Comments received on poems by Liam Lawless
I Don\'t Give a Damm
Mizzy said:
I love a good ole jiggle myself. Cool poem, I will help you push the buggers off the stage.
May 6th, 2017 17:39
Mizzy said:
I love a good ole jiggle myself. Cool poem, I will help you push the buggers off the stage.
May 6th, 2017 17:39
Empty Lake
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true. When is homo sapiens going to stop killing our planet.
April 8th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true. When is homo sapiens going to stop killing our planet.
April 8th, 2017 00:51
Noble Knights
willyweed said:
A noble cause I would sit at your round table with honor my Lord!
Chivalry cannot be dead dying maybe but dead?
March 2nd, 2017 07:34
willyweed said:
A noble cause I would sit at your round table with honor my Lord!
Chivalry cannot be dead dying maybe but dead?
March 2nd, 2017 07:34
Turn Away
Phoenix8523 said:
We all fit in somewhere. I haven\'t found it yet myself, but I\'m gonna keep on looking. Nicely written! -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:26
Phoenix8523 said:
We all fit in somewhere. I haven\'t found it yet myself, but I\'m gonna keep on looking. Nicely written! -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:26
Eyes
WriteBeLight said:
Something that should not be taken for granted. Very nice tribute.
January 10th, 2017 19:35
WriteBeLight said:
Something that should not be taken for granted. Very nice tribute.
January 10th, 2017 19:35
Emotional Wreak
WriteBeLight said:
Very emotional message...:) And, right on point.
January 8th, 2017 07:21
WriteBeLight said:
Very emotional message...:) And, right on point.
January 8th, 2017 07:21
I give up
RoseHouston said:
Hi I stumbled on your poem and I honestly just finished this poem lol maybe was for u to hear. :)
I feel you, but I cannot see you. I can hear your words with my soul. You write things in places only I understand. At a moment that is right for me. To hear you is beautiful, and warm. Yes, warm like sunlight on my face. True and pure. When I think of the sun I do not think of it as a large burning mass far off in the distance. I think of the sun as a beautiful mystery. So big so powerful. yet gentle and nurturing . It is so far from our hands, but we can still feel it. That is a touch without touch. I hate that we forget to love, to care as you do about these things that are created. See for you are the true creator, and to be lost in the mess of this world\'s mistakes is the truest sadness of all. We are all connected to eachother. To this beautiful dream of life. It is all around you and no where all at once. I reach for you. For your hand. For your pure heart to rescue this bruised one & I can feel the most beautiful love I have ever felt. Words can not sum the feeling of no hurt, no judgment, for I am the creation you breathed to life. I am your son or your daughter. You blessed me too feel love not to make it a burden. Mercy & forgivness are always with us. It runs through my veins as yours has since the beginging of time. Since the begining of my story & your story. For aren\'t we all here for a moment. A moment that is already chosen. That is already written just as I write now? My hands press these keys. Speaking of all the hidden things in my heart. In your heart. I am not scared of persecution. I do not hold that near any part of me. We forget to love you see. To really see the beauty in places. The creation of life in the light within and even in sadness & sorrow too. I am not alone and neither are you. We wrap our present you see, because it is a suprise. A beautiful secret. It is special when it is given and receive. Balanced. The present is love. Never forget that.
Rose F.
January 2nd, 2017 17:29
RoseHouston said:
Hi I stumbled on your poem and I honestly just finished this poem lol maybe was for u to hear. :)
I feel you, but I cannot see you. I can hear your words with my soul. You write things in places only I understand. At a moment that is right for me. To hear you is beautiful, and warm. Yes, warm like sunlight on my face. True and pure. When I think of the sun I do not think of it as a large burning mass far off in the distance. I think of the sun as a beautiful mystery. So big so powerful. yet gentle and nurturing . It is so far from our hands, but we can still feel it. That is a touch without touch. I hate that we forget to love, to care as you do about these things that are created. See for you are the true creator, and to be lost in the mess of this world\'s mistakes is the truest sadness of all. We are all connected to eachother. To this beautiful dream of life. It is all around you and no where all at once. I reach for you. For your hand. For your pure heart to rescue this bruised one & I can feel the most beautiful love I have ever felt. Words can not sum the feeling of no hurt, no judgment, for I am the creation you breathed to life. I am your son or your daughter. You blessed me too feel love not to make it a burden. Mercy & forgivness are always with us. It runs through my veins as yours has since the beginging of time. Since the begining of my story & your story. For aren\'t we all here for a moment. A moment that is already chosen. That is already written just as I write now? My hands press these keys. Speaking of all the hidden things in my heart. In your heart. I am not scared of persecution. I do not hold that near any part of me. We forget to love you see. To really see the beauty in places. The creation of life in the light within and even in sadness & sorrow too. I am not alone and neither are you. We wrap our present you see, because it is a suprise. A beautiful secret. It is special when it is given and receive. Balanced. The present is love. Never forget that.
Rose F.
January 2nd, 2017 17:29
I give up
Phoenix8523 said:
I can certainly feel your struggle. Though I don\'t know your struggles, I can relate. Life is so full of ebb and flow that it can be so incredibly drowning. I didn\'t realize how it would affect my loved ones in a negative way. Fortunately, I was found out and received treatment. Lots and lots of treatment. I\'m not perfect and life is hard, but my loved ones deserve better than to suffer another loss. AND, I deserve better. AND, you will get up and brush yourself off. Moment to moment. -- phoenix
January 2nd, 2017 16:50
Phoenix8523 said:
I can certainly feel your struggle. Though I don\'t know your struggles, I can relate. Life is so full of ebb and flow that it can be so incredibly drowning. I didn\'t realize how it would affect my loved ones in a negative way. Fortunately, I was found out and received treatment. Lots and lots of treatment. I\'m not perfect and life is hard, but my loved ones deserve better than to suffer another loss. AND, I deserve better. AND, you will get up and brush yourself off. Moment to moment. -- phoenix
January 2nd, 2017 16:50
I give up
mjam said:
I promise you that. It gets better. Even if the delight comes from your next drink of hot chocolate, to falling in love it\'s still a delight you feel here. My best friend killed himself 4 weeks ago. I feel really alone right now and those are words I can imagine describing how he felt in his last moments and how I feel now but it\'s never perminant. Don\'t ever kill yourself. I can see from your words that it\'s something that\'s crossed your mind. The tiltle alone. But it\'s truly devastating to those you leave. It broke me completely. I love him more than I can describe and he broke me by being so broken he felt he couldn\'t be fixed. Someone cares. Someone loves you. You\'re someone\'s child, someone\'s best friend, someone\'s everything, even if you don\'t feel it you are. My best friend was my everything. But now I feel so lonely.
January 2nd, 2017 16:24
mjam said:
I promise you that. It gets better. Even if the delight comes from your next drink of hot chocolate, to falling in love it\'s still a delight you feel here. My best friend killed himself 4 weeks ago. I feel really alone right now and those are words I can imagine describing how he felt in his last moments and how I feel now but it\'s never perminant. Don\'t ever kill yourself. I can see from your words that it\'s something that\'s crossed your mind. The tiltle alone. But it\'s truly devastating to those you leave. It broke me completely. I love him more than I can describe and he broke me by being so broken he felt he couldn\'t be fixed. Someone cares. Someone loves you. You\'re someone\'s child, someone\'s best friend, someone\'s everything, even if you don\'t feel it you are. My best friend was my everything. But now I feel so lonely.
January 2nd, 2017 16:24
I give up
mjam said:
It gets better. It\'s hard to see sometimes. God knows that now I\'m having a hard time to see it but good times will come.
January 2nd, 2017 16:18
mjam said:
It gets better. It\'s hard to see sometimes. God knows that now I\'m having a hard time to see it but good times will come.
January 2nd, 2017 16:18
I give up
mjam said:
I\'ve been asking myself the same questions but I\'ve also asked myself why should I die. I don\'t know what\'s beyond this. I have so much I want to experience, so much I want to see. Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. I think often of how I\'d do it myself. But never follow through. Whether that makes me a coward for not doing it or brace contuing to live despite wanting to die I won\'t know til my time comes. I want to make an impact, whether on a handful of people or to more I don\'t care. I want to leave a mark. I haven\'t done that yet.
January 2nd, 2017 16:17
mjam said:
I\'ve been asking myself the same questions but I\'ve also asked myself why should I die. I don\'t know what\'s beyond this. I have so much I want to experience, so much I want to see. Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. I think often of how I\'d do it myself. But never follow through. Whether that makes me a coward for not doing it or brace contuing to live despite wanting to die I won\'t know til my time comes. I want to make an impact, whether on a handful of people or to more I don\'t care. I want to leave a mark. I haven\'t done that yet.
January 2nd, 2017 16:17
I give up
willyweed said:
First I\'d say this is very well written
you pose a tuff question, one I\'m sure everyone asks them self\' at one time or another. great write ww
January 2nd, 2017 13:38
willyweed said:
First I\'d say this is very well written
you pose a tuff question, one I\'m sure everyone asks them self\' at one time or another. great write ww
January 2nd, 2017 13:38
I give up
Christina8 said:
Good poem. I think we live to give others joy. I\'ve sometimes struggled with the question too. But many who love you would be stricken in pain if you were gone. Keep up the fight! Hope to see more of your writes!
January 2nd, 2017 12:35
Christina8 said:
Good poem. I think we live to give others joy. I\'ve sometimes struggled with the question too. But many who love you would be stricken in pain if you were gone. Keep up the fight! Hope to see more of your writes!
January 2nd, 2017 12:35
\"Shool Yard Fun\"
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my word this is
A very good poem
I love it... at school
I was bullied for having
Darker skin than anyone
Else in the school...
I did things to get expelled.
It stayed with me for years
Well done.....
December 12th, 2016 15:54
P.H.Rose said:
Oh my word this is
A very good poem
I love it... at school
I was bullied for having
Darker skin than anyone
Else in the school...
I did things to get expelled.
It stayed with me for years
Well done.....
December 12th, 2016 15:54
\"Shool Yard Fun\"
dominicpalmer said:
Hits hard. Feels real. Well written.
December 12th, 2016 13:36
dominicpalmer said:
Hits hard. Feels real. Well written.
December 12th, 2016 13:36
The Hatred of the Lord
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh no don\'t feel like that, if u come to the one true God u will have all your questions answered and understand the reasons why we suffer. Only the devil makes us suffer and yes free will let\'s us please him and do his bidding instead of heeding God. U spoke yor heart out and it is not meant to offend but I hope u do try think reasonably. God has not abandoned us, only those commit evil and hatred who abandon Him.
December 3rd, 2016 09:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh no don\'t feel like that, if u come to the one true God u will have all your questions answered and understand the reasons why we suffer. Only the devil makes us suffer and yes free will let\'s us please him and do his bidding instead of heeding God. U spoke yor heart out and it is not meant to offend but I hope u do try think reasonably. God has not abandoned us, only those commit evil and hatred who abandon Him.
December 3rd, 2016 09:20
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