Comments received on poems by Christina8



Transition
Tony36 said:

Great write. I live on a farm and love eating the leaves change color. I alway feel sad to see them fall from the trees

November 14th, 2016 13:54

Transition
WriteBeLight said:

Good poetry. I live where we get cold winters. I am fortunate that I can ski a couple of times in the season. One way to deal with winter.

November 14th, 2016 13:51

Frolick
Augustus said:

So neat that you both have a flaming desire. Nicely done.

November 12th, 2016 18:39

Frolick
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING CHRIS ~ In all our relationships we ahve to be careful not to stand too close to the flame.! Someone always gets hurt while the other one gets burnt ! I have a solution to stay out of trouble ~ whatever yiou do always stay in the BUBBLE ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 12th, 2016 10:22

Frolick
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 12th, 2016 09:19

Friendship
Augustus said:

Poetic way of describing a bad day and reaching out. Sending warm fuzzies. Take care.

November 10th, 2016 21:39

Friendship
Christina8 said:

Thank you so much WBL! Thanks for the pat on the back and the kind words of encouragement! Made my day!

November 10th, 2016 12:51

Friendship
WriteBeLight said:

Yes, being a stay-at-home Mom is a very tough and somethings thankless job. Hours can drag, and days can just melt together. Glad you found writing to help. Just remember you are making a great sacrifice for your family and your family is very lucky you can be there at this time in their lives. I speak from experience. Pat yourself on the back!

November 10th, 2016 12:13

Friendship
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHRISSY ~ Love and bubbly hugs and message through MPS especially for you ! I\'m sorry you are stressed today and feeling BLUE as well I think ? With my magic bubble ~ I will turn your BLUE to PINK ! If you look a t a BUBBLE every shade of the RAINBOW is there for you to ENJOY ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN

November 10th, 2016 11:27

A compliment
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL COMPLIMENT AGAIN CHRIS TO YOUR MAN ! There are so many sad and bitter poems on MPS that yours are always a ray of light and a gleam of hope. Every blessing in all your activities as a MOM as a NURSE and of course as a very faithful WIFE. Your are lovely ! Love & Hugs in the SPIRIT ~ BRIAN

November 9th, 2016 11:36

A compliment
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2016 11:13

A compliment
Augustus said:

We all love to be appreciated. It is also extremely important in a relationship not to be taken for granted. Nicely done.

November 9th, 2016 10:31

His eyes
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully sweet

November 8th, 2016 13:43

His eyes
ron parrish aka wordman said:

true love always shines,you can see into the soul through your eyes

November 8th, 2016 11:38

His eyes
Vic E said:

I bet he liked the poem! Well, so do I

November 8th, 2016 10:41

His eyes
Augustus said:

I just love the dimples. What a lovely poem.

November 8th, 2016 10:18

His eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhh CHRIS ~ This poem is so so beautiful in form and function ! Beautifully penned and I am so pleased that you have found true love. ! In my experience it does show in the eyes and is experienced in the kisses ~ Love it ! Love & Hugs ~ in the Spirit ~ BRIAN

November 8th, 2016 09:57

His eyes
WriteBeLight said:

That is sweet.

November 8th, 2016 09:31

Love surrounds
Tony36 said:

Simple sweet and awesome

November 7th, 2016 16:43

Guilt
mylittleheart said:

This is amazing

November 7th, 2016 12:15

Love surrounds
mylittleheart said:

This is absolutely beautiful!

November 7th, 2016 12:10

Love surrounds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

CHRISTINA ~ This is so so beautiful it made me cry ! I read it again and again. This is the type of love we all seek ~ from the heart ! I love the concept that such love AMPLIFIES (day by day) and also MATURES but never fully SATISFIED. More than HAPPY is the MAN who would be deemed worthy of sharing such love with a LADY as Beautiful (in mind ~ body ~ soul) as you are ! Love and Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 7th, 2016 10:21

Love surrounds
avigail said:

lovely, simple and comes from the heart :)

November 7th, 2016 10:03

Thoughts on love
JohnThomas said:

The eternal struggle, the head and the heart. You capture it exact and in all its confused bliss.
Wonderful poem!

\"All I can offer anyone is my own confusion.\" Jack Kerouac.

November 6th, 2016 22:52

Daddy
JohnThomas said:

Wow. That is very moving. That kind of pain always runs the deepest and seems to know of no end. I hope you and your daughter are happy and can move on from that.
Thank you for sharing.

November 6th, 2016 22:49

Thoughts on love
kaitywaity31 said:

it\'s different unusual and inspirational.. think outside the box I don\'t do that enough. thank you :)

November 6th, 2016 20:33

15 years
kaitywaity31 said:

gorgeous :)
it\'s definitely an AWWW poem xx

November 6th, 2016 20:32

The River
Augustus said:

Nice allegory .

November 5th, 2016 20:26

The River
Melody said:

Lovely Chrissy... Told with imagery and depth with a soft and gentle tone. Bravo my friend.

November 5th, 2016 14:52

The River
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks CHRIS ~ Loved the style ~ structure and subject The beauty of \"free style\" poetry is it is not \"rhyme constrained \" which give you infinite word choice ! However a poem must have rhythm and this you have achieved by having lines of similar lentgh. Well done an excellent FV Poem and I love the last line ! It takes TWO to TANGO ~ Special Hugs from your Special Friend BRIAN

November 5th, 2016 11:52



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