Comments received on poems by Augustus



Sales
Michael Edwards said:

No harm at all - an intriguing read.

March 4th, 2017 12:56

Sales
willyweed said:

Only the love you have sown, will you reap in the harvest of the spheres ?
I see you are not a material girl! WW

March 4th, 2017 12:05

Yearning to Sail
kevin browne said:

sailing on the seven seas so blue is very fitting for this lovely sea poem. nice one Augustus.

March 4th, 2017 00:08

Yearning to Sail
MendedFences27 said:

Thought that photo might have been of the \"Eagle.\" U.S. Coast Guard training ship, but I see now it\'s not, it\'s the Sea Cloud II. Nice poem about the call of the sea. It is in some people\'s blood it seems, and they will do anything to be upon it. Nice write. - Phil A.

March 3rd, 2017 21:53

Yearning to Sail
willyweed said:

I\'ll man the poop deck Skipper, weight anchor ..ship to shore port side make a head call? man over board sailing sailing o\'er the ocean blue Popeye Aye capt\'n raise the jolly roger we sail at dawn batten down them hatches well blow me down good seafaring poem commander?

March 3rd, 2017 14:44

Yearning to Sail
Christina8 said:

I hope you get your wish to sail! Very nice poem.--Christina

March 3rd, 2017 14:21

Yearning to Sail
Goldfinch60 said:

\"I must go down to the sea again,
To the lonely sea and the sky \"

Good write and may the wind be in your sails and the sea remain calm.

March 3rd, 2017 14:05

Yearning to Sail
rrodriguez said:

Yes, this is beautiful...I yearn to sail in my Puerto Rico with its clear blue Caribbean Sea... enjoyed it.

March 3rd, 2017 13:50

Yearning to Sail
WriteBeLight said:

I have sailed on a 24 foot, full-keel sailboat. There is nothing like the freedom of being on the ocean, in great weather, of course. Great work Augustus. I am wishing for Summer!

March 3rd, 2017 13:35

Yearning to Sail
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m there with the salt wind in my face - super stuff.

March 3rd, 2017 11:53

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
Hopey_xx said:

Love it!

March 2nd, 2017 14:07

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
willyweed said:

There is only one star here and it be U .

March 2nd, 2017 14:05

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
Goldfinch60 said:

Oops ellipsoidal.

March 2nd, 2017 13:42

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, love the line \"lovers in an elipsoidal dance\"

March 2nd, 2017 13:42

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
MendedFences27 said:

It appears the universe offers up endless possibilities, not just scientific discoveries, but art, as in the Hubble photos, but now dance. Can the social contact be closer than we expected? Intriguing subject, great presentation, loved it. - Phil A.

March 2nd, 2017 13:39

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
myinnervoice said:

I had to look up several words but I love how it seems like you challenge yourself with every new poem.

March 2nd, 2017 12:42

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
orchidee said:

A fine write B.

March 2nd, 2017 12:12

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
WriteBeLight said:

So very clever Augustus and beautifully written.

March 2nd, 2017 12:03

\"Heart Beat Stars\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing \"A\" ~ of course STARS have hearts (even Lady GAGA !) I love having an ECG because it enables me to see the regular beeting of my heart ~ and to be reassured all is well. Our 7.3 billion heart beats are global & universal ! So it should not surprise us that our Stars beat in empathy ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN

March 2nd, 2017 11:22

Lost
MendedFences27 said:

No stars? Scary thought. What would happen? Absolute chaos. And I think we all die. But you bring up some great philosophical quandaries that would occur. No universe, no sun, or moon, I think we\'d all go nuts. - Phil A.

March 1st, 2017 21:38

Lost
P.X. Vexxus said:

I\'ve often wondered about what would happen if the sun were to go out, never to rise. Or should the moon fall out of orbit and leave us to wander in the dark at night. It\'s amazing how things beyond our control, are the most enticing to understand. The mysteries of space, and the earth are endless. Thanks for a thought provoking piece. P.S. I plan on being on the site more often now, so I look forward to some more of your writes, just as you have always read mine :)

March 1st, 2017 20:49

Lost
WriteBeLight said:

Awesome are the stars on a dark Summer night. That is what I feel. I do enjoy seeing the Winter night starry sky as well. Nice subject matter Augustus!

March 1st, 2017 17:55

Lost
TomLovesey said:

This is a wonderful poem

March 1st, 2017 16:00

Lost
Michael Edwards said:

Quite scary but loved the poem

March 1st, 2017 13:20

Lost
SorrowfullyHappy said:

Beautiful and it makes you think keep up the good work

March 1st, 2017 13:15

Lost
willyweed said:

I hope that never happens sounds scary. But you did it well. love the picture of nothing I knew it was going to be scary when I saw that nothing there Whoa! dude good work! ww

March 1st, 2017 13:01

Lost
Hopey_xx said:

Beautifully written- well done

March 1st, 2017 12:14

Doubt Revisited
Goldfinch60 said:

Without doubt we would not make the right decision in many cases. Good write.

March 1st, 2017 01:49

Doubt Revisited
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

The MAN who never doubted anything ~ never achieved anything ! BRIAN

February 28th, 2017 17:44

Doubt Revisited
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 28th, 2017 13:23

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