Comments received on poems by Doll in Wonderland
Projection
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhh DOLL ~ this is so sad that a beautiful young lady like you should be used by a man and then tossed aside like a rag Doll. You are too precious for that ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ love you BRIAN Please check my latest poem TOGETHERNESS ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 2nd, 2016 14:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhh DOLL ~ this is so sad that a beautiful young lady like you should be used by a man and then tossed aside like a rag Doll. You are too precious for that ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ love you BRIAN Please check my latest poem TOGETHERNESS ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 2nd, 2016 14:57
Sustenance
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for another great poem DOLL. Perfectly spaced free verse ~ full of flow and go ! The subject of "love at a distance in space and time" strikes a chord in many of us. My lovers in CYBER SPACE do provide me with astral sustenance but in reality I will never meet them ! So i can empathise ~ You are lovely ~ Your poems are mega ~ Love you both ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2016 10:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for another great poem DOLL. Perfectly spaced free verse ~ full of flow and go ! The subject of "love at a distance in space and time" strikes a chord in many of us. My lovers in CYBER SPACE do provide me with astral sustenance but in reality I will never meet them ! So i can empathise ~ You are lovely ~ Your poems are mega ~ Love you both ~ BRIAN
August 28th, 2016 10:45
The Trouble with Being a Mermaid
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES DOLL ~ There is trouble with being a Mermaid and being "different" in any way. Because i respect all ladies ~ nothing stems my love ~ even Mermaids ! Love as always BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 16:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES DOLL ~ There is trouble with being a Mermaid and being "different" in any way. Because i respect all ladies ~ nothing stems my love ~ even Mermaids ! Love as always BRIAN
August 27th, 2016 16:46
I Think I Want To Be Your Girlfriend After All
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DOLL ~ Love the power and passion in your poem ~ this is the answer all young red blooded Men have wanted to hear ! I THINK I WANT TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND AFTER ALL ~ Come on Babe ~ Light his Fire ! Stop thinking and ACT ~ Kiss him hard ~ bite his lip ~ taste his love ~ keep thinking about LOVE ~ come out of WONDERLAND into HUGMEKISSMEHOLDMYHAND ! In my opinion we are often too indecisive in LOVE and we let LOVE pass us by. Love every word of your love poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 01:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DOLL ~ Love the power and passion in your poem ~ this is the answer all young red blooded Men have wanted to hear ! I THINK I WANT TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND AFTER ALL ~ Come on Babe ~ Light his Fire ! Stop thinking and ACT ~ Kiss him hard ~ bite his lip ~ taste his love ~ keep thinking about LOVE ~ come out of WONDERLAND into HUGMEKISSMEHOLDMYHAND ! In my opinion we are often too indecisive in LOVE and we let LOVE pass us by. Love every word of your love poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 25th, 2016 01:56
I Think I Want To Be Your Girlfriend After All
JohnThomas said:
Lovely. Passionate. Anxious. Hopeful. Great poem!
August 25th, 2016 01:47
JohnThomas said:
Lovely. Passionate. Anxious. Hopeful. Great poem!
August 25th, 2016 01:47
Collision Course
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL for another poignant Love Poem. Attraction between Lovers is very powerful but ebbs and flows. We know the ecstasy we have enjoyed ~ when it all goes right ~ wicked ~ BUT ~ also the agony when it goes wrong ~ so so sad. Love is a WONDERLAND and we PUPPETS (Yang) and the DOLLS (Yin) hope that we will have a close encounter of the Loving Kind ! I'm a Mad Hatter and I'm so so in love with Alice ~ but she keeps changing size and that poses problems ~ because size matters in WONDERLAND. Love the reality and the magic in your poems ~ please keep writing ~ thanks for sharing ~ Thanks for being my MPS Friend ! BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 01:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL for another poignant Love Poem. Attraction between Lovers is very powerful but ebbs and flows. We know the ecstasy we have enjoyed ~ when it all goes right ~ wicked ~ BUT ~ also the agony when it goes wrong ~ so so sad. Love is a WONDERLAND and we PUPPETS (Yang) and the DOLLS (Yin) hope that we will have a close encounter of the Loving Kind ! I'm a Mad Hatter and I'm so so in love with Alice ~ but she keeps changing size and that poses problems ~ because size matters in WONDERLAND. Love the reality and the magic in your poems ~ please keep writing ~ thanks for sharing ~ Thanks for being my MPS Friend ! BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 01:43
Collision Course
JohnThomas said:
Beautiful. Great emotional depth. I like it very much.
August 22nd, 2016 23:01
JohnThomas said:
Beautiful. Great emotional depth. I like it very much.
August 22nd, 2016 23:01
Another Long Ass Night
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO DOLL ~ You make some interesting comments in this HARD HITTING POEM ! 20 YEARS is a long time to be in a relationaship and I guess you know a lot about a GUY by then ~ the Good ~ Bad ~ Ugly. Your penultimate line raises a question about the importance of SEX in a relationship. "At least the sex was good." However it seems that if the man is boring and unaffectionate the "good sex" is not enough. I always like to satisfy my Lady and in return I like sex to be a memorable and positive experience but to form a lasting and loving relationship it is only one of several important factors. I'm still single and your poem has made me think. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 01:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO DOLL ~ You make some interesting comments in this HARD HITTING POEM ! 20 YEARS is a long time to be in a relationaship and I guess you know a lot about a GUY by then ~ the Good ~ Bad ~ Ugly. Your penultimate line raises a question about the importance of SEX in a relationship. "At least the sex was good." However it seems that if the man is boring and unaffectionate the "good sex" is not enough. I always like to satisfy my Lady and in return I like sex to be a memorable and positive experience but to form a lasting and loving relationship it is only one of several important factors. I'm still single and your poem has made me think. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
August 17th, 2016 01:14
He Wants Me
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I can relate to this piece very much so..you captured it and brought it to life in this write..very nice job
August 14th, 2016 10:40
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I can relate to this piece very much so..you captured it and brought it to life in this write..very nice job
August 14th, 2016 10:40
My Heart
Doll in Wonderland said:
Aww, I'm blushing, you are too kind. Thank you!!!
August 12th, 2016 22:36
Doll in Wonderland said:
Aww, I'm blushing, you are too kind. Thank you!!!
August 12th, 2016 22:36
My Heart
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DOLL ~ I love this poem and I love all the chameleon characters you assume ! Love really is a Warm Puppy ~ a mad Circus Clown ~ Paper Roses ~ A Cookie Monster ~ OMG DOLL in WONDERLAND ~ you are a free spirit ~ you are my Perfect Girl ~ I would never break your heart ! Your Man must be mad NOT to appreciate all your PLAYFULNESS and PERFECTION. Thanks for caring and sharing. Thanks also for your lovely stanza on the ROBINS (MY FAVORITE BIRD II) and the way they restored your spirits. You are an elegant poet. Yours ~ BRIAN
August 11th, 2016 01:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW DOLL ~ I love this poem and I love all the chameleon characters you assume ! Love really is a Warm Puppy ~ a mad Circus Clown ~ Paper Roses ~ A Cookie Monster ~ OMG DOLL in WONDERLAND ~ you are a free spirit ~ you are my Perfect Girl ~ I would never break your heart ! Your Man must be mad NOT to appreciate all your PLAYFULNESS and PERFECTION. Thanks for caring and sharing. Thanks also for your lovely stanza on the ROBINS (MY FAVORITE BIRD II) and the way they restored your spirits. You are an elegant poet. Yours ~ BRIAN
August 11th, 2016 01:31
You Don\'t Eat Soup, You\'re Not Poor
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DIW ! Beautifully crafted poem ~ flowing smooth as silk. Great subject ~ from rejection to reconsideration. Men are just as complicated as Ladies and we all love DOGS and SOUP and ~ of course ~ LADIES ! We do our best in foreplay ~ intercourse and even afterglow (talking about dogs & soup etc). As a mere Man I am so so pleased you are reconsidering ~ Thanks for sharing and caring BRIAN.
August 2nd, 2016 01:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DIW ! Beautifully crafted poem ~ flowing smooth as silk. Great subject ~ from rejection to reconsideration. Men are just as complicated as Ladies and we all love DOGS and SOUP and ~ of course ~ LADIES ! We do our best in foreplay ~ intercourse and even afterglow (talking about dogs & soup etc). As a mere Man I am so so pleased you are reconsidering ~ Thanks for sharing and caring BRIAN.
August 2nd, 2016 01:02
Twisted
rrodriguez said:
Why the memories if the cause pain. You got me thinking.
July 30th, 2016 22:21
rrodriguez said:
Why the memories if the cause pain. You got me thinking.
July 30th, 2016 22:21
Anatomy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME D I W ~ Thanks for a very elegant first poem with just a hint of sadness. I like positive ~ outgoing Girls who laugh inthe enjoyment of sharing favours. To me my current Lady friend is delicious and yes she does laugh because Men are "funny" ! However I enjoy "every precious morsel" and so does she. We are both still hungry and both "relish the plate". However what you describe happens and ~ alas ~ it is always the beginning of the end. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 02:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME D I W ~ Thanks for a very elegant first poem with just a hint of sadness. I like positive ~ outgoing Girls who laugh inthe enjoyment of sharing favours. To me my current Lady friend is delicious and yes she does laugh because Men are "funny" ! However I enjoy "every precious morsel" and so does she. We are both still hungry and both "relish the plate". However what you describe happens and ~ alas ~ it is always the beginning of the end. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN
July 29th, 2016 02:59
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