Comments received on poems by boricuamami222
flipped script
Cheeky Missy said:
Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider this as merely a piece of writing; nonetheless, it is distasteful. You excellently expressed the situation.....yet perhaps cut the offender some slack, they are no less selfish than you, and fooling themselves in thinking they are your "best friend"....maybe?
February 3rd, 2011 12:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider this as merely a piece of writing; nonetheless, it is distasteful. You excellently expressed the situation.....yet perhaps cut the offender some slack, they are no less selfish than you, and fooling themselves in thinking they are your "best friend"....maybe?
February 3rd, 2011 12:14
never ending nightmare
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? Her lover died? The heartbreak is excellently expressed as such...title and all. Great job!
January 29th, 2011 00:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? Her lover died? The heartbreak is excellently expressed as such...title and all. Great job!
January 29th, 2011 00:35
blown
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...and unappetizingly, yet aptly, vulgar. I like how you so very well depicted the situation again. It is a rotten scene....yet a true picture, I rather think Your categorization of it was fitting, I think.
January 27th, 2011 11:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating...and unappetizingly, yet aptly, vulgar. I like how you so very well depicted the situation again. It is a rotten scene....yet a true picture, I rather think Your categorization of it was fitting, I think.
January 27th, 2011 11:55
puddle of blood
Cheeky Missy said:
You've expressed the depressed mentality very well in this imaginary depiction. Interestingly, when we are sucking our thumbs like this, selfishly feeling unloved and justified, we are generally proved right as your line so well says, that nobody begs us to stay; and if dying were so easy, how many of us would still be here? I rather think it is our pride thus destroying us, demanding we be honored more than we are or should be....preferring total self-destruction to the truth. You excellently depicted the situation!
January 27th, 2011 11:50
Cheeky Missy said:
You've expressed the depressed mentality very well in this imaginary depiction. Interestingly, when we are sucking our thumbs like this, selfishly feeling unloved and justified, we are generally proved right as your line so well says, that nobody begs us to stay; and if dying were so easy, how many of us would still be here? I rather think it is our pride thus destroying us, demanding we be honored more than we are or should be....preferring total self-destruction to the truth. You excellently depicted the situation!
January 27th, 2011 11:50
pain
Cheeky Missy said:
Again, you've excellently depicted the misery and hopelessness at all the evil. Great job!
January 26th, 2011 00:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Again, you've excellently depicted the misery and hopelessness at all the evil. Great job!
January 26th, 2011 00:07
coldness
Cheeky Missy said:
It is VERY sad.....horribly so. You excellently depicted the miserable condition with your metaphors/symbolism. Perfect.....excellent! Dreadfully hopeless....like a forlorn cry from a forsaken dark corner of the dungeon.....as the rats close in.....make me shiver!
January 25th, 2011 23:58
Cheeky Missy said:
It is VERY sad.....horribly so. You excellently depicted the miserable condition with your metaphors/symbolism. Perfect.....excellent! Dreadfully hopeless....like a forlorn cry from a forsaken dark corner of the dungeon.....as the rats close in.....make me shiver!
January 25th, 2011 23:58
pain
Marius said:
A feeling of desperation, sadness and exasperation beautifully redacted here.
January 25th, 2011 17:09
Marius said:
A feeling of desperation, sadness and exasperation beautifully redacted here.
January 25th, 2011 17:09
no hope
Cheeky Missy said:
If it is merely a poem....excellent! The title is so fitting for the hopelessness the poem so perfectly depicts. If it is reality...again, not to answer lightly, that is what the Lord says of all of us before He saves us...."having no hope and without God in the world..." In Him alone do we find Hope and life to face the misery and hopelessness driving on towards death. I wish I could comfort the speaker.
January 24th, 2011 00:48
Cheeky Missy said:
If it is merely a poem....excellent! The title is so fitting for the hopelessness the poem so perfectly depicts. If it is reality...again, not to answer lightly, that is what the Lord says of all of us before He saves us...."having no hope and without God in the world..." In Him alone do we find Hope and life to face the misery and hopelessness driving on towards death. I wish I could comfort the speaker.
January 24th, 2011 00:48
