Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87
Vivid Penance
Laura🌻 said:
It seems that today is one of those sad days for many of us for different reasons!
This writing is an excellent piece. I can feel the pain your words are expressing!
The last four lines are really, really sad!
I concur with Christina! Thank you for sharing!
October 18th, 2017 20:04
Laura🌻 said:
It seems that today is one of those sad days for many of us for different reasons!
This writing is an excellent piece. I can feel the pain your words are expressing!
The last four lines are really, really sad!
I concur with Christina! Thank you for sharing!
October 18th, 2017 20:04
Vivid Penance
Christina8 said:
Awww, such a sad write. But very well written! I think we\'ve all struggled with these thoughts. Thanks for sharing this personal write!
October 18th, 2017 18:47
Christina8 said:
Awww, such a sad write. But very well written! I think we\'ve all struggled with these thoughts. Thanks for sharing this personal write!
October 18th, 2017 18:47
Finale (Journey Pt.3)
Christina8 said:
Wow I can\'t believe I didn\'t see this earlier! I love this! My favorite of the three so far. Wonderful rhymes and just a great love story altogether. Great job!
October 14th, 2017 11:49
Christina8 said:
Wow I can\'t believe I didn\'t see this earlier! I love this! My favorite of the three so far. Wonderful rhymes and just a great love story altogether. Great job!
October 14th, 2017 11:49
Onward (Journey Pt 2)
Christina8 said:
Very nice SM! Well done piece of poetry! I like the rhyme and rhythm of this too.What a beautiful story! I wonder if there will be a part 3?
October 10th, 2017 14:27
Christina8 said:
Very nice SM! Well done piece of poetry! I like the rhyme and rhythm of this too.What a beautiful story! I wonder if there will be a part 3?
October 10th, 2017 14:27
Conscience
germanamericanchurch said:
Great poetic idea, don\'t say that often :)
October 7th, 2017 13:35
germanamericanchurch said:
Great poetic idea, don\'t say that often :)
October 7th, 2017 13:35
Mother
germanamericanchurch said:
Depressing makes me realize we all have breaks in the family that are eternal
October 7th, 2017 13:33
germanamericanchurch said:
Depressing makes me realize we all have breaks in the family that are eternal
October 7th, 2017 13:33
Journey, pt.1
germanamericanchurch said:
Liked your voice love poems are a challenge, nice and direct writing :)
October 7th, 2017 13:30
germanamericanchurch said:
Liked your voice love poems are a challenge, nice and direct writing :)
October 7th, 2017 13:30
Journey, pt.1
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving poem I do hope that you bring her that shooting star.
October 7th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving poem I do hope that you bring her that shooting star.
October 7th, 2017 00:56
Journey, pt.1
Christina8 said:
A really beautiful poem SP! You can be sure I will wait for part 2! Very romantic and well written. Well done!
October 6th, 2017 13:58
Christina8 said:
A really beautiful poem SP! You can be sure I will wait for part 2! Very romantic and well written. Well done!
October 6th, 2017 13:58
Nightmare
Christina8 said:
Oh the devastation was so totally real! Sounds like war, whether real or fantasy, this sounds like pure torture in a PTSD dream. Either way a great write.--Christina
October 4th, 2017 18:13
Christina8 said:
Oh the devastation was so totally real! Sounds like war, whether real or fantasy, this sounds like pure torture in a PTSD dream. Either way a great write.--Christina
October 4th, 2017 18:13
Acrostic Attemp
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written! She is a lucky girl! But an acrostic usually starts with the first letter of every line---helpful criticism I hope!!! :-)
October 2nd, 2017 14:41
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written! She is a lucky girl! But an acrostic usually starts with the first letter of every line---helpful criticism I hope!!! :-)
October 2nd, 2017 14:41
Acrostic Attemp
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if this, highlighting the first, then second letter, etc, is more difficult that an acrostic where the first letter of each line makes up the acrostic?! A fine write S.
October 2nd, 2017 14:29
orchidee said:
I don\'t know if this, highlighting the first, then second letter, etc, is more difficult that an acrostic where the first letter of each line makes up the acrostic?! A fine write S.
October 2nd, 2017 14:29
Sonnet Attempt
Christina8 said:
You did such a good job on your first sonnet! You should be so proud of this! I love the ending when the Angel came and placed her hand upon his heart. So sweet! Looking forward to more!--Christina
September 29th, 2017 14:04
Christina8 said:
You did such a good job on your first sonnet! You should be so proud of this! I love the ending when the Angel came and placed her hand upon his heart. So sweet! Looking forward to more!--Christina
September 29th, 2017 14:04
Mother
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you Christina. I appreciate your comment. It was a surprise visit that my brother and I made. I think she died with a little peace, knowing that we forgave her.
September 27th, 2017 12:52
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you Christina. I appreciate your comment. It was a surprise visit that my brother and I made. I think she died with a little peace, knowing that we forgave her.
September 27th, 2017 12:52
Mother
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written poem. I almost cried. I can relate to the \"emotional vandal\" part, but nothing like you have experienced. No child should have to endure that. Can I say, I am so glad you found it in your giant heart to forgive her? It speaks volumes about you. And it is so healing. Condolences--Christina
September 27th, 2017 12:50
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written poem. I almost cried. I can relate to the \"emotional vandal\" part, but nothing like you have experienced. No child should have to endure that. Can I say, I am so glad you found it in your giant heart to forgive her? It speaks volumes about you. And it is so healing. Condolences--Christina
September 27th, 2017 12:50
The First Meet
chinaaliciarivera said:
Beautiful poem. Good words. I love the way it rhymes of course. I always like a poem that rhymes. Good flow. Very nicely written. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:34
chinaaliciarivera said:
Beautiful poem. Good words. I love the way it rhymes of course. I always like a poem that rhymes. Good flow. Very nicely written. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:34
The First Meet
Christina8 said:
This is a well written poem about two people falling in love. I think it\'s cute how you call it luck and she calls it fate! Great imagery!--Christina
September 26th, 2017 11:44
Christina8 said:
This is a well written poem about two people falling in love. I think it\'s cute how you call it luck and she calls it fate! Great imagery!--Christina
September 26th, 2017 11:44
The Day
Christina8 said:
Sounds like you are head over heels for your blue eyed love. wonderful dedication! A great write SM! I hope she loves it!
September 25th, 2017 17:09
Christina8 said:
Sounds like you are head over heels for your blue eyed love. wonderful dedication! A great write SM! I hope she loves it!
September 25th, 2017 17:09
Haiku Compilation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MAN ~ I love HAIKU and these are perfect and (as you have presented) I prefer a themed group rather than just a \"stand alone\". The analogy between Love and the Seasons is a popular one in poetry and you have explored it perfectly. I agree with you Love is reflected in all four Seasons ! Thanks for sharing. My poem today is a collaboration with CHRISTINA on Four Solar Bodies Venus ~ Mars ~ Sun ~ Moon. Please check ~ thanks BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 15:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MAN ~ I love HAIKU and these are perfect and (as you have presented) I prefer a themed group rather than just a \"stand alone\". The analogy between Love and the Seasons is a popular one in poetry and you have explored it perfectly. I agree with you Love is reflected in all four Seasons ! Thanks for sharing. My poem today is a collaboration with CHRISTINA on Four Solar Bodies Venus ~ Mars ~ Sun ~ Moon. Please check ~ thanks BRIAN
September 21st, 2017 15:35
Haiku Compilation
Christina8 said:
Well done Haiku! Well worded! I like the 4th one the best. \"watch it come undone\". Guess it\'s the mood I\'m in today. :-) All were very good!
September 21st, 2017 14:50
Christina8 said:
Well done Haiku! Well worded! I like the 4th one the best. \"watch it come undone\". Guess it\'s the mood I\'m in today. :-) All were very good!
September 21st, 2017 14:50
Conscience
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite a story. Very well written piece of poetry, I must say. Intriguing!
September 19th, 2017 17:32
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite a story. Very well written piece of poetry, I must say. Intriguing!
September 19th, 2017 17:32
Coma
FredPeyer said:
SM, your poem is awesome. Even though we do not know what is going on inside the brain of a coma victim, you used your imagination well to paint a very believable picture. Kudos
September 18th, 2017 18:05
FredPeyer said:
SM, your poem is awesome. Even though we do not know what is going on inside the brain of a coma victim, you used your imagination well to paint a very believable picture. Kudos
September 18th, 2017 18:05
Coma
Christina8 said:
This is a really touching poem. From the perspective of a nurse, this really touched my heart. I always wondered what/if they were thinking but gave them my best care. You have written this subject very well and eloquently, I think. Although it is a sad subject. Great job!
September 18th, 2017 17:37
Christina8 said:
This is a really touching poem. From the perspective of a nurse, this really touched my heart. I always wondered what/if they were thinking but gave them my best care. You have written this subject very well and eloquently, I think. Although it is a sad subject. Great job!
September 18th, 2017 17:37
Coma
orchidee said:
A fine write S. We can\'t know how much they may sense or be conscious of. It\'s said that it helps to still talk to them, that the curtains won\'t close altogether.
I visited someone over 6 months in a coma. Sadly, the curtains closed up..... you know.
September 18th, 2017 13:24
orchidee said:
A fine write S. We can\'t know how much they may sense or be conscious of. It\'s said that it helps to still talk to them, that the curtains won\'t close altogether.
I visited someone over 6 months in a coma. Sadly, the curtains closed up..... you know.
September 18th, 2017 13:24
Facing Reality
dusk arising said:
Well written. It doesn\'t always work out and, just as u show us here, there comes a time to part and wish somebody well.
Nicely composed sir!
September 15th, 2017 20:57
dusk arising said:
Well written. It doesn\'t always work out and, just as u show us here, there comes a time to part and wish somebody well.
Nicely composed sir!
September 15th, 2017 20:57
Facing Reality
Christina8 said:
I think this is a really great poem. Well written It tugs at the heartstrings!! It\'s hard when a relationship ends. I wish you the best!
September 15th, 2017 15:26
Christina8 said:
I think this is a really great poem. Well written It tugs at the heartstrings!! It\'s hard when a relationship ends. I wish you the best!
September 15th, 2017 15:26
Facing Reality
lasergraph said:
When a relationship declines it tugs at us. We seek to fix it but usually it can\'t be fixed. Great write.
September 15th, 2017 14:49
lasergraph said:
When a relationship declines it tugs at us. We seek to fix it but usually it can\'t be fixed. Great write.
September 15th, 2017 14:49
For You
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Very beautiful! Keep up the hard work! Very romantic! CR x
September 14th, 2017 18:33
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Very beautiful! Keep up the hard work! Very romantic! CR x
September 14th, 2017 18:33
Title Compilation
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! A very good and sensual read.
September 14th, 2017 14:02
Christina8 said:
Very good poem! A very good and sensual read.
September 14th, 2017 14:02
Poems
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, poems come from all over but we each have our own style.
September 13th, 2017 23:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and very true, poems come from all over but we each have our own style.
September 13th, 2017 23:59
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