Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
A TRUMPERICK
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'reality show\' is a myth as they only show the unreal that people believe - or is that politicians?
Wonderful painting Michael.
January 24th, 2021 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
The \'reality show\' is a myth as they only show the unreal that people believe - or is that politicians?
Wonderful painting Michael.
January 24th, 2021 02:14
A TRUMPERICK
dusk arising said:
Humpty Trumpty promised a wall
But grumpy Trump couldnt build one at all
All his discourses
And all his sacked friends
Brought them Joe Biden
A sane leader again
...... (we hope)
January 24th, 2021 02:07
dusk arising said:
Humpty Trumpty promised a wall
But grumpy Trump couldnt build one at all
All his discourses
And all his sacked friends
Brought them Joe Biden
A sane leader again
...... (we hope)
January 24th, 2021 02:07
AIM HIGH
FredPeyer said:
And where do you think I am going on that picture of mine? Also, the view is much better from the top.
Love that poem!
January 21st, 2021 21:58
FredPeyer said:
And where do you think I am going on that picture of mine? Also, the view is much better from the top.
Love that poem!
January 21st, 2021 21:58
AIM HIGH
Jerry Reynolds said:
Another fine water color and a really cool poem Michel
January 21st, 2021 08:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
Another fine water color and a really cool poem Michel
January 21st, 2021 08:51
AIM HIGH
L. B. Mek said:
that cynic within
is usually more concerned
with those tremors of life
that come long, dumping
me from wherever
I happen to be perched...
a good read Michael
January 21st, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
that cynic within
is usually more concerned
with those tremors of life
that come long, dumping
me from wherever
I happen to be perched...
a good read Michael
January 21st, 2021 06:37
AIM HIGH
dusk arising said:
I though this was going to be a peeing contest when i read the title.
I found a place of comfort far from such dizzy heights accepting them as unattainable in light of the unprincipled enthusiasm of others.
January 21st, 2021 04:01
dusk arising said:
I though this was going to be a peeing contest when i read the title.
I found a place of comfort far from such dizzy heights accepting them as unattainable in light of the unprincipled enthusiasm of others.
January 21st, 2021 04:01
AIM HIGH
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Agreed that is the place to be - - and wishing you ever to be on top in the clear air - -- thanks for the first smile of my day again Mike -and for another breathtaking view of your talented artwork.
January 21st, 2021 03:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - Agreed that is the place to be - - and wishing you ever to be on top in the clear air - -- thanks for the first smile of my day again Mike -and for another breathtaking view of your talented artwork.
January 21st, 2021 03:26
AIM HIGH
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, we must always try to achieve the best we can in life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Michael, we must always try to achieve the best we can in life.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:45
I WOKED
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of welcome wit from your clever pen Michael - --- it well describes my nightly trials too.
January 19th, 2021 12:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of welcome wit from your clever pen Michael - --- it well describes my nightly trials too.
January 19th, 2021 12:08
I WOKED
L. B. Mek said:
I like the somber tone to the bright water colours you\'ve utilised, especially framed by that grey - as if a reminder, that just beyond this listless dreary days of Winter: our months of Spring and Summer await our arrival with muted anticipation.
Let all do our best to say safe and once more experience: Nature\'s blossoming seasons...
a wonderful artwork Michael, subtle - ever so subtle,
January 19th, 2021 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
I like the somber tone to the bright water colours you\'ve utilised, especially framed by that grey - as if a reminder, that just beyond this listless dreary days of Winter: our months of Spring and Summer await our arrival with muted anticipation.
Let all do our best to say safe and once more experience: Nature\'s blossoming seasons...
a wonderful artwork Michael, subtle - ever so subtle,
January 19th, 2021 05:57
I WOKED
dusk arising said:
D\'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes
How sleeptime lingers or sometimes flies
then the brain recovers
as you throw back your covers
and the missus farts as soundly she lies
January 19th, 2021 05:29
dusk arising said:
D\'you ever wonder on opening yer eyes
How sleeptime lingers or sometimes flies
then the brain recovers
as you throw back your covers
and the missus farts as soundly she lies
January 19th, 2021 05:29
I WOKED
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
How is Miss B\'s sleep? Does she count syllables to get to sleep, instead of sheep?
January 19th, 2021 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
How is Miss B\'s sleep? Does she count syllables to get to sleep, instead of sheep?
January 19th, 2021 02:58
I WOKED
Goldfinch60 said:
I woke up early
And found these words
And saw the painting
I am off to a good day.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I woke up early
And found these words
And saw the painting
I am off to a good day.
Andy
January 19th, 2021 02:07
DAYS END
L. B. Mek said:
always surprises me how your artwork and words, combine to help me recall specific elements within literature I have read:
here, I immediately gravitate to that small DIY store \'start-up\' by \'Momma\', Maya Angelou\'s grandma from \'I know why...\'
one tiny shop and miniscule element of her book, that helped give the world, one of 20th century\'s great Poets...
I\'m sure you were calling on far more local and \'lighter in topic\' sources for inspiration,
all the same what a wonderful artwork and read Michael
January 18th, 2021 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
always surprises me how your artwork and words, combine to help me recall specific elements within literature I have read:
here, I immediately gravitate to that small DIY store \'start-up\' by \'Momma\', Maya Angelou\'s grandma from \'I know why...\'
one tiny shop and miniscule element of her book, that helped give the world, one of 20th century\'s great Poets...
I\'m sure you were calling on far more local and \'lighter in topic\' sources for inspiration,
all the same what a wonderful artwork and read Michael
January 18th, 2021 04:11
DAYS END
Neville said:
......... nowt quite like it is there .... I can taste it and smell it this very moment ...
January 17th, 2021 17:10
Neville said:
......... nowt quite like it is there .... I can taste it and smell it this very moment ...
January 17th, 2021 17:10
DAYS END
FredPeyer said:
Those were the days! Now it\'s stick it into the microwave!
January 17th, 2021 12:35
FredPeyer said:
Those were the days! Now it\'s stick it into the microwave!
January 17th, 2021 12:35
DAYS END
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Miss B got any bread? Or any dough? Maybe meaning money - she got any for us?!
January 17th, 2021 03:10
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic M.
Miss B got any bread? Or any dough? Maybe meaning money - she got any for us?!
January 17th, 2021 03:10
DAYS END
Goldfinch60 said:
Thee very good 5-7-5s Michael.
Strangely I am just about to make some bread as i do every Sunday morning.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Thee very good 5-7-5s Michael.
Strangely I am just about to make some bread as i do every Sunday morning.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:38
RAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Michael.
The artwork is great as well.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem Michael.
The artwork is great as well.
Andy
January 17th, 2021 01:13
RAIN
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
Neville said:
... this is rapidly becoming one of my most favourite poetic forms ... superbly executed Michael ...
January 16th, 2021 14:25
RAIN
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
FredPeyer said:
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58
RAIN
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
Loved the poem and the watercolor,
which contains some irony.
Make a wrong choice nature will be a
ruthless critic.
January 16th, 2021 12:15
RAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading rain - a meaningful posting of the disaster wintery floods can wreak
January 16th, 2021 08:20
RAIN
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
A bucolic poem about a not very bucolic landscape at that moment. Very evocative.
Thanks, Dave
January 16th, 2021 04:37
PUT THE FIRE OUT
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
Suresh said:
Missing from the painting is a well
For your words do cast a spell
Glad it wasn\'t the building in your painting
January 14th, 2021 13:47
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