Mine To Farewell
Vic E said:

Beautiful verses. Two thumbs up

December 1st, 2016 16:22

Jack And Jill
Francesco said:

Wonderful!

November 30th, 2016 23:15

Rose Tinted Glasses
Francesco said:

Sabre, this is beautiful. I too have experinced the loss of a close friend caused by a depression too strong for him and I can relate.
I am sorry for your loss and thank you for sharing. You have inspired me to publish my lyrics about A.
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November 30th, 2016 23:10

Runaway Freight Train
Daniel said:

An amazing poem brilliantly written, absolutely loved it!

November 30th, 2016 16:45

Tears Of A Thousand Angels
Kira said:

Wow, amazing keep it up!

November 30th, 2016 12:46

Tears Of A Thousand Angels
SharonMoemise said:

I love how you bring out your emotion in your work for all to feel. It\'s almost as though you allow the reader to walkwith you in that moment. Great writing skills, Kat.

November 30th, 2016 01:31

Jack And Jill
Aa Harvey said:

I really liked this. I like the realism in the poem and the way it smoothly flows along and so soon we reach the end, but the length of the poem is perfect and so is the poem.

November 29th, 2016 07:31

Jack And Jill
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome Awesome write

November 28th, 2016 16:00

My Last Breath
SharonMoemise said:

great writing style. The emotion and meaning is amazingly brought forth within every line. A sad poem that reminds me so much of a poem I wrote called, As I Lay. Great work, indeed.

November 27th, 2016 23:29

Enough Is Enough
Simple-Man87 said:

Very relatable. Everything from \"fair isn\'t fair\" to \"little fish in sharks domain.\" You\'re very talented. I\'m not a critic nor articulate in my comments, but I was floored when you said in your comment this was simple. For having been in that situation for many years, simple, is what it is far from.

November 27th, 2016 20:21

Grass Aint Greener
Kidwxnder said:

I actually love this because my inspiration is chris brown and this is amazing

November 26th, 2016 15:13

Rose Tinted Glasses
Elegant_Style said:

This is absolutely amazing!! The pain is evident in the words and my heart broke while reading this. But in the end, \"All that\'s left is to say Goodbye\"

Thanks for sharing

November 24th, 2016 23:42

Rose Tinted Glasses
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS SABRE ~ This is a very powerful and poignant poem which made me both sad and caused me to think. A number of my close friends have taken their own lives and my feeling always is ~ If only I stayed with them 24/7 ~ If only i read the sign better etc ............... BUT I DIDN\'T and I do miss them every day. Your poem is a lament and its angst is increased by the repetitions \" Inside I just keep hurting\" and \"The harder you pull ~ the harder I will hold\" In the end you resign yourself to inevitability (as we all do !) \"And no matter how hard I try ~ All that\'s left is to say goodbye\" Thanks for caring ~ thanks fro sharing ~ YOURS BRIAN ~ HUGS

November 24th, 2016 18:04

Enough Is Enough
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SABRE ~ THANKS for you first poem ! Itis elegant in both its structure and its meesge ! Liverpool has a great tradition o poets and you are no exception ! Classical poetry is reinforced bt repetition and the doulet ~ at the nd of vs 1 3 & 5 starts with the refrain DECISIONS ~ DECISIONS (1 & 3) and the in 5 DELUSIONS ~ ILLUSIONS. Then each verse is joined by a refrian NO PAIN ~ NO GAIN ~ Awesome. The theme of you poem in something we all face in Life and Love ~ We are all TINY FISH in sharks domain and Life is too short for regrets. We can all empathise ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ MORE PLEASE ~ Yours BRIAN

November 22nd, 2016 09:12