Comments received on poems by Emile Dubois
And yet there was nothing I could do.
L. B. Mek said:
how well you\'ve worded
that feeling of inadequacy, in the face: of fated certainty...!
still, if you\'re penning these poignant reminiscing\'s
then you\'re the survivor: entrusted
to share and enlighten, engaging and encouraging
whispering that message, so few have learnt to heed!
that our breath is fleeting
blinking - is a past event, waiting
and life, is the now: in all that we have left
to partake - in...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
how well you\'ve worded
that feeling of inadequacy, in the face: of fated certainty...!
still, if you\'re penning these poignant reminiscing\'s
then you\'re the survivor: entrusted
to share and enlighten, engaging and encouraging
whispering that message, so few have learnt to heed!
that our breath is fleeting
blinking - is a past event, waiting
and life, is the now: in all that we have left
to partake - in...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 3rd, 2021 04:32
And yet there was nothing I could do.
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully sad. I love this poem
June 3rd, 2021 00:34
Saxon Crow said:
Beautifully sad. I love this poem
June 3rd, 2021 00:34
And yet there was nothing I could do.
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.
Captures in very real terms the wait, the turmoil and impotence attending the loss in such a close relationship, with also due focus on the terminally ill sufferer.
I cannot like this work – it bought too much to the surface for me.
It is, however powerful and accurate from my perspective – so thanks.
June 2nd, 2021 19:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely.
Captures in very real terms the wait, the turmoil and impotence attending the loss in such a close relationship, with also due focus on the terminally ill sufferer.
I cannot like this work – it bought too much to the surface for me.
It is, however powerful and accurate from my perspective – so thanks.
June 2nd, 2021 19:45
I\'m sorry for all the things I ever did
olivergreenwood20 said:
I love this so much! I feel like everyone can relate to this!
June 29th, 2018 10:34
olivergreenwood20 said:
I love this so much! I feel like everyone can relate to this!
June 29th, 2018 10:34
For the disaffected
Nicholas Browning said:
Always remember that your humanity isn\'t intertwined with everyone else\'s. If you hold within yourself the willpower and dedication, you will never be corrupted by the way this world turns. You might become a little numb though. Small price to pay if ya\' ask me.
March 14th, 2018 06:55
Nicholas Browning said:
Always remember that your humanity isn\'t intertwined with everyone else\'s. If you hold within yourself the willpower and dedication, you will never be corrupted by the way this world turns. You might become a little numb though. Small price to pay if ya\' ask me.
March 14th, 2018 06:55
Love
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ... sums it up beautifully! What else need be said? Fine poem, Emile.
September 28th, 2017 09:24
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ... sums it up beautifully! What else need be said? Fine poem, Emile.
September 28th, 2017 09:24
Love
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I think we get a little slice of heaven when we experience true love. Like you say in your last two lines. Finally, \"everything that is pure\". Awesome.
September 28th, 2017 09:00
Christina8 said:
Great poem! I think we get a little slice of heaven when we experience true love. Like you say in your last two lines. Finally, \"everything that is pure\". Awesome.
September 28th, 2017 09:00
What if I told you?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07
What if I told you?
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very true. I think about these things every day. I personally believe most of this to be the truth. It\'s all an idiot\'s parade, and we\'re the jugglers. Wonderfully done. Keep it up.
August 14th, 2017 06:49
Nicholas Browning said:
This is very true. I think about these things every day. I personally believe most of this to be the truth. It\'s all an idiot\'s parade, and we\'re the jugglers. Wonderfully done. Keep it up.
August 14th, 2017 06:49
What if I told you?
camille said:
Tremendously written and candidly honest .. yes we must all awaken from this stupor and open our eyes .. the truth is there ..
C x
August 14th, 2017 05:50
camille said:
Tremendously written and candidly honest .. yes we must all awaken from this stupor and open our eyes .. the truth is there ..
C x
August 14th, 2017 05:50
Don\'t talk to me about Israel
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a bad situation in the mid east,tragedy that touches everybody
July 23rd, 2017 10:31
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a bad situation in the mid east,tragedy that touches everybody
July 23rd, 2017 10:31
Don\'t talk to me about Israel
Emile Dubois said:
Take a look at @ma000111\'s Tweet: https://twitter.com/ma000111/status/889106035864203264?s=09
July 23rd, 2017 08:38
Emile Dubois said:
Take a look at @ma000111\'s Tweet: https://twitter.com/ma000111/status/889106035864203264?s=09
July 23rd, 2017 08:38
Crimes in Palestine
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is not doing wrong.
July 19th, 2017 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with what you say, why does the world seem to think that Israel is not doing wrong.
July 19th, 2017 00:38
We love who we love
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 07:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true, the last line is so right. Good write.
July 17th, 2017 07:59
We love who we love
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
this is inspiring and definitely publishable. you should think about submitting this to maybe bring future peace to the world eventually.
July 17th, 2017 07:54
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
this is inspiring and definitely publishable. you should think about submitting this to maybe bring future peace to the world eventually.
July 17th, 2017 07:54
When it was gone
malubotelho said:
I love your poem. Beautiful arrangement, and I love the end of it. Clever. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2017 07:34
malubotelho said:
I love your poem. Beautiful arrangement, and I love the end of it. Clever. Thanks for sharing.
July 16th, 2017 07:34
The survivors
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on soul. Must quote that final enlightening line as truth wrapped in poetic expression - \"To exist as a survivor without a connection with soul
Is to be a victim of all\" - - Wisdom indeed. Do keep sharing these thoughts.
July 6th, 2017 14:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on soul. Must quote that final enlightening line as truth wrapped in poetic expression - \"To exist as a survivor without a connection with soul
Is to be a victim of all\" - - Wisdom indeed. Do keep sharing these thoughts.
July 6th, 2017 14:38
Flow Without Flow
Emile Dubois said:
Thank you for your reflection. Much respect
July 6th, 2017 14:35
Emile Dubois said:
Thank you for your reflection. Much respect
July 6th, 2017 14:35
Flow Without Flow
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever expressions on an overripe fruit and with so much food for later thought. Great read Emile.
July 6th, 2017 14:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Clever expressions on an overripe fruit and with so much food for later thought. Great read Emile.
July 6th, 2017 14:33
Flow Without Flow
FredPeyer said:
Ina quest to feel something I over thought.... We over think, we over do, we over correct, we over edit. And then we sit there wondering....
Enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you!
July 4th, 2017 21:30
FredPeyer said:
Ina quest to feel something I over thought.... We over think, we over do, we over correct, we over edit. And then we sit there wondering....
Enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you!
July 4th, 2017 21:30
Flow Without Flow
Poetic Dan said:
Wow you\'ve just captured the very moment I\'m in. I shall read again and reflect on this, thank you.
July 4th, 2017 16:16
Poetic Dan said:
Wow you\'ve just captured the very moment I\'m in. I shall read again and reflect on this, thank you.
July 4th, 2017 16:16
The survivors
Louis Gibbs said:
Well stated, insightful message poem. Kudos, Emile!
June 24th, 2017 09:51
Louis Gibbs said:
Well stated, insightful message poem. Kudos, Emile!
June 24th, 2017 09:51
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