Outside
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ pleased you got some Sun and the snow is melting. I keep trying to convince everyone that Spring has Sprung ! We have had some great weather for over a week (day temperatures of over 65F = 18C) and (apart from Scotland) NO SNOW. However there is always a calm before the storm and today we had a visit from DORIS who is a very tempestuous Young Lady who has blown us all off our feet. Yours ~ BRIAN (Southern England ~ UK)

February 23rd, 2017 19:13

Outside
Michael Edwards said:

it just flows - a great piece of work.

February 23rd, 2017 16:20

I Am Scared to Sleep
Tris Eaton said:

This is very sad and deep, but still very beautiful.

February 19th, 2017 21:25

The Stars
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ A beautiful poem which poses an interesting question ! W are all an integral part of the whole Universe. And a universal pan~Universal Philosophy would suggest that when we look at the Stars each Star is affected by our gaze just as we are affected by the star. Because the distance is so vast we will never know how much affected the star was ~ but probably to the same extent as you were moved by the Star ~ OK Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN

February 18th, 2017 18:24

The Stars
Michael Edwards said:

Mystical, contemplative - whatever a good read.

February 18th, 2017 12:43

Sight
Cheeky Missy said:

This could well apply to more than simply the souls we know by face, albeit I prefer to wander there as you painfully remind us things are not always what they seem. However, me thinks it was not false when they called eyes the window to the soul, you know? Care to enlighten me? Thanks for sharing.

February 13th, 2017 20:56

I Am Still in Love with You
BatSam said:

I love this poem. You deserve so much better if they never loved you.

February 11th, 2017 11:24

Happiness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

In my experience CHRIS ~ Happiness is an inner thing linked with Contentment. So many make the mistake of trying to find happiness in externals. When I wake up I commit my day to God and enjoy my breakfast which always includes a Banana which for me is a Happiness Fruit. Then I go to work Happy and Contented with my lot ~ That\'s my \"Secret of Happiness\" Yours BRIAN

February 6th, 2017 16:19

Our First Kiss
Corey said:

Hi Christina, Simply, sweet and beautiful! I enjoyed reading it very much! Great poem!

February 5th, 2017 19:59

Our First Kiss
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ahhhhhh CHRISTINA (lovely name) the CHEMISTRY of the first Kiss. You describe it perfectly ! O YES I remember it well ! \"When our noses touched and elicited a SPARK ~ that told us we were in love !\" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

February 5th, 2017 16:32

Our First Kiss
Michael Edwards said:

A flowing read and so engaging - love it.

February 5th, 2017 13:59

Afraid
Terry dailey said:

for a poem that took no chances. This poet walked through insecurity in strides. From the shaddows came a predator with words...good job great write.

January 17th, 2017 00:22

The Future
Christina8 said:

Great poem! We all have decisions to make. I hope you make the right one. Christina

January 16th, 2017 13:48

I Wish
Christina8 said:

Short poem but I hope you get what you want. Well written.

December 28th, 2016 18:16

I Wish
willyweed said:

short and sweet good luck, wishing your dream comes true. ww

December 28th, 2016 13:39