Comments received on poems by Christina8



The River
Melody said:

Lovely Chrissy... Told with imagery and depth with a soft and gentle tone. Bravo my friend.

November 5th, 2016 14:52

The River
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks CHRIS ~ Loved the style ~ structure and subject The beauty of \"free style\" poetry is it is not \"rhyme constrained \" which give you infinite word choice ! However a poem must have rhythm and this you have achieved by having lines of similar lentgh. Well done an excellent FV Poem and I love the last line ! It takes TWO to TANGO ~ Special Hugs from your Special Friend BRIAN

November 5th, 2016 11:52

The Key
Augustus said:

Well done. Often it is inherited and associated with depression. Avoid Xanax. Very addictive and hard to stop. A psychologist who specialized in cognitive behavior therapy CBT may help. Ask for free 15 minute get aquatinted visit to get a feel for the office and therapist. Thanks for sharing.

November 4th, 2016 10:26

The Key
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing CHRIS ~ We do live in a very anxious making period in History ~ People worry about Putin ~ Hillary or Hillbilly? ~ Global Warming etc. These are the big issues but is often the little issues ~ Relationships ~ family ~ Local Community etc everything seems volatile. The Good Book says \"Dont be over anxious about tomorrow\" \"Place your worrie on to Me (GOD) because I care for you ! I have found ~ if I pray and commit my worries To GOD it makes things easier. Beautiful poem ~ sad content ~ Thinking of you praying for you 24/7 ~ Love & HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 4th, 2016 08:35

15 years
Tony36 said:

Beautifully written

November 3rd, 2016 14:07

15 years
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL CHRIS ~ And a wonderful tribute to your lovely (and lucky !) husband. The BIBLE says ~ \"Whoever marries a loveing Wife ~ is blessed indeed ! Every Blessin ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Love ~ Humor ~ Trust and togetherness ! Yours BRIAN ~ HUGS

November 3rd, 2016 08:37

15 years
WriteBeLight said:

Very beautiful words!

November 3rd, 2016 07:51

Spring
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow awesome!!! The metaphor and rhyme word choice fabulous and makes this soulful poem very appealing.
Great to read from u again, I tink u are a classical poetess.

November 3rd, 2016 07:44

Spring
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow awesome!!! The metaphor and rhyme word choice fabulous and makes this soulful poem very appealing.
Great to read from u again, I tink u are a classical poetess.

November 3rd, 2016 07:44

Spring
Vic E said:

Nice poem Christine. And pleasant to read... Vic

November 2nd, 2016 14:44

Spring
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

November 2nd, 2016 14:10

Spring
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks CHRISTINA ~ for sharing you experiences in a poem that is beautiful in structure and sentiment ! You are a blessing to MPS. In my experience CHRIS ~ Love does often end with PAIN but each season of Love does bring its compensations ! Thanks for caring Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem AMERICA ~ Thanks B ~ HUGS

November 2nd, 2016 09:22

Daddy
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 1st, 2016 13:44

Daddy
Kurt Philip Behm said:

Very nice, I adore the last line.

Kurt

November 1st, 2016 10:25

Daddy
Augustus said:

P.S. I grew up saying \"Daddy\".

November 1st, 2016 08:48

Daddy
Augustus said:

That hurts. I have two sons and always wished for a daughter. I can\'t imagine the pain. Hugs.

November 1st, 2016 08:47

Thoughts on love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS YOU CHRIS ~ For a crisp and concise \"Analyse d\'Amour\" ! Despite all the agony and ecstasy I\'m still in the loop. They say love is BLIND but it is also DEAF ! It does not heed: reason ~ caution ~ fear ~ pride or experience ~ Such are its unique sensual and emotional rewards ! Perhaps ~ when all is said and done ~ The most important sense in LOVE is TOUCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ BIG HUGS !

November 1st, 2016 04:04

Thoughts on love
ron parrish aka wordman said:

it is what it is,great line

October 31st, 2016 20:42

Thoughts on love
Augustus said:

I agree with hodgetiger, clever! And thoughtful, thoughts that go through our minds when we deal with others.

October 31st, 2016 18:14

Thoughts on love
magno1988 said:

Amazing idea! Very original and I\'m glad I had a chance to read it! My favourite poem on here so far!

October 31st, 2016 16:26

Thoughts on love
Tony36 said:

Love it awesome write

October 31st, 2016 15:01

Thoughts on love
Vic E said:

I like!

October 31st, 2016 14:07

Thoughts on love
scorchedwings said:

I\'ve literally just registered on here and yours are the first 3 poems I\'ve read - so great to read! I\'ve been pulled in! Xx

October 31st, 2016 11:52

Passions
scorchedwings said:

Poetic pleasure! Xx

October 31st, 2016 11:45

Guilt
scorchedwings said:

I\'m so with this one. A beautiful write.
A lot of depth to it. Xx

October 31st, 2016 11:44

Thoughts on love
Liam Lawless said:

Lovely poem. Very clever.

October 31st, 2016 10:55

Thoughts on love
WriteBeLight said:

Yes, I agree. Nice idea.

October 31st, 2016 10:13

Guilt
nic said:

Continued:
this piece...
Thank you for sharing.

October 30th, 2016 19:51

Broken (A Haiku)
Vic E said:

Beautiful haiku

October 30th, 2016 09:39

Broken (A Haiku)
WriteBeLight said:

Get it✌

October 30th, 2016 09:18



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