Comments received on poems by Anonamus

What Do I Do?
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great writing! introspective
I like this poem because it exposes what many people think and experience, but perhaps only a few talk about it. The answer will be very individualistic.
Bless Day!

August 10th, 2018 10:25

Office Job
Lorna said:

I had to make my living in a corporation but managed never to take it home w/me and had a life of adventures on the outside..... it is absolutely hell you are living........ Just keep telling yourself that you are using THEM! Isn\'t it awful ....... you\'re not alone!

August 1st, 2018 07:04

Where Does Inspiration Come From?
Goldfinch60 said:

That inspiration comes from the strangest places and at the most inconvenient times. Good write.

July 10th, 2018 00:17

Where Does Inspiration Come From?

Hi Lawless, this is Lawless. Nice to read your work again.

You\'re absolutely right; we can not force our artistic endeavors. This is a fine inspirational piece.

There is a bird dog here that might bust your balls concerning the profanity. He\'ll ask you to make it 18+. Like it matters these days!

Please use a larger font for us old timers!

July 9th, 2018 17:58

Flowers in the Dirt

Nice poem. May kindness rule!

I hope Lawless is your real name, \'cause it ain\'t mine. Plenty of room for The Lawless Ones.

June 6th, 2018 15:53

My Life, Not Yours
Maxine Smith said:

I enjoyed this, great read.

May 7th, 2018 05:37

I Done Fucked Up
marlenawood said:

It\'s good to have experienced this always live an learn because there is so many beautiful people out there trust me. Much love good write

May 4th, 2018 07:08

I Done Fucked Up
onepauly said:

it does happen when we drink.
I know from personal experience.

May 3rd, 2018 14:10

I Done Fucked Up
Maxine Smith said:

Good write. Well done.

May 3rd, 2018 13:10

F*ck it I give up.
Syd said:

I love the emotion in this write. I can also relate.

- Syd

April 30th, 2018 18:46

So When\'s the Revolution?
Syd said:

Strong words. Enjoyed

- Syd

April 30th, 2018 18:44

So When\'s the Revolution?
florence arla said:

Intense, I love it.

April 30th, 2018 11:16

So When\'s the Revolution?
onepauly said:

merry ole England.

April 30th, 2018 09:54

So When\'s the Revolution?
Azura Nightsong said:

Viva la revolutioooooon my friend. Its a long time coming. I share with your frustration. Good poem.

April 30th, 2018 09:05

Bloody Machine
onepauly said:

it does make you think! though I would not be able to know it unless I was him. not a pleasant poem, but true. we could all learn something from it.

April 29th, 2018 16:36

Bloody Machine
Maxine Smith said:

I love this read, great job.

April 29th, 2018 11:44

Feathery Friend
Maxine Smith said:

A great write.

April 15th, 2018 12:53

F*ck it I give up.
Salem_B911 said:

That’s deep. Definitely sounds like you’re going through a lot. I love the read.

March 29th, 2018 18:27

F*ck it I give up.
kitcat said:

Wow! I can imagine that is what it is like, quite chilling, loved the way you wrote it Excellent

March 29th, 2018 14:53

The Lost Traveler
marlenawood said:

Beautiful piece love

March 29th, 2018 07:30

F*ck it I give up.
marlenawood said:

Very intense read. Brings back memories of the days when I was running with my best friend the devil. He walks around me til this day but it\'s ok no need to go play

March 29th, 2018 07:27

Cuppa Tea
Lorna said:

Growing up we had to \"polish the silver teapot\" for the daily teatime....... I miss my parents!

February 28th, 2018 08:26

Cuppa Tea
orchidee said:

Well, to quote a comedy programme: My tea is so weak sometimes, people ask if it is ferret p*e. ohhh! One sugar these days, though used to be two. A fine write.

February 28th, 2018 08:21

Cuppa Tea
LittleGift said:

Green tea for me 😊 a lovely write. Made me think of my dad. He had an obsession with tea and would make his own blends. He called one Pinagmi54 which was his favourite. You could stand a spoon up in it lol

Thanks for the reminder of my wonderful dad 😊

February 28th, 2018 07:08

Pride Flag
SadderPoet64 said:

Well said. I admire this, greatly

February 1st, 2018 11:22

Tony36 said:

Great write

January 24th, 2018 16:16

reverberate said:

hey anonamus,
I had the same dream as you but less so:

on the lake
In my dream
a handmade boat
its oars stowed
a song drifts
where I need to be
it takes me.

December 14th, 2017 01:17

Borys said:

Very nicely written there.

December 13th, 2017 16:16

Christina8 said:

Really great heartfelt write! You are in good company at MPS. There are a lot of sufferers of depression. I am included in that lot. Great job!

December 12th, 2017 18:36

Time to Fight.
dusk arising said:

Difficult! Thought provoking. Angry? Very powerful writing.

August 24th, 2017 16:09

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