Comments received on poems by Jeff
Painful Memory
Jeff said:
Unfortunately it is a true story. Its been 17 years and I STILL have trouble with it....but thanks for your time to comment
September 11th, 2016 05:56
Jeff said:
Unfortunately it is a true story. Its been 17 years and I STILL have trouble with it....but thanks for your time to comment
September 11th, 2016 05:56
Painful Memory
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very tough poem JEFF ~ we all face the tragedy of DEATH in our extended Families. But as you know SUICIDE is NOT the answer but we need to live ~ twice as effectively ~ to comensate for those who have been called home. Thanks for sharing a very poignant poem which I trust is not factual ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem TEN TRAITS TO LIVE BY ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 03:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A very tough poem JEFF ~ we all face the tragedy of DEATH in our extended Families. But as you know SUICIDE is NOT the answer but we need to live ~ twice as effectively ~ to comensate for those who have been called home. Thanks for sharing a very poignant poem which I trust is not factual ~ BRIAN. Please check my latest poem TEN TRAITS TO LIVE BY ~ Thanks B
September 11th, 2016 03:58
The Evil In Us All
Augustus said:
Has a nice flow and rhythm.
Very understandable.
Portrays theme in depth but with brevity.
Liked it a lot.
September 10th, 2016 19:14
Augustus said:
Has a nice flow and rhythm.
Very understandable.
Portrays theme in depth but with brevity.
Liked it a lot.
September 10th, 2016 19:14
The Evil In Us All
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man..EVIL IS JUST LUVE SPELLED BACKWARD..THERE IS NO REASON TO FEAR SOMETHING WHICH HAS NOT HAD THE CHANCE TO HaRM U..YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE THAT DECISION..FEAR IS A PUSSY..A WEAK LITTLE COWARD PUSSY DEMON..I LOVED THIS BODY OF WORK AND IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN.IT DOES APPLY TO MANY..BUT SOMETHING IN MY INTUITIVE PROCESS TELLS ME THAT U ARE NOT ONE OF THAT FLOCK..I CAN TELL EVEN MORE SO BY ur reaction to my work and WHICH ONes STIRRED IN U WHAT RESPONSES..IN ANY EVENT BRUTHA..EXCELLENT JOB HERE...
September 10th, 2016 18:27
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Man..EVIL IS JUST LUVE SPELLED BACKWARD..THERE IS NO REASON TO FEAR SOMETHING WHICH HAS NOT HAD THE CHANCE TO HaRM U..YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE THAT DECISION..FEAR IS A PUSSY..A WEAK LITTLE COWARD PUSSY DEMON..I LOVED THIS BODY OF WORK AND IT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN.IT DOES APPLY TO MANY..BUT SOMETHING IN MY INTUITIVE PROCESS TELLS ME THAT U ARE NOT ONE OF THAT FLOCK..I CAN TELL EVEN MORE SO BY ur reaction to my work and WHICH ONes STIRRED IN U WHAT RESPONSES..IN ANY EVENT BRUTHA..EXCELLENT JOB HERE...
September 10th, 2016 18:27
The Evil In Us All
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true JEFF ~ Satan is a roaring LION seeking whom he may devour. Christians however are indwelt by the Holy Spirit of God and he is greaterr then SATAN ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
September 10th, 2016 14:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Very true JEFF ~ Satan is a roaring LION seeking whom he may devour. Christians however are indwelt by the Holy Spirit of God and he is greaterr then SATAN ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
September 10th, 2016 14:11
Love Is....
DamilareBizBoss said:
Nice on there bro, i like the writing pattern and i felt like it was me writing this cause i love the style... You are Real
September 9th, 2016 16:57
DamilareBizBoss said:
Nice on there bro, i like the writing pattern and i felt like it was me writing this cause i love the style... You are Real
September 9th, 2016 16:57
What If....
lysistrata said:
You are an Angel 😇 deep inside!!??
But What If,
You are faking?!😏
September 7th, 2016 09:46
lysistrata said:
You are an Angel 😇 deep inside!!??
But What If,
You are faking?!😏
September 7th, 2016 09:46
What If....
Tony36 said:
The world would be a much better place. Great write
September 7th, 2016 07:21
Tony36 said:
The world would be a much better place. Great write
September 7th, 2016 07:21
Hearts That Never Mend
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem is awesome Jeff. I really like it. Great flow, great imagery!
September 6th, 2016 07:55
P.X. Vexxus said:
This poem is awesome Jeff. I really like it. Great flow, great imagery!
September 6th, 2016 07:55
True Lies
DamilareBizBoss said:
Yeah, its a True Lie and i think its cool...
September 5th, 2016 17:31
DamilareBizBoss said:
Yeah, its a True Lie and i think its cool...
September 5th, 2016 17:31
Slipped Too Far Away
lysistrata said:
Having read all 4 of your Poems,I could honestly say...
Keep Writing & Trying New Subjects
September 4th, 2016 03:12
lysistrata said:
Having read all 4 of your Poems,I could honestly say...
Keep Writing & Trying New Subjects
September 4th, 2016 03:12
Warm Embrace
giantgentlebear said:
parallel lives-i almost feel the emotion running along each word -take care from England
September 3rd, 2016 03:16
giantgentlebear said:
parallel lives-i almost feel the emotion running along each word -take care from England
September 3rd, 2016 03:16
Goodbye
giantgentlebear said:
parallel lives-- poetry is the heart bleeding -thank god for words -thought provoking read --the bear
September 3rd, 2016 03:01
giantgentlebear said:
parallel lives-- poetry is the heart bleeding -thank god for words -thought provoking read --the bear
September 3rd, 2016 03:01
Warm Embrace
willyweed said:
good poem in form and structure.
I think we all feel this way once in a while. ww
September 2nd, 2016 19:23
willyweed said:
good poem in form and structure.
I think we all feel this way once in a while. ww
September 2nd, 2016 19:23
Goodbye
P.X. Vexxus said:
Another great poem. You have a great style of writing I can definitely follow. Even though the poems you write are sad, I wonder if you get the same relief I do when I write my poems...
September 1st, 2016 19:30
P.X. Vexxus said:
Another great poem. You have a great style of writing I can definitely follow. Even though the poems you write are sad, I wonder if you get the same relief I do when I write my poems...
September 1st, 2016 19:30
Only In My Dreams
P.X. Vexxus said:
I really like this poem. Your use of "near" rhymes makes the experience more unique. It's an especially sad poem, and I can definitely feel the emotion you portrayed within. I hope to read more of your poems.
September 1st, 2016 19:27
P.X. Vexxus said:
I really like this poem. Your use of "near" rhymes makes the experience more unique. It's an especially sad poem, and I can definitely feel the emotion you portrayed within. I hope to read more of your poems.
September 1st, 2016 19:27
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