Comments received on poems by Augustus



Our Fathers
ron parrish aka wordman said:

words of wisdom my friend

March 27th, 2017 22:05

Our Fathers
rrodriguez said:

The Lord\'s Prayer is great....

March 27th, 2017 19:51

Our Fathers
rrodriguez said:

Great adaptation Augustus. Great to see you again.

March 27th, 2017 19:50

Within
WriteBeLight said:

I get the sense this woman knows her strength, but questions whether she should use it. Maybe she is more afraid of that. Great writing Augustus!

March 27th, 2017 02:16

Within
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

March 27th, 2017 00:35

Carpe Diem
Garry said:

Nice poem. Im just past middle age and bits are starting to wear out. Even seizing a minute is a good thing to do.

March 26th, 2017 22:23

Within
MendedFences27 said:

The days of chivalry always seem so glamorous for women, when in truth, they were still being treated as property. Slowly they gained independence and now seem to rule the world. Great write about a time so honored in history. You have given it the temperament it deserves. The lady-like behavior of women in this time was only for the wealthy and powerful. The poor were merely slaves, dependent on Lords for protection. - Phil A.

March 26th, 2017 19:17

Within
Christina8 said:

So glad to hear from you! Love your poem! \"I see before me my armor but clay\" Love that line. Very descriptive throughout. Perfect picture to match!

March 26th, 2017 12:32

A While
Christina8 said:

Have always kept you in my prayers! Fight!

March 21st, 2017 14:05

A While
Goldfinch60 said:

May God protect you in the days to come. I will keep you in my prayers.

March 14th, 2017 01:47

A While
MendedFences27 said:

Best of luck. Hang in there. - Phil A.

March 13th, 2017 18:59

A While
Augustus said:

Thanks ww, if you are a praying sort of guy, I need a few prayers too.

March 13th, 2017 17:44

A While
willyweed said:

Good Luck my friend!

March 13th, 2017 17:40

Heart Pine
Samreen Chowdhury said:

I really like this

March 12th, 2017 19:18

Heart Pine
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. If only trees could talk, imagine the tales they could tell.

March 12th, 2017 13:16

Heart Pine
willyweed said:

we murder the trees just as sure as we murder one another without a second thought, and God weeps at our actions! sadly WW

March 12th, 2017 12:46

Heart Pine
rrodriguez said:

I took wrote a poem about tree. They\'re so majestic as the one on your pic. Your poem is so true and so on point. You\'ve grasp the essence of the tree in your expressions of questions of its existence. Trees are a blessing, but the way humanity is going, for how long will they be around? Great job, my friend.

March 12th, 2017 12:35

His Due
Goldfinch60 said:

The soul is the Spirit that is within the earthly body, once it is free from the body your Spirit is freed from the the Devil that was in the body. Good write.

March 12th, 2017 02:35

His Due
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m too much into realism to follow closely the philosophy discussed above but I still recognise a great piece of writing when I read it - and this is a great piece of writing.

March 12th, 2017 01:14

His Due
rrodriguez said:

Alright, boys, let\'s not get too philosophical. The thoughts express by Augustus are great and very poetic.

March 11th, 2017 21:51

His Due
MendedFences27 said:

Two halves to the same soul? I don\'t think the soul makes conscience decisions, it\'s the will of Man that does. It seems to me that there can but one soul (if any) within the human presence. More likely, would be the will of Man being torn between choices in life. A very brief, but thought-provoking piece. Well done. - Phil A.

March 11th, 2017 19:32

His Due
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 11th, 2017 14:59

His Due
willyweed said:

soul remains and returns its the body that dies and rots away new life new body soul collects sin and grace to be judged by soul itself time and time again. ww

March 11th, 2017 11:48

Where the Garden Grows
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I will be in that garden.

March 11th, 2017 01:48

Where the Garden Grows
MendedFences27 said:

A garden gives both beauty and nourishment, flowers and vegetables, and a caring heart does likewise. Beauty, in that it brings a smile to those in need, and nourishment of the emotional kind. a nice bit of writing, and I\'m sure it was born of a caring heart. Great poem. - Phil A.

March 10th, 2017 21:37

Where the Garden Grows
willyweed said:

Sounds a bit like this bug bitten burg we have here....a little?
Nice work my sweet elite poet! WW

March 10th, 2017 16:17

Where the Garden Grows
rrodriguez said:

Great job Augustus. I like your pic too.

March 10th, 2017 15:37

Where the Garden Grows
orchidee said:

A fine write A.

March 10th, 2017 14:53

Where the Garden Grows
kevin browne said:

oh this garden sounds like the Eden. great write my friend.

March 10th, 2017 14:33

Where the Garden Grows
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

March 10th, 2017 14:18



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