Comments received on poems by Jeff
I Wish
Augustus said:
Jeff, you heartbreaker! Broken promises! All kidding aside, this is neat.
September 25th, 2016 15:29
Augustus said:
Jeff, you heartbreaker! Broken promises! All kidding aside, this is neat.
September 25th, 2016 15:29
Shadows In the Dark
ron parrish aka wordman said:
this is a great and profound write !
September 25th, 2016 14:57
ron parrish aka wordman said:
this is a great and profound write !
September 25th, 2016 14:57
Shadows In the Dark
notapoet said:
Wow! what an incredible write!! Flow structure and content pulls you right in and carries you through this amazing piece. Love your work.
September 25th, 2016 12:44
notapoet said:
Wow! what an incredible write!! Flow structure and content pulls you right in and carries you through this amazing piece. Love your work.
September 25th, 2016 12:44
I Wish
Anthony Lawrence said:
Amazing poem. It hit close to heart and I hope I can make all my wife's wishes and dreams come true.
September 25th, 2016 10:49
Anthony Lawrence said:
Amazing poem. It hit close to heart and I hope I can make all my wife's wishes and dreams come true.
September 25th, 2016 10:49
I Wish
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEFF it will ring a bell with many. Often after a relationship (which could have lasted much longer) ends we could all mirror your ~ I WISH ~ sentiments ! BRIAN
September 25th, 2016 10:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing JEFF it will ring a bell with many. Often after a relationship (which could have lasted much longer) ends we could all mirror your ~ I WISH ~ sentiments ! BRIAN
September 25th, 2016 10:22
Daily Struggles
WriteBeLight said:
I hope the Lord does not answer the plea because think of all of the great work you have left to write and we would miss! Wonderful, but sad, write.
September 24th, 2016 07:32
WriteBeLight said:
I hope the Lord does not answer the plea because think of all of the great work you have left to write and we would miss! Wonderful, but sad, write.
September 24th, 2016 07:32
Daily Struggles
Augustus said:
Another out of the park. Reading out loud initially I thought "demons I can't shake" would read better as 'can not shake'. But the way you have it works better with the following line---"tomorrow I will not wake". Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2016 19:18
Augustus said:
Another out of the park. Reading out loud initially I thought "demons I can't shake" would read better as 'can not shake'. But the way you have it works better with the following line---"tomorrow I will not wake". Thanks for sharing.
September 23rd, 2016 19:18
Goodbye
ShadedSorrow said:
obviously this was published a while ago, but somehow my readings led me to this poem. I actually cried while reading it. It is such an amazing poem.
September 21st, 2016 08:25
ShadedSorrow said:
obviously this was published a while ago, but somehow my readings led me to this poem. I actually cried while reading it. It is such an amazing poem.
September 21st, 2016 08:25
Sated
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This one is awesome man...Really like it a lot...I like how you escaped from your usual style and did something different here
September 18th, 2016 13:35
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This one is awesome man...Really like it a lot...I like how you escaped from your usual style and did something different here
September 18th, 2016 13:35
Sated
Augustus said:
Isn't it great to be noticed by someone whom you believe is special? Just makes your day.
September 16th, 2016 15:43
Augustus said:
Isn't it great to be noticed by someone whom you believe is special? Just makes your day.
September 16th, 2016 15:43
Just A Thought
notapoet said:
Wow! What a powerfully moving piece Jeff, really enjoy reading your work.
September 14th, 2016 08:08
notapoet said:
Wow! What a powerfully moving piece Jeff, really enjoy reading your work.
September 14th, 2016 08:08
Just A Thought
Augustus said:
Yes, embrace the hurt, pain and depression. Recognize these, feel them and allow them to pass through. Then do something positive and enhancing. Nicely done.
September 13th, 2016 18:17
Augustus said:
Yes, embrace the hurt, pain and depression. Recognize these, feel them and allow them to pass through. Then do something positive and enhancing. Nicely done.
September 13th, 2016 18:17
Just A Thought
taylerdk21 said:
oh my. it's dreadfully sad, yet wonderfully write. I felt an ache in my heart just reading it. you're an amazing poet and keep up the good work. :)
September 13th, 2016 14:48
taylerdk21 said:
oh my. it's dreadfully sad, yet wonderfully write. I felt an ache in my heart just reading it. you're an amazing poet and keep up the good work. :)
September 13th, 2016 14:48
I Found You
Augustus said:
You know I believe that tears of joy and pain actually are chemically different. Nice.
September 12th, 2016 18:41
Augustus said:
You know I believe that tears of joy and pain actually are chemically different. Nice.
September 12th, 2016 18:41
Painful Memory
petec said:
Very emotional. I've lost people close to me too and have also found a way to keep on. Writing certainly helps. Forever your fan.
September 11th, 2016 19:14
petec said:
Very emotional. I've lost people close to me too and have also found a way to keep on. Writing certainly helps. Forever your fan.
September 11th, 2016 19:14
Hearts That Never Mend
Jeff said:
It hasnt so far...just as painful as the day it happened. Thank you for commenting
September 11th, 2016 14:33
Jeff said:
It hasnt so far...just as painful as the day it happened. Thank you for commenting
September 11th, 2016 14:33
Hearts That Never Mend
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and i guess the pain will never leave.
September 11th, 2016 09:58
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and i guess the pain will never leave.
September 11th, 2016 09:58
Painful Memory
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no one knows when tragedy will hit,and no one is ever ready for it.
a poet on another site had his whole family killed,he was at work someone broke in and killed them all
September 11th, 2016 09:54
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no one knows when tragedy will hit,and no one is ever ready for it.
a poet on another site had his whole family killed,he was at work someone broke in and killed them all
September 11th, 2016 09:54
Painful Memory
Augustus said:
Powerful. Reassured to see one of your replies today. Reads well.
September 11th, 2016 09:06
Augustus said:
Powerful. Reassured to see one of your replies today. Reads well.
September 11th, 2016 09:06
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