Comments received on poems by Emile Dubois
In The Flatlands Of The Soul
Cheeky Missy said:
The carrot before the ass, hung just out of reach to keep him chasing forever what he never could attain. And yet we were born to run, but not in vain. Ergo the question begs the answer which is not so elusive as we like to claim. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and superb imagery.
December 12th, 2024 02:10
Cheeky Missy said:
The carrot before the ass, hung just out of reach to keep him chasing forever what he never could attain. And yet we were born to run, but not in vain. Ergo the question begs the answer which is not so elusive as we like to claim. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and superb imagery.
December 12th, 2024 02:10
In The Flatlands Of The Soul
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting and enjoyable read, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 16:55
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting and enjoyable read, Thank you
December 11th, 2024 16:55
In The Flatlands Of The Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful expression of the yearning we all have for things of no value. Time is so short and we look for what is not. Is it any wonder that we never find it? A wonderful poem
December 11th, 2024 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful expression of the yearning we all have for things of no value. Time is so short and we look for what is not. Is it any wonder that we never find it? A wonderful poem
December 11th, 2024 16:01
In The Flatlands Of The Soul
Lorenz said:
Adieu l\'Emile je t\'aimais bien
Adieu l\'Emile je t\'aimais bien, tu sais ...
December 11th, 2024 14:38
Lorenz said:
Adieu l\'Emile je t\'aimais bien
Adieu l\'Emile je t\'aimais bien, tu sais ...
December 11th, 2024 14:38
And yet there was nothing I could do.
L. B. Mek said:
how well you\'ve worded
that feeling of inadequacy, in the face: of fated certainty...!
still, if you\'re penning these poignant reminiscing\'s
then you\'re the survivor: entrusted
to share and enlighten, engaging and encouraging
whispering that message, so few have learnt to heed!
that our breath is fleeting
blinking - is a past event, waiting
and life, is the now: in all that we have left
to partake - in...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
how well you\'ve worded
that feeling of inadequacy, in the face: of fated certainty...!
still, if you\'re penning these poignant reminiscing\'s
then you\'re the survivor: entrusted
to share and enlighten, engaging and encouraging
whispering that message, so few have learnt to heed!
that our breath is fleeting
blinking - is a past event, waiting
and life, is the now: in all that we have left
to partake - in...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2021 04:32
And yet there was nothing I could do.
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully sad. I love this poem
June 3rd, 2021 00:34
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully sad. I love this poem
June 3rd, 2021 00:34
And yet there was nothing I could do.
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.
Captures in very real terms the wait, the turmoil and impotence attending the loss in such a close relationship, with also due focus on the terminally ill sufferer.
I cannot like this work – it bought too much to the surface for me.
It is, however powerful and accurate from my perspective – so thanks.
June 2nd, 2021 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.
Captures in very real terms the wait, the turmoil and impotence attending the loss in such a close relationship, with also due focus on the terminally ill sufferer.
I cannot like this work – it bought too much to the surface for me.
It is, however powerful and accurate from my perspective – so thanks.
June 2nd, 2021 19:45
I\'m sorry for all the things I ever did
olivergreenwood20 said:
I love this so much! I feel like everyone can relate to this!
June 29th, 2018 10:34
olivergreenwood20 said:
I love this so much! I feel like everyone can relate to this!
June 29th, 2018 10:34
For the disaffected
Nicholas Browning said:
Always remember that your humanity isn\'t intertwined with everyone else\'s. If you hold within yourself the willpower and dedication, you will never be corrupted by the way this world turns. You might become a little numb though. Small price to pay if ya\' ask me.
March 14th, 2018 06:55
Nicholas Browning said:
Always remember that your humanity isn\'t intertwined with everyone else\'s. If you hold within yourself the willpower and dedication, you will never be corrupted by the way this world turns. You might become a little numb though. Small price to pay if ya\' ask me.
March 14th, 2018 06:55
Love
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ... sums it up beautifully! What else need be said? Fine poem, Emile.
September 28th, 2017 09:24
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ... sums it up beautifully! What else need be said? Fine poem, Emile.
September 28th, 2017 09:24
Love
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I think we get a little slice of heaven when we experience true love. Like you say in your last two lines. Finally, \"everything that is pure\". Awesome.
September 28th, 2017 09:00
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I think we get a little slice of heaven when we experience true love. Like you say in your last two lines. Finally, \"everything that is pure\". Awesome.
September 28th, 2017 09:00
What if I told you?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07
What if I told you?
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very true. I think about these things every day. I personally believe most of this to be the truth. It\'s all an idiot\'s parade, and we\'re the jugglers. Wonderfully done. Keep it up.
August 14th, 2017 06:49
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very true. I think about these things every day. I personally believe most of this to be the truth. It\'s all an idiot\'s parade, and we\'re the jugglers. Wonderfully done. Keep it up.
August 14th, 2017 06:49
What if I told you?
camille said:
Tremendously written and candidly honest .. yes we must all awaken from this stupor and open our eyes .. the truth is there ..
C x
August 14th, 2017 05:50
camille said:
Tremendously written and candidly honest .. yes we must all awaken from this stupor and open our eyes .. the truth is there ..
C x
August 14th, 2017 05:50
Don\'t talk to me about Israel
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a bad situation in the mid east,tragedy that touches everybody
July 23rd, 2017 10:31
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a bad situation in the mid east,tragedy that touches everybody
July 23rd, 2017 10:31
Don\'t talk to me about Israel
Emile Dubois said:
Take a look at @ma000111\'s Tweet: https://twitter.com/ma000111/status/889106035864203264?s=09
July 23rd, 2017 08:38
Emile Dubois said:
Take a look at @ma000111\'s Tweet: https://twitter.com/ma000111/status/889106035864203264?s=09
July 23rd, 2017 08:38
Crimes in Palestine
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is not doing wrong.
July 19th, 2017 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is not doing wrong.
July 19th, 2017 00:38
We love who we love
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 07:59
We love who we love
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
this is inspiring and definitely publishable. you should think about submitting this to maybe bring future peace to the world eventually.
July 17th, 2017 07:54
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
this is inspiring and definitely publishable. you should think about submitting this to maybe bring future peace to the world eventually.
July 17th, 2017 07:54
When it was gone
malubotelho said:
I love your poem. Beautiful arrangement, and I love the end of it. Clever. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2017 07:34
malubotelho said:
I love your poem. Beautiful arrangement, and I love the end of it. Clever. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2017 07:34
The survivors
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on soul. Must quote that final enlightening line as truth wrapped in poetic expression - \"To exist as a survivor without a connection with soul
Is to be a victim of all\" - - Wisdom indeed. Do keep sharing these thoughts.
July 6th, 2017 14:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on soul. Must quote that final enlightening line as truth wrapped in poetic expression - \"To exist as a survivor without a connection with soul
Is to be a victim of all\" - - Wisdom indeed. Do keep sharing these thoughts.
July 6th, 2017 14:38
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