Comments received on poems by Doll in Wonderland
Inside and Out
Augustus said:
Your metaphors clearly tell a story of what we are thinking, feeling, wishing, risking and dreading in a new relationship. It is thoughtful, serious and then playful at the end.
October 24th, 2016 22:31
Augustus said:
Your metaphors clearly tell a story of what we are thinking, feeling, wishing, risking and dreading in a new relationship. It is thoughtful, serious and then playful at the end.
October 24th, 2016 22:31
When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On
flowernectar said:
absolutely beautiful. I hear this in my mind as a spoken word, i hope some day you try that out (if you haven\'t already)!!
October 17th, 2016 13:33
flowernectar said:
absolutely beautiful. I hear this in my mind as a spoken word, i hope some day you try that out (if you haven\'t already)!!
October 17th, 2016 13:33
When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On
Augustus said:
I remember the words of a Patsy Cline song, \"I fall to pieces, each time I see you again.\" Also I believe that lobsters, when approached move backwards. Time to move forward like when the lobster is searching for food. Thanks for sharing.
October 17th, 2016 09:04
Augustus said:
I remember the words of a Patsy Cline song, \"I fall to pieces, each time I see you again.\" Also I believe that lobsters, when approached move backwards. Time to move forward like when the lobster is searching for food. Thanks for sharing.
October 17th, 2016 09:04
When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh DOLL a very poignant poem lamenting lost love . It\'s happened to me often but my philosophy always is \"Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all !\" I\'m 33 and still looking for Miis Right ! I don\'t stay in a shelved box and neither should you ! I have a new GF (28) so who knows ? I get knocked down but never knocked out. Thinking of you DOLL ~ Love you ~ so get out of that BOX I\'m ready with the SUPAGLUE to put you back together again ! Every Blessing for the future ~ Your Friend BRIAN
October 17th, 2016 08:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh DOLL a very poignant poem lamenting lost love . It\'s happened to me often but my philosophy always is \"Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all !\" I\'m 33 and still looking for Miis Right ! I don\'t stay in a shelved box and neither should you ! I have a new GF (28) so who knows ? I get knocked down but never knocked out. Thinking of you DOLL ~ Love you ~ so get out of that BOX I\'m ready with the SUPAGLUE to put you back together again ! Every Blessing for the future ~ Your Friend BRIAN
October 17th, 2016 08:27
The Season of Our Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL for a really positive vibe about LOVE ! When we have been hurt by Love in the past ~ TRUE LOVE is doubly wonderful. Autumn is a great month for snuggling up "close and personal". Every Blessing ~ Love you BRIAN. Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 25th, 2016 09:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL for a really positive vibe about LOVE ! When we have been hurt by Love in the past ~ TRUE LOVE is doubly wonderful. Autumn is a great month for snuggling up "close and personal". Every Blessing ~ Love you BRIAN. Please check my latest poem ~ Thanks B
September 25th, 2016 09:47
Fingerprints
ShadedSorrow said:
I really liked this one, it's honest and deep.
September 19th, 2016 08:24
ShadedSorrow said:
I really liked this one, it's honest and deep.
September 19th, 2016 08:24
Fingerprints
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is absolutely breath taking....awesome, awesome job ..well written and moving in the soul
September 19th, 2016 03:14
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is absolutely breath taking....awesome, awesome job ..well written and moving in the soul
September 19th, 2016 03:14
Fingerprints
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh My Precious DOLL ~ I am thrilled your bruised heart is now in safe hands. I love the language you use of both pain and passion. ~ once bruised and smudged with greasy ingerprints (God will damn rough Men !) ~ now crystal clear and shining like glass ~ you cradle my heart like wounded bird ~ AMEN. If at anytime your heart is in need of TLC I am here to cudddle and kiss it ~ Love BRIAN XOX
September 19th, 2016 02:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhh My Precious DOLL ~ I am thrilled your bruised heart is now in safe hands. I love the language you use of both pain and passion. ~ once bruised and smudged with greasy ingerprints (God will damn rough Men !) ~ now crystal clear and shining like glass ~ you cradle my heart like wounded bird ~ AMEN. If at anytime your heart is in need of TLC I am here to cudddle and kiss it ~ Love BRIAN XOX
September 19th, 2016 02:45
New (Keep Me Close)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks for a very beautiful poem DOLL in both structure and subject ! You are lovely and I love in when your poem has a ocitive vibe. Love BRIAN XOX
September 17th, 2016 16:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thnks for a very beautiful poem DOLL in both structure and subject ! You are lovely and I love in when your poem has a ocitive vibe. Love BRIAN XOX
September 17th, 2016 16:48
Dancing Doll
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Men are from MARS ~ Ladies are from VENUS ~ vive la differance ! Dolls not only have the capacity to dance (elegantly) ~ but when they are knocked down ~ thy are never knocked out. All the Ladies I have met ~ in the last 33 years ~ have the capacity to get up and begin to DANCE AGAIN. That is why i love you all so so much ! Love BRIAN
September 10th, 2016 14:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Men are from MARS ~ Ladies are from VENUS ~ vive la differance ! Dolls not only have the capacity to dance (elegantly) ~ but when they are knocked down ~ thy are never knocked out. All the Ladies I have met ~ in the last 33 years ~ have the capacity to get up and begin to DANCE AGAIN. That is why i love you all so so much ! Love BRIAN
September 10th, 2016 14:33
Dancing Doll
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is FUCkiNG amazing..I absolutely enjoyed reading it 3 times
September 10th, 2016 12:43
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is FUCkiNG amazing..I absolutely enjoyed reading it 3 times
September 10th, 2016 12:43
Home
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOME DOLL ~ Is where the cat is ! So at least there would be someone warm and purring to greet us when we got home ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
September 9th, 2016 09:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOME DOLL ~ Is where the cat is ! So at least there would be someone warm and purring to greet us when we got home ! Thanks for sharing ~ Love BRIAN
September 9th, 2016 09:32
I Think I Want To Be Your Girlfriend After All
petec said:
Beautiful. I am now a huge fan of yours. You inspire me!
September 5th, 2016 10:51
petec said:
Beautiful. I am now a huge fan of yours. You inspire me!
September 5th, 2016 10:51
The Right Things
petec said:
I've been that man across the table to a woman like you. I will tell you it hurts to love someone who is broken. All you can do is to continue to work on yourself, seek therapy, energy healing, hypnotherapy- whatever it takes. When you are your better self you will draw those good men to you and hopefully be able to live the right one for you.
September 5th, 2016 10:47
petec said:
I've been that man across the table to a woman like you. I will tell you it hurts to love someone who is broken. All you can do is to continue to work on yourself, seek therapy, energy healing, hypnotherapy- whatever it takes. When you are your better self you will draw those good men to you and hopefully be able to live the right one for you.
September 5th, 2016 10:47
My One and Only, My Lobster
petec said:
That is so beautiful it made me all teary eyed. I can only hope I can find someone like that someday. Keep writing!
September 5th, 2016 10:40
petec said:
That is so beautiful it made me all teary eyed. I can only hope I can find someone like that someday. Keep writing!
September 5th, 2016 10:40
My One and Only, My Lobster
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Better a LOBSTER than a MOBSTER ~ DOLL ! Thanks for another wonderful DIW poem ~ bursting with longing and loving you are a very sensual Lady ! I me thrilled you have found your SOLEMATE. Thanks for sharing it left me quite breathless ~ Love BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Better a LOBSTER than a MOBSTER ~ DOLL ! Thanks for another wonderful DIW poem ~ bursting with longing and loving you are a very sensual Lady ! I me thrilled you have found your SOLEMATE. Thanks for sharing it left me quite breathless ~ Love BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 10:11
Obvious
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Moving and very sad...it reminds me of some of my own...good job!
September 5th, 2016 08:05
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very Moving and very sad...it reminds me of some of my own...good job!
September 5th, 2016 08:05
Obvious
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SO SAD DOLL ~ That a lovely Young Lady like you should have to write ~ words like these ! You know inmy heart i am with you 24/7 ~ Love BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 07:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SO SAD DOLL ~ That a lovely Young Lady like you should have to write ~ words like these ! You know inmy heart i am with you 24/7 ~ Love BRIAN
September 5th, 2016 07:18
The Right Things
Doll in Wonderland said:
Thank you. :) I'm trying hard to fix what's broken. :)
September 3rd, 2016 16:31
Doll in Wonderland said:
Thank you. :) I'm trying hard to fix what's broken. :)
September 3rd, 2016 16:31
The Right Things
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MY PERFECT DOLL ! Love Angel is not rational ~ this is why you love the Man who uses and abuses you treats you like a limp cheap Rag Doll and not the perfect beautiful China Doll that you are and that always excites my imagination ~ my elusive Doll in Wonderland. I am a Gentleman in every sense of the word ~ BUT ~ while I was wining and dining you or making sweet sweet gentle love ~ you would be longing to be abused insulted raped and ravished by MISTER RUFF what chance do we SMOOTH GENTLEMEN have ? Love my ANGEL is never rational. Thanks for caring ~ Love as always BRIAN. Please check my latest poem COLOR IN AUTUMN ~ Thanks BRIAN X
September 3rd, 2016 05:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MY PERFECT DOLL ! Love Angel is not rational ~ this is why you love the Man who uses and abuses you treats you like a limp cheap Rag Doll and not the perfect beautiful China Doll that you are and that always excites my imagination ~ my elusive Doll in Wonderland. I am a Gentleman in every sense of the word ~ BUT ~ while I was wining and dining you or making sweet sweet gentle love ~ you would be longing to be abused insulted raped and ravished by MISTER RUFF what chance do we SMOOTH GENTLEMEN have ? Love my ANGEL is never rational. Thanks for caring ~ Love as always BRIAN. Please check my latest poem COLOR IN AUTUMN ~ Thanks BRIAN X
September 3rd, 2016 05:45
Another Long Ass Night
giantgentlebear said:
enjoyed reading -last two lines made me smile- thanks for words
September 3rd, 2016 03:14
giantgentlebear said:
enjoyed reading -last two lines made me smile- thanks for words
September 3rd, 2016 03:14
« Return to the profile of Doll in Wonderland
