Comments received on poems by Christina8
Chocolate
WriteBeLight said:
That is a chocolate success! Very, very good and I can relate!
January 9th, 2017 12:47
WriteBeLight said:
That is a chocolate success! Very, very good and I can relate!
January 9th, 2017 12:47
My Rock
Augustus said:
Can relate. My wife is the best thing that ever happened to me. I feel so badly for people that don\'t have that in their relations. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:35
Augustus said:
Can relate. My wife is the best thing that ever happened to me. I feel so badly for people that don\'t have that in their relations. Nicely done.
January 6th, 2017 21:35
My Rock
willyweed said:
lucky in love lucky in life nothing is better than a good man and wife.
wonderful ode to amor! Christina thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 14:11
willyweed said:
lucky in love lucky in life nothing is better than a good man and wife.
wonderful ode to amor! Christina thanks for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 14:11
My Rock
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your husband, Great write
January 6th, 2017 13:42
Tony36 said:
Wonderfully written tribute to your husband, Great write
January 6th, 2017 13:42
My Rock
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff - I have a photo of my mum and dad in my dressing room and I say hello whenever I go in there - maybe daft but it makes me feel so close to them and them to me - now there\'s an angle for a poem I feel coming on.
January 6th, 2017 13:11
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff - I have a photo of my mum and dad in my dressing room and I say hello whenever I go in there - maybe daft but it makes me feel so close to them and them to me - now there\'s an angle for a poem I feel coming on.
January 6th, 2017 13:11
My Rock
rrodriguez said:
I agree, the structure is elegent. I enjoy and appreciate your sense of love and devotion.
January 6th, 2017 12:56
rrodriguez said:
I agree, the structure is elegent. I enjoy and appreciate your sense of love and devotion.
January 6th, 2017 12:56
Calla Lily
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRISSY THIS IS AWESOME & SO SO SENSUOUS ~ How did I miss it ? Perhaps I was on Holiday ? All LILLIES are beautiful and \"Even Solomon in all his Glory was not arrayed like one of these !\" I love the structure of th poem ~ Rhyming Couplets in neat quatrains ~ my favorite ! The subject and language are also sublime. You love the Lilly\'s ~ shape ~ sexiness ~ shade ~ scent & sheen and you are jealous of a FLOWER ~ how feminine ! I hope you didn\'t pluck it ~ Flowers are most sensuous (like Ladies !) in their own environment ! Thanks for sharing ~ Heavenly HUGS ~ BRIAN
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January 6th, 2017 12:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CHRISSY THIS IS AWESOME & SO SO SENSUOUS ~ How did I miss it ? Perhaps I was on Holiday ? All LILLIES are beautiful and \"Even Solomon in all his Glory was not arrayed like one of these !\" I love the structure of th poem ~ Rhyming Couplets in neat quatrains ~ my favorite ! The subject and language are also sublime. You love the Lilly\'s ~ shape ~ sexiness ~ shade ~ scent & sheen and you are jealous of a FLOWER ~ how feminine ! I hope you didn\'t pluck it ~ Flowers are most sensuous (like Ladies !) in their own environment ! Thanks for sharing ~ Heavenly HUGS ~ BRIAN
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January 6th, 2017 12:43
My Rock
WriteBeLight said:
And, you are his, as well. Very sad about the losses of both parents. That is tough, and for the grandkids as well. Very thoughtful, Christina!
January 6th, 2017 12:30
WriteBeLight said:
And, you are his, as well. Very sad about the losses of both parents. That is tough, and for the grandkids as well. Very thoughtful, Christina!
January 6th, 2017 12:30
My Rock
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely tribute to your MAN ~ CHRIS. He has all the best attributes a good husband should have ~ I hope I prove as good as him ! The SUBJECT is divine ~ and the structure is elegant. You are a good role model for those who post sloppy poetry ! Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 12:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely tribute to your MAN ~ CHRIS. He has all the best attributes a good husband should have ~ I hope I prove as good as him ! The SUBJECT is divine ~ and the structure is elegant. You are a good role model for those who post sloppy poetry ! Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN
January 6th, 2017 12:22
Father
Francesco said:
A very touching poem. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 06:18
Francesco said:
A very touching poem. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
January 6th, 2017 06:18
I\'d rather be fishing!
P.H.Rose said:
One word
Brilliant !!!
Love it
Chrissy
January 5th, 2017 16:00
P.H.Rose said:
One word
Brilliant !!!
Love it
Chrissy
January 5th, 2017 16:00
I\'d rather be fishing!
Daniel said:
A wonderful touching poem, absolutely beautiful!
January 5th, 2017 14:43
Daniel said:
A wonderful touching poem, absolutely beautiful!
January 5th, 2017 14:43
I\'d rather be fishing!
Vic E said:
Those memories are the best. Something to look forward to in our old age.
Nice poem
January 5th, 2017 10:57
Vic E said:
Those memories are the best. Something to look forward to in our old age.
Nice poem
January 5th, 2017 10:57
I\'d rather be fishing!
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You know how I feel about my son and I know your son is terrific, as terrific as his Mom. BTW fishing is a great thing to teach. Does get them outside in a quiet environment with fresh air!
January 5th, 2017 10:34
WriteBeLight said:
Yes. You know how I feel about my son and I know your son is terrific, as terrific as his Mom. BTW fishing is a great thing to teach. Does get them outside in a quiet environment with fresh air!
January 5th, 2017 10:34
I\'d rather be fishing!
Tony36 said:
Great write, all just part Of growing up
January 5th, 2017 09:25
Tony36 said:
Great write, all just part Of growing up
January 5th, 2017 09:25
I\'d rather be fishing!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS it must be awesome to be a MOM ~ especially when they are BABIES. I\'m sure you noticed (especially as you are a Nurse) that Babies grow and after 12 very interesting years of development (I\'ve got Friends who are MOMS) ~ overnight they turn into TEENAGERS ! Then as you know the \"Pleasure of Parenthood\" really start ! I hope to find out for myself one day. An elegant poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Hugs for a lovely MOM ~ Your Friend BRIAN
January 5th, 2017 08:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing CHRIS it must be awesome to be a MOM ~ especially when they are BABIES. I\'m sure you noticed (especially as you are a Nurse) that Babies grow and after 12 very interesting years of development (I\'ve got Friends who are MOMS) ~ overnight they turn into TEENAGERS ! Then as you know the \"Pleasure of Parenthood\" really start ! I hope to find out for myself one day. An elegant poem ~ thanks for sharing ~ Hugs for a lovely MOM ~ Your Friend BRIAN
January 5th, 2017 08:34
I\'d rather be fishing!
willyweed said:
You gave him life, let him live it.
let him spread his wings and become the fine up standing young man we all know he\'s going to be!
Your poem is precious, there is nothing like a mothers love. ww
January 5th, 2017 08:28
willyweed said:
You gave him life, let him live it.
let him spread his wings and become the fine up standing young man we all know he\'s going to be!
Your poem is precious, there is nothing like a mothers love. ww
January 5th, 2017 08:28
Boundless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2017 09:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN
January 4th, 2017 09:40
Boundless
Michael Edwards said:
great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.
January 4th, 2017 00:44
Michael Edwards said:
great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.
January 4th, 2017 00:44
Boundless
willyweed said:
yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww
January 3rd, 2017 22:07
willyweed said:
yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww
January 3rd, 2017 22:07
Eternal
Augustus said:
Makes it hard to understand how some couples just don\'t make it. You and yours are very lucky. Like you say it is not all roses, but likely you both work at it. nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 21:53
Augustus said:
Makes it hard to understand how some couples just don\'t make it. You and yours are very lucky. Like you say it is not all roses, but likely you both work at it. nicely done.
January 2nd, 2017 21:53
Eternal
WriteBeLight said:
I know about the anonymous thing. I try to be generic when it comes to family as well. But, your hubby seems like a wonderful partner. That is so great for you. And, you deserve the best!
January 2nd, 2017 16:02
WriteBeLight said:
I know about the anonymous thing. I try to be generic when it comes to family as well. But, your hubby seems like a wonderful partner. That is so great for you. And, you deserve the best!
January 2nd, 2017 16:02
Eternal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ CHRIS ~ You have lovely Structure ! Metered Quatrains and a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa xbxb then xcxc ! I love the Subject too ~ Love of ones Spouse. It is good to be grateful to GOD for all His blessings.. I admire your discretion ~ too much information can attract TROLLS ! Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
January 2nd, 2017 14:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR SHARING ~ CHRIS ~ You have lovely Structure ! Metered Quatrains and a consistent rhyming pattern xaxa xbxb then xcxc ! I love the Subject too ~ Love of ones Spouse. It is good to be grateful to GOD for all His blessings.. I admire your discretion ~ too much information can attract TROLLS ! Hugs in the Spirit ~ BRIAN
January 2nd, 2017 14:39
Eternal
willyweed said:
why this is a lovely ode to love.
well written and all purple-ish. nice ww
January 2nd, 2017 10:41
willyweed said:
why this is a lovely ode to love.
well written and all purple-ish. nice ww
January 2nd, 2017 10:41
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