Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
PAINTING SNOW
dusk arising said:
I tried my hand at writing slush
gave it up, knocked down by a bus.
wrote a sonnet on the canal top ice
but the ice was thin, i paid the price
so i turned at last to compose in fog
stupidly i wandered into a bog
so still i try, here at my pooter
dumbstuck as usual, in a stupor
December 27th, 2020 06:33
dusk arising said:
I tried my hand at writing slush
gave it up, knocked down by a bus.
wrote a sonnet on the canal top ice
but the ice was thin, i paid the price
so i turned at last to compose in fog
stupidly i wandered into a bog
so still i try, here at my pooter
dumbstuck as usual, in a stupor
December 27th, 2020 06:33
PAINTING SNOW
Neville said:
Sleet ... Snow joke that ... but funny as summat that rhymes with stuck........
December 27th, 2020 05:19
Neville said:
Sleet ... Snow joke that ... but funny as summat that rhymes with stuck........
December 27th, 2020 05:19
PAINTING SNOW
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always sculpt snow but it still would not last . God fun write Michael.
Another very intriguing artwork and as you know I love things that intrigue me and this one is no exception.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always sculpt snow but it still would not last . God fun write Michael.
Another very intriguing artwork and as you know I love things that intrigue me and this one is no exception.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 03:24
PAINTING SNOW
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I produced a blank sheet of paper. A painting entitled \'A town covered in snow!\' It might be worth millions. heehee.
Do you know that painting of a black sheet of paper: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'?
December 27th, 2020 03:13
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
I produced a blank sheet of paper. A painting entitled \'A town covered in snow!\' It might be worth millions. heehee.
Do you know that painting of a black sheet of paper: \'A black cat in a coal cellar at midnight\'?
December 27th, 2020 03:13
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
Goldfinch60 said:
Yppah Samtsirhc ot uoy sa llew Leahcim.
Ydna
December 24th, 2020 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Yppah Samtsirhc ot uoy sa llew Leahcim.
Ydna
December 24th, 2020 01:21
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
Fay Slimm. said:
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - here\'s to the sheasons great cellebrashons - -whoops jus. gotta fill up me wassail agen.
December 23rd, 2020 12:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - here\'s to the sheasons great cellebrashons - -whoops jus. gotta fill up me wassail agen.
December 23rd, 2020 12:38
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
FredPeyer said:
And the same to you and yours, my MPS friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
December 23rd, 2020 10:43
FredPeyer said:
And the same to you and yours, my MPS friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
December 23rd, 2020 10:43
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
dusk arising said:
Lash nite i wash pished as a newt and ish not chrimbo yet. never again....
December 23rd, 2020 06:44
dusk arising said:
Lash nite i wash pished as a newt and ish not chrimbo yet. never again....
December 23rd, 2020 06:44
A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve started early. Gin?
Goodsh wishesh to you and yoursh alsho! And to Missh Berlesh and Co.
December 23rd, 2020 02:45
orchidee said:
Ahh, you\'ve started early. Gin?
Goodsh wishesh to you and yoursh alsho! And to Missh Berlesh and Co.
December 23rd, 2020 02:45
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
L. B. Mek said:
while I appreciate your skill for crisp imagery: \'patina knicker\'s\', is not something I ever wanted my over-indulgent imagination to picture with such detail... Ahem! lol
btw, your comment on Fred\'s write had me almost in tears (bits of me: indeed) lmao
oh and I took a few minutes to appreciate that beautifully serene scene of \'our everyday\', we sadly take for granted it seems,
thanks for all the chuckles on a dreary Monday morning Michael
December 21st, 2020 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
while I appreciate your skill for crisp imagery: \'patina knicker\'s\', is not something I ever wanted my over-indulgent imagination to picture with such detail... Ahem! lol
btw, your comment on Fred\'s write had me almost in tears (bits of me: indeed) lmao
oh and I took a few minutes to appreciate that beautifully serene scene of \'our everyday\', we sadly take for granted it seems,
thanks for all the chuckles on a dreary Monday morning Michael
December 21st, 2020 06:28
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
your sense of humor does light up this site!
December 20th, 2020 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Michael,
your sense of humor does light up this site!
December 20th, 2020 11:57
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
Doggerel Dave said:
Where did you wear them? :-)
Dave
PS: testing ..One.. two..three.........Don\';t know how long this will last before deletion.....thought I\'d see...
December 20th, 2020 06:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Where did you wear them? :-)
Dave
PS: testing ..One.. two..three.........Don\';t know how long this will last before deletion.....thought I\'d see...
December 20th, 2020 06:38
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
Goldfinch60 said:
The patina on antiques is so important according to the experts.
Andy
December 20th, 2020 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
The patina on antiques is so important according to the experts.
Andy
December 20th, 2020 02:55
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
jarcher54 said:
Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
December 20th, 2020 02:55
jarcher54 said:
Did you wear them? Or are you a collector???
December 20th, 2020 02:55
A PAIR OF ANTIQUES
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M. Say no more! Or it may become swoony. (our indecipherable repartee - bit of French there?!)
December 20th, 2020 02:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write and pic M. Say no more! Or it may become swoony. (our indecipherable repartee - bit of French there?!)
December 20th, 2020 02:55
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael for this wonderful watercolor. Absolutely love it! And from the comments you already received I guess I am not the only one!
I saw a redhead in shorts
leaving the courts
heading for the ports
to do some sports
of sorts
December 18th, 2020 20:27
FredPeyer said:
Thank you so much Michael for this wonderful watercolor. Absolutely love it! And from the comments you already received I guess I am not the only one!
I saw a redhead in shorts
leaving the courts
heading for the ports
to do some sports
of sorts
December 18th, 2020 20:27
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 1 - 3
FineB said:
A good write and a beautiful picture.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 16:45
FineB said:
A good write and a beautiful picture.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 16:45
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very nice Michael. Love watercolor. One of my go-to mediums. Well disciplined sweet.
December 18th, 2020 15:22
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very nice Michael. Love watercolor. One of my go-to mediums. Well disciplined sweet.
December 18th, 2020 15:22
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9
L. B. Mek said:
yup, some rhyme schemes do make us: frown... lol
I really like the uneven edges to your wall\'s brick-lines and that abrupt halt to your tree line on the left, makes it all seem more natural somehow,
Happy Holidays to you and Jeanne
December 18th, 2020 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
yup, some rhyme schemes do make us: frown... lol
I really like the uneven edges to your wall\'s brick-lines and that abrupt halt to your tree line on the left, makes it all seem more natural somehow,
Happy Holidays to you and Jeanne
December 18th, 2020 06:11
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Michael.
It is good to see your water colours once more.
December 18th, 2020 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Another good one Michael.
It is good to see your water colours once more.
December 18th, 2020 02:11
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well played. Have a nice Holiday
December 17th, 2020 17:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well played. Have a nice Holiday
December 17th, 2020 17:18
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
FredPeyer said:
Good one Michael, and I do like your painting too. But throw in another of your landscapes once in a while, I am very partial to them!
December 17th, 2020 13:07
FredPeyer said:
Good one Michael, and I do like your painting too. But throw in another of your landscapes once in a while, I am very partial to them!
December 17th, 2020 13:07
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Thanks for the VISUAL Violin in Bb minor by OFFENGON & OFFENBACK !
Thanks for the CM ~ very droll ! Obviously two LUN~ATTICS (Moony in the Top Story) ) Please CHECK *12 Presents for Christmas* !
Blessings & Prayers for YOU & JEANNE ~ AMEN
Love ~ Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 17th, 2020 10:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
AFTERNOON UNCLE MIKE ~ Thanks for the VISUAL Violin in Bb minor by OFFENGON & OFFENBACK !
Thanks for the CM ~ very droll ! Obviously two LUN~ATTICS (Moony in the Top Story) ) Please CHECK *12 Presents for Christmas* !
Blessings & Prayers for YOU & JEANNE ~ AMEN
Love ~ Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 17th, 2020 10:05
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful Michael, the \'playwright line\' (like) words and artwork, has me imagining a scene from \'Jeeves and Wooster\' when they visit New York, lol
December 17th, 2020 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful Michael, the \'playwright line\' (like) words and artwork, has me imagining a scene from \'Jeeves and Wooster\' when they visit New York, lol
December 17th, 2020 06:44
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 7
L. B. Mek said:
ok, well what a contrast from your artwork to the words lol, I will just try and blink away the crude imagery of your words, while contemplating the elegant subtlety of your artwork:
I thing the angled layout of the picture helps highlight the curves in your lines and invokes an upward momentum to your arrows, reminiscent of an abstract representation of the red arrow\'s aerobatic displays, I find it such an uplifting picture to contemplate, my favourite piece yet from your recent experimental collection Michael,
a reassuring glimpse at some semblance of peace you\'ve been able to cultivate after recent events, (just in case I jinx anything - \'knock on wood\' btw) lol
December 17th, 2020 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
ok, well what a contrast from your artwork to the words lol, I will just try and blink away the crude imagery of your words, while contemplating the elegant subtlety of your artwork:
I thing the angled layout of the picture helps highlight the curves in your lines and invokes an upward momentum to your arrows, reminiscent of an abstract representation of the red arrow\'s aerobatic displays, I find it such an uplifting picture to contemplate, my favourite piece yet from your recent experimental collection Michael,
a reassuring glimpse at some semblance of peace you\'ve been able to cultivate after recent events, (just in case I jinx anything - \'knock on wood\' btw) lol
December 17th, 2020 04:48
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another first smile of the day MIchael, thank you.
That artwork is brilliant.
December 17th, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Yet another first smile of the day MIchael, thank you.
That artwork is brilliant.
December 17th, 2020 01:52
THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 7
Dove said:
Must be the Skin Patrol! Off with your Mask Sir, hold your breath, turn left, then right, then proceed to the next line, butt cheek patrol lol
December 16th, 2020 16:33
Dove said:
Must be the Skin Patrol! Off with your Mask Sir, hold your breath, turn left, then right, then proceed to the next line, butt cheek patrol lol
December 16th, 2020 16:33
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