Comments received on poems by Liam Lawless
The Hatred of the Lord
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Even if you do happen to \"offend\" someone...this site is to speak your mind....its not supposed to be candy coated...I too no offense at all...you are entitled to believe whatever you wish
December 2nd, 2016 16:46
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Even if you do happen to \"offend\" someone...this site is to speak your mind....its not supposed to be candy coated...I too no offense at all...you are entitled to believe whatever you wish
December 2nd, 2016 16:46
The Hatred of the Lord
willyweed said:
I take no offence, this is a poetry site and this is good poetry, write on! ww
December 1st, 2016 19:51
willyweed said:
I take no offence, this is a poetry site and this is good poetry, write on! ww
December 1st, 2016 19:51
The Hatred of the Lord
Augustus said:
We are all human and therefore incapable of understanding God but we do get to understand humans who can be Christ like or Satanic. Thanks for the thought provoking piece
December 1st, 2016 16:30
Augustus said:
We are all human and therefore incapable of understanding God but we do get to understand humans who can be Christ like or Satanic. Thanks for the thought provoking piece
December 1st, 2016 16:30
The Hatred of the Lord
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NO ANON ~ There was no offence ! One of th e Blessings of free will isthat we can agree to differ ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 15:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
NO ANON ~ There was no offence ! One of th e Blessings of free will isthat we can agree to differ ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 15:23
The Hatred of the Lord
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TO EACH HIS OWN ANON ~ My experience is the opposite of yours. I was raised in a Godly Home and all the Churches I have attended have been very supportive ~ I have aso worked with the YMCA a good example of a Christian based organisation. We are not ANIMALS and never have been. W are created in God\'s Image and are mega intelligent and creative (I presume you us a computer ?). To make us different and lateral thinkers GOD gave us Free Will which enables u to choose between ~ right & wrong ~ good & evil ~ God & Satan etc etc. In my book the fault lies with Man and Satan who has deceived him and NOT GOD ! ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 14:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
TO EACH HIS OWN ANON ~ My experience is the opposite of yours. I was raised in a Godly Home and all the Churches I have attended have been very supportive ~ I have aso worked with the YMCA a good example of a Christian based organisation. We are not ANIMALS and never have been. W are created in God\'s Image and are mega intelligent and creative (I presume you us a computer ?). To make us different and lateral thinkers GOD gave us Free Will which enables u to choose between ~ right & wrong ~ good & evil ~ God & Satan etc etc. In my book the fault lies with Man and Satan who has deceived him and NOT GOD ! ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
December 1st, 2016 14:08
The Hatred of the Lord
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nicely done...and very true in many ways...I was once a complete and total advocate of a belief system that you could consider somewhat Satanic...But, over the years I have found God..and that was by living life ...all the trials and tribulations...My connection with God did not come from any church...most churches are like miniature cults...making up their own little rulebooks and trying to suck their followers dry monetarily ...Its not about GOD being evil or otherwise...its about Evil beings who manifest in the form of humans in an attempt to reign over a world created by God...which will never happen...
December 1st, 2016 13:49
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nicely done...and very true in many ways...I was once a complete and total advocate of a belief system that you could consider somewhat Satanic...But, over the years I have found God..and that was by living life ...all the trials and tribulations...My connection with God did not come from any church...most churches are like miniature cults...making up their own little rulebooks and trying to suck their followers dry monetarily ...Its not about GOD being evil or otherwise...its about Evil beings who manifest in the form of humans in an attempt to reign over a world created by God...which will never happen...
December 1st, 2016 13:49
Nothing More Natural
WriteBeLight said:
Ha ha great ending to a very serious subject. I taught my kids to enjoy and appreciate the outdoors. Nice job!
November 30th, 2016 12:14
WriteBeLight said:
Ha ha great ending to a very serious subject. I taught my kids to enjoy and appreciate the outdoors. Nice job!
November 30th, 2016 12:14
Command
WriteBeLight said:
I agree and I have had my fill this go around. Great poem!
November 29th, 2016 16:51
WriteBeLight said:
I agree and I have had my fill this go around. Great poem!
November 29th, 2016 16:51
You Told Me Lies
Kitkat231997 said:
that\'s pretty deep thanks for sharing that with us
November 28th, 2016 05:45
Kitkat231997 said:
that\'s pretty deep thanks for sharing that with us
November 28th, 2016 05:45
Talk
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Really enjoyed...short but sweet and conveys a powerful, positive message...
November 18th, 2016 23:45
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Really enjoyed...short but sweet and conveys a powerful, positive message...
November 18th, 2016 23:45
Talk
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I like how you say \'love will always win\'. Thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2016 22:24
Christina8 said:
Very good poem. I like how you say \'love will always win\'. Thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2016 22:24
Historys Biggest Lie
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Govt\'s do influence our lives yes. This poem is hard hitting and nicely tells in awesome rhyme how our choices in life are limited by worldly powers. Kudos.
Nice to read from your ink again.
November 13th, 2016 04:12
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Govt\'s do influence our lives yes. This poem is hard hitting and nicely tells in awesome rhyme how our choices in life are limited by worldly powers. Kudos.
Nice to read from your ink again.
November 13th, 2016 04:12
Historys Biggest Lie
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Very deep. Yes, money decides a lot for us, doesn\'t it? Among other things
November 2nd, 2016 11:53
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. Very deep. Yes, money decides a lot for us, doesn\'t it? Among other things
November 2nd, 2016 11:53
The Flaws Of Education
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Many times have I resented schooling pressures and this poem highlights the trials and cumbersome schooling features in a superb freeverse. And then there is the prejudiced teachers bias that I could add as a vice as well as bullying. So kudos poet for a sociological poem.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 31st, 2016 02:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Many times have I resented schooling pressures and this poem highlights the trials and cumbersome schooling features in a superb freeverse. And then there is the prejudiced teachers bias that I could add as a vice as well as bullying. So kudos poet for a sociological poem.
Pls do comment out my latest poem too. I\'m a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
October 31st, 2016 02:30
The Flaws Of Education
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANON ~ Great first POEM thans for sharing. In the UK we have some FREE SCHOOLS ! No uniform ~ no fixed curriculum ~ no exams ~ AMEN. It is expecially for the Children whose Parents are FREE THINKERS. In essence the best SCHOOL is the COMMUNITY and the ENVIRONMENT. For many kids their best (and most creative) years are wasted and stiffed in STATE SCHOOLS ! Yours BRIAN In one class a Teacher was showing slides of RAINBOWS when there was a eeal one outside the blacked out window. Anoher tine a 13 year old boy was caned and sent home for bringing his PET SNAKE to School ~ great opportunity for SHOW & TELL missed ! The school has a stuffed SNAKE ! Stuff the Cuurrulum ~ Yours B
October 30th, 2016 17:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANON ~ Great first POEM thans for sharing. In the UK we have some FREE SCHOOLS ! No uniform ~ no fixed curriculum ~ no exams ~ AMEN. It is expecially for the Children whose Parents are FREE THINKERS. In essence the best SCHOOL is the COMMUNITY and the ENVIRONMENT. For many kids their best (and most creative) years are wasted and stiffed in STATE SCHOOLS ! Yours BRIAN In one class a Teacher was showing slides of RAINBOWS when there was a eeal one outside the blacked out window. Anoher tine a 13 year old boy was caned and sent home for bringing his PET SNAKE to School ~ great opportunity for SHOW & TELL missed ! The school has a stuffed SNAKE ! Stuff the Cuurrulum ~ Yours B
October 30th, 2016 17:40
The Flaws Of Education
Christina8 said:
Yes I agree with you. I think your poem is wonderful. I have a teen that would probably agree with this! I know I do. Great job. Keep writing!
October 30th, 2016 09:37
Christina8 said:
Yes I agree with you. I think your poem is wonderful. I have a teen that would probably agree with this! I know I do. Great job. Keep writing!
October 30th, 2016 09:37
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