Comments received on poems by Christina K
The One She Can’t Hold
orchidee said:
A terrible thing to experience surely.
Very strange - a life unborn, yet living in a way, until he/she dies so soon.
January 8th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
A terrible thing to experience surely.
Very strange - a life unborn, yet living in a way, until he/she dies so soon.
January 8th, 2023 03:07
Reclaimed
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Christina. Seems the sort of thing I may be able to turn to a hymn-poem - if you wish, and if I can?
September 13th, 2019 01:44
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Christina. Seems the sort of thing I may be able to turn to a hymn-poem - if you wish, and if I can?
September 13th, 2019 01:44
Reclaimed
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief can be a rocky road which you seem to be coping with.
My belief has gone as I have described in poems on MPS.
September 13th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Belief can be a rocky road which you seem to be coping with.
My belief has gone as I have described in poems on MPS.
September 13th, 2019 01:10
If I Ever Die
Lorna said:
I\'ve always held a quiet thought that Death would be a best friend eventually......... nothing to be scared of.
December 11th, 2018 07:53
Lorna said:
I\'ve always held a quiet thought that Death would be a best friend eventually......... nothing to be scared of.
December 11th, 2018 07:53
All Along
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SPIRIT of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
SPIRIT of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
Break ME ~ Melt ME
Mold ME ~ Fill ME
Spirit of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
Thanks for sharing Sister Chris. Thinking of YOU & Praying for YOU
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2018 10:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
SPIRIT of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
SPIRIT of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
Break ME ~ Melt ME
Mold ME ~ Fill ME
Spirit of the Living GOD
Fall afresh on ME
Thanks for sharing Sister Chris. Thinking of YOU & Praying for YOU
Yours as always ~ BRIAN
November 8th, 2018 10:10
All Along
Fay Slimm. said:
A heartfelt prayer which is so honest and appealing dear Christina - - those final two lines give a positive end and lift the whole feel of lament - - \" though I can’t feel you now,
I know you’ve been there all along.\" - - a touching read.
November 8th, 2018 03:41
Fay Slimm. said:
A heartfelt prayer which is so honest and appealing dear Christina - - those final two lines give a positive end and lift the whole feel of lament - - \" though I can’t feel you now,
I know you’ve been there all along.\" - - a touching read.
November 8th, 2018 03:41
All Along
orchidee said:
And yet the Psalmist says in some places \'How long, O God?\' Even in one place \'Wake up, God\', in modern version.
I may know it too - a negative thought flashes across the mind\'. But what about....?\'.
And so the \'How long\' can change to Him being there \'all along\'
November 8th, 2018 02:37
orchidee said:
And yet the Psalmist says in some places \'How long, O God?\' Even in one place \'Wake up, God\', in modern version.
I may know it too - a negative thought flashes across the mind\'. But what about....?\'.
And so the \'How long\' can change to Him being there \'all along\'
November 8th, 2018 02:37
All Along
Goldfinch60 said:
God is always with us, sometimes we don\'t see him.
November 8th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
God is always with us, sometimes we don\'t see him.
November 8th, 2018 01:59
Like David
Goldfinch60 said:
God only shines the light for us to follow. Good write.
October 10th, 2018 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
God only shines the light for us to follow. Good write.
October 10th, 2018 00:16
Like David
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautiful! I love every spiritual word you have written.
This poem was a joy to read. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Beautiful! I love every spiritual word you have written.
This poem was a joy to read. :)
October 9th, 2018 16:18
Funeral for Broken Dreams
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem. Very melancholic but I love the last line! I wish I could play an instrument!
September 21st, 2018 17:59
Christina8 said:
I really like this poem. Very melancholic but I love the last line! I wish I could play an instrument!
September 21st, 2018 17:59
Funeral for Broken Dreams
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ love this poem which is both funny & sad ! The chemise noire is a nice touch and I love ukuleles they have a melancholy sound ! Like you I have my share of Broken Dreams & Lost Tomorrows so I will join you (in my black PJ\'s) and I will retune my UKE to C-minor. I trust you are less melancholic for penning this moving ode. Yours as always ~ HUGS BRIAN Please check my POEM on Fruity Senryus ~ Thanks B !
September 21st, 2018 17:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ love this poem which is both funny & sad ! The chemise noire is a nice touch and I love ukuleles they have a melancholy sound ! Like you I have my share of Broken Dreams & Lost Tomorrows so I will join you (in my black PJ\'s) and I will retune my UKE to C-minor. I trust you are less melancholic for penning this moving ode. Yours as always ~ HUGS BRIAN Please check my POEM on Fruity Senryus ~ Thanks B !
September 21st, 2018 17:49
Like A Moth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING CHRIS ~ Angela here I share a site with BRIAN. I\'m in New Zealand for a YEAR (work exchange) so its 12 noon FRIDAY here so I have plenty of time to reply (I don\'t start work until 2). Love the elegance of your Poem. 20 fine lines and a great description of a moth, but alas for you self abnegation! Moths are unwanted, spoilers of clothes, selfish, ugly, ephemeral, unspecial & squashed! But Im sure you\'re not like that ! I am a BUTTERFLY: Loved, love clothes, generous, cute, lasting, special and NEVER SQUASHED ! You too can be a BUTTERFLY Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA
July 19th, 2018 19:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING CHRIS ~ Angela here I share a site with BRIAN. I\'m in New Zealand for a YEAR (work exchange) so its 12 noon FRIDAY here so I have plenty of time to reply (I don\'t start work until 2). Love the elegance of your Poem. 20 fine lines and a great description of a moth, but alas for you self abnegation! Moths are unwanted, spoilers of clothes, selfish, ugly, ephemeral, unspecial & squashed! But Im sure you\'re not like that ! I am a BUTTERFLY: Loved, love clothes, generous, cute, lasting, special and NEVER SQUASHED ! You too can be a BUTTERFLY Thanks for sharing : Love ANGELA
July 19th, 2018 19:41
Like A Moth
Syd said:
That first stanza drew me in
\"Unwanted, unfeeling,
and alone.
When released into freedom,
I poke holes in all I own.\"
Brilliant poem. Pulled me right in. I hope this is just a temporary feeling.
Take care - Syd
July 19th, 2018 04:37
Syd said:
That first stanza drew me in
\"Unwanted, unfeeling,
and alone.
When released into freedom,
I poke holes in all I own.\"
Brilliant poem. Pulled me right in. I hope this is just a temporary feeling.
Take care - Syd
July 19th, 2018 04:37
Like A Moth
orchidee said:
Aww, but even an ugly-looking caterpillar, or whatever, held in the hand, has beauty. We won\'t squash you! :)
July 19th, 2018 01:41
orchidee said:
Aww, but even an ugly-looking caterpillar, or whatever, held in the hand, has beauty. We won\'t squash you! :)
July 19th, 2018 01:41
Uncertainty
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - love the simplicity of it Christina.
July 9th, 2018 01:02
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - love the simplicity of it Christina.
July 9th, 2018 01:02
This is It.
Fay Slimm. said:
So moving Christina - -the words flow into lines of real emptiness at love leaving the place where the heart bleeds when all alone. Very deep read.
May 21st, 2018 13:08
Fay Slimm. said:
So moving Christina - -the words flow into lines of real emptiness at love leaving the place where the heart bleeds when all alone. Very deep read.
May 21st, 2018 13:08
The Love is Gone
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MISSED YOU CHRISTINA ~ WELCOME BACK ! I love the honesty i his Programme as you survey your relationship with your (ex?) Partner ! You renounce you LOVE and then are not sure if it really was LOVE ! A constant ~ a crutch ~ a catch ~ perfection ~ WOW ~ I have been all those things to ex-Partners BUT (as you say without LOVE ~ they count for nothing ! Meant a lot ~ laughing ~ embracing ~ perhaps LOVE ?
HOWEVER whenever a Lady says to \"BRIAN ~ The LOVE is gone !\" I know it\'s time to move on ! Currently I have a loving FIANCEE and we hope to be married when she returns from New Zealand ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 4th, 2018 09:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MISSED YOU CHRISTINA ~ WELCOME BACK ! I love the honesty i his Programme as you survey your relationship with your (ex?) Partner ! You renounce you LOVE and then are not sure if it really was LOVE ! A constant ~ a crutch ~ a catch ~ perfection ~ WOW ~ I have been all those things to ex-Partners BUT (as you say without LOVE ~ they count for nothing ! Meant a lot ~ laughing ~ embracing ~ perhaps LOVE ?
HOWEVER whenever a Lady says to \"BRIAN ~ The LOVE is gone !\" I know it\'s time to move on ! Currently I have a loving FIANCEE and we hope to be married when she returns from New Zealand ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 4th, 2018 09:12
The Love is Gone
Michael Edwards said:
This work reads so well - so simply expressed and so powerful - great work Christina
May 4th, 2018 01:53
Michael Edwards said:
This work reads so well - so simply expressed and so powerful - great work Christina
May 4th, 2018 01:53
The Love is Gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the love is just not there Christina. Good write.
May 4th, 2018 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the love is just not there Christina. Good write.
May 4th, 2018 00:51
The Love is Gone
Caden_Mercer10 said:
Wow, great work! Loved the contrast of the love being and not being there! Good job!
May 3rd, 2018 22:16
Caden_Mercer10 said:
Wow, great work! Loved the contrast of the love being and not being there! Good job!
May 3rd, 2018 22:16
Feelings
FredPeyer said:
People all through the ages have grappled with that exact question. What is real? When I touch something, it feels real, but it is all vibration.
Very well written poem with a deep deep question that I think is impossible to answer.
February 16th, 2018 01:44
FredPeyer said:
People all through the ages have grappled with that exact question. What is real? When I touch something, it feels real, but it is all vibration.
Very well written poem with a deep deep question that I think is impossible to answer.
February 16th, 2018 01:44
Love and the Universe
FredPeyer said:
Christina, you are so right, love is all there is. Everywhere. Love is what our souls are made of, but then it somehow seems to get lost in the translation to the physical world.
I love your poem. Definitely a fav!
February 16th, 2018 01:40
FredPeyer said:
Christina, you are so right, love is all there is. Everywhere. Love is what our souls are made of, but then it somehow seems to get lost in the translation to the physical world.
I love your poem. Definitely a fav!
February 16th, 2018 01:40
The Next Morning
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Christina. With just a few words and lines you painted the whole picture, the aftermath, the hurt, and the futility of making any sense of it.
February 16th, 2018 01:36
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly well written, Christina. With just a few words and lines you painted the whole picture, the aftermath, the hurt, and the futility of making any sense of it.
February 16th, 2018 01:36
The Next Morning
dusk arising said:
Excellently crafted work. Print it and pin it on the back of the bathroom door, let him read it.
January 29th, 2018 13:48
dusk arising said:
Excellently crafted work. Print it and pin it on the back of the bathroom door, let him read it.
January 29th, 2018 13:48
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