Comments received on poems by Jeff
All I Need
WriteBeLight said:
So great to read your work again Jeff! Excellent!
February 7th, 2017 12:59
WriteBeLight said:
So great to read your work again Jeff! Excellent!
February 7th, 2017 12:59
Life On Hold
Augustus said:
We all do stupid stuff. I was lucky and never got caught. At some time in our lives we realize who is at fault. The tough part is forgiving ourselves. Nice write. Sending positive thoughts.
October 28th, 2016 09:25
Augustus said:
We all do stupid stuff. I was lucky and never got caught. At some time in our lives we realize who is at fault. The tough part is forgiving ourselves. Nice write. Sending positive thoughts.
October 28th, 2016 09:25
Life On Hold
Tony36 said:
Life\'s challenges makes one stronger. This poem shows that, Awesome Awesome write
October 28th, 2016 08:20
Tony36 said:
Life\'s challenges makes one stronger. This poem shows that, Awesome Awesome write
October 28th, 2016 08:20
Life On Hold
WriteBeLight said:
I agree. Sorry you had to go through that though. Once again, excellent job.
October 28th, 2016 07:45
WriteBeLight said:
I agree. Sorry you had to go through that though. Once again, excellent job.
October 28th, 2016 07:45
Life On Hold
Jeff said:
Thank you for your time to comment.... It\'s definitely appreciated
October 28th, 2016 07:41
Jeff said:
Thank you for your time to comment.... It\'s definitely appreciated
October 28th, 2016 07:41
Life On Hold
Christina8 said:
I like this poem. You\'re not blaming anybody else and yet you keep on going. A good attitude to have given the situation. Great write!
October 28th, 2016 07:40
Christina8 said:
I like this poem. You\'re not blaming anybody else and yet you keep on going. A good attitude to have given the situation. Great write!
October 28th, 2016 07:40
Alone Again
Christina8 said:
I love the rhymes but so tragic is the piece. But I can relate. You did a great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:54
Christina8 said:
I love the rhymes but so tragic is the piece. But I can relate. You did a great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:54
I\'m Still In Love With You
Christina8 said:
I like this freestyle poem. Too bad you have a broken heart to go with it. Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:49
Christina8 said:
I like this freestyle poem. Too bad you have a broken heart to go with it. Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:49
Lost Within
Augustus said:
I was thinking of Country. There is a song \"please release me, let me go\". You could almost use your poem to that song.
October 27th, 2016 16:41
Augustus said:
I was thinking of Country. There is a song \"please release me, let me go\". You could almost use your poem to that song.
October 27th, 2016 16:41
Lost Within
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lyrical soulful song poem ! The plea to God sums it up nicely. I like the mixture of freeverse n rhyme in it, I tend to do that sometimes. The format is very poetic too. Thumbs up.
Pls do check out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 26th, 2016 03:02
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lyrical soulful song poem ! The plea to God sums it up nicely. I like the mixture of freeverse n rhyme in it, I tend to do that sometimes. The format is very poetic too. Thumbs up.
Pls do check out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 26th, 2016 03:02
Drowned In Tears
Whimsical_1 said:
This is amazing Jeff. I was just going through your poems and wow, what a show stopper. This is what I aspire my writing to look like and my goodness your rhym is golden, everything fits and it has great imagery and character. I could definitely learn a few things from you :)
October 8th, 2016 23:09
Whimsical_1 said:
This is amazing Jeff. I was just going through your poems and wow, what a show stopper. This is what I aspire my writing to look like and my goodness your rhym is golden, everything fits and it has great imagery and character. I could definitely learn a few things from you :)
October 8th, 2016 23:09
Alone Again
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As always JEFF ~ great structure 3 neat quatrains and a consistent xaxa ~ xbxb ~ xcxc rhyming pattern. However ! Perfect structure BUT tragic subject ! STANZA 1. Beter Dead ! S 2. Peace ~ but only with your final breath ! S 3. DEATH ~ Voices Rule KO. Thanks for scaring ! BRIAN
October 8th, 2016 12:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
As always JEFF ~ great structure 3 neat quatrains and a consistent xaxa ~ xbxb ~ xcxc rhyming pattern. However ! Perfect structure BUT tragic subject ! STANZA 1. Beter Dead ! S 2. Peace ~ but only with your final breath ! S 3. DEATH ~ Voices Rule KO. Thanks for scaring ! BRIAN
October 8th, 2016 12:25
Alone Again
Whimsical_1 said:
Jeff,
I'm in love with your writing style. The rhyme and the tone. I can relate to how I write my pieces. Great work, this one really intrigued me. It's short, but very powerful
October 8th, 2016 06:39
Whimsical_1 said:
Jeff,
I'm in love with your writing style. The rhyme and the tone. I can relate to how I write my pieces. Great work, this one really intrigued me. It's short, but very powerful
October 8th, 2016 06:39
I\'m Still In Love With You
Augustus said:
Now a guy that likes Country music and writes like a song, what more could we ask for?
October 6th, 2016 15:22
Augustus said:
Now a guy that likes Country music and writes like a song, what more could we ask for?
October 6th, 2016 15:22
I\'m Still In Love With You
Tony36 said:
AWESOME WRITE, emotional and well written
October 6th, 2016 09:25
Tony36 said:
AWESOME WRITE, emotional and well written
October 6th, 2016 09:25
I\'m Still In Love With You
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes love hurts,great write
October 6th, 2016 08:25
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes love hurts,great write
October 6th, 2016 08:25
I\'m Still In Love With You
Whimsical_1 said:
This poem is amazing, I can feel the emotion seeping out of the lines. Because you set it to music, the poem flows exceptionally well. Please please keep writing!
October 6th, 2016 08:23
Whimsical_1 said:
This poem is amazing, I can feel the emotion seeping out of the lines. Because you set it to music, the poem flows exceptionally well. Please please keep writing!
October 6th, 2016 08:23
I\'m Still In Love With You
princesslay said:
Quite a moving piece. Sad to read but flows nicely and so kind of makes me feel the resignation of the words through the flow of the poem. I like it. 👍
October 6th, 2016 05:12
princesslay said:
Quite a moving piece. Sad to read but flows nicely and so kind of makes me feel the resignation of the words through the flow of the poem. I like it. 👍
October 6th, 2016 05:12
I\'m Still In Love With You
Jeff said:
Its amazing how love can heal ...i have a poem that starts out: Faith may move a mountain...but only love can heal a heart. I've struggled with so many demons in this life...i often feel love was never meant for me...or peace of mind. Thank you for commenting Brian...you have no idea how much each one means to me
October 6th, 2016 04:17
Jeff said:
Its amazing how love can heal ...i have a poem that starts out: Faith may move a mountain...but only love can heal a heart. I've struggled with so many demons in this life...i often feel love was never meant for me...or peace of mind. Thank you for commenting Brian...you have no idea how much each one means to me
October 6th, 2016 04:17
I\'m Still In Love With You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEFF ~ strructurally this is a perfect poem Quatrains and a consistent rhyme pattern (xaxa ~ xbxb etc) and (because you based it on music) it flows like silk ! Thanks for your comment on my POETRY POEM. I love the pathos in your poem ~ I'm only 33 but I could have written your poem several time. I'm in a good relationship right now which aids the healing process ! Yours BRIAN
October 6th, 2016 04:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEFF ~ strructurally this is a perfect poem Quatrains and a consistent rhyme pattern (xaxa ~ xbxb etc) and (because you based it on music) it flows like silk ! Thanks for your comment on my POETRY POEM. I love the pathos in your poem ~ I'm only 33 but I could have written your poem several time. I'm in a good relationship right now which aids the healing process ! Yours BRIAN
October 6th, 2016 04:09
Veil of Sorrows
Augustus said:
Oh wow! Reads nicely and tells a sad story. Hugs.
October 4th, 2016 11:35
Augustus said:
Oh wow! Reads nicely and tells a sad story. Hugs.
October 4th, 2016 11:35
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