Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87



If I Were A Better Man
Bluskys said:

Beautifully put!

September 27th, 2022 23:18

If I Were A Better Man
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Great point and putting it to verse was spot on.

September 27th, 2022 18:10

From Black Tar, To Black Top
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M7,

Wowā€¦a very intense and dark write. What an imagination. It felt so real when I was reading it. Iā€™m glad these words are not autobiographical.

LaurašŸŒ»

October 23rd, 2021 18:22

Insane?
Simple-Man87 said:

L.B, and Doggerel, thank you both for your kind words and opinions, both are held in high regard.

September 24th, 2021 10:10

Insane?
Doggerel Dave said:

I am forced to tell you the answer is ā€“ yes. Or at least you have been judged as severely disturbed to find yourself in that position ā€“ justified by the thoughts displayed in the second half.
Well structured piece ā€“ content should leave an uneasy feelā€¦


September 24th, 2021 07:19

Insane?
L. B. Mek said:

no, I read nothing insane
just a tired soul, trying to find a new anchor of inspiration
a spark of warmth, to affirm its belonging to this universe
in short, I read and related to the yearning: in your poetic voice..
a good read, thanks for sharing

September 24th, 2021 04:51

Insane?
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M87,

As I read your poem, I sense a sadness. Iā€™m hoping the words Iā€™m reading are not relatable to you or something youā€™re experiencing. If they are, Iā€™m so sorry for you. Do not despair because this too shall pass. I wish you all the best.

LaurašŸŒ»

September 23rd, 2021 23:23

HELL
L. B. Mek said:

really well written
thanks for sharing

September 9th, 2021 04:22

HELL
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M87,

You donā€™t see the flame because it is within. Donā€™t let that ash shroud the beautiful blue sky thatā€™s there for you to see. Within that shell of a man
ā€¦as you say itā€¦
thereā€™s beauty and a gentle soul. That carnal ā€œAngelā€ was not there because it was not worthy of you. Let it not be said ā€œA once loved man is goneā€. Heā€™s there with a guardian Angel upon his shoulder. Listen carefullyā€¦youā€™ll be guided toward that blue sky and see the light. That light will shine within you and guide you. Listen to your guardian Angel upon your shoulder and be patient.
Patience is the key.
Wishing you all the best. You deserve it.

LaurašŸŒ»

September 8th, 2021 21:49

HELL
HannahElisabeth said:

\"A once loved man is gone\" really hit me hard, this was a very moving piece

September 8th, 2021 17:02

HELL
AuburnScribbler said:

A powerful scene that\'s been beautifully worded.

Bravo Simple-Man87, I hope all is well!

September 8th, 2021 13:53

HELL
iAli said:

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September 8th, 2021 12:54

Lost to Loved
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M87,

Many times in our ā€˜darkest hourā€™ we are so blinded that we donā€™t realize thereā€™s a light. We donā€™t realize it at those moments of darknessā€¦but the light is always there. Letā€™s be patient. Eventually we will see it.
Obviously youā€™ve seen it. No illusionā€¦itā€™s realā€¦itā€™s your ā€˜new lifeā€™ā€¦your ā€˜Angel in the fleshā€™.
Yes, indeed, ā€˜love will prevailā€™ā€¦be patient and let it fill your heart.

Glad to read your work after a long break.

LaurašŸŒ»



August 19th, 2021 16:08

More Than....
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Youā€™ve certainly expressed your feelings in an honest way. I hope she ā€˜put the card down and looked intoā€™ your eyes and saw what you saw.

A wonderful read my dear poet!
Thank you for sharing.

LaurašŸŒ»

July 17th, 2021 14:30

More Than....
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write showing your love.

Andy

March 19th, 2021 01:32

First Glance
L. B. Mek said:

I liked those poetic elements that demonstrated your natural talent for flow,
well executed

February 12th, 2021 06:13

First Glance
A Boy With Roses said:

Sweet poem.

February 11th, 2021 18:12

First Glance
Simple-Man87 said:

Thank you both for the read, I very much appreciate it.

February 11th, 2021 18:09

First Glance
RDS said:

A nice flow, strange how an instant can reflect a lifetime. Keep your eyes peeled my friend!
J

February 11th, 2021 17:40

First Glance
FredPeyer said:

Love or lust at first sight! I enjoyed the read, simple-man.

February 11th, 2021 16:25

Support
Goldfinch60 said:

With you there those fears will soon be dispelled.

October 11th, 2020 00:27

Day of Decoration
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Simple-Man87,

An expressive and emotive write!
Yes, let us be thankful and appreciative of all who have sacrificed their lives to protect our liberty!šŸ—½

Thank you for sharing šŸ‡ŗšŸ‡ø

Laura

May 26th, 2020 10:20

Clarice
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

May 19th, 2020 23:59

I miss...
Thoughts In Time said:

Sounds too good to be true...true heaven for you...always special to have someone who triggers your feelings , emotions to such a level...life without passion is not worth livingšŸŒ¹

October 9th, 2019 11:11

Holding On
sylviasearcher said:

Everyone\'s twinkle deserves to glisten. But it\'s hard when there is such a cost.

October 23rd, 2018 07:35

Holding On
Crystal Hope said:

this poem is beautiful. Fine job!

October 22nd, 2018 22:23

AFTERMATH
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M87,

Youā€™re still feeling sad and blaming yourself for it! Youā€™re not being fair to yourself. Cut yourself some slack. Ease up on the negatives and concentrate upon the positives. This will open up your heart ( yes, you do have one) to someone new! You deserve happiness, too!
Glad to read your writing! May your next one be less sad!

~Laura~

September 26th, 2018 23:48

AFTERMATH
Christina8 said:

Very good poem, SM!! Good to see you back!

September 26th, 2018 13:09

THE NIGHT
Christina8 said:

A great poem, SM! I also was going to write \"it takes two to tango\" but Laura beat me to it, LOL! It takes more than one to make or break a relationship. Hopefully you find happiness soon.

May 23rd, 2018 20:24

THE NIGHT
LaurašŸŒ» said:

S-M87,
A super emotive write!
A lot of sadness! Youā€™re
claiming all the blame!
Youā€™re being too harsh
with yourself!
Remember this adage...
ā€œIt takes two to tango!ā€
You SHOULDNā€™T blame
yourself šŸ’Æ %!
I donā€™t know your circumstances or age, but you have to let go for your own sanity! You deserve happiness too!

~Laura~

May 23rd, 2018 13:41

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