Comments received on poems by SabreLi
Where I Belong
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, (way I interpret) how the poem expresses how one has realized that they made a mistake in judgement and wants forgiveness. Very well put.
December 14th, 2016 06:51
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent, (way I interpret) how the poem expresses how one has realized that they made a mistake in judgement and wants forgiveness. Very well put.
December 14th, 2016 06:51
Tempest Of Temptation
Quemis said:
Great poem, I feel like the lines could be shorter for a better bounce, but great piece none the less.
: ) good job.
December 13th, 2016 13:13
Quemis said:
Great poem, I feel like the lines could be shorter for a better bounce, but great piece none the less.
: ) good job.
December 13th, 2016 13:13
Tempest Of Temptation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SABRE and a timely warning for the Holiday Season when (in my humble opinion) the WINE always flows too freely. For people who can\'t control their intake they will end up making a drunken mistake which could ruin the whole future. Some will drive and kill themselves and others. Because ALCOHOL is a SOCIAL DRUG many people (especially the Young are unaware just how lethal (and addictive) it is ~ before it is too late ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
December 13th, 2016 11:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing SABRE and a timely warning for the Holiday Season when (in my humble opinion) the WINE always flows too freely. For people who can\'t control their intake they will end up making a drunken mistake which could ruin the whole future. Some will drive and kill themselves and others. Because ALCOHOL is a SOCIAL DRUG many people (especially the Young are unaware just how lethal (and addictive) it is ~ before it is too late ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
December 13th, 2016 11:14
Tempest Of Temptation
WriteBeLight said:
It is a temporary fix that leaves permanent damages. Excellent job.
December 13th, 2016 10:36
WriteBeLight said:
It is a temporary fix that leaves permanent damages. Excellent job.
December 13th, 2016 10:36
Tempest Of Temptation
Daniel said:
I have known many addicts, and know the terrible toll it takes on all those close to them. A great poem, well done!
December 13th, 2016 09:06
Daniel said:
I have known many addicts, and know the terrible toll it takes on all those close to them. A great poem, well done!
December 13th, 2016 09:06
Jekyll And Hyde
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem...
My own take on this world
Is we are born alone.
We die alone and in between
We hope to meet someone
To share that time....
December 12th, 2016 15:51
P.H.Rose said:
I love this poem...
My own take on this world
Is we are born alone.
We die alone and in between
We hope to meet someone
To share that time....
December 12th, 2016 15:51
Jekyll And Hyde
WriteBeLight said:
Interesting approach to a love story. You have mentioned some twisted ones. How about Kurt Cobain and Courtney Love? Great Job!
December 12th, 2016 14:54
WriteBeLight said:
Interesting approach to a love story. You have mentioned some twisted ones. How about Kurt Cobain and Courtney Love? Great Job!
December 12th, 2016 14:54
Four Horsemen
Daniel said:
My favourite of your pens so far, a truly epic piece!
December 11th, 2016 11:13
Daniel said:
My favourite of your pens so far, a truly epic piece!
December 11th, 2016 11:13
Four Horsemen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED SABRE The fouir Horsemen of the Apocalypse ~ The WHITE Horse represents the Antichrist ~ The BLACK Horse Famine ~ The RED Horse War and the PALE Horse Death. The Book of Revelation is full of prophesy and imagery much of which is being fulfilled today ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 11th, 2016 09:36
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YES INDEED SABRE The fouir Horsemen of the Apocalypse ~ The WHITE Horse represents the Antichrist ~ The BLACK Horse Famine ~ The RED Horse War and the PALE Horse Death. The Book of Revelation is full of prophesy and imagery much of which is being fulfilled today ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
December 11th, 2016 09:36
Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws
SharonMoemise said:
I get goosebumps reading this. So beautifully written, one wants to read it over again. Great poem, SabreLi. I\'ve been waiting for this poem to appear. You didn\'t disappoint cos it\'s great stuff!
December 10th, 2016 16:58
SharonMoemise said:
I get goosebumps reading this. So beautifully written, one wants to read it over again. Great poem, SabreLi. I\'ve been waiting for this poem to appear. You didn\'t disappoint cos it\'s great stuff!
December 10th, 2016 16:58
Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is amazing and although it\'s sad it is a beautiful work of art!!
December 10th, 2016 16:39
Elegant_Style said:
wow, this is amazing and although it\'s sad it is a beautiful work of art!!
December 10th, 2016 16:39
Prisoner In Death\'s Jaws
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent job of portraying a deep dark place for a mind to be trapped in.👍👍
December 10th, 2016 08:18
WriteBeLight said:
Excellent job of portraying a deep dark place for a mind to be trapped in.👍👍
December 10th, 2016 08:18
The Evil Within
Quemis said:
I love some of this bounce.
Too fun. Despite the subject matter and all.
December 9th, 2016 01:04
Quemis said:
I love some of this bounce.
Too fun. Despite the subject matter and all.
December 9th, 2016 01:04
The Evil Within
WriteBeLight said:
You are a poet prodigy! So, sorry you felt that way. I am glad, and it is clear, that you have overcome the demon inside, because nothing but great work is emerging! Excellence once again.
December 8th, 2016 12:20
WriteBeLight said:
You are a poet prodigy! So, sorry you felt that way. I am glad, and it is clear, that you have overcome the demon inside, because nothing but great work is emerging! Excellence once again.
December 8th, 2016 12:20
South of Heaven
Daniel said:
A beautifully written piece. Their is a softness and an honesty to your writing that that you can\'t help connecting to. I really did love it!
December 4th, 2016 19:03
Daniel said:
A beautifully written piece. Their is a softness and an honesty to your writing that that you can\'t help connecting to. I really did love it!
December 4th, 2016 19:03
South of Heaven
WriteBeLight said:
So much risk to one\'s peace of mind when loss occurs. Heartbreaking. Beautiful work.
December 4th, 2016 17:50
WriteBeLight said:
So much risk to one\'s peace of mind when loss occurs. Heartbreaking. Beautiful work.
December 4th, 2016 17:50
South of Heaven
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!!!!!!! and again you have produced a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing you\'re awesome!!!!
December 4th, 2016 16:34
Elegant_Style said:
!!!!!!!!!!!! and again you have produced a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing you\'re awesome!!!!
December 4th, 2016 16:34
The Price of Clarity
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
No, you could easily be a songwriter...songwriting IS musical talent...because I am a singer and I could envision myself singing your work...I\'m so glad that you have joined our sight,,your writing is amazing...It reminds me om my own in some ways...we are both 3rd decanant Pisceans (my bday is 3/16) ...
December 4th, 2016 15:26
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
No, you could easily be a songwriter...songwriting IS musical talent...because I am a singer and I could envision myself singing your work...I\'m so glad that you have joined our sight,,your writing is amazing...It reminds me om my own in some ways...we are both 3rd decanant Pisceans (my bday is 3/16) ...
December 4th, 2016 15:26
South of Heaven
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is absolutely stunning work...it could easily be made into a song...beautifully written, and it reminded me of so many things...This is the first one I have read by you, I am going to loo at your prior work...when one is this brilliant, the others are more of the same...Hope you are in happier place NOW...take care
December 4th, 2016 15:02
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is absolutely stunning work...it could easily be made into a song...beautifully written, and it reminded me of so many things...This is the first one I have read by you, I am going to loo at your prior work...when one is this brilliant, the others are more of the same...Hope you are in happier place NOW...take care
December 4th, 2016 15:02
South of Heaven
SharonMoemise said:
Oh wow! I really teared up and read it twice. This is such a beautiful poem. Great work, SabreLi, as usual, written with such flair as only you know how.. I love it!
December 4th, 2016 13:44
SharonMoemise said:
Oh wow! I really teared up and read it twice. This is such a beautiful poem. Great work, SabreLi, as usual, written with such flair as only you know how.. I love it!
December 4th, 2016 13:44
Mine To Farewell
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful lyrical poem on a one night stand or a relationship built on that perhaps. So appealing and written in excellent verse n refrain. Ofcourse letting down the guard makes it an unforgettable experience which makes the love lost more regrettable. Kudos for the rhyming too.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 2nd, 2016 07:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful lyrical poem on a one night stand or a relationship built on that perhaps. So appealing and written in excellent verse n refrain. Ofcourse letting down the guard makes it an unforgettable experience which makes the love lost more regrettable. Kudos for the rhyming too.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 2nd, 2016 07:59
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