Comments received on poems by Simple-Man87
Nostalgia
lasergraph said:
I have so many memories of that needle dragging on the vinyl. Such a different time. I enjoyed the write.
September 12th, 2017 13:00
lasergraph said:
I have so many memories of that needle dragging on the vinyl. Such a different time. I enjoyed the write.
September 12th, 2017 13:00
One Bead
Seek said:
Wow! This is so well done. The subtle imagery you use to follow the trajectory of a bead of sweat is simply awesome. Again, wow!
September 8th, 2017 23:26
Seek said:
Wow! This is so well done. The subtle imagery you use to follow the trajectory of a bead of sweat is simply awesome. Again, wow!
September 8th, 2017 23:26
One Bead
Christina8 said:
A hot passionate write! Is it getting hot in here? Excellent!
September 8th, 2017 13:18
Christina8 said:
A hot passionate write! Is it getting hot in here? Excellent!
September 8th, 2017 13:18
Limerick 2
BlueDays said:
Can\'t beat a bit of rock n roll no matter the genre, my fave! Cool limerick 👍🏻
September 5th, 2017 14:58
BlueDays said:
Can\'t beat a bit of rock n roll no matter the genre, my fave! Cool limerick 👍🏻
September 5th, 2017 14:58
Just a little Rap fun.
Heather T said:
OK so, is it funny that I HAD to actually rap instead of read? That was fun!
September 1st, 2017 21:20
Heather T said:
OK so, is it funny that I HAD to actually rap instead of read? That was fun!
September 1st, 2017 21:20
Rock and Roll
myself and me said:
\"Don\'t let the small things become too small
If you\'re not all the way in, you\'re out\"
This tells all.
Very well penned.
August 30th, 2017 16:14
myself and me said:
\"Don\'t let the small things become too small
If you\'re not all the way in, you\'re out\"
This tells all.
Very well penned.
August 30th, 2017 16:14
Rock and Roll
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all for your feedback. I wrote it this morning at work...lol.
Probably should be working...
August 30th, 2017 13:38
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all for your feedback. I wrote it this morning at work...lol.
Probably should be working...
August 30th, 2017 13:38
The Attempt (The End Pt.2)
Angel Smileyface said:
i found this poem on a diffrent web site this isnt your writing
August 28th, 2017 14:20
Angel Smileyface said:
i found this poem on a diffrent web site this isnt your writing
August 28th, 2017 14:20
The End...
Simple-Man87 said:
Myself and Me: You\'re the second person to call me selfish/coward.
We are all different. What if he is forced to come to an end, from a different party? Either he comes to an end or someone else does. Is it selfish for the sacrafice? Is it selfish when the poison is extracted from society?
Selfish.... Noted..
August 23rd, 2017 15:00
Simple-Man87 said:
Myself and Me: You\'re the second person to call me selfish/coward.
We are all different. What if he is forced to come to an end, from a different party? Either he comes to an end or someone else does. Is it selfish for the sacrafice? Is it selfish when the poison is extracted from society?
Selfish.... Noted..
August 23rd, 2017 15:00
The End...
myself and me said:
Tragedy write in a tragic way.
\"For I am about to meet my maker\",
Isn\'t it selfish. Leave the kids behind, because he can not face the hardship and take the easiest way to get a permanent self relief.
August 23rd, 2017 14:44
myself and me said:
Tragedy write in a tragic way.
\"For I am about to meet my maker\",
Isn\'t it selfish. Leave the kids behind, because he can not face the hardship and take the easiest way to get a permanent self relief.
August 23rd, 2017 14:44
The End...
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all for your comments, and taking the time to read.
August 23rd, 2017 13:55
Simple-Man87 said:
Thank you all for your comments, and taking the time to read.
August 23rd, 2017 13:55
I am the Darkness
orchidee said:
You can trust me (probably) to ruin the \'dark\' side of things, with a bit of daftness! lol. Not to ruin poem themselves though.
August 22nd, 2017 11:18
orchidee said:
You can trust me (probably) to ruin the \'dark\' side of things, with a bit of daftness! lol. Not to ruin poem themselves though.
August 22nd, 2017 11:18
I am the Darkness
Mugsdaddy said:
Great way of expressing that bit of darkness inside each if us. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 10:34
Mugsdaddy said:
Great way of expressing that bit of darkness inside each if us. Bravo.
August 22nd, 2017 10:34
I am the Darkness
orchidee said:
Oohh I know. I feel the same if I have a bad hair day! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 10:22
orchidee said:
Oohh I know. I feel the same if I have a bad hair day! heehee.
August 22nd, 2017 10:22
Haiku #3
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine write. Gasp, a 7-syllable word! I can\'t say long words. I would say \'Inevita-wotsit\'! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 14:13
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine write. Gasp, a 7-syllable word! I can\'t say long words. I would say \'Inevita-wotsit\'! heehee.
August 21st, 2017 14:13
I Wish
myself and me said:
You forget this wish.
\"I wish you never in my life
No suffer shall I pay\"
Feel the burning and ache. A experience as painful as pain can be. Nice piece.
August 18th, 2017 20:57
myself and me said:
You forget this wish.
\"I wish you never in my life
No suffer shall I pay\"
Feel the burning and ache. A experience as painful as pain can be. Nice piece.
August 18th, 2017 20:57
I Wish
burning-embers said:
I gave you marital treason? Very strong line i think is the hingepiece here. Excellent
August 18th, 2017 14:03
burning-embers said:
I gave you marital treason? Very strong line i think is the hingepiece here. Excellent
August 18th, 2017 14:03
Haiku #2
orchidee said:
Oh, not a failure. I\'m just stunned by words used that are, say, 4 syllables or more. It\'s educational on \'ere ya know! lol. In fact, the second line is almost one word too. Nothing wrong with any of the lines!
August 17th, 2017 11:26
orchidee said:
Oh, not a failure. I\'m just stunned by words used that are, say, 4 syllables or more. It\'s educational on \'ere ya know! lol. In fact, the second line is almost one word too. Nothing wrong with any of the lines!
August 17th, 2017 11:26
Haiku #2
orchidee said:
A fine Haiku S-M. That\'s all the 5 syllables of the first line used up in one word!
August 17th, 2017 09:26
orchidee said:
A fine Haiku S-M. That\'s all the 5 syllables of the first line used up in one word!
August 17th, 2017 09:26
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