Comments received on poems by Doll in Wonderland
Forbidden Fruit
L. B. Mek said:
I chuckled, so I liked
thanks for the fun read
March 17th, 2022 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
I chuckled, so I liked
thanks for the fun read
March 17th, 2022 04:43
Hotel
L. B. Mek said:
\'You are not the place where home is\'
\'Your light stays on
your light abides
your light endures, but is never mine.\'
(found these lines to be so relatable
and I think your poem
portrays, such a complex situation
in a relationship, with clear and precise
wording)
a great read, thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'You are not the place where home is\'
\'Your light stays on
your light abides
your light endures, but is never mine.\'
(found these lines to be so relatable
and I think your poem
portrays, such a complex situation
in a relationship, with clear and precise
wording)
a great read, thanks for sharing
March 3rd, 2022 04:50
At Least I Can Laugh About It Now, Kind Of
Doll in Wonderland said:
Aww, thank you!!!
March 1st, 2022 19:04
Doll in Wonderland said:
Aww, thank you!!!
March 1st, 2022 19:04
At Least I Can Laugh About It Now, Kind Of
L. B. Mek said:
\'We really should have never happened
Birthday the same day as my ex-husband\'..
this had me chuckling away
you have a subtle touch to your humour
and you insert it at the most unexpected moments
I think you\'d make a fun script writer..
thanks for sharing, a really good read
March 1st, 2022 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'We really should have never happened
Birthday the same day as my ex-husband\'..
this had me chuckling away
you have a subtle touch to your humour
and you insert it at the most unexpected moments
I think you\'d make a fun script writer..
thanks for sharing, a really good read
March 1st, 2022 04:45
Sanctuary
Nicholas Browning said:
Well well well, what do we have here? A stoic tale of seemingly narcissistic attitude laid over the top of hurtful expectation. Phew, this poem hits on so many levels that I can\'t help but like it. As a man, and one that could be considered \"Broken\", a place to lay your weary head in times of need is one of life\'s greatest treasures. Also, if you ever come across a man like that again, the kind that just takes and doesn\'t reciprocate, give em\' a nice kick in the nuts for me. Cheers.
November 26th, 2021 10:43
Nicholas Browning said:
Well well well, what do we have here? A stoic tale of seemingly narcissistic attitude laid over the top of hurtful expectation. Phew, this poem hits on so many levels that I can\'t help but like it. As a man, and one that could be considered \"Broken\", a place to lay your weary head in times of need is one of life\'s greatest treasures. Also, if you ever come across a man like that again, the kind that just takes and doesn\'t reciprocate, give em\' a nice kick in the nuts for me. Cheers.
November 26th, 2021 10:43
Take It All Back
L. B. Mek said:
raw emotionality
worded, selflessly relatable:
\'And guard my fragile heart\'
how this one line: frames
your whole poem\'s. intent..
but, dear poet
you\'ve already showcased your bravery, in this write
it\'s too - late, to pretend
you\'re nothing:
but another, victim in-waiting..
clasp tight, these words of awareness
dive deep, into your sea
of introspection gleaned, wisdom
and arm yourself, Prepare
for that next opportunity
at Togetherness..
This Time, no regret\'s
trust your instinct\'s - knowing
if there\'s any betrayal
it will be his loss!
You\'re the one
He: will be regretting
for the rest
of his wasted, life..
You\'ll, be just fine
brush your shoulders, play
some Ariana Grande
and call out, to the awaiting world
\'Thank you: Next!\'
November 26th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
raw emotionality
worded, selflessly relatable:
\'And guard my fragile heart\'
how this one line: frames
your whole poem\'s. intent..
but, dear poet
you\'ve already showcased your bravery, in this write
it\'s too - late, to pretend
you\'re nothing:
but another, victim in-waiting..
clasp tight, these words of awareness
dive deep, into your sea
of introspection gleaned, wisdom
and arm yourself, Prepare
for that next opportunity
at Togetherness..
This Time, no regret\'s
trust your instinct\'s - knowing
if there\'s any betrayal
it will be his loss!
You\'re the one
He: will be regretting
for the rest
of his wasted, life..
You\'ll, be just fine
brush your shoulders, play
some Ariana Grande
and call out, to the awaiting world
\'Thank you: Next!\'
November 26th, 2021 05:44
Take It All Back
Brandon Ramsey371983 said:
Really deep I can feel the pain in it and the bittersweet joy
November 25th, 2021 23:08
Brandon Ramsey371983 said:
Really deep I can feel the pain in it and the bittersweet joy
November 25th, 2021 23:08
Heart Sickness
L. B. Mek said:
suffering is contagious, so be careful
of what you invite into your heart
its a lot harder, to get it out...
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:41
L. B. Mek said:
suffering is contagious, so be careful
of what you invite into your heart
its a lot harder, to get it out...
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:41
I: Waking
L. B. Mek said:
belonging, is a tricky concept
when we think we\'ve found our place,
sands of fate, move the ground beneath us
just enough for us to doubt;
similarly when we arrive at a place we\'re destined, to be
we don\'t like that notion of inevitability, like
its draining our sense of independence
and so, we stir up a little fuss:
\'I woke up and realized I want to prowl again
I want to be hungry
I need to remember that drive to fend for myself
I need to feel something
And I want my claws back\'
(thanks for sharing,
a unique read)
October 28th, 2021 04:00
L. B. Mek said:
belonging, is a tricky concept
when we think we\'ve found our place,
sands of fate, move the ground beneath us
just enough for us to doubt;
similarly when we arrive at a place we\'re destined, to be
we don\'t like that notion of inevitability, like
its draining our sense of independence
and so, we stir up a little fuss:
\'I woke up and realized I want to prowl again
I want to be hungry
I need to remember that drive to fend for myself
I need to feel something
And I want my claws back\'
(thanks for sharing,
a unique read)
October 28th, 2021 04:00
Crushed
Egyptianqt79 said:
❤❤❤❤❤ yes! Words can hurt so much more! And can never be erased! Love your poetry
August 23rd, 2017 13:50
Egyptianqt79 said:
❤❤❤❤❤ yes! Words can hurt so much more! And can never be erased! Love your poetry
August 23rd, 2017 13:50
Love Language
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love your your style. Scarecrow shadows. I love it!!!!
August 23rd, 2017 13:48
Egyptianqt79 said:
I love your your style. Scarecrow shadows. I love it!!!!
August 23rd, 2017 13:48
Crushed
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Funny how the tongue can get us into so much trouble. You expressed it well Doll in Wonderland. Best to keep your cool...
June 17th, 2017 21:52
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Funny how the tongue can get us into so much trouble. You expressed it well Doll in Wonderland. Best to keep your cool...
June 17th, 2017 21:52
Reasons Why I Can\'t Say I Love You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL fro a beautiful but enigmatic LOVE POEM. It reminds of the Song \"You say it best when you say nothing at all\" So my advice would be DON\'T SAY ILY ~ but ~ JUST SHOW HIM HOW MUCH YOU LOVE HIM ! Yours BRIAN
May 16th, 2017 09:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DOLL fro a beautiful but enigmatic LOVE POEM. It reminds of the Song \"You say it best when you say nothing at all\" So my advice would be DON\'T SAY ILY ~ but ~ JUST SHOW HIM HOW MUCH YOU LOVE HIM ! Yours BRIAN
May 16th, 2017 09:40
Nice Guys Don\'t Finish Last
Quemis said:
Wow. Call the wrath of the entire literary community down on my head for not usually being a big fan of love/heartbreak, but sometimes little powerful pieces convert me for a time.
Yours has. Very nice. Also, ouch. Really great job relaying your emotions.
December 9th, 2016 00:46
Quemis said:
Wow. Call the wrath of the entire literary community down on my head for not usually being a big fan of love/heartbreak, but sometimes little powerful pieces convert me for a time.
Yours has. Very nice. Also, ouch. Really great job relaying your emotions.
December 9th, 2016 00:46
Slip and Fall
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O DOLL ~ Your beautifully penned poems make me so so sad ! It all starts so perfect \"Falling in love again ~ so deep and so hard ~ you accepted all he gave you and you giving all he wanted from you\" BUT alas it was not enough ! Then you ~ The lovely Doll in Wonderland ~ Falling out of love more deeply and quickly than you fell in ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 05:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O DOLL ~ Your beautifully penned poems make me so so sad ! It all starts so perfect \"Falling in love again ~ so deep and so hard ~ you accepted all he gave you and you giving all he wanted from you\" BUT alas it was not enough ! Then you ~ The lovely Doll in Wonderland ~ Falling out of love more deeply and quickly than you fell in ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 15th, 2016 05:48
Wear Me Down
nic said:
Yeah, I really, like really relate to your words. Like not just this work, but everything I\'ve read of you thus far.
November 1st, 2016 18:56
nic said:
Yeah, I really, like really relate to your words. Like not just this work, but everything I\'ve read of you thus far.
November 1st, 2016 18:56
It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is unique n mysterious which enhances its appeal.yor phrasing is sensational, \' roving hands, trespass on my heart and more! Intense and darkish beauty in it.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 30th, 2016 23:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow this is unique n mysterious which enhances its appeal.yor phrasing is sensational, \' roving hands, trespass on my heart and more! Intense and darkish beauty in it.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 30th, 2016 23:55
It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Liam Lawless said:
This poem is so powerful and emotional. Amazing work!
October 30th, 2016 16:18
Liam Lawless said:
This poem is so powerful and emotional. Amazing work!
October 30th, 2016 16:18
It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful and powerful poem. I hope you are healing. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 13:28
Christina8 said:
This is a beautiful and powerful poem. I hope you are healing. Great job!
October 30th, 2016 13:28
It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Christina K said:
This is amazing! Great work
October 30th, 2016 12:56
Christina K said:
This is amazing! Great work
October 30th, 2016 12:56
Kiss You Goodbye
Christina8 said:
This is an impressive freestyle poem! I loved the words you used. Sorry about the heartbreak.
October 29th, 2016 13:41
Christina8 said:
This is an impressive freestyle poem! I loved the words you used. Sorry about the heartbreak.
October 29th, 2016 13:41
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