Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87
If I Were A Better Man
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Great point and putting it to verse was spot on.
September 27th, 2022 18:10
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Great point and putting it to verse was spot on.
September 27th, 2022 18:10
From Black Tar, To Black Top
Lauraš» said:
S-M7,
Wowā¦a very intense and dark write. What an imagination. It felt so real when I was reading it. Iām glad these words are not autobiographical.
Lauraš»
October 23rd, 2021 18:22
Lauraš» said:
S-M7,
Wowā¦a very intense and dark write. What an imagination. It felt so real when I was reading it. Iām glad these words are not autobiographical.
Lauraš»
October 23rd, 2021 18:22
Insane?
Simple-Man87 said:
L.B, and Doggerel, thank you both for your kind words and opinions, both are held in high regard.
September 24th, 2021 10:10
Simple-Man87 said:
L.B, and Doggerel, thank you both for your kind words and opinions, both are held in high regard.
September 24th, 2021 10:10
Insane?
Doggerel Dave said:
I am forced to tell you the answer is ā yes. Or at least you have been judged as severely disturbed to find yourself in that position ā justified by the thoughts displayed in the second half.
Well structured piece ā content should leave an uneasy feelā¦
September 24th, 2021 07:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I am forced to tell you the answer is ā yes. Or at least you have been judged as severely disturbed to find yourself in that position ā justified by the thoughts displayed in the second half.
Well structured piece ā content should leave an uneasy feelā¦
September 24th, 2021 07:19
Insane?
L. B. Mek said:
no, I read nothing insane
just a tired soul, trying to find a new anchor of inspiration
a spark of warmth, to affirm its belonging to this universe
in short, I read and related to the yearning: in your poetic voice..
a good read, thanks for sharing
September 24th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
no, I read nothing insane
just a tired soul, trying to find a new anchor of inspiration
a spark of warmth, to affirm its belonging to this universe
in short, I read and related to the yearning: in your poetic voice..
a good read, thanks for sharing
September 24th, 2021 04:51
Insane?
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
As I read your poem, I sense a sadness. Iām hoping the words Iām reading are not relatable to you or something youāre experiencing. If they are, Iām so sorry for you. Do not despair because this too shall pass. I wish you all the best.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:23
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
As I read your poem, I sense a sadness. Iām hoping the words Iām reading are not relatable to you or something youāre experiencing. If they are, Iām so sorry for you. Do not despair because this too shall pass. I wish you all the best.
Lauraš»
September 23rd, 2021 23:23
HELL
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
You donāt see the flame because it is within. Donāt let that ash shroud the beautiful blue sky thatās there for you to see. Within that shell of a man
ā¦as you say itā¦
thereās beauty and a gentle soul. That carnal āAngelā was not there because it was not worthy of you. Let it not be said āA once loved man is goneā. Heās there with a guardian Angel upon his shoulder. Listen carefullyā¦youāll be guided toward that blue sky and see the light. That light will shine within you and guide you. Listen to your guardian Angel upon your shoulder and be patient.
Patience is the key.
Wishing you all the best. You deserve it.
Lauraš»
September 8th, 2021 21:49
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
You donāt see the flame because it is within. Donāt let that ash shroud the beautiful blue sky thatās there for you to see. Within that shell of a man
ā¦as you say itā¦
thereās beauty and a gentle soul. That carnal āAngelā was not there because it was not worthy of you. Let it not be said āA once loved man is goneā. Heās there with a guardian Angel upon his shoulder. Listen carefullyā¦youāll be guided toward that blue sky and see the light. That light will shine within you and guide you. Listen to your guardian Angel upon your shoulder and be patient.
Patience is the key.
Wishing you all the best. You deserve it.
Lauraš»
September 8th, 2021 21:49
HELL
HannahElisabeth said:
\"A once loved man is gone\" really hit me hard, this was a very moving piece
September 8th, 2021 17:02
HannahElisabeth said:
\"A once loved man is gone\" really hit me hard, this was a very moving piece
September 8th, 2021 17:02
HELL
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful scene that\'s been beautifully worded.
Bravo Simple-Man87, I hope all is well!
September 8th, 2021 13:53
AuburnScribbler said:
A powerful scene that\'s been beautifully worded.
Bravo Simple-Man87, I hope all is well!
September 8th, 2021 13:53
Lost to Loved
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
Many times in our ādarkest hourā we are so blinded that we donāt realize thereās a light. We donāt realize it at those moments of darknessā¦but the light is always there. Letās be patient. Eventually we will see it.
Obviously youāve seen it. No illusionā¦itās realā¦itās your ānew lifeāā¦your āAngel in the fleshā.
Yes, indeed, ālove will prevailāā¦be patient and let it fill your heart.
Glad to read your work after a long break.
Lauraš»
August 19th, 2021 16:08
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
Many times in our ādarkest hourā we are so blinded that we donāt realize thereās a light. We donāt realize it at those moments of darknessā¦but the light is always there. Letās be patient. Eventually we will see it.
Obviously youāve seen it. No illusionā¦itās realā¦itās your ānew lifeāā¦your āAngel in the fleshā.
Yes, indeed, ālove will prevailāā¦be patient and let it fill your heart.
Glad to read your work after a long break.
Lauraš»
August 19th, 2021 16:08
More Than....
Lauraš» said:
Youāve certainly expressed your feelings in an honest way. I hope she āput the card down and looked intoā your eyes and saw what you saw.
A wonderful read my dear poet!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
July 17th, 2021 14:30
Lauraš» said:
Youāve certainly expressed your feelings in an honest way. I hope she āput the card down and looked intoā your eyes and saw what you saw.
A wonderful read my dear poet!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
July 17th, 2021 14:30
First Glance
L. B. Mek said:
I liked those poetic elements that demonstrated your natural talent for flow,
well executed
February 12th, 2021 06:13
L. B. Mek said:
I liked those poetic elements that demonstrated your natural talent for flow,
well executed
February 12th, 2021 06:13
First Glance
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you both for the read, I very much appreciate it.
February 11th, 2021 18:09
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you both for the read, I very much appreciate it.
February 11th, 2021 18:09
First Glance
RDS said:
A nice flow, strange how an instant can reflect a lifetime. Keep your eyes peeled my friend!
J
February 11th, 2021 17:40
RDS said:
A nice flow, strange how an instant can reflect a lifetime. Keep your eyes peeled my friend!
J
February 11th, 2021 17:40
First Glance
FredPeyer said:
Love or lust at first sight! I enjoyed the read, simple-man.
February 11th, 2021 16:25
FredPeyer said:
Love or lust at first sight! I enjoyed the read, simple-man.
February 11th, 2021 16:25
Support
Goldfinch60 said:
With you there those fears will soon be dispelled.
October 11th, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
With you there those fears will soon be dispelled.
October 11th, 2020 00:27
Day of Decoration
Lauraš» said:
Simple-Man87,
An expressive and emotive write!
Yes, let us be thankful and appreciative of all who have sacrificed their lives to protect our liberty!š½
Thank you for sharing šŗšø
Laura
May 26th, 2020 10:20
Lauraš» said:
Simple-Man87,
An expressive and emotive write!
Yes, let us be thankful and appreciative of all who have sacrificed their lives to protect our liberty!š½
Thank you for sharing šŗšø
Laura
May 26th, 2020 10:20
I miss...
Thoughts In Time said:
Sounds too good to be true...true heaven for you...always special to have someone who triggers your feelings , emotions to such a level...life without passion is not worth livingš¹
October 9th, 2019 11:11
Thoughts In Time said:
Sounds too good to be true...true heaven for you...always special to have someone who triggers your feelings , emotions to such a level...life without passion is not worth livingš¹
October 9th, 2019 11:11
Holding On
sylviasearcher said:
Everyone\'s twinkle deserves to glisten. But it\'s hard when there is such a cost.
October 23rd, 2018 07:35
sylviasearcher said:
Everyone\'s twinkle deserves to glisten. But it\'s hard when there is such a cost.
October 23rd, 2018 07:35
AFTERMATH
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
Youāre still feeling sad and blaming yourself for it! Youāre not being fair to yourself. Cut yourself some slack. Ease up on the negatives and concentrate upon the positives. This will open up your heart ( yes, you do have one) to someone new! You deserve happiness, too!
Glad to read your writing! May your next one be less sad!
~Laura~
September 26th, 2018 23:48
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
Youāre still feeling sad and blaming yourself for it! Youāre not being fair to yourself. Cut yourself some slack. Ease up on the negatives and concentrate upon the positives. This will open up your heart ( yes, you do have one) to someone new! You deserve happiness, too!
Glad to read your writing! May your next one be less sad!
~Laura~
September 26th, 2018 23:48
THE NIGHT
Christina8 said:
A great poem, SM! I also was going to write \"it takes two to tango\" but Laura beat me to it, LOL! It takes more than one to make or break a relationship. Hopefully you find happiness soon.
May 23rd, 2018 20:24
Christina8 said:
A great poem, SM! I also was going to write \"it takes two to tango\" but Laura beat me to it, LOL! It takes more than one to make or break a relationship. Hopefully you find happiness soon.
May 23rd, 2018 20:24
THE NIGHT
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
A super emotive write!
A lot of sadness! Youāre
claiming all the blame!
Youāre being too harsh
with yourself!
Remember this adage...
āIt takes two to tango!ā
You SHOULDNāT blame
yourself šÆ %!
I donāt know your circumstances or age, but you have to let go for your own sanity! You deserve happiness too!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 13:41
Lauraš» said:
S-M87,
A super emotive write!
A lot of sadness! Youāre
claiming all the blame!
Youāre being too harsh
with yourself!
Remember this adage...
āIt takes two to tango!ā
You SHOULDNāT blame
yourself šÆ %!
I donāt know your circumstances or age, but you have to let go for your own sanity! You deserve happiness too!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 13:41
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