Comments received on poems by The Dyslexic Poet
A shell of a woman..
Augustus said:
Delightful description of a lover\'s passion.
November 14th, 2016 19:09
Augustus said:
Delightful description of a lover\'s passion.
November 14th, 2016 19:09
My ribs are a cage, a cage for my heart.
vanabba3 said:
Taking that first step does make you vulnerable, but at the same time... you can always take that chance, and maybe it is meant to be. Great job!
October 8th, 2016 20:41
vanabba3 said:
Taking that first step does make you vulnerable, but at the same time... you can always take that chance, and maybe it is meant to be. Great job!
October 8th, 2016 20:41
Bullied..
vanabba3 said:
Wow! Haven't seen such a strong heartfelt poem on this topic before. It should be posted in schools across the U.S. since bullying is so widespread and although all these measures to post signs saying "no bullying", it still happens and worse when you try to defend yourself... Great work!
October 8th, 2016 20:38
vanabba3 said:
Wow! Haven't seen such a strong heartfelt poem on this topic before. It should be posted in schools across the U.S. since bullying is so widespread and although all these measures to post signs saying "no bullying", it still happens and worse when you try to defend yourself... Great work!
October 8th, 2016 20:38
Amazing love, how can this be?
The Dyslexic Poet said:
Sure will do, glad you liked it! X
October 2nd, 2016 07:18
The Dyslexic Poet said:
Sure will do, glad you liked it! X
October 2nd, 2016 07:18
Amazing love, how can this be?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your TESTIMONY TDP Amazing LOVE indeed and Amazing GRACE as well ~ Beautiful poem ~ encouraging words ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems thanks B
October 2nd, 2016 07:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your TESTIMONY TDP Amazing LOVE indeed and Amazing GRACE as well ~ Beautiful poem ~ encouraging words ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems thanks B
October 2nd, 2016 07:16
My ribs are a cage, a cage for my heart.
The Dyslexic Poet said:
Thanks Augustus xx
October 2nd, 2016 06:29
The Dyslexic Poet said:
Thanks Augustus xx
October 2nd, 2016 06:29
My ribs are a cage, a cage for my heart.
Augustus said:
I could picture a heart in a rib cage and it's struggles. Nice.
October 1st, 2016 22:12
Augustus said:
I could picture a heart in a rib cage and it's struggles. Nice.
October 1st, 2016 22:12
My ribs are a cage, a cage for my heart.
P.X. Vexxus said:
Let the poem be your guide. It will show you the way. Only action will change your life. Watching opportunities pass by will only break your heart. Great read, I liked it.
October 1st, 2016 14:54
P.X. Vexxus said:
Let the poem be your guide. It will show you the way. Only action will change your life. Watching opportunities pass by will only break your heart. Great read, I liked it.
October 1st, 2016 14:54
Bullied..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DP ~ that is the only way to defeat Bullies ~ show you can take it. When I was young and vulnerable I was often knocked down ~ but NEVER knocked out. Every time I bounced back I got stronger and he got weaker ! One day I hit him back and he was knocked DOWN and KNOCKED OUT ! A Bully is just a Weak Person with a big hat ! ~ Yours BRIAN :o)
September 22nd, 2016 17:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing DP ~ that is the only way to defeat Bullies ~ show you can take it. When I was young and vulnerable I was often knocked down ~ but NEVER knocked out. Every time I bounced back I got stronger and he got weaker ! One day I hit him back and he was knocked DOWN and KNOCKED OUT ! A Bully is just a Weak Person with a big hat ! ~ Yours BRIAN :o)
September 22nd, 2016 17:50
Head in hands, heart in suitcase.
Augustus said:
So unsettled it feels like crazy. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:48
Augustus said:
So unsettled it feels like crazy. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:48
Mirror me
Augustus said:
We get enmeshed in relationships and loose our identity. Nice.
September 20th, 2016 09:34
Augustus said:
We get enmeshed in relationships and loose our identity. Nice.
September 20th, 2016 09:34
Less than a second.
Augustus said:
A lot happens in such a short period of time in that glance, that later it would take hours to explain it all. Yes I'll end this with a big happy 'smile'. Thanks.
September 18th, 2016 10:58
Augustus said:
A lot happens in such a short period of time in that glance, that later it would take hours to explain it all. Yes I'll end this with a big happy 'smile'. Thanks.
September 18th, 2016 10:58
Letting go
Augustus said:
I took this from a different angle not love of man/woman but for mankind and our nations are in deep do do for the lack thereof. Enjoyed.
September 17th, 2016 10:42
Augustus said:
I took this from a different angle not love of man/woman but for mankind and our nations are in deep do do for the lack thereof. Enjoyed.
September 17th, 2016 10:42
Letting go
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh ANGEL ~ This is such a sad prose ~ poem from such a sad but beautiful Lady ! I'm 33 (still single !) so I have experienced "lost love" that i thought would last forever. When I (sadly) let go of Love it takes time to recover and in some cases the hurt lasts forever ! Thanks for caring and sharing I helps us all to understand the angst of LETTING GO ! Love BRIAN. Please check my latest poems ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 04:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh ANGEL ~ This is such a sad prose ~ poem from such a sad but beautiful Lady ! I'm 33 (still single !) so I have experienced "lost love" that i thought would last forever. When I (sadly) let go of Love it takes time to recover and in some cases the hurt lasts forever ! Thanks for caring and sharing I helps us all to understand the angst of LETTING GO ! Love BRIAN. Please check my latest poems ~ Thanks B
September 17th, 2016 04:36
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