Comments received on poems by Augustus



Searching Through Stillness
LAWLESS said:

Sleep well in the long night. Hope to see you again.

April 7th, 2018 23:51

Cancer Dying
Kurt Philip Behm said:

What a moving, questioning and powerful Poem. I\'m proud to call you my friend!

Kurt

February 15th, 2018 00:21

Searching Through Stillness
Samreen Chowdhury said:

Wow the imagery was powerful here!

September 7th, 2017 05:25

Searching Through Stillness
Gary Edward Geraci said:

So exhilarating to write that which only you were created to write Augustus and at the right moment..Right? I enjoy your alliteration and free verse.

August 7th, 2017 23:10

Searching Through Stillness
WriteBeLight said:

Hey Augustus! YOU are our MUSE! :)

August 1st, 2017 09:20

Good Bye Geoffrey
LAWLESS said:

We should never forget the ones we\'ve lost.

How are you doing? I hope that you are having better days.

July 31st, 2017 13:55

Searching Through Stillness
LAWLESS said:

\"not tonight.\" I weep.

July 17th, 2017 18:23

Searching Through Stillness
malubotelho said:

Awesome write Augustus. I see you like to write about love and fantasy too. This is what inspire me most. Thank you 😊

July 14th, 2017 07:47

Searching Through Stillness
Goldfinch60 said:

That muse can be so elusive sometimes but it was certainly with you when you wrote these words.

July 13th, 2017 01:05

Searching Through Stillness
LAWLESS said:

This reminds me of my favorite poem, \"Stillness\" by Robert Goslin. It is an important read for everyone in my opinion.

July 12th, 2017 19:22

Searching Through Stillness
Heather T said:

Oh, the elusive Muse. It\'s a virus that causes brain static, finger stiffness, and mental constipation. Now I want to weep, too. Love to you, Augustus.

July 12th, 2017 17:36

Searching Through Stillness
Christina8 said:

Great poem. Beautiful imagery!

July 12th, 2017 17:14

Searching Through Stillness
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s all been said. Just great.

July 12th, 2017 16:34

Searching Through Stillness
Louis Gibbs said:

\"Not tonight\", where have I heard that before?? Seriously though, this is a fascinating poem which I enjoyed and can certainly relate to as a poet. Thanks for sharing!

July 12th, 2017 16:13

Searching Through Stillness
kevin browne said:

superb verse my friend.

July 12th, 2017 15:43

Searching Through Stillness
P.H.Rose said:

Augustus this is
Just brilliant.....
Wonderful imagery
Beautiful.....

July 12th, 2017 15:13

Searching Through Stillness
Fay Slimm - - (real name) said:

Pulsing with atmosphere the verse flows toward such an inventive last line - waiting for Muse in the still of suspension is something I can relate to my friend. An excellent piece of work.

July 12th, 2017 15:08

Good Bye Geoffrey
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, my son was like this at one time in his life. We went and walked around a park for four hours and he spoke and I listened. He is fine now and in a great place in his life where he intends to stay.

July 11th, 2017 00:05

Good Bye Geoffrey
malubotelho said:

This is very sad and at the teenage we are very confused about our feelings and emotions. I confess that when I was for teen I tried to kill myself because I was sure about that if I died my father would feel really sorry and would stop drinking and beat my mother. I was saved on time and still here thinking how a twisted mind can feel. Anyways, I did not die and my dad did not stop drinking but I told him if he would keep being bad to my mother next time I would kill him. The terrible thing is that he always treated me in a very nice way.

July 10th, 2017 23:42

Good Bye Geoffrey
onepauly said:

this is sad

July 10th, 2017 21:41

Good Bye Geoffrey
P.H.Rose said:

Very good write Augustus
I really like this one..

July 10th, 2017 17:52

Good Bye Geoffrey
Michael Edwards said:

Sad yet superb -

July 10th, 2017 14:15

Good Bye Geoffrey
Louis Gibbs said:

I believe that some very brave souls bite off more than they can chew, and simply cannot see it through. Instead of suicide, my escape was dissociation, which robbed me only of part of this life, my childhood. I hold no judgment on those who took the route of suicide. This was a fine and touching poem, my friend.

July 10th, 2017 12:03

Good Bye Geoffrey
orchidee said:

Sensitive write Aug. I \'ve not experienced suicide \'close-up\' thankfully, but heard some harrowing true tales of self-harm. Gives me the shudders!
Very sad - a life hardly begun. Yet it\'s sad at any age too.


July 10th, 2017 11:52

Good Bye Geoffrey
Candlewitch said:

hello,

this is a tragedy. when I was a teen, I considered taking my own life... so I understand how it can happen. a good write, and it needed to be said.

*hugs, Cat

July 10th, 2017 11:11

Good Bye Geoffrey
niallprideaux said:

As someone who has witnessed a suicidal relative up close and personal, I relate to this to a certain extent. It\'s awful to witness. Great write x

July 10th, 2017 11:02

Good Bye Geoffrey
Nicholas Browning said:

Suicide is a delicate thing to state a view on in a public space. I don\'t agree with it, but I understand that sometimes, pain can be so great that it appears to be the only viable option. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

July 10th, 2017 10:27

Memories Tender
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

July 10th, 2017 00:26

Memories Tender
whisperingquill said:

I envision everything you wrote my friend astounding take a bow poet 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻. Such beauty can only be siphoned from the stars

July 9th, 2017 23:53

Memories Tender
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lovely words my friend

July 9th, 2017 19:02

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