Comments received on poems by Augustus
Try to Run
orchidee said:
Oohhh apart from all that, they were having a wonderful time, if it was fictional. Sadly it isn\'t so. Good write on a serious theme though.
March 10th, 2017 03:00
orchidee said:
Oohhh apart from all that, they were having a wonderful time, if it was fictional. Sadly it isn\'t so. Good write on a serious theme though.
March 10th, 2017 03:00
Try to Run
kevin browne said:
first hand experience with this poem. just like many of us do. always a relief to know someone is beside us. thank you for just that, Augustus. hurtful but a brilliant wake up call to others...!
March 9th, 2017 13:49
kevin browne said:
first hand experience with this poem. just like many of us do. always a relief to know someone is beside us. thank you for just that, Augustus. hurtful but a brilliant wake up call to others...!
March 9th, 2017 13:49
Try to Run
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i know the pain all to well for the scars will be with me forever good write
March 9th, 2017 13:39
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i know the pain all to well for the scars will be with me forever good write
March 9th, 2017 13:39
Try to Run
WriteBeLight said:
Great job bringing forth the harsh, horrible state of being abused.
March 9th, 2017 13:36
WriteBeLight said:
Great job bringing forth the harsh, horrible state of being abused.
March 9th, 2017 13:36
Openess
MendedFences27 said:
Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and almost a prayer. Nice one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 18:12
MendedFences27 said:
Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and almost a prayer. Nice one. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 18:12
Dream Gently
Natashalovely678 said:
Aww,this was a delight to read.A
very,very, very, sweet poem you have written
March 6th, 2017 15:42
Natashalovely678 said:
Aww,this was a delight to read.A
very,very, very, sweet poem you have written
March 6th, 2017 15:42
Dream Gently
Michael Edwards said:
Sublime piece - full of good feeling to cheer us all up. Thanks for posting it.
March 6th, 2017 13:39
Michael Edwards said:
Sublime piece - full of good feeling to cheer us all up. Thanks for posting it.
March 6th, 2017 13:39
Dream Gently
Byepolarbear said:
sorry I meant to send this article on poetry
https://www.authorspublish.com/3-obvious-mistakes-new-poets-make/
March 6th, 2017 12:04
Byepolarbear said:
sorry I meant to send this article on poetry
https://www.authorspublish.com/3-obvious-mistakes-new-poets-make/
March 6th, 2017 12:04
Dream Gently
Byepolarbear said:
Very nice poem. You may find this interesting, hope it helps.
March 6th, 2017 12:04
Byepolarbear said:
Very nice poem. You may find this interesting, hope it helps.
March 6th, 2017 12:04
Carpe Diem
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Augustus. You are a tough cookie, for sure.
March 6th, 2017 00:32
WriteBeLight said:
Great job Augustus. You are a tough cookie, for sure.
March 6th, 2017 00:32
Carpe Diem
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Every moment of our lives is important.
March 5th, 2017 11:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Every moment of our lives is important.
March 5th, 2017 11:13
Carpe Diem
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant play on the title words - - shame that pain and its bedmates stand in the way of seizing each day - -a heart-wrenching but well written read.
March 5th, 2017 10:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant play on the title words - - shame that pain and its bedmates stand in the way of seizing each day - -a heart-wrenching but well written read.
March 5th, 2017 10:46
Carpe Diem
willyweed said:
but then again you are not weak at heart or anywhere else for that matter?
Funny man, good poem and nice try!
March 5th, 2017 10:35
willyweed said:
but then again you are not weak at heart or anywhere else for that matter?
Funny man, good poem and nice try!
March 5th, 2017 10:35
Sales
MendedFences27 said:
Forced by Nature to, once again, adapt. Something we\'ve done all of our lives, from childhood, to young adult, to married , to with-children, to middle age, to elder. Now another adjustment means parting with old friends ( such is our collections of junk ) and it is troubling. If we stay focus to making the transition all will be well. A great expression of the sorrow at losing those things that we have clung to our entire lives. Nice one. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:20
MendedFences27 said:
Forced by Nature to, once again, adapt. Something we\'ve done all of our lives, from childhood, to young adult, to married , to with-children, to middle age, to elder. Now another adjustment means parting with old friends ( such is our collections of junk ) and it is troubling. If we stay focus to making the transition all will be well. A great expression of the sorrow at losing those things that we have clung to our entire lives. Nice one. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:20
Sales
rrodriguez said:
No harm done, just a sense of detachment from the material things. So now what\'s left is you in all its essence. Great write my friend. You\'ve done well.
March 4th, 2017 14:15
rrodriguez said:
No harm done, just a sense of detachment from the material things. So now what\'s left is you in all its essence. Great write my friend. You\'ve done well.
March 4th, 2017 14:15
Sales
willyweed said:
Only the love you have sown, will you reap in the harvest of the spheres ?
I see you are not a material girl! WW
March 4th, 2017 12:05
willyweed said:
Only the love you have sown, will you reap in the harvest of the spheres ?
I see you are not a material girl! WW
March 4th, 2017 12:05
Yearning to Sail
kevin browne said:
sailing on the seven seas so blue is very fitting for this lovely sea poem. nice one Augustus.
March 4th, 2017 00:08
kevin browne said:
sailing on the seven seas so blue is very fitting for this lovely sea poem. nice one Augustus.
March 4th, 2017 00:08
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