Comments received on poems by Christina8
I\'d rather be fishing!
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You know how I feel about my son and I know your son is terrific, as terrific as his Mom. BTW fishing is a great thing to teach. Does get them outside in a quiet environment with fresh air!
January 5th, 2017 10:34
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You know how I feel about my son and I know your son is terrific, as terrific as his Mom. BTW fishing is a great thing to teach. Does get them outside in a quiet environment with fresh air!
January 5th, 2017 10:34
I\'d rather be fishing!
Tony36 said:
Great write, all just part Of growing up
January 5th, 2017 09:25
Tony36 said:
Great write, all just part Of growing up
January 5th, 2017 09:25
I\'d rather be fishing!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS it must be awesome to be a MOM ~ especially when they are BABIES. I\'m sure you noticed (especially as you are a Nurse) that Babies grow and after 12 very interesting years of development (I\'ve got Friends who are MOMS) ~ overnight they turn into TEENAGERS ! Then as you know the \"Pleasure of Parenthood\" really start ! I hope to find out for myself one day. An elegant poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Hugs for a lovely MOM ~ Your Friend BRIAN
January 5th, 2017 08:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS it must be awesome to be a MOM ~ especially when they are BABIES. I\'m sure you noticed (especially as you are a Nurse) that Babies grow and after 12 very interesting years of development (I\'ve got Friends who are MOMS) ~ overnight they turn into TEENAGERS ! Then as you know the \"Pleasure of Parenthood\" really start ! I hope to find out for myself one day. An elegant poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Hugs for a lovely MOM ~ Your Friend BRIAN
January 5th, 2017 08:34
I\'d rather be fishing!
willyweed said:
You gave him life, let him live it.
let him spread his wings and become the fine up standing young man we all know he\'s going to be!
Your poem is precious, there is nothing like a mothers love. ww
January 5th, 2017 08:28
willyweed said:
You gave him life, let him live it.
let him spread his wings and become the fine up standing young man we all know he\'s going to be!
Your poem is precious, there is nothing like a mothers love. ww
January 5th, 2017 08:28
Boundless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2017 09:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2017 09:40
Boundless
Michael Edwards said:
great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.
January 4th, 2017 00:44
Michael Edwards said:
great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.
January 4th, 2017 00:44
Boundless
willyweed said:
yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww
January 3rd, 2017 22:07
willyweed said:
yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww
January 3rd, 2017 22:07
Eternal
Augustus said:
Makes it hard to understand how some couples just don\'t make it. You and yours are very lucky. Like you say it is not all roses, but likely you both work at it. nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 21:53
Augustus said:
Makes it hard to understand how some couples just don\'t make it. You and yours are very lucky. Like you say it is not all roses, but likely you both work at it. nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 21:53
Eternal
WriteBeLight said:
I know about the anonymous thing. I try to be generic when it comes to family as well. But, your hubby seems like a wonderful partner. That is so great for you. And, you deserve the best!
January 2nd, 2017 16:02
WriteBeLight said:
I know about the anonymous thing. I try to be generic when it comes to family as well. But, your hubby seems like a wonderful partner. That is so great for you. And, you deserve the best!
January 2nd, 2017 16:02
Eternal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ CHRIS ~ You have lovely Structure ! Metered Quatrains and a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa xbxb then xcxc ! I love the Subject too ~ Love of ones Spouse. It is good to be grateful to GOD for all His blessings.. I admire your discretion ~ too much information can attract TROLLS ! Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
January 2nd, 2017 14:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ CHRIS ~ You have lovely Structure ! Metered Quatrains and a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa xbxb then xcxc ! I love the Subject too ~ Love of ones Spouse. It is good to be grateful to GOD for all His blessings.. I admire your discretion ~ too much information can attract TROLLS ! Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
January 2nd, 2017 14:39
Eternal
willyweed said:
why this is a lovely ode to love.
well written and all purple-ish. nice ww
January 2nd, 2017 10:41
willyweed said:
why this is a lovely ode to love.
well written and all purple-ish. nice ww
January 2nd, 2017 10:41
My love amplified
JerryBolton said:
The message in this beautifully written poem, Christina, is a marvelous one. Many people search there whole lives and not find true love such as this. Enjoyed!!!
January 1st, 2017 16:12
JerryBolton said:
The message in this beautifully written poem, Christina, is a marvelous one. Many people search there whole lives and not find true love such as this. Enjoyed!!!
January 1st, 2017 16:12
My love amplified
Michael Edwards said:
And hang on to it Christina as I am sure you will. I have been married for over 50 years and we love each other as much as ever - this is a super poem and it reminded me how lucky we are.
January 1st, 2017 13:28
Michael Edwards said:
And hang on to it Christina as I am sure you will. I have been married for over 50 years and we love each other as much as ever - this is a super poem and it reminded me how lucky we are.
January 1st, 2017 13:28
My love amplified
Augustus said:
Met my wife 22 years ago on New Years. Very nice.
January 1st, 2017 13:27
Augustus said:
Met my wife 22 years ago on New Years. Very nice.
January 1st, 2017 13:27
My love amplified
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL CHRIS ~ reading it has given me goosepimples ! The MILLENNIUM has a lot to answer for ~ it obviously didn\'t just affect the computers ! My (limited) experience with True Love is that it grows and gets deeper each day ~ WOW 17 years that\'s a life time for some ! For me this is the happiest and most optimistic poem of yours I have read (and I\'ve read all 39). I hope this is one of your NY Revolutions ! Hugs in the SPIRIT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 1st, 2017 13:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL CHRIS ~ reading it has given me goosepimples ! The MILLENNIUM has a lot to answer for ~ it obviously didn\'t just affect the computers ! My (limited) experience with True Love is that it grows and gets deeper each day ~ WOW 17 years that\'s a life time for some ! For me this is the happiest and most optimistic poem of yours I have read (and I\'ve read all 39). I hope this is one of your NY Revolutions ! Hugs in the SPIRIT ~ Yours BRIAN
January 1st, 2017 13:16
My love amplified
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lot of people envy this kind of love
great tribute
January 1st, 2017 12:42
ron parrish aka wordman said:
a lot of people envy this kind of love
great tribute
January 1st, 2017 12:42
My love amplified
willyweed said:
true love lasts through eternity you are lucky to have found it, I know I am. ww
January 1st, 2017 11:20
willyweed said:
true love lasts through eternity you are lucky to have found it, I know I am. ww
January 1st, 2017 11:20
New Year
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS for a perfect poem to herald the NEW YEAR ~ 2017. Love the structure (rhyme & rhythm !) and the SUBJECT ! The New Year should be all about TRUE LOVE ! Blessings to all who found it and a Prayer for those still searching ! Lots of People fall in love on New Years Eve ~ AMEN ~ Hugs ~ in the Spirit ~ for 2017 BRIAN
December 31st, 2016 11:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS for a perfect poem to herald the NEW YEAR ~ 2017. Love the structure (rhyme & rhythm !) and the SUBJECT ! The New Year should be all about TRUE LOVE ! Blessings to all who found it and a Prayer for those still searching ! Lots of People fall in love on New Years Eve ~ AMEN ~ Hugs ~ in the Spirit ~ for 2017 BRIAN
December 31st, 2016 11:59
New Year
WriteBeLight said:
Have a blast!!! That is great. I love that expression! Very nice thoughts and I love the song....:)
December 31st, 2016 11:45
WriteBeLight said:
Have a blast!!! That is great. I love that expression! Very nice thoughts and I love the song....:)
December 31st, 2016 11:45
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