
and sunshine ray
at a time, dear Poet)
March 24th, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Whispers
of sentience,
coursing
the cosmos.
Universal
sentience.
Accumulating.
Permeating.
Frequencies
to be
heard,
absorbed.
Infinite
vibrations.
Infinite
knowledge
to obtain.
Gleaning
faint whispers.\'
\'It’s all
there.
There
to be
discovered.
Listen!\'
(Amen!
I strive for that, illusive
humility
to empower myself, with
a chance
at opportunity, to listen
and glean
an increment of Nature\'s
wisdom
one, thundering raindrop
and sunshine ray
at a time, dear Poet)
March 24th, 2022 05:24
Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
So many just do not listen to the whispers that come to us from everywhere John.
Andy
March 24th, 2022 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
So many just do not listen to the whispers that come to us from everywhere John.
Andy
March 24th, 2022 01:52
Hill
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Those final lines were a message. Humans destroy other humans. When will this chaos stop?! Great job!
March 18th, 2022 09:24
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes. Those final lines were a message. Humans destroy other humans. When will this chaos stop?! Great job!
March 18th, 2022 09:24
Shining
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all look towards that light and press on with our lives.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all look towards that light and press on with our lives.
Andy
March 18th, 2022 02:35
Shining
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly! I love the conciseness of your works. You did really good with this one!
March 17th, 2022 07:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Exactly! I love the conciseness of your works. You did really good with this one!
March 17th, 2022 07:51
Cosmic Gallery
Bella Shepard said:
My mind is reeling from your beautiful, descriptive words, as it does when I look up at the night sky and contemplate the inconceivable.
March 11th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
My mind is reeling from your beautiful, descriptive words, as it does when I look up at the night sky and contemplate the inconceivable.
March 11th, 2022 14:14
Spirits
L. B. Mek said:
the flawless synchronicity
between the image and your words
makes me wonder, which came first?
such an intriguing page
of metaphysical questing
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 8th, 2022 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
the flawless synchronicity
between the image and your words
makes me wonder, which came first?
such an intriguing page
of metaphysical questing
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 8th, 2022 04:54
Spirits
Goldfinch60 said:
Those spirits can do such wonderful things for us John.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those spirits can do such wonderful things for us John.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:13
Rooms
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many rooms in our life and if we are fortunate they will lead us to the good life to which we aspirations.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many rooms in our life and if we are fortunate they will lead us to the good life to which we aspirations.
Andy
March 5th, 2022 02:15
Rooms
Rocky Lagou said:
So profound and I love the way you wrote this almost word-by-word. Well done and truly sage! ✨
March 4th, 2022 11:59
Rocky Lagou said:
So profound and I love the way you wrote this almost word-by-word. Well done and truly sage! ✨
March 4th, 2022 11:59
Medium
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job! I love the way you were able to convey such a strong message with such a succinct usage of words. Done so well and the \"evolving\" is very present in the poem! 💖
March 1st, 2022 10:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Great job! I love the way you were able to convey such a strong message with such a succinct usage of words. Done so well and the \"evolving\" is very present in the poem! 💖
March 1st, 2022 10:28
Meets The Eye
Goldfinch60 said:
True John, so many people only look but do not see.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
True John, so many people only look but do not see.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:44
Deep Subtleties
Bella Shepard said:
I think you\'ve captured the essence of experience leading to wisdom. I especially love the last part \"earned not assumed\". Beautifully put.
February 20th, 2022 15:41
Bella Shepard said:
I think you\'ve captured the essence of experience leading to wisdom. I especially love the last part \"earned not assumed\". Beautifully put.
February 20th, 2022 15:41
Middle Way
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely put! This was clever! I love the way you expressed this idea! The \"middle way, golden path\" Yes! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:50
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely put! This was clever! I love the way you expressed this idea! The \"middle way, golden path\" Yes! 👍💖
February 16th, 2022 11:50
Sparks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparks create so many things in our lives John.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparks create so many things in our lives John.
Andy
February 14th, 2022 01:49
Past2
Goldfinch60 said:
Each unknown tunnel that we approach can lead us into the light showing that all is well.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Each unknown tunnel that we approach can lead us into the light showing that all is well.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:33
Pollution
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, this is where once again we need to go outside the box.
Andy
February 6th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true John, this is where once again we need to go outside the box.
Andy
February 6th, 2022 01:36
Credits
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pivot knots
of existence\'
\'Torquing,
Writhing\'
\'Contour
the medium.\'
\'Pressure
points.
Spinning.
Millions
altering
directions.
Creating,
altering
events.
Large
small.
Brush
strokes
each.
All the
same.\'
(what scintillatingly worded brevity
you\'ve showcased in this write, dear poet
and I really like those judgemental \'side eyes\', in the artwork
\'one generation
questioning, another
both
sat, just watching-on
commentating
as the theatre, of life
unfolds
before their very eyes\')
February 4th, 2022 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pivot knots
of existence\'
\'Torquing,
Writhing\'
\'Contour
the medium.\'
\'Pressure
points.
Spinning.
Millions
altering
directions.
Creating,
altering
events.
Large
small.
Brush
strokes
each.
All the
same.\'
(what scintillatingly worded brevity
you\'ve showcased in this write, dear poet
and I really like those judgemental \'side eyes\', in the artwork
\'one generation
questioning, another
both
sat, just watching-on
commentating
as the theatre, of life
unfolds
before their very eyes\')
February 4th, 2022 05:09
Credits
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we all play a role in the universe of which we are part.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we all play a role in the universe of which we are part.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 02:04
Credits
sophin said:
Those who
were.
Those who
weren’t.
All,
end up
in the
credits.
- good words, j. prophet. reminds us that everyone has a role to play in the universe
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
sophin said:
Those who
were.
Those who
weren’t.
All,
end up
in the
credits.
- good words, j. prophet. reminds us that everyone has a role to play in the universe
February 3rd, 2022 23:33
Illusions
L. B. Mek said:
\'conceptualisation of matter\'
divided, by
\'cognitive capacity, of humanity\'
then
multiply, that figure
with what we get, from
Universe
by
Infinite...
(yeah, the odds aren\'t in our favour)
so why not just
deal with the maths, we can handle
like:
kindness
divided, by
awareness
and
multiply that moral virtue
with what we get, from
\'sincerity of self\'
by
\'loyalty, to those who matter\'...
(yeah, nothing as concrete as a new building
to contribute to the aid of the homeless
but,
we do get something, to gauge
our worth, by
and anchor our self assurance, upon...
sounds like, better maths
to me)
there\'s a great questing
for some semblance of balance
in your write, dear poet
I imagine your write like a thermometer
with one (destructive) extreme, at the outset
being distilled/drilled
into its opposite extreme, at the bottom..
your style really helps unfurl your points
in an accessible manner,
February 1st, 2022 05:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'conceptualisation of matter\'
divided, by
\'cognitive capacity, of humanity\'
then
multiply, that figure
with what we get, from
Universe
by
Infinite...
(yeah, the odds aren\'t in our favour)
so why not just
deal with the maths, we can handle
like:
kindness
divided, by
awareness
and
multiply that moral virtue
with what we get, from
\'sincerity of self\'
by
\'loyalty, to those who matter\'...
(yeah, nothing as concrete as a new building
to contribute to the aid of the homeless
but,
we do get something, to gauge
our worth, by
and anchor our self assurance, upon...
sounds like, better maths
to me)
there\'s a great questing
for some semblance of balance
in your write, dear poet
I imagine your write like a thermometer
with one (destructive) extreme, at the outset
being distilled/drilled
into its opposite extreme, at the bottom..
your style really helps unfurl your points
in an accessible manner,
February 1st, 2022 05:22
Illusions
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality is within us all and that is what we must cling onto in this world.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That reality is within us all and that is what we must cling onto in this world.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:19
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