Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87
Haiku #2
Simple-Man87 said:
Nicholas, I know the feeling.
We miss out on chances we don\'t take.
August 17th, 2017 08:41
Simple-Man87 said:
Nicholas, I know the feeling.
We miss out on chances we don\'t take.
August 17th, 2017 08:41
Haiku #2
Nicholas Browning said:
I hated that feeling back in school when I wasn\'t picked for the gleeful ball game. Well said.
August 17th, 2017 08:36
Nicholas Browning said:
I hated that feeling back in school when I wasn\'t picked for the gleeful ball game. Well said.
August 17th, 2017 08:36
How do I?
myself and me said:
The hesitating, the sensitive, the guessing, the unsure, you expressed so well.
Love this one.
August 16th, 2017 22:50
myself and me said:
The hesitating, the sensitive, the guessing, the unsure, you expressed so well.
Love this one.
August 16th, 2017 22:50
Cause/Effect
myself and me said:
You sure will see your family again, but you need to save yourself first. It is hard but thinking of your little angle, all worth it. Come on men, wipe your tear and be strong, for your little angle.
August 15th, 2017 23:03
myself and me said:
You sure will see your family again, but you need to save yourself first. It is hard but thinking of your little angle, all worth it. Come on men, wipe your tear and be strong, for your little angle.
August 15th, 2017 23:03
Cause/Effect
Caden said:
Very immersive, could feel the range of emotions. Keep fighting man
August 15th, 2017 11:31
Caden said:
Very immersive, could feel the range of emotions. Keep fighting man
August 15th, 2017 11:31
Cause/Effect
lasergraph said:
Very powerful and descriptive. I can actually see the image as described.
August 15th, 2017 11:17
lasergraph said:
Very powerful and descriptive. I can actually see the image as described.
August 15th, 2017 11:17
DARKter Seuss...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A darkish mod poem about domestic violence. Dr. Seus twist eh. I hope u mean the cops saved the day here. Poor kids and lady. And the cruel man ahh. Fantastic rhyme scheme. But tell me it\'s not true this story. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.
August 15th, 2017 03:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A darkish mod poem about domestic violence. Dr. Seus twist eh. I hope u mean the cops saved the day here. Poor kids and lady. And the cruel man ahh. Fantastic rhyme scheme. But tell me it\'s not true this story. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.
August 15th, 2017 03:35
Color all with Blackened
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful piece of work - dark but a wonderful read.
August 11th, 2017 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful piece of work - dark but a wonderful read.
August 11th, 2017 11:40
Craving/ Consequence
Tony36 said:
Very powerful in such a short write. Great job
August 8th, 2017 13:21
Tony36 said:
Very powerful in such a short write. Great job
August 8th, 2017 13:21
Craving/ Consequence
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you guys. Trying to summarise my life in as few words as possible. Lol
August 8th, 2017 10:07
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you guys. Trying to summarise my life in as few words as possible. Lol
August 8th, 2017 10:07
Sucker Punch
Heather T said:
Whoa, this was intense. The braver man walked out the door! Great rendering of powerful emotions.
August 7th, 2017 19:48
Heather T said:
Whoa, this was intense. The braver man walked out the door! Great rendering of powerful emotions.
August 7th, 2017 19:48
Sucker Punch
Simple-Man87 said:
You guys are very kind. Thank you. I know it\'s simple, I don\'t use the big words some of these other people do, you are all so talented. But I try.
August 7th, 2017 17:38
Simple-Man87 said:
You guys are very kind. Thank you. I know it\'s simple, I don\'t use the big words some of these other people do, you are all so talented. But I try.
August 7th, 2017 17:38
Fate
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, may your lives together go on forever.
August 7th, 2017 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving write, may your lives together go on forever.
August 7th, 2017 01:49
Still Hurts
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all.. I actually have twins. 1 boy and 1 girl. My life, my love, my happiness. Now...well, hopefully I get to see them soon.
August 6th, 2017 10:20
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all.. I actually have twins. 1 boy and 1 girl. My life, my love, my happiness. Now...well, hopefully I get to see them soon.
August 6th, 2017 10:20
Still Hurts
burning-embers said:
Good man. Written from your heart it\'s plain to see. This will be a treasure to give your beautiful daughter, suitably framed, on an occasion of great importance in her adult life. Maybe when she gives you a grandchild. A really good piece, a joy to read.
August 5th, 2017 20:29
burning-embers said:
Good man. Written from your heart it\'s plain to see. This will be a treasure to give your beautiful daughter, suitably framed, on an occasion of great importance in her adult life. Maybe when she gives you a grandchild. A really good piece, a joy to read.
August 5th, 2017 20:29
My Process
Kesha said:
Wonderful piece, very sensual and erotic. Wonderfully portrayed
August 4th, 2017 13:24
Kesha said:
Wonderful piece, very sensual and erotic. Wonderfully portrayed
August 4th, 2017 13:24
Work in Progress
Heather T said:
From the well chosen title to the last declaration, your words paint a picture of love\'s resurrectional power. Fine work, poet.
August 3rd, 2017 17:06
Heather T said:
From the well chosen title to the last declaration, your words paint a picture of love\'s resurrectional power. Fine work, poet.
August 3rd, 2017 17:06
Work in Progress
malubotelho said:
Beautiful feelings from your heart. Well done.
August 3rd, 2017 16:55
malubotelho said:
Beautiful feelings from your heart. Well done.
August 3rd, 2017 16:55
Christmas Morning
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely heartwarming poem from a father about kids on Christmas. . Written in awesome rhyming and Xmas imagery which is exotic for me to read of. U describe in a superb way. Mery Xmas.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 3rd, 2016 05:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely heartwarming poem from a father about kids on Christmas. . Written in awesome rhyming and Xmas imagery which is exotic for me to read of. U describe in a superb way. Mery Xmas.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too . I\'m quite a new poet here but have been writing poetry since years and readers enjoyed it elsewhere or got sth from it until I found this site and wish to make new poem pals.
December 3rd, 2016 05:22
Christmas Morning
Tony36 said:
Great write, sorry you don\'t see your kids much
December 2nd, 2016 16:16
Tony36 said:
Great write, sorry you don\'t see your kids much
December 2nd, 2016 16:16
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