Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87
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Christina8 said:
SM--A great write but don\'t give the reaper what he wants! As you say you are loved by many and in love with one! Enough reasons to stay attached to this world. You have a big heart and your children will see that as they grow up. Hard to see now, but I pray that you don\'t give in. Glad to see that you wrote today! Miss your writing!
April 27th, 2018 12:07
Christina8 said:
SM--A great write but don\'t give the reaper what he wants! As you say you are loved by many and in love with one! Enough reasons to stay attached to this world. You have a big heart and your children will see that as they grow up. Hard to see now, but I pray that you don\'t give in. Glad to see that you wrote today! Miss your writing!
April 27th, 2018 12:07
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Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
A fine write expressing some regrets and not regarding oneself worthy!
I don’t know if this poem is referencing you or not, but we’re all worthy to live our lives the best we can! We all make mistakes! The important thing is that we hone up to them and try to do better! The strength is to deal the best way we can with what we’ve been dealt!
Let the reaper be gone unaccompanied! Peace is not what he’s offering!
~Laura~
April 27th, 2018 11:25
Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
A fine write expressing some regrets and not regarding oneself worthy!
I don’t know if this poem is referencing you or not, but we’re all worthy to live our lives the best we can! We all make mistakes! The important thing is that we hone up to them and try to do better! The strength is to deal the best way we can with what we’ve been dealt!
Let the reaper be gone unaccompanied! Peace is not what he’s offering!
~Laura~
April 27th, 2018 11:25
Secret Friend Revisited
Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
Temptation is always tempting. It seems this temptation of yours is a good one...
“A calming warm consumes Through my veins”!
All you can think of is of whatever has tempted you! In this situation, it seems like a good thing! I particularly like the last two lines! Writing seems to help you!
A great write! I enjoyed reading it!
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 20:17
Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
Temptation is always tempting. It seems this temptation of yours is a good one...
“A calming warm consumes Through my veins”!
All you can think of is of whatever has tempted you! In this situation, it seems like a good thing! I particularly like the last two lines! Writing seems to help you!
A great write! I enjoyed reading it!
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 20:17
GREAT FRIDAY
Christina8 said:
Good to see you SM! An awesome write and I hope it\'s true that you are happy in love! A great poem!
March 30th, 2018 11:57
Christina8 said:
Good to see you SM! An awesome write and I hope it\'s true that you are happy in love! A great poem!
March 30th, 2018 11:57
GREAT FRIDAY
Laura🌻 said:
Welcome back, SM-87!
True, today is a sad day...
but also triumphant!
A great comeback with
such a beautiful write!
It seems you’re definitely in love! Awesome!
Love the entire poem...
especially the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 11:54
Laura🌻 said:
Welcome back, SM-87!
True, today is a sad day...
but also triumphant!
A great comeback with
such a beautiful write!
It seems you’re definitely in love! Awesome!
Love the entire poem...
especially the last stanza!
~Laura~
March 30th, 2018 11:54
Death of a Simple Man
Laura🌻 said:
If this write is from personal experience, I admire you for being so strong and for being so kind to share it! Personal or not, I’m rooting for the children to be with their dad no matter how long it takes!
December 7th, 2017 16:57
Laura🌻 said:
If this write is from personal experience, I admire you for being so strong and for being so kind to share it! Personal or not, I’m rooting for the children to be with their dad no matter how long it takes!
December 7th, 2017 16:57
Death of a Simple Man
myself and me said:
Hope a new, fresh soul could reborn.
December 7th, 2017 15:55
myself and me said:
Hope a new, fresh soul could reborn.
December 7th, 2017 15:55
Death of a Simple Man
Christina8 said:
I agree, a very powerful write, one of the best I\'ve seen from you. All that you\'ve gone through, yet you have such a big heart! The world would truly grieve a guy called the \"simple man\". You\'ve been through so much, thank you for sharing this poignant piece with us!
December 7th, 2017 15:39
Christina8 said:
I agree, a very powerful write, one of the best I\'ve seen from you. All that you\'ve gone through, yet you have such a big heart! The world would truly grieve a guy called the \"simple man\". You\'ve been through so much, thank you for sharing this poignant piece with us!
December 7th, 2017 15:39
Death of a Simple Man
Michael Edwards said:
I just had to read this through to end - every word. So simply expressed and yet so powerful - A truly great write.
December 7th, 2017 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
I just had to read this through to end - every word. So simply expressed and yet so powerful - A truly great write.
December 7th, 2017 13:45
Without You
Seek said:
Cleverly done. Sensual and refined. Wonderful piece S-M87.
November 17th, 2017 01:14
Seek said:
Cleverly done. Sensual and refined. Wonderful piece S-M87.
November 17th, 2017 01:14
Without You
Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
You had me fooled till the end my friend!
A great carefully thought out write!
Take care!
~Laura~
November 16th, 2017 18:17
Laura🌻 said:
S-M87,
You had me fooled till the end my friend!
A great carefully thought out write!
Take care!
~Laura~
November 16th, 2017 18:17
Without You
Christina8 said:
Almost too clever for me, went over my head the first time! I thought you were talking about a woman! Great poem!
November 16th, 2017 17:15
Christina8 said:
Almost too clever for me, went over my head the first time! I thought you were talking about a woman! Great poem!
November 16th, 2017 17:15
Without You
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
November 16th, 2017 16:53
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
November 16th, 2017 16:53
Slipping
myself and me said:
At least, The Gods of Forgiveness exist and I believe you have been forgiven since no answer is the best answer.
A very well expressed poem.
November 9th, 2017 13:22
myself and me said:
At least, The Gods of Forgiveness exist and I believe you have been forgiven since no answer is the best answer.
A very well expressed poem.
November 9th, 2017 13:22
Slipping
FredPeyer said:
Simple-Man, after I read the first two stanzas, I did not scroll down right away, just looked at them again and felt that this could be the whole poem already. Then I continued and it got better and better all the way to last line.
Great poem, beautiful rhyming, great structure.
November 8th, 2017 16:41
FredPeyer said:
Simple-Man, after I read the first two stanzas, I did not scroll down right away, just looked at them again and felt that this could be the whole poem already. Then I continued and it got better and better all the way to last line.
Great poem, beautiful rhyming, great structure.
November 8th, 2017 16:41
Slipping
Christina8 said:
Well written, yet so sad. I\'m sorry you are going through all this. I hope things get better for you. Thanks for sharing--Christina
November 8th, 2017 16:09
Christina8 said:
Well written, yet so sad. I\'m sorry you are going through all this. I hope things get better for you. Thanks for sharing--Christina
November 8th, 2017 16:09
Helianthus
FredPeyer said:
Simple-Man, I do like the metaphor of the sunflower! Your beautiful poem is very tender, with emotion between the lines. Kudos!
November 7th, 2017 19:00
FredPeyer said:
Simple-Man, I do like the metaphor of the sunflower! Your beautiful poem is very tender, with emotion between the lines. Kudos!
November 7th, 2017 19:00
Helianthus
orchidee said:
Ahh sunflower! *Looks up Helianthus*. I sort of guessed - Helios = Sun. A fine write SM. Conveys comfort in seeing the beauty of the flower.
We have amaryllis. Big bulbs, dead for part of the year, then spring to life. Long green leaves with large red flowers.
November 7th, 2017 15:00
orchidee said:
Ahh sunflower! *Looks up Helianthus*. I sort of guessed - Helios = Sun. A fine write SM. Conveys comfort in seeing the beauty of the flower.
We have amaryllis. Big bulbs, dead for part of the year, then spring to life. Long green leaves with large red flowers.
November 7th, 2017 15:00
Helianthus
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem about a sunflower! Very descriptive and lovely. Great job!
November 7th, 2017 13:40
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem about a sunflower! Very descriptive and lovely. Great job!
November 7th, 2017 13:40
Struggle
dtyrrell145 said:
this is obviously inspired and at the same time it is deeply touching and beautiful x
November 4th, 2017 19:44
dtyrrell145 said:
this is obviously inspired and at the same time it is deeply touching and beautiful x
November 4th, 2017 19:44
Rock n\' Roll is for YOU
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Rock \'n\' Roll is for me, it always cheers me up. Good write.
RIP Fats Domino one of the founders of Rock \'n\' Roll who died a couple of days ago, so sad, I was around in his heyday.
October 28th, 2017 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Rock \'n\' Roll is for me, it always cheers me up. Good write.
RIP Fats Domino one of the founders of Rock \'n\' Roll who died a couple of days ago, so sad, I was around in his heyday.
October 28th, 2017 01:01
Rock n\' Roll is for YOU
Christina8 said:
Love this! Music is a big part of me. Play it loud! Fantastic write! Thanks for sharing.
October 27th, 2017 16:23
Christina8 said:
Love this! Music is a big part of me. Play it loud! Fantastic write! Thanks for sharing.
October 27th, 2017 16:23
Secret Friend
Christina8 said:
A well written poem! I\'m glad you could find that special friend to give you comfort but beware about the misbehaving! Great job on this!
October 26th, 2017 18:51
Christina8 said:
A well written poem! I\'m glad you could find that special friend to give you comfort but beware about the misbehaving! Great job on this!
October 26th, 2017 18:51
Secret Friend
myself and me said:
A lot of people turn themselves to this friend, sometimes, this is the only friend they could find to give them relief. It is such a tragedy.
October 26th, 2017 12:42
myself and me said:
A lot of people turn themselves to this friend, sometimes, this is the only friend they could find to give them relief. It is such a tragedy.
October 26th, 2017 12:42
Breaking Hero
Michael Edwards said:
Even the simple phrases work so well in this engaging write.
October 26th, 2017 00:34
Michael Edwards said:
Even the simple phrases work so well in this engaging write.
October 26th, 2017 00:34
Breaking Hero
Laura🌻 said:
SM,
A poem well written!
As I read it, I could feel the struggle within this individual...imaginary or real... it doesn’t matter! Throughout any trials and tribulations, we have to remain strong. As you said, “the Hero within, once again, will rise”!
October 25th, 2017 15:58
Laura🌻 said:
SM,
A poem well written!
As I read it, I could feel the struggle within this individual...imaginary or real... it doesn’t matter! Throughout any trials and tribulations, we have to remain strong. As you said, “the Hero within, once again, will rise”!
October 25th, 2017 15:58
Breaking Hero
Christina8 said:
Great superhero write! \"cape in hand tattered and torn\" .I like the last stanza that \"the hero within, once again, will rise!\" --Christina
October 25th, 2017 14:05
Christina8 said:
Great superhero write! \"cape in hand tattered and torn\" .I like the last stanza that \"the hero within, once again, will rise!\" --Christina
October 25th, 2017 14:05
Struggle
Laura🌻 said:
SM,
This is heart wrenching! From a writer’s point of view, it’s beautifully written! The subject matter is very sad. I don’t know if you’re drawing from personal experience, but this individual is in pain. I hope he keeps fighting. He is worthy!
October 20th, 2017 20:24
Laura🌻 said:
SM,
This is heart wrenching! From a writer’s point of view, it’s beautifully written! The subject matter is very sad. I don’t know if you’re drawing from personal experience, but this individual is in pain. I hope he keeps fighting. He is worthy!
October 20th, 2017 20:24
Struggle
Christina8 said:
So sad, SM. Your words are so sad and heartfelt. A beautiful but somber poem. If only you didnt have to say goodbye. Wish I had more I could say.--Christina
October 20th, 2017 11:54
Christina8 said:
So sad, SM. Your words are so sad and heartfelt. A beautiful but somber poem. If only you didnt have to say goodbye. Wish I had more I could say.--Christina
October 20th, 2017 11:54
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