Comments received on poems by Doll in Wonderland



Sanctuary
Nicholas Browning said:

Well well well, what do we have here? A stoic tale of seemingly narcissistic attitude laid over the top of hurtful expectation. Phew, this poem hits on so many levels that I can\'t help but like it. As a man, and one that could be considered \"Broken\", a place to lay your weary head in times of need is one of life\'s greatest treasures. Also, if you ever come across a man like that again, the kind that just takes and doesn\'t reciprocate, give em\' a nice kick in the nuts for me. Cheers.

November 26th, 2021 10:43

Take It All Back
L. B. Mek said:

raw emotionality
worded, selflessly relatable:
\'And guard my fragile heart\'
how this one line: frames
your whole poem\'s. intent..
but, dear poet
you\'ve already showcased your bravery, in this write
it\'s too - late, to pretend
you\'re nothing:
but another, victim in-waiting..
clasp tight, these words of awareness
dive deep, into your sea
of introspection gleaned, wisdom
and arm yourself, Prepare
for that next opportunity
at Togetherness..
This Time, no regret\'s
trust your instinct\'s - knowing
if there\'s any betrayal
it will be his loss!
You\'re the one
He: will be regretting
for the rest
of his wasted, life..
You\'ll, be just fine
brush your shoulders, play
some Ariana Grande
and call out, to the awaiting world
\'Thank you: Next!\'

November 26th, 2021 05:44

Take It All Back
Brandon Ramsey371983 said:

Really deep I can feel the pain in it and the bittersweet joy

November 25th, 2021 23:08

Heart Sickness
L. B. Mek said:

suffering is contagious, so be careful
of what you invite into your heart
its a lot harder, to get it out...
thanks for sharing

October 29th, 2021 04:41

I: Waking
L. B. Mek said:

belonging, is a tricky concept
when we think we\'ve found our place,
sands of fate, move the ground beneath us
just enough for us to doubt;
similarly when we arrive at a place we\'re destined, to be
we don\'t like that notion of inevitability, like
its draining our sense of independence
and so, we stir up a little fuss:
\'I woke up and realized I want to prowl again
I want to be hungry
I need to remember that drive to fend for myself
I need to feel something
And I want my claws back\'
(thanks for sharing,
a unique read)

October 28th, 2021 04:00

Nice Guys Don\'t Finish Last
Egyptianqt79 said:

❤❤❤

August 23rd, 2017 14:01

Nourished
Egyptianqt79 said:

Sweet

August 23rd, 2017 13:51

Crushed
Egyptianqt79 said:

❤❤❤❤❤ yes! Words can hurt so much more! And can never be erased! Love your poetry

August 23rd, 2017 13:50

Love Language
Egyptianqt79 said:

I love your your style. Scarecrow shadows. I love it!!!!


August 23rd, 2017 13:48

Crushed
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Funny how the tongue can get us into so much trouble. You expressed it well Doll in Wonderland. Best to keep your cool...

June 17th, 2017 21:52

Reasons Why I Can\'t Say I Love You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks DOLL fro a beautiful but enigmatic LOVE POEM. It reminds of the Song \"You say it best when you say nothing at all\" So my advice would be DON\'T SAY ILY ~ but ~ JUST SHOW HIM HOW MUCH YOU LOVE HIM ! Yours BRIAN

May 16th, 2017 09:40

Nice Guys Don\'t Finish Last
Tony36 said:

WOW amazingly Awesome write

December 9th, 2016 09:20

Nice Guys Don\'t Finish Last
Quemis said:

Wow. Call the wrath of the entire literary community down on my head for not usually being a big fan of love/heartbreak, but sometimes little powerful pieces convert me for a time.

Yours has. Very nice. Also, ouch. Really great job relaying your emotions.

December 9th, 2016 00:46

Slip and Fall
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

O DOLL ~ Your beautifully penned poems make me so so sad ! It all starts so perfect \"Falling in love again ~ so deep and so hard ~ you accepted all he gave you and you giving all he wanted from you\" BUT alas it was not enough ! Then you ~ The lovely Doll in Wonderland ~ Falling out of love more deeply and quickly than you fell in ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 15th, 2016 05:48

Home is Where Your Heart Lives
Augustus said:

Those are nice feelings.

November 9th, 2016 10:29

Wear Me Down
nic said:

Yeah, I really, like really relate to your words. Like not just this work, but everything I\'ve read of you thus far.

November 1st, 2016 18:56

It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow this is unique n mysterious which enhances its appeal.yor phrasing is sensational, \' roving hands, trespass on my heart and more! Intense and darkish beauty in it.

Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.


October 30th, 2016 23:55

Kiss You Goodbye
nic said:

touched

October 30th, 2016 19:39

It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
nic said:

I love it!

October 30th, 2016 19:24

It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Liam Lawless said:

This poem is so powerful and emotional. Amazing work!

October 30th, 2016 16:18

It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Christina8 said:

This is a beautiful and powerful poem. I hope you are healing. Great job!

October 30th, 2016 13:28

It Takes You Forever To Text Me Back
Christina K said:

This is amazing! Great work

October 30th, 2016 12:56

Kiss You Goodbye
Christina8 said:

This is an impressive freestyle poem! I loved the words you used. Sorry about the heartbreak.

October 29th, 2016 13:41

Kiss You Goodbye
Tony36 said:

Awesome

October 29th, 2016 12:14

Kiss You Goodbye
MisKylie said:

Amazing

October 29th, 2016 11:29

To Hold
Augustus said:

This is lovely. :-)

October 26th, 2016 23:59

To Hold
elchupacabra said:

... so good... that\'s all.

October 26th, 2016 22:42

Inside and Out
Augustus said:

Your metaphors clearly tell a story of what we are thinking, feeling, wishing, risking and dreading in a new relationship. It is thoughtful, serious and then playful at the end.

October 24th, 2016 22:31

When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On
flowernectar said:

absolutely beautiful. I hear this in my mind as a spoken word, i hope some day you try that out (if you haven\'t already)!!

October 17th, 2016 13:33

When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

October 17th, 2016 10:18

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