Comments received on poems by Augustus



Where the Garden Grows
WriteBeLight said:

Lovely Augustus!

March 10th, 2017 12:40

Where the Garden Grows
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great write! Oh that we could all enter that garden and never leave. I hold out hope as I have found my garden, despite the struggle it has been to get to it!

March 10th, 2017 12:22

Try to Run
P.X. Vexxus said:

Wow, great story. I really enjoyed the use and placement of words within this poem. Cheers friend. :)

March 10th, 2017 04:24

Try to Run
orchidee said:

Oohhh apart from all that, they were having a wonderful time, if it was fictional. Sadly it isn\'t so. Good write on a serious theme though.

March 10th, 2017 03:00

Try to Run
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotion filled write.

March 10th, 2017 02:00

Try to Run
kevin browne said:

first hand experience with this poem. just like many of us do. always a relief to know someone is beside us. thank you for just that, Augustus. hurtful but a brilliant wake up call to others...!

March 9th, 2017 13:49

Try to Run
SorrowfullyHappy said:

i know the pain all to well for the scars will be with me forever good write


March 9th, 2017 13:39

Try to Run
WriteBeLight said:

Great job bringing forth the harsh, horrible state of being abused.

March 9th, 2017 13:36

Openess
MendedFences27 said:

Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and almost a prayer. Nice one. - Phil A.

March 7th, 2017 18:12

Openess
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

March 7th, 2017 12:38

Openess
WriteBeLight said:

We will catch you Augustus!

March 7th, 2017 12:18

Openess
Michael Edwards said:

Short but oh so effective - good \'un Augustus.

March 7th, 2017 11:45

Openess
willyweed said:

wonderful message here Augustus, very nice!

March 7th, 2017 11:25

Openess
orchidee said:

Good write.

March 7th, 2017 10:53

Dream Gently
WriteBeLight said:

Baaaa Baaaa Love yaaaa poem! :)

March 6th, 2017 16:29

Dream Gently
Natashalovely678 said:

Aww,this was a delight to read.A
very,very, very, sweet poem you have written

March 6th, 2017 15:42

Dream Gently
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 6th, 2017 15:09

Dream Gently
willyweed said:

dream on this one lends a good vibe!

March 6th, 2017 14:13

Dream Gently
Michael Edwards said:

Sublime piece - full of good feeling to cheer us all up. Thanks for posting it.

March 6th, 2017 13:39

Dream Gently
Byepolarbear said:

sorry I meant to send this article on poetry
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March 6th, 2017 12:04

Dream Gently
Byepolarbear said:

Very nice poem. You may find this interesting, hope it helps.

March 6th, 2017 12:04

Carpe Diem
WriteBeLight said:

Great job Augustus. You are a tough cookie, for sure.

March 6th, 2017 00:32

Carpe Diem
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Every moment of our lives is important.

March 5th, 2017 11:13

Carpe Diem
Fay Slimm. said:

A poignant play on the title words - - shame that pain and its bedmates stand in the way of seizing each day - -a heart-wrenching but well written read.

March 5th, 2017 10:46

Carpe Diem
willyweed said:

but then again you are not weak at heart or anywhere else for that matter?
Funny man, good poem and nice try!

March 5th, 2017 10:35

Sales
Augustus said:

Some things are involuntary, like my urine. LOL. Thanks.

March 5th, 2017 10:30

Sales
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. At sometime we must all let go.

March 5th, 2017 01:36

Sales
MendedFences27 said:

Forced by Nature to, once again, adapt. Something we\'ve done all of our lives, from childhood, to young adult, to married , to with-children, to middle age, to elder. Now another adjustment means parting with old friends ( such is our collections of junk ) and it is troubling. If we stay focus to making the transition all will be well. A great expression of the sorrow at losing those things that we have clung to our entire lives. Nice one. - Phil A.

March 4th, 2017 20:20

Sales
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

March 4th, 2017 18:15

Sales
rrodriguez said:

No harm done, just a sense of detachment from the material things. So now what\'s left is you in all its essence. Great write my friend. You\'ve done well.

March 4th, 2017 14:15



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